老高考旧教材适用2025版高考英语二轮复习35分写作限时满分练三

分写作限时满分练(三)Ⅰ.短文改错(2024江西南昌一模)OnedayinJune,allofsudden,itrainedheavilyandtheraindropsmadeawonderfulsound.Wefeltveryhotintheclassroomthatwecouldn’tconcentrateonschoolworkandinsteadofwereeagertoenjoythecoolrain.Sensedthat,theteachersimplewrote“sittingandlistening”ontheblackboardwithasmile.Iamsittingnexttothewindow,listeningtotherain.ItseemedtocalmmedownbutremindedmeofancientChinesepoems,whobroughtmeasenseofpeace.Weshouldappreciatethesmallthinginlife,likesunsetsandrainbowsafterstorms.Inthisway,wecandeveloptheirinnerworldintoanidealstate.Ⅱ.书面表达(2024江西萍乡一模)一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“MyFirstTry”,请依据下列要点写一篇短文。1.事情的经过;2.你的感受。留意:1.词数100左右;2.标题和开头语已为你写好。MyFirstTryWhenitcomestothetopicof“MyFirstTry”,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________35分写作限时满分练(三)Ⅰ.第一句:在sudden前加a解析考查固定短语。allofasudden是固定短语,意为“突然”,故在sudden前加a。其次句:very→so解析考查固定搭配。“so...that...”是固定搭配,意为“如此……以至于……”,故将very改为so。其次句:去掉of解析考查副词。insteadof后跟名词或名词性短语,而instead是副词,修饰整个句子,故去掉of。第三句:Sensed→Sensing解析考查非谓语动词。theteacher和Sense之间是主谓关系,应用现在分词作状语,表主动,故将Sensed改为Sensing。第三句:simple→simply解析考查副词。修饰动词wrote应用副词simply,故将simple改为simply。第四句:am→was解析考查动词时态和主谓一样。通篇时态是一般过去时,主语I是单数,因此am应改为过去式was。第五句:but→and解析考查连词。“seemedtocalmmedown”和“remindedmeofancientChinesepoems”是并列关系,因此用表并列的连词and连接,故将but改为and。第五句:who→which解析考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知此处是非限制性定语从句,先行词poems是物,因此关系代词用which,故将who改为which。第六句:thing→things解析考查名词的复数。thing是可数名词,依据后面的sunsetsandrainbows可知,此处用复数,故将thing改为things。第七句:their→our解析考查代词。主语是we,因此句子表示“我们就可以把我们的内心世界发展成一种志向的状态”,“我们的”是our,是形容词性物主代词,修饰名词innerworld,故将their改为our。Ⅱ.MyFirstTry

Whenitcomestothetopicof“MyFirstTry”,myfirstattemptatadaptinganovelIhadreadbeforeforanEnglishplayisunforgettable.

AsamemberofEnglishTheaterClub,IvolunteeredtoberesponsibleforthescripttobeplayedintheapproachingEnglishDramaFestival.Consequently,Itookadvantageofthewintervacationtopreparefortheadaptation.Themostchallengingbutrewardingpartwastoovercomethelanguagebarriers.Fortunately,withnearlytwoweeks’effort,thelineswerenotonlybeautifullyutteredbutalsoeasilyunderstood.ItwasnotuntilImadethefirsttryofa