期末复习写作专训Module46课件九年级英语下册（合肥地区）

模块写作专训Module4Rulesandsuggestions⁠

⁠本模块的核心话题是“规则及建议”，此类话题旨在训练学生如何描述注意事项和提出建议，学会表达应该做的和不应该做的事项，学会使用表示责任、义务、禁止等的句型。写作时学生应注意情态动词的使用。⁠

⁠[经典例题]当前，许多学生在课外沉溺于智能手机。针对这一现象，学校将组织开展一次“拒绝手机诱惑，收获健康生活”的演讲活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇80～100词的演讲稿。弊端：1.花大量时间玩游戏，不按时完成作业；2.伤害眼睛，不利于健康。建议：1.远离智能手机，认真学习；2.多花时间与家人、朋友交流；3.积极参加各种活动，如打篮球、唱歌……[思路点拨]①

要点提示：根据写作提示，介绍沉迷智能手机的弊端，并提出建议，建议使用表示顺序的词。②

时态：一般现在时。③

人称：以第一、三人称为主。[写作提纲][高分范文]Girlsandboys，WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet，manystudentshavesmartphones.Thestudentsoftenspendsomuchtimeinplayinggamesthattheyfeelverytired.Somestudentsdon’tfinishtheirhomeworkontime.Besides，smartphonesdoharmtoourhealth.Somestudents’eyesightisbecomingpoorerandpoorer.Toavoidthesedisadvantages，Ithinkweshouldmakesomechanges.First，weshouldkeepawayfromsmartphonesandworkhard.Second，spendmoretimestayingwithourfamilyorfriendsandtalkingwiththemaboutourdailylifeandfeelings.Third，

takeanactivepartinallkindsofactivities，suchasplayingbasketballandsingingsongs.That’sall.Thankyou！

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⁠（2023·蚌埠蚌山区模拟）你校将举行英语征文比赛，请你以“Staysafeatschool”为题写一篇文章，内容包括：1.校园安全的意义；2.对如何加强校园安全提出建议。注意：1.词数80～100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Staysafeatschool

It’simportantforustostaysafeatschoolanditwillhelpusstudybetterandlivemorehappily.Inordertostaysafeatschool，wemustdoasfollows.

First，beinorderwhenwearegoingupstairsordownstairs.Second，makesuretobesafewhenwearedoingsports.Trynottobehurt.Moreimportantly，it’snecessaryforustolearnsomeknowledgeofsafety，whichwillhelpkeepusawayfromaccidents.

Ifwefollowtheadviceabove，we’llmakeourselvessafeatschool.

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It’simportantforustostaysafeatschoolanditwillhelpusstudybetterandlivemorehappily.Inordertostaysafeatschool，wemustdoasfollows.

First，beinorderwhenwearegoingupstairsordownstairs.Second，makesuretobesafewhenwearedoingsports.Trynottobehurt.Moreimportantly，it’snecessaryforustolearnsomeknowledgeofsafety，whichwillhelpkeepusawayfromaccidents.

Ifwefollowtheadviceabove，we’llmakeourselvessafeatschool.

Module5Lookafteryourself⁠

⁠本模块围绕“照顾好自己”这一话题设计了一些语言实践活动，如谈论一场意外的事故，描写自己在日常生活中的健康饮食与运动等，要求学生能够描述交通事故发生的时间、地点和事故发生的过程，以及列出健康生活的指南等。⁠

⁠[经典例题]生命只有一次，我们要珍爱生命。发生事故时我们该怎样安全自救？请以“Howtoprotectourselves”为题写一篇演讲稿，80～100词。[思路点拨]①

要点提示：根据内容写作，并适当进行拓展。在写作过程中，要注意分段，可从两方面进行阐述。②

时态：以一般现在时为主。③

人称：以第一人称为主。[写作提纲][高分范文]HowtoprotectourselvesDearfriends，Everyonehasonlyonelife.Weshouldtreasureourlives.Howcanweprotectourselves？Ontheonehand，weshouldrealisetheimportanceofsafetyandknowwhattodo.First，whenwegoout，wemustfollowthetrafficrules.Second，whenweplaysportsorgames，

becarefulnottohurtourselves.Third，weshoulddevelophealthyeatinghabits.Eathealthymealsandtrynottoeattoomuch.Ontheotherhand，weshouldlearnhowtosaveourselves.Ifwehappentohavetrouble，weshouldkeepcalmandremembertoaskourparents，teachersorthepoliceforhelp.Inaword，weshouldtryourbesttoprotectourselvesandvalueourlives.

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⁠在日常生活中，人们会遇到交友、饮食和交通等方面的安全问题。请以“Self-protection”为题，用英语写一篇短文。要求：1.结合生活实际，谈谈自我保护的重要性；2.列举生活中的安全问题

（至少写两个问题），并分别提出合理化建议；3.发出自我保护的号召；4.词数80～100。Self-protectionNowadayspeoplepaymoreattentiontosafetyproblems.

Forexample，asstudents，wehavetogotoschooleveryweekday.Onthewaytoschoolweneedtogoacrosstheroadsometimes.Ifwearenotcarefulenough，wemaybehitbyacar.Sowehavetolearntoprotectourselves.

Forexample，asstudents，wehavetogotoschooleveryweekday.Onthewaytoschoolweneedtogoacrosstheroadsometimes.Ifwearenotcarefulenough，wemaybehitbyacar.Sowehavetolearntoprotectourselves.

Buthowcanweprotectourselves？First，weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends，especiallyonline.Second，don’tcrossthestreetwhenthelightsarered.Third，weshouldeathealthily.Thesesuggestionsaregoodforus.Weshouldfollowthemtoprotectourselvesbetter.

⁠Inshort，self-protectionisimportanttous.Wisheveryoneasafelife！

Buthowcanweprotectourselves？First，weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends，especiallyonline.Second，don’tcrossthestreetwhenthelightsarered.Third，weshouldeathealthily.Thesesuggestionsaregoodforus.Weshouldfollowthemtoprotectourselvesbetter.

⁠Module6Eatingtogether⁠

⁠本模块的核心话题是“饮食”。此类话题旨在训练学生从饮食习惯、方式、礼仪等方面对“饮食习俗”进行简单描述，进而加深对东西方饮食文化的认识与理解。⁠

⁠[经典例题]请向你的同学介绍西方的餐桌礼仪以及注意事项，比如开始用餐前的行为举止、刀叉的使用方式和就餐时的行为规范，包括喝汤时应该怎么做，如果别人夹给你不喜欢的食物应该怎么办，以及用餐结束时应该怎么做等。80～100词。[思路点拨]①

要点提示：根据题目内容写作，并适当进行拓展。在写作过程中，要注意时间顺序。②

时态：以一般现在时为主。③

人称：以第二人称为主。[写作提纲][高分范文]

WesterntablemannersaredifferentfromChinesetablemanners.Herearesomepoints.First，beforeyouarereadytoeat，don’tputyourelbowsonthetable.Theforkisheldinyourlefthandandtheknifeinyourrighthand.Then，duringthemeal，youcantellthehostifyouaregiventhefoodyoudon’tlike.Don’tmakeanynoisewhenyouhavethesoup.Remember，it’simpolitetospeakwhenyourmouthisfulloffood.Lastly，don’tforgettosaythatyouhaveenjoyedthefoodverymuchattheendofthemeal.Inaword，watchothersanddoastheydo.

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⁠假设你是李梅，你的笔友Lucy今年暑假要来中国做客，她想了解中国的餐桌礼仪，请你给她写信简单介绍一下。介绍时最好分用餐前、用餐中、用餐后三个时间段应注意的礼仪。注意：1.内容完整，条理清晰，结构合理，书写规范；2.词数80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearLucy，I’mgladtohearthatyouwillcometovisitChina.TheremaybesomethingdifferentfromWesterncountriesattable.

WhenyoucometoaChinesefamily，you’dbettertakesomegiftswithyou，suchassomefruitorflowers.Attable，youareexpectedtoeatlotsoffoodthatthehostsorthehostessesofferyou.Inthisway，theymaythinkthefoodtheyprepareforyouiswhatyoulike.Attheendofthemeal，theywillbegladif