高中英语外研版选择性必修第一册Unit 5 Period 6　Writing-Writing an observational journal

Period6Writing—WritinganobservationaljournalActivity1Readforsomedetails.1．Howwerethedaffodilbulbsplanted?A．Thedaffodilbulbswereputfacingeachother.B．Thedaffodilbulbswerepiledtogether.C．Thepointedendsofthedaffodilbulbsfacedup.D．Thedaffodilbulbswereburiedseparately.答案C2．Whatcanweknowaboutthecontainer?A．Thecontainerwasputinacool，darkplaceallthetime.B．Thecontainerwasputinasunny，warmplaceallthetime.C．Thecontainerwasmovedtoasunny，warmplaceinthethirdweek.D．Thecontainerhasbeenmovedtoasunny，butcoolplacebythethirdweek.答案DActivity2Readforthestructures.Ⅰ.Readtheobservationaljournalandyouwillfindthatobservationaljournalsarewrittenusingtimeasaclue.Ⅱ.Accordingtotheobservationaljournal，wecanlearnwhenwewriteanobservationaljournal，wecanusethefollowingoutline.(写作模板)Opening：(Thefirstpart)Iburiedinmygarden/basin.Account：(Thesecondpart)Afewdayslater，Ifound.Anotherfewdayspassedthewerecomingintoleaves.Seeing，Iaddedsomewaterinto.Summary：(Thethirdpart)Howamazingitistowatcha.Activity3Readforsomegoodsentences.Findthesentencestotellusthegrowingprocess.答案1.Thedaffodilbulbshavebeenplantedsidebysideinsoil，withthepointedendsfacingup.2．Asinglestemhassproutedfromeachofthebulbs.3．Thestemshavegrowntoaround20centimetrestallandeachhasproducedasingleflower.本单元写作项目是描写植物生长过程的观察日记。观察日记多是亲身经历和耳闻目睹的事情，所以要用第一人称来写；日记多是记述发生过的事情，因此常使用一般过去时，但使用时必须灵活掌握。日记应条理清楚，写出真实感。此外，应注意日记的格式，包括日期、星期和天气的书写位置。篇章结构一般采用三段式结构：第一段：表明写作目的；第二段：为主体部分，记录植物的成长过程；第三段：记录作者的感受。常用表达常用短语1．growthconditionsoftheplant植物的生长条件2．aholelargeenough足够大的洞3．puttheearthbackinthehole把土放回洞里4．upto20feetinlength长达20英尺5．selectproperseeds选择合适的种子6．alightapplicationoffertilizer轻施肥料常用语句1．Onthefirstday，Iputsomeseedsintoabasin.第一天，我把一些种子放进一个花盆。2．ThenIpouredsomewaterintothebasin，forthisplant...然后我把一些水倒入花盆，因为这种植物……3．Iplacedthebasinunderthesun.我把花盆放在阳光下。4．Severaldayslater，theyoungplantsbegantogrowoutofthesoftsoil.几天后，幼苗开始从松软的土壤中长出来。5．Iputthebasinintheroomtoavoidthehotsun.我把花盆放到房间里来避开烈日。6．Theseyoungplantsbegantogrowrapidly...这些幼苗开始快速地生长……7．Nowtheyhavegrownintotallplants.现在它们已经长成了高高的植物。8．I’msurprisedat...我对……感到惊讶。假如你是李华，你想研究一下向日葵从种子到植株的生长过程，请根据下面的提示写一篇观察日记：1．你把向日葵种子埋进一个花盆里，浇了些水；2．几天后，盆中长出了幼苗；你把花盆放在屋里，避免阳光暴晒；3．幼苗在茁壮地成长，几天后就长得很高了；4．你对于它的生长很是惊讶。第一步审题谋篇审题写作要求是写向日葵从种子到植株的生长过程。写作时应注意下面几点：1．确定文体：这是一篇日记，写作中应注意日记的几大要素。2．主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主。3．主体人称：以第一人称为主。谋篇第一段：介绍自己要观察记录的内容及目的；第二段：介绍向日葵的发芽及生长过程；第三段：表达自己的感受。第二步遣词造句核心词汇1．种子seed2．把……埋进……o...3．把……倒入……o...4．带着极大的耐心withgreatpatience5．从……中长出来growoutof...连词成句1．一天，我把一些向日葵种子埋进一个花盆里。(o...；seed)OnedayIburiedsomeseedsofsunflowersintoabasin.2．花盆里有肥沃的泥土。(rich)Therewassomerichsoilinthebasin.3．我把一些水倒入花盆里。(o...)Ipouredsomewaterintothebasin.4．之后，我开始以极大的耐心观察它。(observe)Afterthat，Ibegantoobserveitwithgreatpatience.5．几天后，一些绿色的嫩芽从土里长出来，非常可爱。(grow；lovely)Severaldayslater，somegreenshootsgrewoutofthesoilandtheyweresolovely.6．看到土有点干时，我又加了些水。(dry；add)WhenIsawthesoilwasalittledry，Iaddedsomewatertoitagain.第三步句式升级1．用定语从句连接句1和句2。OnedayIburiedsomeseedsofsunflowersintoabasin，wheretherewassomerichsoil.2．用afterdoing...连接句3和句4。Afterpouringsomewaterintothebasin，Ibegantoobserveitwithgreatpatience.3．用定语从句改写句5。Severaldayslater，somegreenshootsgrewoutofthesoil，whichweresolovely.4．用现在分词作状语改写句6。Seeingthatthesoilwasalittledry，Iaddedsomewatertoitagain.第四步组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。参考范文OnedayIburiedsomeseedsofsunflowersintoabasin，wheretherewassomerichsoil.Afterpouringsomewaterintothebasin，Ibegantoobserveitwithgreatpatience.Severaldayslater，somegreenshootsgrewoutofthesoil，whichweresolovely.Seeingthatthesoilwasalittledry，Iad