读后续写+小小英雄：希尔的紧急救援+讲义 高三上学期9月月考英语试题

第1页/共10页阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。6-year-oldQuinnHillbecameherfamily’sherowhenshetookimmediateactionduringanemergencythatsavedhermother’slifewiththehelpofherneighbor,Mrs.Smith.Jennifer,a39-year-oldsinglemother,beganthedaybysendingherchild,Hill,toschool.Havingnoideawhatwouldhappen,Jenniferwasfilledwithanxiety.Afterall,itwasthefirstdayofanewschoolyearforHill,afreshstart!OnthewaytoschoolsherepeatedlyremindedHilltosolveproblemspositivelyandfitin.Thoughworried,Jenniferhadtowavegoodbyetoherdaughter,watchinghertowardstheschoolgate.Thewholedaywaspackedwithhousework.Jennifertidiedthehouse,washedclothes,andpreparedfortheeveningmeal.Astheschoolbellrang,signalingtheendoftheday,JenniferpickedHillupfromschool.OnseeingJennifer,Hillcouldn’twaittohugher,sharingtheschoolexperiences.Chattingandlaughingaccompaniedthemalltheway.HillsinnocentlaughterwaslikeJennifer’srayofsunshine.Approachinghome,theyencounteredMrs.Smith,amostkindandthoughtfulhousewifelivingintheirneighborhoodformanyyears.Mrs.SmithofteninvitedJenniferandHilltoherhomeandsharedherhomemadedessertsandcookies.ThetwofamiliesdevelopedacloserelationshipandHilllikedtostaywithMrs.Smith,whoalwaysbrightenedherdayswithwillingnessandtimelyhelp.Afterexchanginggreetings,theywentbacktotheirownhomes.Onarrivinghome,Jennifersetouttopreparedinner.Asthesunbegantoset,thehousewasfullofapleasantsmellofcookingfood.JenniferandHillsatatthekitchentablewhenJennifersuddenlyhadachestpain.Shewassittinginachair,lookingupattheceilingandexperiencingabnormalbreathing.Shethenfelloutofthechairontoherleftside,herhandsballedintofists,andherbodywasshakingviolently.Hereyeswereopen,andHillkeptcalling“Mommy,Mommy”,butshefaintedandcouldnotrespond.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Realizingtheseveresituation,Hillranoutforhelp.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Jenniferfinallywokeupandfoundherselfinthehospital.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：这篇文章讲述了6岁的QuinnHill如何在紧急情况下迅速采取行动，救了她母亲Jennifer的命。Jennifer是一位39岁的单身母亲，她的女儿Hill在新学年的第一天去上学，Jennifer整天忙于家务。接女儿放学后，她们遇到了邻居Mrs.Smith，她是一个善良且乐于助人的主妇。回家后，Jennifer在准备晚餐时突然胸痛并晕倒。Hill意识到情况严重，跑出去寻求帮助。文章的续写部分描述了Hill如何寻求Mrs.Smith的帮助以及Jennifer在医院醒来的情景。几处伏笔以及在续写中的回应：1.伏笔：Jennifer整天忙于家务，可能暗示她身体疲劳。回应：Hill在Jennifer晕倒后寻求帮助，体现了紧急情况下的快速反应。2.伏笔：Mrs.Smith与Jennifer和Hill关系密切，经常邀请她们到她家。回应：Hill在紧急情况下首先想到寻求Mrs.Smith的帮助，展现了邻里之间的紧密联系。3.伏笔：Hill被提醒要积极解决问题并适应新环境。回应：Hill在母亲晕倒时展现出的冷静和行动力，体现了她适应能力和解决问题的能力。续写要点（分两段）：1.描述Hill如何迅速反应并寻求Mrs.Smith的帮助，包括她如何清楚地解释情况并带领Mrs.Smith回家。2.描述Jennifer在医院醒来的情景，她对发生的事情感到困惑，但感激Hill和Mrs.Smith的及时救助。主旨升华句：1.Intimesofcrisis,itisthecourageandquickthinkingofouryoungestfamilymembersthatcanmakeallthedifference.2.Thebondofcommunityisnotjustaboutsharingjoybutalsoaboutlendingahelpinghandintimesofneed.3.Achild'sinnocenceandintuitioncanbeapowerfulforceinthefaceofadversity.4.Thestrengthofaneighborhoodismeasurednotjustbythewarmthofitswelcomebutbythespeedofitsresponseinanemergency.5.Ittakesavillagetoraiseachild,andsometimes,ittakesachildtoremindusofthevillage'sstrength.三篇写作范文：范文一：Realizingtheseveresituation,Hillranoutforhelp.Panickingbutdetermined,shedashedtoMrs.Smith'shouseandpoundedonthedoor."Mymomneedshelp!"shecried.Mrs.Smith,withouthesitation,followedHilltoJennifer'sside.Assessingthesituationquickly,shecalledforanambulanceandstayedwithJennifer,comfortingHillandwaitingformedicalhelptoarrive.Jenniferfinallywokeupandfoundherselfinthehospital.Disorientedatfirst,shegraduallyrememberedtheeventsleadinguptohercollapse.AsthedoctorsexplainedthatshehadsufferedaheartattackandthatHill'sswiftactionhadsavedherlife,Jenniferfeltasurgeofgratitude.SheheldHillclose,tearsofthankfulnessinhereyes,knowingshehadraisedabraveandresourcefuldaughter.范文二：Realizingtheseveresituation,Hillranoutforhelp.HersmalllegscarriedherasfastastheycouldtoMrs.Smith'shouse.Gaspingforbreath,shemanagedtoexplain,"Mymom...she'snotwakingup!"Mrs.Smith,acomposedwomaninemergencies,tookcharge.Shecalled911andrushedtoJennifer'sside,makingsureHillwassafeandstayingwiththemuntiltheparamedicsarrived.Jenniferfinallywokeupandfoundherselfinthehospital.Thesterilesmellandthebeepingofmonitorswereunfamiliar,butthesightofHill'sworriedfacebroughtherbacktoreality.AsshelearnedhowherdaughterandMrs.Smithhadcollaboratedtosaveher,awaveofloveandpridewashedoverher.Inthatmoment,sheknewherfamily'sbondwasunbreakable.范文三：Realizingtheseveresituation,Hillranoutforhelp.Withfeargrippingher,sheracedtoMrs.Smith,whowasjuststeppingoutofherhouse."Please,Mrs.Smith!Mymomishurt!"shepleaded.Mrs.Sm