新高考英语二轮复习题型归纳与变式演练专题24 书信类03（申请信、咨询信、投诉信）（解析版）

专题24书信类03（申请信、咨询信、投诉信）（解析版） 书信类写作包括邀请信、感谢信、推荐信、求职信、祝贺信、告知信、求助信、建议信、道歉信、咨询信以及慰问信等类别。 以下对申请信、咨询信、投诉信类别提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。七、申请信 1.布局思维导图段落要点首段简要介绍自己，说明信息来源，并提出申请正文突出自己特点，具体说明胜任理由结尾请求给予机会，期望尽快回复 2.写作模板模板①DearSirorMadam,Iwritethislettertoapplyforthepositionthatyouhaveadvertisedin________________________(报纸站名称)of________________________(广告发布时间).NotonlydoIhavethequalificationsforthisjob,butalsoIhavetherightpersonalityfora______________(工作名称).Ononehand,_____________________(第一个原因).Ontheotherhand,______________________(另一个原因).Shouldyougrantmeapersonalinterview,Iwouldbemostgrateful.Ifyouneedtoknowmoreaboutme，pleasefeelfreetocontactmeatanytimeat________________________(电话号码).Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication,andIamlookingforwardtomeetingyou.YoursSincerely,LiHua模板②DearSirorMadam,I’m_________(简单自我介绍).WhenIwasreadingtheadvertisement,_________(表达看到相关广告后的感受).Ithinkit’sagoodopportunityformeto_____________(应聘的原因).ThereforeIrecommendmyselftowithouthesitation.I___________(陈述本人的性格优势).Foronething,Ican___________(陈述本人特长一).Foranotherthing,Ican___________(陈述本人特长二).Pleasecontactmeat___________(你的联系方式一：电话号码).Ore-mailmeat___________(你的联系方式二：电子邮箱地址).Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YoursSincerely,LiHua模板③DearSirorMadam,I’m_________(简单自我介绍).I’mwritingtoapplyfortheposition_____________(说明写信的目的)。Ireallywanttoobtainthispreciousopportunitybecause______________________________(说明为什么想得到这次宝贵的机会).___________.Besides,__________________.(分层次说明自己的优势)IamsurethatIcanperfectlyliveuptoyourexpectations.Iwillbegratefulifyoucouldgivemeakindconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YoursLiHua【写作方法】1.首段：a.自我介绍；b.申请原因；c.说明写信目的。2.主体：a.详述有关背景资料：资历、教育经历、工作经历、兴趣爱好；b.询问有关学校、课程等具体内容。3.尾段：a.强调上述材料的重要性；b.希望尽快得到答复；c.要求手册及申请表；d.表示感谢。【写作流程图】说明写信目的介绍自我(包括：学历、工作简历、在学校或工作单位的表现)说明申请该职位或学校的原因恳请招聘单位或所申请的学校考虑自己的申请，并表示谢意，期望回复第一部分：说明写信的目的套语：(1)兹申请刊登在……上的……工作。Iamwritingtoapplyforthepostof…advertisedin…(2)见……上刊登的贵公司广告，我谨申请应聘贵公司的……职务。Inreplytoyouradvertisementin…,Ibegtoapplyforthepostof…inyourcompany.(3)看到贵公司在报上招聘……的广告，我马上感到这正是我这段时间所要寻找的工作，并且我能胜任。ImmediatelyIsawyouradvertisementinthepaperfor…IfeltitwasjustthekindofpostforwhichIhavethequalificationsandforwhichIhavebeenlookingforsometime.(4)我想申请入贵校学习。Iwouldliketoapplyforadmissiontoyourcollege.(5)我想在贵校……系继续深造。Iwouldliketofurthermystudiesin…Departmentofyouruniversity.第二部分：介绍详情套语：(1)我的专业是……，我了解贵校在上述领域有极好的项目。Mymajoris…,andIunderstandyouruniversityhasagoodprograminthisfield.(2)……年，我出生于……，毕业于……大专业。毕业后一直在……工作，因此积累了该领域丰富的经验。Bornin…in…,Igraduatedfrom…Universitymajoringin…Ihavebeenworkingin…sincemygraduation,andIhavethereforeattainedrichexperienceinthisfield.(3)毕业后，我先担任……，随后担任……，现任职于……Upongraduation,Ifirstworkedas…Thefollowingjobwas…andcurrentlyIamworkingfor/in…(4)我现在就读于北京第二外国语学院英语专业，即将毕业。IamnowstudyingatBeijingSecondForeignLanguageInstituteandwillsoonbegraduatedasanEnglishmajor.第三部分：说明申请该职位或学校的原因套语：(1)贵公司目前做的这种工作特别使我感兴趣。Thekindofworkinwhichyourcompanyisengagedparticularlyinterestsme.(2)我认为我具备了报上刊登的贵公司……一职所要求的必要条件和经验。IfeelIhavethenecessaryqualificationsandexperienceneededforthepositionof…advertisedinthenewspaper.(3)受我所学课程的影响，我对饭店、酒店管理产生了浓厚的兴趣。UndertheinfluenceofthecoursesIhavetaken,IhavedevelopedaspecialinterestinRestaurantandHotelManagement.第四部分：恳请招聘单位或所申请的学校考虑自己的申请，并表示谢意，期望回复套语：(1)如能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。Yourearlyresponsewillbemuchappreciated.(2)希望贵校能给我寄来空白申请表。Ihopeyouwillkindlysendmeanapplicationform.(3)如能收到所需的申请表和有关入学的指南我将十分感激。Iwouldgreatlyappreciatereceivingcopiesoftherequiredapplicationformsandanyinstructionsyoumaybesokindastogivemeregardingmypossibleadmission.(4)希望同意面试，届时我可以更详细地说明我的技能。IhopeImaybegrantedaninterview,whenIcanexplainmyqualificationsmorefully.(5)我将乐意在您方便时接受面试，届时我将进一步介绍自己。Ishouldbepleasedtoattendforaninterviewatyourconvenience,whenIcouldgiveyoufurtherdetailsconcerningmyself. 3.必备词句Iwishtoapplyforapositionofwhichyouadvertisedintoday'snewspaper.

我想申请你们今天报纸上刊登的广告中的一个职位。Ihavelearnedfromafriendthat...

我从一个朋友那得知……Ishallbegladtoprovideyouwithanyfurtherinformationconcerningmyeducationandpersonalexperience.

我很乐意提供关于我的教育及个人经验方面的更多信息。Mynameis...Igraduatedfrom...universityin...，majoringin...我的名字是……。我毕业于……大学，专业是……Iamconfidentmyprofessionalknowledgehaspreparedmetohandlethejob.

我相信我的专业知识能让我胜任这份工作。Iamskilledin/goodat...我擅长……Ihadgoodperformanceineverycourse，especiallyin...

我每门课成绩都很好，特别是……ItrustthatIamcapableofdoingtheworkwell.

我相信我能干好这份工作。IbelievethatIamwellqualifiedforthepositionas...

我相信我定能胜任作为……的工作。【篇首句】介绍自己，简要说明信息来源，并提出申请。1.I’mLiHua,fromClassOne,SeniorTwo.我是李华，来自高二一班。2.Ihavereadinthenewspaperthatasecretaryiswantedinyourcompany.我在报纸上看到你们公司在招聘一名秘书。3.IreadtheannouncementoftheExperienceLifethatyouhavepostedontheInternetandIaminterestedinit.我在网上看到你们发布的体验生活的消息，我对此很感兴趣。4.IamextremelypleasedtoseeyouradvertisementforanEnglishtutor（家庭教师/助教）inthenewspaper.我很高兴在报纸上看到你们招聘家庭教师/助教的广告。5.Iamwritingtoapplyforthesummercampinyourschool.我写信是想申请加入你们学校的夏令营。6.IamwritingtotellyouthatI’msuitableforthejobyouareadvertising.我写信是想告诉你，我适合做你们在广告上刊登的这份工作。7.Iamwritingtoinquireaboutthepossibilityofthejob.我写信是询问（我得到）这份工作的可能性。8.

Iamwritingtojointheprogram.我写信是想加入这个项目。9.Iwouldliketoapplyforitduringthesummervacation.我想要暑假申请它。【篇中句】突出自己特点，具体说明胜任理由。1.IthinkI’mqualifiedfortheposition.

我认为对于这个职位我是有资格的。2.Inthefirstplace,Ihavestrongwrittenandspokencommunicationskills.首先，我有很好的写作和交流技巧。3.What’smore,Iamwellacquaintedwiththewesternculture.（beacquaintedwith熟悉）而且，我非常熟悉西方文化。4.Lastbutnottheleast,Ihavegoodpersonality,andIamindependentinlife.最后但也是很重要的一点是，我有很好的性格，并且在生活中很独立。5.Ithinkit’sofgreatusetome.Foronething,Icangainsomeexperienceformyfuturejob;foranother,Icanmakemorefriends.我认为它对我是有好处的。一则，我能够为未来的工作获得经验；二则，我可以交到更多的朋友。6.IamsureIcandomybestinthejob.我保证在工作中会尽最大努力。7.That’swhyIamapplyingfortheposition.那就是我申请这个职位的原因。8.IhopeIcanjoinyou.

我希望我能够加入你们。【篇尾句】请求给予机会，期望尽快回复。Iwillbemuchgratefulifyoucangivemetheopportunity.如果你能给我这个机会，我会非常感激。Ihopeyoucanoffermetheopportunity.我希望你能提供给我这个机会。IhopeIcanbeacceptedasamemberofyoursummercamp.我希望我能够成为你们夏令营的一员。Ifyouneedtoknowmoreaboutme,pleasecontactmeat189.如果你需要了解我更多，请给我打电话189.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.期待你的早日恢复。

Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.期待早日收到你的来信。Iwishtoapplyforapositionofwhichyouadvertisedintoday'snewspaper.

我想申请你们今天报纸上刊登的广告中的一个职位。Ihavelearnedfromafriendthat...

我从一个朋友那得知……Ishallbegladtoprovideyouwithanyfurtherinformationconcerningmyeducationandpersonalexperience.

我很乐意提供关于我的教育及个人经验方面的更多信息。Mynameis...Igraduatedfrom...universityin...，majoringin...我的名字是……。我毕业于……大学，专业是……Iamconfidentmyprofessionalknowledgehaspreparedmetohandlethejob.

我相信我的专业知识能让我胜任这份工作。Iamskilledin/goodat...我擅长……Ihadgoodperformanceineverycourse，especiallyin...

我每门课成绩都很好，特别是……ItrustthatIamcapableofdoingtheworkwell.

我相信我能干好这份工作。IbelievethatIamwellqualifiedforthepositionas...

我相信我定能胜任作为……的工作。 4.写作实操技巧 假设你是李华，你作为交换生正在英国学习，你所在城市博物馆正在展出来自中国的文物(relics)因而需要招聘懂一定中国文化的自愿者作为讲解员，需要写一封信给博物馆申请做一名讲解员。要点如下: 1.写信目的。 2.个人能力优势。 3.能做的事情。注意: 1.词数80左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】Dearsir/madam(称谓)IamreallydelightedtolearnthataguideforyourChineseculturalrelicexhibition(职位)isrequired,andIfeelthisposition(职位或机会)

isspeciallytailoredto

me.Tostartwith,myadvantagefirstliesinthefactthatIamfromChinaandusedtobeavolunteerinShanghaiMuseumandquitefamiliarwithChineserelics(优势一).Furthermore,beinganoutgoingandoptimisticboy,IamgoodcommunicatingwithothersandintroducingChineseculturetotheworldisalwaysmyhonorandmypleasure(优势二).Finally,thereisnoproblemwithmyspokenEnglish,asIhavelivedhereforalmostayearandIhavenodifficultycommunicatingwithothersinEnglish(优势三).Idohopemyenthusiasmandqualification(资质或能力)will

winmeafavorableconsideration

fromyourside.Shouldyouneedanydetailsrelatedtomyapplication,feelfreetocontactmeat123456@(联系方式).Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.Yoursincerely,LiHua 5.仿写演练 假定你是李华，你校英文报现正在招聘编辑，负责撰写中国传统文化板块的文章。请你写封信，申请该职位。内容包括： 1.写信目的； 2.优势、特长。注意:1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】Dearsir/madam(称谓)IamreallydelightedtolearnthataneweditorinchargeofarticlesbasedontraditionalChineseculture(职位)isrequired,andIfeelthisposition(职位或机会)

isspeciallytailoredto

me.Tostartwith,myadvantagefirstliesinthefactthatIhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,whichIbelieveisabasicrequirementforthisjob(优势一).Furthermore,inmysparetime,IprefertoreadEnglishnewspapers,whichcontributestomyprogressinwriting(优势二).Finally,thereisnoproblemwithmyknowledgeaboutChineseculture,asIamcrazyabouteverythingtodowithChineseculture.IoftentalkwithmyforeignfriendsandintroduceChineseculturetothem(优势三).Idohopemyenthusiasmandqualification(资质或能力)will

winmeafavorableconsideration

fromyourside.Shouldyouneedanydetailsrelatedtomyapplication,feelfreetocontactmeat123456@(联系方式).Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.Yoursincerely,LiHua 6.高考真题（2019全国I）假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1．写信目的：2．个人优势：3．能做的事情。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】DearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChinaduringthissummervacation.I’mdelightedtolearnthatvolunteerstudentsarewantedforaChinesepaintingexhibitiontobeheldinthelocalartgallery.NowI’mwritingtoapplyfortheposition.Thereasonsformyapplicationareasfollows.Firstofall,havingbeenexposedtoforeignteacherssinceayoungage,IcancommunicatefreelywithothersinEnglish.What’smore,yearsofbeingmonitormakesmeabrilliantorganizer,whichwillhelpalottokeeptheexhibitioninorder.ThemostimportantfactoristhatmyrelatedknowledgewillundoubtedlyhelptheaudiencelearnmoreabouttheuniqueChineseartform.Allinall,mysenseofresponsibilitywillmakemeaqualifiedvolunteer.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua（2018·浙江卷）假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：1.口语能力：2.相关经验；3.应聘目的。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】DearSirorMadam,MynameisLiHua.AndIamwritingtoapplyforbeingavolunteerofourschoolEnglishassociation.IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandhavebeentotheUSAtwice.SoIcancommunicatewellwithnativespeakersofEnglish.What’smore,Iamkindandfriendlytootherpeople.SoIcaneasilygetalongwithforeignstudents.I’mparticularlyinterestedinthisjobbecauseIwanttofurtherimprovemyoralEnglishcapabilitiesandinterpersonalcommunicationskills.HopefullyIcanreceiveyouracceptance.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua（2015·重庆卷）Bookcrossing.Com是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享（wildrelease），即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享（controlledrelease），即直接传递给另一位参与者。假设你是李华，请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括：1·表明写信目的2·选择一种分享方式3·简述作出该选择的理由4·希望了解更多信息注意：（1）词数不少于80；（2）在答题卡上做答（3）书信格式及开头已给出（不计入总词数）DearSirorMadam,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua【思路点拨】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能造漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。【参考答案】DearSirorMadam,Learningthatyouareorganizingthisactivitytosharebooksworldwide,IamwritingtoapplyforitforthesimplereasonthatIlovereadingandIownalargenumberofbooks.You’veintroducedtwowaystosharebooks:wildreleaseandcontrolledrelease.Ofthetwo,thelatterwinsmyfavor.Bythemeansofcontrolledrelease,Ionlyneedtodeliverbookstootherparticipants,notonlyarebookssharedbutitcanbuildupabridgeconnectingreadersfromdifferentpartsoftheworldaswell.Ifyoucouldprovidemorespecificinformation,Iwouldbewellgrateful.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，不拖拉，使用短语：applyfor申请；Lookingforwardto盼望着；Learningthatyouareorganizingthisactivitytosharebooksworldwide,IamwritingtoapplyforitforthesimplereasonthatIlovereadingandIownalargenumberofbooks.这句话运用learning做伴随状语，reason后面跟着一个同位语从句；notonlyarebookssharedbutitcanbuildupabridgeconnectingreadersfromdifferentpartsoftheworldaswell.这个句子notonlybutalso连接两个句子，第一个句子需要用部分倒装。（2012·全国新课标卷）假定你是李华，从互联网（theInternet）上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。

内容主要包括：1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；3.希望获准。注意：1.词数100左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。DearSirorMadam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Regards,LiHua【参考答案】DearSirorMadam,I'mLiHua,amiddleschoolstudentfromChina.Ireadtheannouncementofthesummer

campthatyouhavepostedontheInternetandIaminterestedinit.Iknowthatyouwelcome

studentsfromdifferentcountriesandI'dliketotakepartinit.I'vebeenlearningEnglishfor

10years,andIspeakfluentEnglish.Whatismore,I'llbeabletotellstudentsfromother

countriesaboutChinaandlearnabouttheircountriesaswell.IhopeIwillbeacceptedasa

memberofyoursummercamp.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Regards,LiHua必背范文Writting1 假如你是高三学生李华，打算报考一所外语学校。你在网上看到上海外国语学院的招生信息(admissioninformation)，并对此非常感兴趣。根据招生要求，你需要用英语写一份个人申请报告，内容应包括：1.自己的个性、特长及取得的成果；2.进入大学后的努力方向及设想等。注意：1.词数100左右，开头与结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearSirorMadam,I’mwritingtoapplytostudyinyouruniversity.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua【写作指导】本篇书面表达要求写一封申请信，结合题目要求可知，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。内容要点包括：你的个性、特长及取得的成果；进入大学后的努力方向和设想。写作时，注意以下几点：(1)合理安排段落，使文章条理清晰：第一段简单介绍招生信息的来源；第二段一写自己的个性、特长及取得的成果；第三段一谈自己的努力方向和设想；(2)适当增加细节，巧妙使用过渡性词语,使得语意连贯；(3)尽量使句式富于变化。【参考答案】DearSirorMadam,

I’mwritingtoapplytostudyinyouruniversity.

IreadabouttheadmissioninformationwhilesurfingtheInternettheotherday.I’mreallyinterestedinit.I’manoutgoinggirlandcangetonwellwithallmyclassmates.Idowellinmostofmysubjects,especiallyinEnglish.IoncewonfirstprizeinanEnglishSpeechContestheldinourcity.Asweallknow,Englishisauniversallanguage,soIwanttomajorinEnglishifIamadmittedintoyouruniversity.IhopetohaveajobrelatedwithlanguagesinthefutureandIbelieveIcanhelppromoteculturalcommunicationbetweenChinaandtheworld.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Yours,LiHua

【名师点评】文章要点齐全,思路清晰，语言精练，过渡自然，并且恰当地使用了大量的高级词汇和复杂句式,不失为一篇优秀的习作。具体表现在：(1)高级词汇:getonwellwith,dowellin,promoteculturalcommunication等;(2)高级句式：as引导的定语从句Asweallknow,状语从句的省略whilesurfingtheInternet,非谓语动词短语heldinourcity和relatedwithlanguages等。Writting2假设你是李华，从互联网上看到一个国际中学生家教组织将面向中国招聘兼职中文家教(tutor)的广告，欢迎中国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括：1.自我介绍（包括中英文能力）；2.参加意图（帮助别人学习中文和推介中国文化）；3.希望获准。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总次数。DearSirorMadam,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【参考答案】DearsirorMadam,I’mLiHua,aseniormiddleschoolstudentfromChina.IhappenedtoreadtheadvertisementthatyouhavepostedontheInternet,employingChinesestudentsaspart-timetutoroftheChineselanguage.Iaminterestedinit.IknowthatyouwelcomestudentsfromChinaandI’dliketogetthisjob.Forme,ChineseismynativetongueandI’mexcellentatit.Besides,I’vebeenlearningEnglishfor9yearswithagoodcommandofspokenandwrittenEnglish.I’mwillingtohelpforeignerslearnChinesewellandintroduceChineseculturetotheworldaswell.IhopeIwillbeacceptedasamemberofyours.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yourssincerely,LiHuaWriting3假设你是新华中学的高三毕业生李华，刚刚参加完高考，最近听说美籍华人李响将出资帮助贫困大学生。请你根据以下要点提示写一封贫困资助申请信。1.个人情况介绍；2.申请资助原因(家庭困难等情况)；3.资助款的使用及今后打算。注意：1.词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数);2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMr.LiXiang,I’mgladtohearthatyouwillhelpthosewholackmoneyingoingtocollege.I’mwritingtoapplyforit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【参考答案】DearMr.LiXiang,

I’mgladtohearthatyouwillhelpthosewholackmoneyingoingtocollege.I’mwritingtoapplyforit.MynameisLiHua,aseniorthreestudentofXinhuaMiddleSchool.Ihavemuchfinancialdifficultyincontinuingmycollegeeducation,butI’meagertogoonwithmyfurtherstudy.Inmyfamilymyfatheristheonlybreadwinnerwhilemymotherwaslaidofftwoyearsago.Mygrandmotherhasbeensufferingalungillnessformorethanfiveyears.Myyoungerbrotherisnowstudyinginajuniorschool.Itookpart-timejobsduringthesummervacation,butwhatIhaveearnedisfarfromenoughformetopaytherequiredtuitionfees.Inordertocontinuemystudy,Ihavetoapplyforyourhelp.Ifmyrequestisaccepted,Iwillmakegooduseofthemoneyandputmyheartintostudyandmakemyselfausefulmantothesociety.Ihopethatyouwillconsidermyapplication.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【解析】作文要求写一封贫困资助申请信。第一步先作个人情况介绍;第二步讲述申请资助原因(家庭困难等情况)，可以着重介绍自己家庭收入微薄，负担很重的情况；最后说一说如果自己得到资助将如何使用资助款。本篇范文行文流畅，要点明确，语言地道，词句丰富。文章运用了多种句式：并列句，主语从句，条件状语从句，宾语从句。长短句交叉使用，增强了文章的层次感。内容言辞恳切，增强了可读性。Writing4假如你是红星中学学生李华，在网上看到一则面对所有国家征集北京冬奥会志愿者的消息，你喜爱冰雪活动，想去担任志愿者。申请信要求统一用英文书写。请根据提示写一封申请信。内容包括：1.你的基本情况；2.你的申请理由；3.希望获准。注意：1.100词左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】DearSirorMadam,I’mmorethanpleasedtolearnthatvolunteersarewantedfortheWinterOlympicGames,whichistobeheldinBeijing.I’mwritingtoapplyfortheposition.I’mLiHua,presentlystudyinginHongxingHighSchoolandI’mconvincedthatI’mqualifiedtobetherequiredvolunteer.Firstofall,I’moutgoing,whichmakesitpossibleformetogetalongwellwithothers.Besides,Iregularlygoskiingwithfriends,equippingmewithenoughknowledgetobeaqualifiedvolunteer.Inaddition,Inormallyparticipateinavarietyofbeneficialvoluntaryactivities,whichmakesmemoreexperiencedthanothers.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHuaWriting5假如你是李华，为了配合学校开展的"GreenActionfortheEarth"的活动，你校英语俱乐部张贴了一则海报招聘志愿者。请根据提示写一封申请信。内容包括:1.个人信息；2.应聘资格；3.希望被录用。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearSirorMadam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【参考答案】DearSirorMadam,I’