新高考英语一轮复习考点过关练考点26 非应用文写作：投稿、宣传稿 (解析版)

考点26非应用文写作：投稿、宣传稿(解析版)【命题解读】短文类写作包括通知、倡议书、演讲稿、新闻报道、日记、约稿、宣传稿等类别。 以下对投稿、宣传稿等提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。投稿【布局思维导图】投稿，通常会有特定的主题，如你最敬爱的人等等，话题基本上围绕书信类，如推荐一个项目，那就和推荐信写作思路一致。如最想感谢的人，那就和感谢信思路一致，不过在表达上可能人称需要换一下。基本上写一篇相关话题的小短文即可，小短文以记叙文或者议论文为主。学生需要掌握相关词汇，句式用法等。段落要点首段投稿约稿目的正文介绍稿件的具体内容结尾期望祝福【高频词句】【常用词汇】旨在；以......为目的beaimedat出版publish文章的要求requirementsofthearticle如果onconditionthat限制在......词belimitedtoabout...words是很受......欢迎的beverypopularwith...任何有关的事情anythingrelevantto大约120字就可以了About120wordswouldbefine在......之前提交你的文章submityourarticlebefore体育专栏sportscolumn娱乐专栏entertainmentcolumn栏目特点characteristicsofthecolumn语言风格languagestyle改编自beadaptedfrom延长截止日期extendthedeadline、【常用句型】我想邀请某人写一篇......文章Iwouldliketoinvitesbtowriteanarticlefor...我想请你为我们学校的英文报纸写一篇文章。I’dliketoaskyoutowritranarticleforourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.你能写点关于你的学校生活吗？Couldyou/Wouldyoupleasewritesomethingconcerningyourschoollife?有兴趣的学生欢迎参加。Anystudentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate这里有一些关于我们渴望文章的相关细节。Andherearesomerelevantdetailaboutthearticlesweareeagerfor.它携带外国学生写的关于他们家文化的文章。Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignstudentsconcerningthecultureoftheircountry.这篇文章应该在400字以内。Thearticleissupposedtobewithin400words.我们想知道在下周之前你是否完稿。Wewonderifitispracticabletohaveitbeforenextweek.你最好下星期日把你的文章发送给我，词数约120个词就好。You’dbettersendyourarticletomenextSundayandabout120wordswouldbefine.期待您方便时尽快答复。Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourconvenience.期待您尽快确定。Lookingforwardtoyourconfirmationsoon.宣传稿【布局思维导图】 【基本模板】 宣传稿在一定程度上可以理解为报道+推荐或者报道+邀请。通常宣传稿需要写一下活动的经历或者感受，再写几句邀请或者推荐相关的表达即可。以下模版可以根据具体题目要求适当更改。模版：______(时间或地点)witnessed/saw______(参加或者参观的活动),whichimpressedmealot.Whatastonishedmewasthat______(令我吃惊的活动之一),givingme______(给我带来的影响).Besides/additionally/what’smore______(感受及影响二).Eventually，______(感受及影响三).Forthosewhohaveakeenpassionfor______(活动主题)，yousimplycan’tmissitby______(推荐时间)at______(推荐地点)!【写作实操技巧】 昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展.请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿，内容包括： 1.展览时间、地点； 2.观展感受； 3.推荐观展.注意：

1.写作字数应为80字左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】 Yesterday(时间)witnessedatraditionalChinesepaintingexhibitionorganizedbyourschool(参加或者参观的活动),whichimpressedmealot. Whatastonishedmewasthepoetryorcalligraphyinscribedonpaintings(令我吃惊的活动之一),givingmeafeastformyeyes(给我带来的影响).Besides,thespiritualconnotationofthepaintingsthattraditionalChinesepaintingssoughttoportraytheharmonybetweenthenaturalworldandhumanemotionheldmeentirelyintheirpower(感受及影响二).Eventually，itprovidedmewithanopportunityforhands-onlearning,whichletmegainadeeperinsightintotheChinesepainting(感受及影响三). ForthosewhohaveakeenpassionforthetraditionalChinesepaintings(活动主题)，yousimplycan’tmissitbyJune12th(推荐时间)inourschoolhall(推荐地点)!【仿写演练】 你的家乡(QingshanVillage)苹果大丰收，为了在电商平台上吸引外国客人购买，请你用英语为其写一篇宣传稿，内容包括： 1.品质价格； 2.相关服务。注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】 Qingshan(时间)witnessesagoodharvestofapplesthesedays(介绍活动). Whatwillastonishyouistheprice,nothighbutreasonable,rangingfrom$1perpoundto$2perpound,varyinginvariety(宣传好处一).Besides,thegreenfarmingmethodsguaranteetheirnutritionandkeeptheapplesfromanypollution(宣传好处二).Eventually，itsituatednearthedrinkingwatersourcesarea,whichisthespecialconditionsthatmakefortheapple’sgoodquality--biginsize,redandtasty(宣传好处三). Forthosewhohaveakeenpassionfortheapples(活动主题)，yousimplycan’tmissitwithourpromisetopay8%ofdeliveryfee(提供服务)!Justpurchasenow!【真题1】2022年(全国甲卷)你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保护海洋的倡议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.Oceanplaysakeyroleinourworld.Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.Thus,itisimperativetoprotectocean.Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.Forexample,garbagecan’tbethrownintoocean.What’smore,wecanalsohandoutleafletstocallonmorepeopletoprotecttheocean.Themorepeopleareinvolved,thebettertheoceanenvironmentis.Allinall,itishightimethatwedevotedourselvestoprotectingocean.Toprotectoceanistoprotectourselves.【解析】【导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累越来越：moreandmore→increasingly重视：placeimportanceon→attachimportanceto重要的：key→significant此外：what’smore→furthermore2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.拓展句：WorldOceanDay,whichfallsonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.点睛】[高分句型1]Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.(运用了部分倒装结构)[高分句型2]Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionbecomingmoreandmoreserious.(使用了固定句型)[高分句型3]Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.(使用了主语从句)【真题2】2022年(全国乙卷)72.学校英文报正在开展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.学习活动状况描述：2.简单评论;3.你的建议。注意：1.词数100左右;2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。【参考范文】LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom

Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.

ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.However,thosechoosingreadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.

AsfarasI’mconcerned,itisadisturbingtrend.Forstudents,whatbenefitsmosttotheirstudyisreadingEnglishbooks.Becauseoftheirlackofself-discipline,they’remoreeasilyaddictedtochattingonlineorplayinggames.It’surgentforstudentsthemselvestoimprovetheirself-discipline,andit’salsourgentforparentsandteacherstostrengthentheguidance.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累选择：choose→select提高：improve→strengthen各种各样的：various→diverse就我而言：asfarasI’mconcerned→frommyperspective2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheClassroominvariousways.拓展句：Nowadays,becausesmartphonesandcomputersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheClassroominvariousways.【点睛】【高分句型1】ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.(运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)【高分句型2】It'surgentforstudentsthemselvestoimprovetheirself-discipline(运用了it作形式主语，toimprovetheirself-discipline为真正的主语)【真题3】（2021年3月天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)；(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJin__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJinSichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationproject.JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.What’smore,walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalslikegiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.Therearealsomanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.However,itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbythebeautifulsceneryinJiazhaigouaswellastheconstructionDujiangyanIrrigationProject.【真题4】（2016·全国卷2）假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photographyclub）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括：1．主题：环境保护；2．展览时间；3．投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@.注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearPeter,OurschoolphotographyclubisgoingtoholdanInternationalHighSchoolStudentPhotographyShow.Thethemeoftheshowisenvironmentalprotection.ItwillstartfromJune15thandlastforthreeweeks.Anystudentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate.Iknowyoutakegoodpicturesandyou’vealwayswantedtodosomethingforenvironmentalprotection.Irememberyoushowedmesomephotosonthatthemethelasttimeyouvisitedourschool.Thisissurelyagoodchanceformorepeopletoseethem.Ifyouwanttojoin,youcansendyourphotostointlphotoshow@.Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua【真题5】（2015·全国卷1）假定你是李华，你校英文报＂外国文化＂栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：1.栏目介绍；2.稿件内容；3.稿件长度：约400词；4.交稿日期：6月28日前。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。DearPeter,I’dliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearPeter,I’dliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.The＂ForeignCultures＂sectioninournewspaperisverypopularamongusstudents.Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.WouldyoupleasewritesomethingaboutthecultureinyourpartoftheUnitedStates?AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfestivals,andthelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents.Youcanwriteanythingrelevantsolongasit’sinterestingandinformative.400wordswouldbefine.CouldwehaveyourarticlebeforeJune28?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua【真题6】（2013·四川卷）某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题，请你结合自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。1．说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；2．介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；3．描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。注意：1．词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。It'susefulandnecessarytodiscusslearninghabits.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】It'susefulandnecessarytodiscusslearninghabits.Asweallknow,goodlearninghabitscanmakeyourstudygotosucceed.Asastudent,weshouldpaymoreattentiontoourhabitswhichwedevelopinourstudy.I'msure“repeat”isabesthabit.Doyoudevelopthehabit?Ifwewanttoimproveourstudy,weshouldrepeatwhattheteachershavetaughtusagainandagain,andthenwecanunderstandorremembertheknowledgewhichtheteachersdemandustomaster.Howtodevelopthehabit？Setatimetable,andsticktocarryouttheplan;don'tstop.WhenIdomyhomework,Ioftenmakemistakeswithcarelessness.Howtoovercometheshortage?IthinkIshouldthinkaboutitoverandoveraslongasIdomyhomework.AndthenIdoitlittlebylittle.MaybeIcancorrectmymistakesinthisway.【真题7】（2013·安徽卷）假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“OntheWaytoSchool”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容主要包括：1.遵守交通法规；2.注意举止文明。注意：1.词数120左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4.短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】OntheWaytoSchoolThesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon,causingseriousharmtolifeandtheenvironment.Changingthissituationrequiresconsiderableeffortonthepartofeveryone.Asforme,itshouldstartonmywaytoschool.Iwillkeeptrafficrulesinmindalltheway.IfIrideabicycle,I'llalwayskeeptotherightandnevercrossaroaduntilthetrafficlightturnsgreen.IfIwalk,I'llneverforgettousethepedestriancrossing.Meanwhile,I'llregarditasmydutytohelpkeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.NotonlywillIkeepfromlitteringandspittinganywhere,Iwillalsohelpcleanuptheroadsidelitterwheneverpossible.Ihopemybehaviorwillmakeadifference.【真题8】（2013·辽宁卷）一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。写作要点：1．它是中国的传统节日之一；2．家人团聚；3．赏月、吃月饼；4．还有旅游、访友等其他活动。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：中秋节theMid－AutumnFestival农历lunarcalendar赏月enjoythefullmoon月饼mooncakeTheMid－AutumnFestivalTheMid－AutumnFestivalfallsonthe15thoftheeighthmonthofourChineselunarcalendar.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】TheMid－AutumnFestivalThe_MidAutumn_Festival_falls_on_the_15th_of_the_eighth_month_of_our_Chinese_lunar_calendar.AsoneofthetraditionalChinesefestivals,ithasbeenenjoyinggreatpopularityinourcountry.Usually,nomatterhowfarawayorhowbusyweare,wewilltrytocomehomeforthecelebration.Themoonthatnightlooksthebrightestinthewholelunarmonth.Whatwelovemostisthetimeweenjoythefullmoontogether.Withthebeautifulmoonupinthesky,wesittogetherandeatmooncakesandfruit,sharingourstories.Inadditiontothesetraditionalactivities,wehaveawiderrangeofchoicessuchastravellingandvisitingourrelativesorfriends.【真题9】（2012·福建卷）假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者，以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻，请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。内容要求：1．描述漫画内容；2.发表个人感想。注意：1．短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数；2．考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；3．词数120左右；4．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇：告示牌signMindYourBehaviorinPublicPlacesLastSunday,IwentsightseeingwithmyfriendsintheFairyLakePark.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】MindYourBehaviorinPublicPlacesLast_Sunday,_I_went_sightseeing_with_my_friends_in_the_Fairy_Lake_Park.Theparkwasfulloffreshnessandbeautyofspring,withthesunshiningandbirdssinging.WhenIwasenjoyingthefantasticsceneryaround,somethingunpleasantcaughtmyeye.Ayoungcoupleinaboatwereeating,talkingandlaughingloudlyasiftheyweretheonlypeopleintheworld.What'sworse,theyspatandeventhrewrubbishintothelake,totallyignoringthenoticeablesign“NoLittering”nearby.Whatashame!Suchbehaviorleftmedeepinthought.IfallvisitorstotheFairyLakeParkdoasthecoupledid,thelakewillbeseverelypollutedandsoonturnedintoahugedustbin.Ithinkallofusshouldmindourbehaviorinpublicplaces.Onlyinthiswaycanweliveinmorecomfortableandbeautifulsurroundings.【真题10】（2012·江西卷）某英文报社举办以“ILikeReading”为主题的征文活动，你打算投稿。请根据以下要点写一篇短文：1．你为什么喜欢读书；2.你喜欢读哪一类的书(例如：历史、科学、文学等)？请给出至少两个理由。注意：词数120左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】ILikeReadingReadingismyfavoritehobby.Icanneverstoptheloveforreadingbecausebooksarelikewiseteachersaswellasgoodfriendsinmylife.Asweknow,booksarethesourceofknowledge.Ibenefitagreatdealfromreading.Thereareavarietyofbooksforustochoosefrom,likehistorybooks,sciencebooks,literarybooksandsoon.Butwhatinterestsmemostisliterarybooks,especiallythosebyfamouswriters.Foronething,theyhelptoimprovemywritingskillsandbroadenmyhorizons.Foranother,theycanenrichmylifeandprovidemewithgreatfun.Isn’titapleasuretohavegreatcalminmindwhileyouarereading?【真题11】（2012·江苏卷）生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执，导致关系紧张。请你结合此事，并根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向学校英文报“HappyTeens”专栏投稿。简要描述事情的经过打篮球、碰撞、争执，等等分析发生冲突的原因1.遇事不够冷静2.……谈谈避免冲突的做法(请考生根据自己的经历或感想，提出至少两种做法)注意：1.对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Conflictswithothersarecommonineverydaylife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Conflicts_with_others_are_common_in_everyday_life.Duringthebasketballgameyesterdayafternoon,SuHuaandLiJiangbumpedintoeachother,tryingtocatchtheball.Thentheystartedshoutingandyelling,anditturnedintoahorriblequarrel.Tobehonest,itwasSu'sfaultbutLiwasalsotoblame—theywerenotcalmenoughandbothsaidsomereallymeanthings.Theycaredtoomuchaboutwinningandlosing.Asamatteroffact，blocking,pushingandbumpingarejustpartofatoughgame.Toavoidsuchconflicts,weshouldbekindtooneanother,whichisessentialtoenjoyingaharmoniouslife.Itisalsoavirtuetoforgiveandforget,especiallyinsuchacompetitiveandstressfulsociety.Insteadofblamingeachother,weshouldcommunicatemoreandputourselvesinothers'place.Don'tbeself­centeredandtrytobeconsiderate.Wemustlearntohandleconflictscalmlyandwisely.【真题12】（2021年新高考I卷）你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.读报的经历；2.喜爱的栏目；3.期望和祝福。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。YouthandMe__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】YouthandMeIthasbeen10yearssinceYouthwasfounded.Inmymemory,itisYouththataccompaniesmethroughmywholehighschool.Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.Besides,IevensubmittedmyownfictiontoYouth.RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.IdoexpectYouthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.【真题13】（2021年全国高考乙卷）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1.分析优势与不足；2.提出学习建议。注意：词数100左右;2.题目和首句已为你写好。【参考范文】BesmartonlinelearnersNetworklearninghasincreasinglybecomeanimportantmeansforpeopletoacquireknowledgeandsolveproblems.Butbeingsmartonlinelearnershasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.Besides,Wecantaketheinitiativeinourstudybyourselveswithouttimeandspacelimit.Ofcourse,thesedisadvantagesareasfollows.Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,Wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.【模拟检测1】（2022·江苏连云港·模拟预测）你校英文报正在举办征文比赛，主题为弘扬中华传统美德。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.介绍一种美德；2.你的理解；3.你的做法。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。EmbraceTraditionalVirtues____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】EmbraceTraditionalVirtuesAsthesayinggoes,honestyisthebestpolicy.Honestymeanstellingthetruthandbeingfairinact,whichcanbeofgreatbenefittous.Notonlydoesitmakeushappy,butitalsogainsussolidfriendship.Practisinghonestyhasbeengivenpriorityinmylife.Ialwaysobserveregulations.OnceIcouldhaveachievedhighermarksifIhadcheatedintheexam,butIchosenotto.IamproudofwhatIdid.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“弘扬中华传统美德”为主题，写一篇征文。内容包括：1.介绍一种美德；2.你的理解；3.你的做法。【详解】1.词汇积累公平的：fair→equitable真正的：solid→genuine/real规则：regulation→rule分数：mark→grade/score2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Ialwaysobserveregulations.拓展句：ThatmeansIalwaysobserveregulationsinanysituation.【点睛】【高分句型1】Honestymeanstellingthetruthandbeingfairinact,whichcanbeofgreatbenefittous.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Practisinghonestyhasbeengivenpriorityinmylife.(运用了非谓语动词作主语)【模拟检测2】（2022·河北唐山·一模）你校英文报正在举办以“认识自我，完善自我”为主题的英语征文活动，请你给校报投稿，内容包括：1.你的优点：2.你的不足：3.如何完善。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】PossibleVersionWeallhaveourstrengthsandweaknesses.Iamnoexception.Iamwarm-hearted,whichmakesmewellreceived.Plus,determinationandpatiencearethequalitiesIamproudtohave,soIthinkIcanovercomeanychallengeslifemightthrowatme.However,Iamalittlebitcareless,whichcreatesembarrassingmomentsordisappointingperformance.Tobettermyself,Ishallmakechecklistsandto-dolists.InthiswayIcanconcentratebetter.Hopefully,Icanbebetter

thanIhaveeverbeen.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“认识自我，完善自我”为主题，谈谈自己的优缺点，以及自我完善的措施。【详解】1.词汇积累长处，优势：strength→advantage缺点：weakness→disadvantage克服：overcome→conquer集中注意力：concentrate→focus2.句式拓展句式转化原句：Plus,determinationandpatiencearethequalitiesIamproudtohave,soIthinkIcanovercomeanychallengeslifemightthrowatme.拓展句：What’smore,itisdeterminationandpatiencethatarethequalitiesIamproudtohave,soIthinkIcanovercomewhateverchallengeslifemightthrowatme.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Plus,determinationandpatiencearethequalitiesIamproudtohave,soIthinkIcanovercomeanychallengeslifemightthrowatme.（运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句，省略连接词that的宾语从句）【高分句型2】However,Iamalittlebitcareless,whichcreatesembarrassingmomentsordisappointingperformance.（运用了which引导非限定性定语从句）【模拟检测3】（2022·广东·执信中学模拟预测）你校上学期开展了一系列劳动实践课程，包括蔬菜种植、手工制作、家电维修等等。请你写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，内容包括:1.你喜爱的课程；2.你的心得体会；3.对课程的建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。MyFavoriteHands-onCourse__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】MyFavoriteHands-onCourseInresponsetothecallofnationwidelaboreducation,aseriesofhands-oncourseswerelaunchedlastterminourschool,rangingfromplantingvegetablestomakingtraditionalhandicrafts.Sewingisoneofmyfavoritecourses,whereIobtainedafundamentalknowledgeofessentiallifeskillssuchassewingabutton,knittingascarf,andmakingacushionbyoperatingthesewingmachine.It