2024-2025学年新教材高中英语Unit2HealthyLifestyleSectionⅣWriting-如何写改掉不降生活习惯的文章学案含解析新人教版选择性必修第三册

PAGEUnit2HealthyLifestyleSectionⅣWriting——如何写改掉不健康生活习惯的文章随着科技的发展和生活水平的提高，许多人养成了不健康的生活习惯，如许多人常常熬夜，不吃早饭，不参与体育熬炼，吃过多的高热量食物等等，这些都是特别不健康的生活习惯。长期如此，身心健康会受到极大影响。本单元的写作是有关摒弃不良的生活方式、培育良好的生活习惯的，对应了《一般中学英语课程标准》(2024年版2024年修订)中的“人与自我”这一主题，要求考生能够就“健康的生活方式、主动的生活看法”表达自己的想法。写作思路如下：1．首段：描述不健康的生活习惯(即提出问题)；2．主体段：改掉不健康的生活习惯的措施(即实行行动)；3．尾段：措施产生的效果或建议。常用表达(1)Itcanbenoticedthattherearesomeunhealthylivinghabitsamong...(2)Someofusoftengotoschoolwithoutbreakfast;someliketohavesnacks.(3)Allthesebadhabitswillsurelydoharmtoourhealth.(4)Whatworriesmemostisthatthesehabitsmayhavemuchimpactonmyacademicperformance.(5)Ithinkhealthylivinghabitsareveryimportanttous.(6)Incurrentsociety,peoplehaveknowntheimportanceofkeepinghealthylifestyles.(7)Goodrest,lessmeatandfish,morevegetablesandenoughexercisearegoodforhealth.(8)Tokeepfit,weshouldhavevarioushealthydiets,including...(9)Havingrealizedtheimportanceoftakingexercise,weshouldworkoutregularly.(10)Iamusedtowalkingtoschoolifweatherpermits.(11)AsfarasI'mconcerned,weshoulddevelopahealthyeatinghabitof...(12)Thereisnodoubtthatabalanceddietisbeneficialtoourhealth.(13)Weshouldrejectjunkfood,suchasinstantnoodlesandhamburgers.(14)Doctorsadviseusteenagerstosleepforatleast8hourseachday.(15)Thereforeit'sveryimportantforustoformhealthyeatinghabits.(16)Onlyinthiswaycanwehaveenoughenergytostudybetter.(17)Peoplecometorealizethatgoodhealthisthemostvaluablethingapersoncanhave.[精品展示]假定你是李华，你校英语校报编辑正在就“Healthylifestyle”这一主题面对全体学生征稿。请你依据以下内容给编辑写一封信。写作要点：1.指出不良习惯：熬夜玩手机；2.作出确定；3.提出详细行动；4.表达预期结果。留意：1．要点齐全，可适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯；2．词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Deareditor，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.Yours，LiHua[审题谋篇]第一步：明确要求该写作为书信类应用文。时态以一般现在时为主。其次步：明确书信格式首先是信头的称呼(文中已给出)，主要内容写在主体段即其次段，最终是信尾客套语(文中已给出)。第三步：提炼要点1．________________没有精力做某事2．________________熬夜3．________________下决心做某事4．________________洗热水澡5．________________像以前一样第四步：句式升级1．最近我上课特殊困，没有精力做事情，这已经影响到了我的健康和学习。一般表达：RecentlyIhavebeenverysleepyinclassandhavehadnoenergytodoanything.Ithasgreatlyaffectedmyhealthandstudy.高级表达：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．我要读些放松的书并且在睡前洗个热水澡，这可以帮我睡个好觉。一般表达：Iwillreadsomerelaxingbooksandtakeawarmbathbeforegoingtobed,andthismayhelpmegetasoundsleep.高级表达：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[连句成篇]Deareditor，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.Yours，LiHuaeq\x(温馨提示：请完成单元检测卷二)SectionⅣWriting——如何写改掉不健康生活习惯的文章[审题谋篇]第三步：提炼要点1．havenoenergytodosth.2．stayup3．makeupone'smindtodo4．takeawarmbath5．asbefore第四步：句式升级1．RecentlyIhavebeenverysleepyinclassandhavehadnoenergytodoanything,whichhasgreatlyaffectedmyhealthandstudy.2．Iwillreadsomerelaxingbooksandtakeawarmbathbeforegoingtobed,whichmayhelpmegetasoundsleep.[连句成篇]参考范文：Deareditor，I'mtroubledbyaseriousproblem.RecentlyIhavebeenverysleepyinclassandhavehadnoenergytodoanything,whichhasgreatlyaffectedmyhealthandstudy.Afterstartinghighschool,Ifeltstressedoutandalwaysrelaxedbystayingupplayingphonegames.Asaresult,Ilackedenergyandpassioninthedaytime.ButnowIhavemadeupmymindtochangethissituation.Iwillarrangethetimeofusingmobilephonereasonably.I