2024-2025学年译林版七年级英语上学期考点 专题04 Unit1 ~Unit4 书面表达串讲【考点清单】

专题04Unit1~Unit4书面表达串讲Unit1如何写介绍自己或他人的文章本单元的话题是介绍自己或他人，要求学生能用所学词汇和句型介绍人物。与此相关的写作通常有：①介绍自己；②介绍他人（如新同学、朋友等）。在具体介绍人物时，通常包含以下要点：①引出介绍对象；②介绍人物的姓名、年龄、班级、外貌、性格、爱好等；③对人物进行简要评价或表达想交朋友的想法。佳作展示Hithere！IamZhouBingfromClass4,Grade7.①AndIgobyHarry.Iam12yearsold.MyfavouritesubjectsareScienceandPE.Theyaregreatfun.②IamgoodatthemandIenjoyhavingPElessonswithmyclassmates.③Iaminterestedinswimmingandplayingfootball.Ioftengoswimmingwithmybrotherattheweekend.④Playingfootballisreallyexciting,anditmakesmefullofenergy.IthinkIamveryfriendlyandhelpful.⑤I’malwaysreadytohelpmyclassmateswithallkindsofproblems.Doyouwanttobemyfriend?假如你是阳光中学的一名新生，经过一周的学习，你交到了一个名叫李娜的好朋友，英文名叫Anna。现在Teens杂志正在举办征文活动。请根据以下提示，以“MyFriendAnna”为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿。要求：（1）短文应包含图中的全部内容，可适当发挥；（2）词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。MyFriendAnnaThisismynewfriendAnna.Iamgladtotellyousomethingabouther.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作提示】1.主题：介绍他人2.人称：以第三人称为主3.时态：一般现在时4.要点：好友的年龄、所在年级和班级、外貌、兴趣爱好、性格、你的看法5.写作思路：开篇引出要介绍的人物，主体部分按照所给提示介绍好友的年龄、所在班级、外貌、兴趣爱好、性格等，结尾表达对好友的看法。

【范文赏读】MyFriendAnnaThisismynewfriendAnna.Iamgladtotellyousomethingabouther.Sheis13

yearsold.Weareinthesameclass,Class3,

Grade7.

Sheistalland

pretty,and

wearsapairofglasses.She

likes

readingbooks

verymuch.

Shethinksthatreadingcanhelpopenhermind.

Inherfreetime,shealso

enjoysplaying

tennis.Sheoften

playsitwithherdadafterschool.Anna

is

veryniceandalways

readytohelpothers.She

getswellwitheveryone

inourclass.AnnaisagoodgirlandI

likeheralot.Doyouwantto

makefriendswith

her?

Unit2如何写与兴趣爱好相关的文章本单元的话题是兴趣爱好，要求学生能介绍自己或他人的兴趣爱好，写作时可以从以下几个方面展开：①引出兴趣爱好是什么；②介绍喜欢这项爱好的原因及跟此爱好相关的行为等；③介绍这项爱好对生活和学习的影响。写作时要注意是介绍自己还是他人的兴趣爱好，确定好人称。要求：1.语言通顺，要点齐全，条理清楚；2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；3.90词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。DearJohn,Howisitgoing?I’mwritingtotellyouaboutmyhobby.___Allthebest!Mike佳作展示DearJohn,Howisitgoing?I’mwritingtotellyouaboutmyhobby.Iloveplayingbasketballverymuch.I’mamemberoftheschoolbasketballteam.①Ipracticeplayingbasketballwithmyteammateseveryday.②Itcannotonlyhelpmekeephealthybutalsomakemehappy.③What’smore,playingbasketballteachesmetheimportanceofteamwork.④MyfavouritebasketballstarisYaoMing.Hisamazingskillsmakehimarolemodelformeandmanyotherteenagers.⑤Iwanttobecomeabasketballplayerinthefuture.Mybasketballskillscanhelpmealot.⑥Ihopemydreamcancometrueoneday.Allthebest!Mike许多人都喜欢阅读，从阅读中人们可以学到许多东西。请以"ILoveReading"为题，根据以下提示介绍你的阅读爱好。内容提示：1.喜欢阅读的原因；2.阅读频率、地点及最喜欢的书；3.表达与阅读相关的愿望。要求：1.不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥。2.词数：80左右；文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。ILoveReadingGoodbooksaregoodfriends【写作提示】1.

主题：介绍爱好——阅读2.

人称：以第一人称为主3.

时态：以一般现在时为主4.

要点：喜欢阅读的原因；阅读频率、地点及最喜欢的书；与阅读相关的愿望5.

写作思路：开篇点明喜欢阅读的原因，然后再介绍与阅读相关的情况（如阅读频率、地点、最喜欢的书），最后表达与阅读相关的愿望。【范文赏读】ILoveReadingGoodbooksaregoodfriends.IlovereadingverymuchbecauseitcanmakemerelaxedandIcanlearnmuchknowledgefrombooks.

WhenIwasveryyoung,I

wasinterestedin

readingbooks.NowIreadthemeveryday.Onweekends,I

spendmoretimereading.Ioftengotothelibrary

inmyfreetime.SometimesIalsogotothebookstoretobuysomebooks.Ihaveabigbookshelfathome.Thereare

allkindsof

booksonit.Booksonhistoryaremyfavourite.Why?BecauseIcanlearnalotofinterestinghistoricalstoriesfromthem.

Ithinkreadingisagoodwaytoimprovemyself.IhopeIwillbecomeawriterinthefuture.

Ihopemydreamcancometrueoneday.Unit3Welcometoourschool!如何写介绍学校的文章本单元的话题是“介绍学校”，要求学生能正确描述学校相关信息与校园活动。与此相关的写作通常有：①介绍学校建筑及校园生活；②介绍自己最喜欢的校园地点并说明原因。在具体介绍学校时，通常包含以下要点：①介绍学校位置、上学距离和方式；②介绍学校的外观、布局、设施及其功能；③介绍校园活动及个人感受；④介绍学校课程和师生关系。要求：1.词数90左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；2.内容必须包括邮件涉及的全部要点，可适当发挥；3.文章条理清晰、意思连贯、语句通顺。DearDaniel,Thanksforyouremail.Hereissomethingaboutmynewschool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Allthebest，Simon佳作展示DearDaniel,Thanksforyouremail.Hereissomethingaboutmynewschool.IstudyatYinghuaMiddleSchool.Itisverybig.①Therearethirtyclassroomsinit.②Wehavealibrarywithallkindsofbooksandtworeadingrooms.Weoftenborrowbooksfromthelibraryanddosomereadingthere.Ourplaygroundisinfrontoftheclassroombuilding.③It’smyfavouriteplacebecauseit’stheperfectplaceformetodoafter-schoolactivities.Thereareabout2,000studentsandmorethan150teachersinourschool.④Ourteachersareveryhelpfulbecausetheyalwayshelpuswithourproblems.Ourclassmatesarereallykind.Wegetonwellwitheachother.Ourschoolisverynice.Ireallyloveitandenjoytheschoollifeverymuch.Allthebest，Simon你的英国朋友John即将作为交换生来你校学习，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文向John介绍一下你的学校。提示：1.What’s

the

schoollike?2.

Whatplacesdoesithave?3.

Whichisyourfavouriteplace?

Why?要求：1.90词左右；2.

内容必须包括上面所给全部要点，可适当发挥；3.

条理清楚，行文连贯，语句通顺。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作提示】1.主题：介绍学校2.人称：第一人称和第三人称3.时态：一般现在时4.要点：学校外观、设施、最喜欢的地方及原因5.写作思路：首段简要描述学校的整体情况，主体部分描述学校的主要设施、最喜欢的地方并陈述原因，结尾进行总结并表达情感。【范文赏读】Hi,John.Letme

tellyou

somethingaboutmyschool.Ourschoolis

great!

It’s

large

andbeautiful.Wehaveasports

field

inthemiddleof

theschool.Allthestudentsgothereand

doexercises

togetherinthemorning.

EveryMondaywe

raisetheflag

there.

The

classroom

buildingismodern

andwe

spendmostofthetime

inour

bright

classroom.

We

also

haveanartroomandamusicroom.

Wealwayshaveagoodtimethere.

Myfavouriteplaceisthelibrary.Thereare

thousands

of

books

ondifferentsubjects.Ican

borrowbooksfrom

it.

Itgivesme

bothknowledgeand

lotsoffun.I’msure

youwilllikemyschool.

Ican’twaittoseeyou.Unit4Schooldays如何写描述学校生活的文章本单元的话题是学校生活。写作时人称多用第一人称，时态多用一般现在时。与此相关的写作通常有：①校园内的学习活动和课外活动；②学校组织的野外考察、综合实践活动及感受；③参加校内的劳动实践及感受。在具体写作时，通常包含以下要点：①引出要介绍的活动；②具体描述活动的细节（时间、地点等）；③表达感受。佳作展示Hello,everyone.IamLiHua.IstudyatGuangmingMiddleSchool.①Ifeelgreat！Theschoollifeisreallycolourful.Ofallthelessons,②IlikeGeographybest.Icanlearnaboutmanyinterestingthingsallovertheworld.Ievendreamoftravellingaroundtheworldoneday.AfterschoolIusuallydosomereading.IamintheReadingClub.③Itmakesmerelax.Everymonth,wehaveaspecialactivity—fieldtrip.Nextweek,wewillgohikingaroundNanhuLake.④Itfeelsexcitingtoenjoythecolourfullifehere.Welcometoourschool.为了培养学生的劳动意识，增强他们的动手能力，光华中学打破年级限制，成立了多个劳动社团。请根据以下表格提示，以“OurLabour

Clubs”(我们的劳动社团)为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍以下两个劳动社团，并在其中选一个你最喜欢的社团，详细说明喜欢的理由。Cooking

Club

Flower

Growing

ClubWhatweneed*apot*bowls*aknife*ingredients(调料)…*flowerseeds(花种子)*earth(泥土)*flowerpots(花盆)…Whatwedo*cookdelicious

food

for…*makeahealthymenu(菜谱)

about…...*growflowers…*haveacloselookat……Whatweget*learncookingskills*becomeconfident(自信的)…*getcloseto…*relaxfrom……★★★★★Yourfavouriteclub______Reasons________要求：1.词数80~100(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；2.介绍表格中的两个社团，结合实际情况，可适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。

OurLabour

ClubsAreyoureadyforaninterestingandcolourfullabour

club?NowI’dliketointroducesomeofourlabour

clubs.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作提示】1.主题：介绍社团2.人称：以第一人称为主3.时态：一般现在时4.要点：所需材料、做的事情、收获5.写作思路：先介绍社团所需的材料、社团活动、收获，然后表明社团选择意向，并说明原因【范文赏读】OurLabour

ClubsAreyoureadyforaninterestingandcolourfullabour

club?NowI’dliketointroducesomeofourlabour

clubs.WehaveaCookingClub.Weneedapot,bowls,aknifeandsomeingredients.In

the

club,we

cook

delicious

food

for

parentsandfriends.Wemakeahealthymenu

aboutahealthydiet.Here,wecanlearncookingskillsand

becomeconfident.WealsohaveaFlowerGrowingClub.Weneedflowerseeds,earthandflowerpots.Wegrowflowersand

haveacloselookat

flowersandplants.Herewecan

getcloseto

natureand

relaxfrom

enjoyingflowers.

Wealways

enjoyourselves.The

CookingClubismyfavouritebecauseIlikecookingandIwantto

letmyparentsenjoynicefood.练习1.假设你是Lucy,阳光中学的一名学生,你在英语社团课上进行演讲展示,主题是“Mybestfriend”,根据下列思维导图提示词,完成演讲稿。注意事项:1.英文演讲稿必须包括所有提示内容,可适当补充,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;2.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dearstudentsandteachers,I’mLucyfromSunshineMiddleSchool.I'dliketointroducemybestfriendBetty.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou![思路点拨]①题干解读:本文属于材料作文,要求根据思维导图提示词,写一篇英语演讲稿来介绍最好的朋友。从体裁上看属于说明文。②写作指导:本文人称以第三人称为主,时态用一般现在时。写作时按照提示词的顺序,先介绍Betty的年龄、外貌、年级和性格的基本情况,再介绍她的学校生活及其爱好等。[标准范文]Dearstudentsandteachers,I'mLucyfromSunshineMiddleSchool.I’dliketointroducemybestfriendBetty.

Bettyis14yearsold.Shelooksslimandcute.SheisinGrade7.Sheiskindandhelpful.Atschoolshelearnsmanysubjects,suchasmaths,artandPE.Englishisherfavouritesubject.Bettyalsolovesreadingverymuch.Sheisamemberofthereadingclub.Sheisgoodatplayingtabletennis.Sheoftenplaysitwithmeafterschool.Bettylovesdrawingtoobecauseshethinksitisfun.Butshedislikesbasketballbecauseshecan’tplayitwell.That’sall.Thankyou![高级语块]重点短语lookslimandcute看起来既苗条又可爱;amemberof……的一名成员;begoodatdoingsth.擅长做某事;afterschool放学后重点句型Atschoolshelearnsmanysubjects,suchasmaths,artandPE.在学校里,她学习许多科目,如数学、艺术和体育。(用suchas列举同类的人或物)Bettylovesdrawingtoobecauseshethinksitisfun.贝蒂也喜欢画画,因为她觉得画画很有趣。(because引导原因状语从句)2.你们学校创新实践国际合作。以“Mylife”为题,写一篇英文短文向国际友好学校介绍你的学校生活。短文要点如下:基本情况来自中国,14岁,在海安上学。学校生活1.周一至周五上课,住得离学校近,走路上学;2.老师和善,同学友好,课程有趣,没有太多作业。空余时间1.经常阅读,了解世界;2.爱好运动,周末与同学们练习打网球,周六下午去上舞蹈课。理想……要求:1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;2.要点完整,省略号部分可作适当发挥;3.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。MylifeDeareveryone,I’mgladtobehereandtellyousomethingaboutmylifeinChina._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________