【读后续写】学案“CK251”法为读后续写助力-2021年1月高考续写作文讲评-朱迁苗

2021年1月浙江高考读后续写byCarol立诚勿怠格物致知Class_________Name________读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Pumpkin(南瓜)carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition.WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober.Inthepumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage—Icarriedan85-pounderbacklastyear.Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-oldbrother,Jason,wasthewinner.Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchentable,withmymomfilmingtheannualevent.I’munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime.Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(软木塞)forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.Myexcitementwasshort-lived.Thepumpkinwasheavy.“I’mgoingtosetitdown,now,”Isaid,andwithJasonhelpingtosupportitsweight,Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.“Ican’tgetitout!”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。BrainstormusefulexpressionsThesolutionstoConflict[1]Whowasthewinner?(矛盾一的解决)ThesolutionstoConflict[2]Igotstuckinthepumkin.Whohelps?(矛盾二的解决：如何把头从南瓜中弄出来)我的痛苦感受和徒劳努力：eg1:Atthethoughtofbeingtrappedinthepumpkin,Iwas___________byastrongsenseofandmypalmsweresweating.Alleffortsto______________myheadfromthepumpkinwere________________,butinvain.Astime_______________,Ifelt_____________//myheadwasspinning_________________alackofoxygenand_________________ontothefloor.家人的帮忙家人想帮又想笑的复杂情绪和行为III.关于视频拍摄和上传视频n.__________________拍摄v.____________________发送上传v._________________分享v._____________________走红_____________________关注v._________________转发v._____________________点赞n._____________________浏览消息_____________________评论n._____________________/