高中-英语-建议信

写作训练(二)Aletterofgivingadvice假设你叫李华，最近你的好友林丹来信说她升入高中后感到不太适应，不知道如何尽快结交新朋友，请你用英语给她回一封信，提出一些建议（关心他人，乐于助人，参加活动等）。【注意】信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；词数：100词左右。建议信一般为三段：para1.表明目的para2.（重点段落）具体建议以及理由para3.希望采纳,表达祝愿Tip：先写给出提示的建议，再自己想，既保证合理扣题，也节省时间。DearLinDan, Iamgladtohearfromyou.FromyourletterIknowyouarefacingtheproblemonhowtomakenewfriendsinhighschool.Thefollowingaremysuggestions.________________________________________________________________________ Ihopemyadvicewillbeusefultoyouandyoucangetalongwellwithyournewclassmates.Iwishyouhappinessinyournewschool.Para2:建议+理由普遍存在的问题1.结构零散，分太多段；2.条理不清晰，缺乏过渡词；3.只有建议，没有理由，不充实，字数不够；Para.2具体建议以及理由提建议常用句式:It’simportanttodo..Itshouldbeagoodidea(forsb.)todo…Youwillfindithelpful/usefultodosth.Doing...canmakeagreatdifference.多个建议要注意___________有过渡、分方面1)关心他人,乐于助人关心他人：________________________________________乐于助人：____________________Tobeginwith,youshouldbeconcernedaboutothersandtrytobeasfriendlyasyoucan.Ifyouarealwaysreadytohelpothers,yourclassmateswillknowmoreaboutyou.beconcernedaboutotherscareaboutothersbereadytohelpothers2)当一名好的倾听者（增加的建议）

What’smore,itisimportantforyoutobeagoodlistenerwhileothersarespeaking.Inthisway,peoplewillfeelcomfortabletobewithyou.3）积极参加班级活动

takeanactivepartinclassactivitiesLastbutnotleast,itisalsogoodforyoutotakeanactivepartinclassactivitieswhereyoucanshowyourtalentandgettoknowmoreclassmates.易出现表达错误的表达1）当别人有困难的时候：whenthey____________2)because和so都是只能引起从句，不能单独作为一个句子。Itshouldbeagoodideatocareaboutyourclassmates,

becauseinthisway,yourclassmatesmaythinkyouareakindperson.areintrouble3)__________(care)aboutotherscanmakeagreatdifference.4)_______(try)tojoininmoreactivitiesandyouwillknowmoreclassmatesduringtheactivities.5)moreover

是一个词，“what’smore，…”后是逗号6)“whynotdo…?”“whydon’tyoudo?”CaringTryTobeginwith,youshouldbeconcernedaboutothersandtrytobeasfriendlyasyoucan.Ifyouarealwaysreadytohelpothers,yourclassmateswillknowmoreaboutyou.What’smore,itisimportantforyoutobeagoodlistenerwhileothersarespeaking.Inthisway,peoplewillfeelcomfortabletobewithyou.Lastbutnotleast,