高三英语二轮复习第部分专题书面表达技法4巧妙的过渡-连贯的衔接

技法4|巧妙过渡，连贯衔接连接(过渡)性词语使用是语言连贯性得以实现最常用手段。在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下连接(过渡)性词语是非常必要。中学阶段应该掌握连接(过渡)性词语可以归纳如下：1．表示起始关系过渡性词语aboveall，firstofall，tobeginwith，accordingto，asyouknow/asisknown，asisshownin等。Firstofall，Ithinkitimportanttomakemorefriendsabroad.Asisshowninthepicture,atreeisknockeddownbythestrongwind,whilethegrassstaysasitis.2.表示时间顺序过渡性词语first(ly)，second(ly)，third(ly)，then，later，intheend，finally，atlast，afterthat，afterwards，sincethen，meanwhile等。Secondly,weshouldgetupearlytomemorizeidiomsandusefulexpressions.Meanwhile,weallenjoyedthebeautyofnature.Ihadabadcoldlastweek.First，Ihadarunningnose,butIdidnottakeitseriously.ThenIbegantocough.Afterthat,Ihadafeverandfeltweak.Finally,Iwassenttohospitalandhadtolieinbedforthreedays.3.表示并列关系过渡性词语and，or，also，aswellas，neither...nor...，notonly...butalso...，either...or...，not...but...等。Workhard，andyouwillbeadmittedtoakeyuniversity.Swimmingnotonlybenefitsourhealth，butalsohelpsushaveastrongwill.4．表示转折关系过渡性词语but，yet，however，while，otherwise，onthecontrary等。However，notuntilthematchwasoverdidwerealizethatwebecametheloser.Onthecontrary，smartphonesnotonlytakeupourvaluabletime,butalsodogreatharmtoourhealth.5.表示因果关系过渡性词语because，as，since，for，thanksto，dueto，asaresultof，so，therefore，asaresult/consequence等。Thankstothedoctor'stimelytreatment,hewassaved.Therefore,Isuggestweshouldbegivenmoretimeforsportsandsleep.6．表示条件关系过渡性词语if，unless，incase(of)，as/solongas，onconditionthat等。Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucanmeethimattheairport.Aslongasyoudon'tloseheart，you'resuretosucceed.7.表示递进关系过渡性词语besides，inaddition，what'smore，furthermore，moreover，what'sworse，stillless，tomakemattersworse，worsestill，on(the)onehand...ontheother(hand)...，foronething...foranother...等。Inaddition,weshouldn'tneglectthateveryonewantsafriendlyandpeacefulsociety.Ontheotherhand,onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.Ilostmywayintheforestandtomakemattersworse,itbecamedark.8.表示列举事实过渡性词语suchas，forexample/instance，take...forexample，thatistosay，asfollows，inotherwords等。TakeBeijingforexample,itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld.Thatistosay，ifyouwanttosucceed,youhavetobelieveinyourself.9．表示观点过渡性词语inmyopinion，inmyview，inmypointofview，asfarasIamconcerned，asforme，personally(speaking),Ithink等。AsfarasIamconcerned，Ilovewealth,butIvaluehealthmore.Inmyopinion，peopleshallnotsmokeinpublicplaces.10．表示总结过渡性词语inshort，inbrief，inconclusion，ina/oneword，tosumup，allinall，onthewhole，ingeneral，generallyspeaking等。Inaword，successisimportant,andsoisfailure,becauseit'sthemotherofsuccess.Allinall，travellingisthebestchoicetorechargeourselvesandgetreadyforthenewchallenges.(2021·陕西高考)假定你是李华，在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节〞一那么招募启事。请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。VolunteersWantedOurannualEnglishFestival,whichwillbeheldonJune15－17，2021，isnowlookingfor20studentvolunteerstoprovideserviceforTalentShow,SpeechContest,andEnglishDebate.Ifyouareinterested,pleasesendanapplicationemailatyourearliestconveniencetoMsChenat.写作要点：1.表达写信意图；2.陈述应征目；3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。写作要求：1.邮件词数不少于100；2.开头和结尾局部已写好，不计入总词数；3.可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯；4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。DearMsChen，I'mLiHua，astudentfromClass2，Grade3.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourstruly，LiHua考生作文点评与优化作文提升DearMsChen，I'mLiHua，astudentfromClass2，Grade3.Ihavereadyouradvertisementlookingforstudentvolunteers，Iwanttodothejob.MyspokenEnglishisverygood.IbelieveIamfitforthejob.AnddoingthejobcanimprovemyEnglishfast.Iampolite，friendlytopeople.Iamout－goingandliketodothingsforothers.Iliketogetalongwithothers.Ienjoyworkingwithothers.Icangetalongwellwithothers.Ihavetheability.Ihopeyougivemethejob.DoingthejobcanimprovemyEnglishlevel.Itcanalsohelpmetocommunicatewithothers.Itisaverygoodjob.Iwillnotletyoudisappointed.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourstruly，LiHua[名师点评]1.本文词数符合要求，但是大量以“I〞开头，构造单调句子，让阅卷人提不起兴趣。2.句子本身没有太大问题，但是给人感觉就像是小孩在表达一件事情，缺少连贯性和逻辑性，属于档次较低作文。3.除了需要提高句子档次，还需要一些过渡衔接词汇。例如，我们可以分为几个方面，用first/firstly，second/secondly等连接起来；递进时可以用besides，inaddition等；总结时可以用ina/oneword，inconclusion等。[尝试优化]DearMsChen，I'mLiHua，astudentfromClass2，Grade3.Afterreadingyouradvertisementforthepositionasastudentvolunteer，Iwanttooffermyselftotheposition.Firstly,becausemyspokenEnglishisfluent，IthinkIamverysuitableforthisjob.Atthesametime,IcanimprovemyEnglishasquicklyaspossible.Secondly,beingpoliteandfriendly，Iamea