中考英语人教版总复习主题写作突破课件主题五社会服务2

主题五社会服务主题透析教材链接七下Unit3Howdoyougettoschool?八下Unit2I’llhelptocleanupthecityparks.八下Unit3Couldyoupleasecleanyourroom?头脑风暴素材积累一、主题词块1.

从事……;作为……

2.

不但……而且……

3.

打电话

4.

捡起;拾起

5.

和某人相处得好

workas…notonly…butalso…calluppickupgetalongwellwithsb.二、高分句型1.Foroneweek,she

anyhouseworkand

.

.

有一个星期,她没做任何家务活,我也没做。2.Andinthecommunity,I

avolunteer

.thepeoplewhoareoldordisabled.在社区里,我是一名志愿者,

帮助老年人或残疾人。

didnotdoneitherdidIworkastohelp3.Besides,Ihave

gotthestrongfeelingofsatisfaction

become

.andresponsible.

此外,我不仅获得了强烈的满足感,而且变得越来越独立和有责任心。4.

feelgoodabouthelpingotherpeople,

tospendtimedoingwhatIlovetodo.

我不仅对帮助别人感觉很好,而且还能花时间做我喜欢做的事情。5.

,Iwillenjoymyselfinthesummerholiday.总而言之,我会在暑假玩得很开心。

notonlybutalsomoreandmoreindependentNotonlydoIbutalsoIgetAllinall典例剖析(2023眉山)劳动创造美好生活,劳动实践从我做起。作为一名中学生,请你根据下表要点,以“LaborIsGlorious(劳动光荣)”为题,向校报“英语园地”栏目投稿。劳动实践在学校,和同学一起打扫教室和操场;在家里,做饭、洗衣服、整理房间;在社区,做志愿者,帮助老人或残疾人劳动收获学到一些基本生活技能,学会照顾自己;获得满足感,变得更加独立和有责任心发出倡议……注意:(1)词数100左右(标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数);(2)可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;(3)文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。LaborIsGloriousIt’swellknownthatlaborisglorious.

第一步“五定”审题体裁记叙文人称第一人称时态一般现在时、现在完成时要点劳动实践;劳动收获;发出倡议思路承接给出的开头,写“劳动实践”;分层表达“劳动收获”;发出倡议,积极参加日常劳动等第二步“三段”谋篇第三步润色成文【基础版】LaborIsGlorious

It’swellknownthatlaborisglorious.Ioftendosomelaboractivitiesineverydaylife.Forexample,Icleantheclassroomandplaygroundwithmyclassmatesatschool.Icookdishes,washclothesandtidyroomsathome.Andinthecommunity,Iworkasavolunteertohelptheoldordisabled.Bydoingthese,I’velearnedsomebasiclifeskillstotakecareofmyself.I’vegotthestrongfeelingofsatisfactionandIbecomemoreandmoreindependentandresponsible.Laborcreatesabetterlife.Let’stakeanactivepartindoingthedailylabor.【升格版】LaborIsGlorious

It’swellknownthatlaborisglorious.Asamiddleschoolstudent①,Ioftendosomelaboractivitiesineverydaylife.Forexample,Icleantheclassroomandplaygroundwithmyclassmatesatschool.Icookdishes,washclothesandtidyroomsathome.Andinthecommunity,Iworkasavolunteertohelpthepeoplewhoareoldordisabled②.升格说明①as…短语的使用,补充说明了“我”的身份。②定语从句的使用,突出了作者要帮助的对象,起到了强调的作用。Bydoingthese,I’velearnedsomebasiclifeskillstotakecareofmyself.Besides,Ihavenotonlygotthestrongfeelingofsatisfactionbutalsobecomemoreandmoreindependentandresponsible.③

Allinall,laborcreatesabetterlife,solet’stakeanactivepartindoingthedailylabor.④③besides的使用,使上下文连接更紧密;notonly…butalso…连接两个并列的成分,简化了句子结构。④allinall的使用,使表达更有说服力;so连接并列句,使句式表达更丰富。名师点评

本文布局合理,结构清晰,表达连贯。作者能严格按照提示要点进行表达,文章长短句结合,句式丰富,如含定语从句的复合句,notonly…butalso…连接的并列谓语,so连接的并列句等;另外,衔接词and,besides等的巧妙使用,使短文连接更紧密。学以致用1.图表提示类·志愿活动

青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动,

对其成长具有重要意义,可以帮助他们学习新技能,增强沟通能力和社

会责任感。暑假将至,请根据下面表格中的内容提示,以“MyVolunteerWorkPlan”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你选择的活动项

目及活动计划,并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。VolunteerWork◎Helpinthecitylibrary◎Holdacharitybazaar(义卖)◎Visittheoldpeople’shome◎Cleanupthecityparks◎Dovolunteerworkinahospital◎…要求:(1)可选择表格中的1—2个活动项目,也可自拟活动项目;(2)语句通顺,意思连贯,词数80左右;(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等信息。MyVolunteerWorkPlan

Onepossibleversion:MyVolunteerWorkPlanThesummerholidayiscoming.Iamgoingtodosomevolunteerwork.Iwillhelptocleanupthecityparks.Ofcourse,Iwillaskmorepeopletojoinme.Iwillcallupmyfriendsandaskthemtocome.Wewillpickupthelitter,theplasticbagsandotherwastethings.Ihopeourcitywillbemorebeautiful.Besides,Iamgoingtovisitsickkidsinhospital.Ilovechildrenandenjoygettingalongwellwiththem.Iwillsingforthekidsatthecityhospitaltocheerthemup.Ihopetheycanbebettersoon.NotonlydoIfeelgoodabouthelpingotherpeople,butalsoIgettospendtimedoingwhatIlovetodo.Allinall,Iwillenjoymyselfinthesummerholiday.2.图表提示类·爱心义卖上个月,你们班为Children’sHome的孩子们

组织了一次爱心义卖活动。请根据下表信息用英语写一篇短文,向某

英语网站投稿,谈谈本次活动和你的体会。ThingsyoudidThingsyou’velearned●handoutnotices●makethingslike…●sellthethings●giveawaythemoney●developlifeskills●…注意:(1)短文必须包括上表所有信息,可适当增加细节;(2)你的体会至少两条;(3)词数80—100;(4)短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:charitysale义卖活动

Lastmonth,ourclasshadacharitysale.

Onepossibleversion:

Lastmonth,ourclasshadacharitysale.Twodaysbeforethesale,wehandedoutnoticestomakeoursaleknownbyothers.Thenwemadedifferentthingslikefoodandtoys.Itwassomuchfun!Wheneverythingwasready,westartedtosellthethings.Tooursurprise,alltheth