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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasyoung,welivedinasmalltown.EveryoneknewRoyashewasatopstudentinthetown.Hewasofmyage,buthelosthisparentsinanaccidentattheageof8.Sohelivedaloneanddeliverednewspaperstosupporthimselfandhiseducation.Everytimehedeliverednewspaperstoourhome,heworeabroadsmileonhisfaceandgreetedmymomgently.Mymomwasgreatlysurprisedwhensheknewhisdailyroutine.Hegotupeverymorningby5o’clockandwalked5kilometersfromwherehelivedtothenewspaperofficetocollectthenewspapers.By6:00,hecarried50piecesofnewspapers—morethan5kilogramsandwalked3kilometersback.Aftersendingthenewspapers,herushedanother3kilometershometocookasimplebreakfastbeforehurryingtoschool.Thismorning,seeinghelefthurriedlyinastrongwind,mymomandIdecidedtodosomethingforhim.Afterschool,Iwaitedforhimattheschoolgateandtoldhimthatmymomwouldliketoinvitehimtoourhome.Whenheaskedwhy,Ireplied,“Youwillknowsoon!”Thinkingforashortwhile,hefollowedmetomyhomenearby.Itwaspossiblethatheassumedmymomwouldcontinuetosubscribetothenewspaper.注意:1.续写词数应为100个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Mymomstoodatthedoor,waitingforus.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Seeingthebikeinfrontofhim,hecouldn’tholdbackhistears.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:罗伊是小镇上的优等生,8岁时父母因事故离世,他独自生活,靠送报纸维持学业。他每日行程忙碌辛苦,“我”和妈妈知晓后决定帮助他。放学后“我”邀请罗伊到家中,故事在此处展开续写。文章主要围绕罗伊的不幸遭遇与坚强自立以及“我”和妈妈的善意帮助展开。伏笔与回应:伏笔:罗伊父母早亡,独自生活且生活艰辛。回应:这使得“我”和妈妈想要帮助他,为后文妈妈送自行车等帮助行为做铺垫。伏笔:罗伊送报行程忙碌,时间紧张。回应:妈妈送自行车能帮助他节省时间,提高效率,改善他忙碌奔波的状况。伏笔:“我”邀请罗伊到家中且未说明原因。回应:引起罗伊的好奇与疑惑,在到家后谜底揭开,情节有起伏。伏笔:罗伊匆忙离开时刮着大风。回应:突出他送报环境的恶劣,也侧面反映他生活不易,更凸显妈妈送自行车的雪中送炭。伏笔:妈妈知道罗伊的日常行程后很惊讶。回应:妈妈惊讶后便心生怜悯与帮助之意,才有后续的邀请和送自行车情节。续写要点:情感线:第一段从罗伊的疑惑到感受到妈妈热情后的感动与些许不安;第二段从看到自行车时的震惊与感动到对未来充满希望与感激。故事线:第一段妈妈热情招待罗伊,讲述对他的敬佩与关心,提及要送他东西;第二段妈妈推出自行车,罗伊明白用意后表达感激,“我”和妈妈鼓励他,罗伊带着希望离开。主旨升华句:Kindnessisthesunshinethatcanpenetratethecloudsofmisfortune.(善良是能穿透不幸阴霾的阳光。)Inthefaceofadversity,ahelpinghandcanrewritethestoryoflife.(在逆境面前,援助之手能改写人生故事。)Alittlecareinacoldworldcankindlethefireofhope.(冷漠世界中的一点关怀能点燃希望之火。)Truegenerosityliesnotingivingmuchbutingivingwhenitmattersmost.(真正的慷慨不在于给予多少,而在于在最关键的时候给予。)Thebeautyofhumanityispaintedwiththebrushofkindnessandpassion.(人性之美是用善良与同情之笔描绘而成。)写作示范一:Mymomstoodatthedoor,waitingforus.ShegreetedRoywithabig,warmsmileandledhimintothehouse.Roywasabitshyandhesitant,butmymommadehimfeelatease.ShetoldRoyhowmuchsheadmiredhisperseveranceandhardwork.Thenshesaid,“Roy,weknowyouhaveatoughlife.Wewanttohelpyou.”Roylookedpuzzled.Mymomtookhimtothebackyard,whereabrandnewbicyclewasparked.

Seeingthebikeinfrontofhim,hecouldn’tholdbackhistears.Hewasdeeplytouched.Hestammered,“Thankyousomuch.Thiswillchangemylife.”Mymompattedhisshoulderandsaid,“Youdeserveit.Webelieveyouwillhaveabrightfuture.”Ialsosaid,“Nowyoucandelivernewspapersmoreeasily.”Roynodded,hiseyesfilledwithgratitudeandhope.Hepromisedtoworkevenharderandmakeusproud.Thenherodethebikeaway,withanewfounddeterminationinhisheart.写作示范二:Mymomstoodatthedoor,waitingforus.AssoonasRoyentered,mymomofferedhimaseatandaglassofwater.Shebegantotalkabouthowshehadnoticedhiseffortsandsacrifices.Roylistenedquietly,hiseyesshowingamixtureofsurpriseandgratitude.Mymomthensaid,“Wehaveasmallgiftforyou.”Roywascurious.

Seeingthebikeinfrontofhim,hecouldn’tholdbackhistears.Hewalkedslowlytowardsitandtoucheditgently.“Ineverexpectedthis.Itmeanssomuchtome,”hesaid,hisvoicetrembling.Mymomexplainedthatitwastomakehisdailymuteeasier.Iaddedthatwehopeditwouldbringhimsomeconvenience.Roywipedhistearsandsaidhewouldrememberthiskindnessforever.Hegotonthebikeandrodearoundtheyardalittle,asmileofhopespreadingacrosshisface.【答案】范文Mymomstoodatthedoor,waitingforus.Assoonasshesawus,sherushedovertogiveusabighugandthenledustothediningroom.WeinvitedRoytojoinusfordinner,andthoughhehesitatedatfirst,heeventuallyaccepted.Asmymomfilleduphisplate,hesaiditbroughtbackmemoriesofhappydaysspentwithhisparents.Later,ashepreparedtoleave,Isteppedinsideandbroughtoutanewbike.“Thisisforyou,”mymomsaidwithasmile.Seeingthebikeinfrontofhim,hecouldn’tholdbackhistears.Withtearsofgratituderolling

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