读后续写个人成长类父亲帮我走出求学被拒阴霾课件-高三英语二轮复习

读后续写|个人成长类广东大湾区高二-Rejectedstudent‘sredemption

父亲帮我走出求学被拒阴霾广东大湾区高二年级2023-2024学年度第二学期期末统一考试原文分析读后续写原文审读多篇范文呈现解题思路分析读后续写可积累文本1、

原文审读：IwasinNewYorkCityonaschooltrip.Icalledhomefromapayphone,andmylittlesister,Alex,saidfourenvelopeshadarrived:Georgetown,Cornell,WilliamandMaryandtheUniversityofMassachusetts.Shethenopenedandreadthemtomeinherten-year-oldvoice:“Weregretthatwedonothaveaplaceforyou.."RejectedfromGeorgetown.“Youwereoneofmanyqualifiedcandidates..."RejectedfromCornell.Andnumberseventy-threeonawaitinglistofseventy-fiveatWilliamandMary.AcceptedtoUMass,mysafetyschool.Ididn'tdigesttherejectionsimmediately.ItouredtheUnitedNations,tooktrainhomeandwentbacktoschool.ThenIrealizedthatotherpeoplehadgottenintoschoolstheyreallywantedtogoto.Uptothatpointinmyseventeenyears,Ihadn'treallyfailedatanything.lgotgoodgrades,madetheschoolteamandscoredwellonmySATs.Ihadn'texperiencedanymajordisappointmentsinmylife,nodeaths,nodisease,nodivorce,nocavities(鹄齿)even.Sobeingrejectedseemeddisastrous(disaster).IhadalwaysassumedI'dgotooneofthe“"goodschools."lreallywantedtobechosen:Thisistheplaceforsmartpeople,andwewantyou.UMass,ontheotherhand,hadthereputationofbeingapartyschooltowhich,comeSeptember,I'dbeheadedwiththeguywhosatnexttomeintenth-gradehistoryandwho,duringtests,lefthisbookopenonthatfloorandturnedthepageswithhisfeet.IdidnotgetactivelikemyfriendHeather,who,havingbeenrejectedbyherfirstchoice,madeILoveLucy-styleplanstodrivetotheDukecampuswithhersoccerballandherscience-fairprojecttoshowtheadmissionsboard(招生委员会)exactlywhattheywererejecting.Isimplysaidthingslike,“I'vedecidedtogiveuptheundergraduatedegreeandtakeacake-decoratingcourse.”Thesubtextinthiswas:I'mstupid.Theworldisn'tfair.注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右:(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答Iremainedbitteruntiloneday,myfathersatmedown.Deeplytouchedbyhiswords,Ibegantoreassessmysituation.2、

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红色定从/定语；蓝色宾从；黄色状从，从句斜体；下划线+标黄单词+斜体

为需掌握积累单词、短语；黑体标黄，非谓语；可积累部分为

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注释(定语从句)

故事山模式：

衔接点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；衔接点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；衔接点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；衔接点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。对提示句P1,P2做逐词逐句的解读，理解其背后深意；回溯原文，找到对应的文本，确定基本元素，时间，地点，人物，所涉及的物品，细节等信息；试图对时间线，地点线结合P1,P2的提示句，看是否有所变化，以确定是否需要展开；构思情节读懂最后2段尤其是最后1段的信息，合理结合生活实际，构思文章，并完成成长前的困扰情境描写+消极情绪的累积→高潮

成长中的蜕变

成长的动机+过程中变化的心情成长后的升华

成长后的收获+积极情绪(喜悦、满足和骄傲等)可积累词汇：1.onaschooltrip-近义短语：onafieldtrip,duringaschoolexcursion-例句：Wewenttothemuseumonaschooltriplastyear.2.calledhome-近义短语：phonedhome,contactedhome-例句：Icalledhometocheckonmyfamily.3.payphone-生词：付费电话

-近义词：publicphone,coin-operatedphone-例句：Heusedapayphonetomakeacallsincehiscellphonedied.4.Weregretthat...-近义短语：Wearesorrythat...,Weapologizefor...-例句：Weregretthatwecannotofferyouaplaceatthistime.可积累词汇：5.qualifiedcandidates-近义短语：eligibleapplicants,suitablecandidates-例句：Thereweremanyqualifiedcandidatesfortheposition.6.safetyschool-生词：保底学校

-近义短语：backupschool,fallbackoption-例句：UMasswashersafetyschool,butshestillappliedtoherdreamcolleges.7.digesttherejections-生词：消化拒信

-近义短语：processtherejections,cometotermswiththerejections-例句：Ittookhersometimetodigesttherejectionsfromhertopchoices.8.madetheschoolteam-近义短语：gotintotheschoolteam,wasselectedfortheschoolteam-例句：Hemadetheschoolteamafterseveralroundsoftryouts.可积累词汇：9.majordisappointments-近义短语：significantsetbacks,bigletdowns-例句：Hehadneverfacedanymajordisappointmentsinlifeuntilnow.10.failedatanything-近义短语：experiencedfailure,fallenshort-例句：Shehadneverfailedatanythingbefore,sotherejectionwashardtoaccept.11.oneofthe"goodschools"-近义短语：oneoftheprestigiousschools,oneofthetopuniversities-例句：Hedreamedofattendingoneofthe"goodschools"hisparentshadmentioned.12.partyschool-生词：以聚会闻名的学校

-近义短语：schoolwithapartyculture,socialschool-例句：Theuniversityhadareputationasapartyschool,buthewasmorefocusedonacademics.可积累词汇：13.getactive-近义短语：takeaction,becomeinvolved-例句：Insteadoffeelingsorryforherself,shedecidedtogetactiveandpursueotheroptions.14.firstchoice-近义短语：topchoice,preferredoption-例句：Dukewasherfirstchoice,butshedidn’tgetin.15.takeacake-decoratingcourse-生词：学习蛋糕装饰课程

-近义短语：enrollinabakingcourse,takeaculinaryclass-例句：Aftertherejection,shejokedabouttakingacake-decoratingcourseinsteadofgoingtocollege.16.Theworldisn’tfair-近义短语：Lifeisn'tfair,Thingsareunfair-例句：Afterbeingrejected,hebitterlyremarked,"Theworldisn’tfair."可积累词汇：5.Tremble

基本信息

词性：v./n.

词义：颤抖，战栗；摇动

近义词：shake,shiver,quiver

联想词：vibrate,quake,flutter

例句：

Herhandstrembledassheopenedtheletter.Thegroundtrembledduringtheearthquake.推荐的动作、心理、环境描写例句：常见搭配和可积累语料

动作描写：

loadhaybales（搬运干草捆）

pressanearto（贴耳听）

grabtheflashlight（抓起手电筒）

racebackto（飞奔回到）

心理描写：

wasn’tconvinced（不相信）

wokeinthenightthinkingabout（夜里醒来想着）

wonderingwhattodo（不知道该怎么办）

环境描写：

afaintmeowfromthehayloft（干草棚里微弱的猫叫声）

quietwhenCalliewentinside（当Callie进去时一片寂静）

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积累词汇1.remainedbitter-生词：依然苦涩

-近义短语：stayedresentful,continuedtofeelbitter-例句：Heremainedbitteraboutthesituationforalongtime.2.satmedown-近义短语：talkedtomeprivately,hadaseriousconversationwithme-例句：Mymothersatmedowntodiscussmyfutureplans.3.openedmyheart-生词：敞开心扉

-近义短语：sharedmyfeelings,confidedin-例句：Sheopenedherhearttoherbestfriendaboutherstruggles.积累词汇4.pouredoutmyfrustrations-近义短语：ventedmyfrustrations,expressedmyfrustrations-例句：Hepouredouthisfrustrationsafterthedifficultweekatwork.5.feellikeafailure-生词：感觉像个失败者

-近义短语：thinkI’mafailure,believeI’vefailed-例句：Afterlosingthegame,shefeltlikeafailure.6.listeningattentively-生词：专心聆听

-近义短语：payingcloseattention,listeningcarefully-例句：Hewaslisteningattentivelytothespeaker’severyword.积累词汇7.painfulrejections-近义短语：hurtfulrejections,difficultrejections-例句：Thepainfulrejectionsfromuniversitiesmadehimdoubthisabilities.8.reflectionofyourworth-生词：你价值的反映

-近义短语：measureofyourvalue,indicationofyourworth-例句：Thesesetbacksarenotareflectionofyourworthasaperson.9.overcomethischallenge-近义短语：getpastthisobstacle,conquerthisdifficulty-例句：Heknewhehadthestrengthtoovercomethischallenge.积累词汇10.supportyoueverystepoftheway-生词：全程支持你

-近义短语：bewithyouthroughout,helpyouthrougheverything-例句：I’llsupportyoueverystepoftheway,nomatterwhatyoudecide.11.reassessmysituation-近义短语：rethinkmyposition,reevaluatemysituation-例句：Afterspeakingtohisfather,hebegantoreassesshissituation.12.dwellingontherejections-生词：纠结于拒绝

-近义短语：focusingontherejections,obsessingovertherejections-例句：Dwellingontherejectionswon’thelpyoumoveforward.积累词汇13.reachingmyfullpotential-生词：发挥我全部潜能

-近义短语：realizingmyfullpotential,achievingmypotential-例句：Toreachyourfullpotential,youmuststopdoubtingyourself.14.shiftingmymindset-生词：转变心态

-近义短语：changingmymindset,alteringmyperspective-例句：Shiftingmymindsethelpedmeseethingsmoreclearly.15.embracetheopportunities-生词：抓住机会

-近义短语：seizetheopportunities,takeadvantageoftheopportunities-例句：Shedecidedtoembracetheopportunitiesthatcameherway.积累词汇16.renewedsenseofpurpose-近义短语：freshsenseofpurpose,newmotivation-例句：Afterthetalk,hefeltarenewedsenseofpurposeinlife.17.doveintomystudies-生词：全心投入学习

-近义短语：immersedmyselfinmystudies,fullycommittedtomystudies-例句：Hedoveintohisstudieswithdeterminationafterhisrealization.18.newpassions-近义短语：freshinterests,newfoundpassions-例句：Atuniversity,shediscoverednewpassionsthatguidedherfuturecareer.积累词汇19.initialdisappointment-生词：最初的失望

-近义短语：earlydisappointment,firstdisappointment-例句：Theinitialdisappointmentfadedasshefoundnewopportunities.20.unwaveringsupport-生词：坚定不移的支持

-近义短语：constantsupport,unfalteringsupport-例句：Hisunwaveringsupporthelpedherthroughthetoughesttimes.1.语料升级与积累

情感表达的高级短语

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