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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Theskyhadgonedark,andDadwasn’thomeyet.Heworkedalldaygardeningforprivatehouses.InGeorgia,thatmeantendlessworktodo.MomtoldustowaitforDadsothatwecouldeattogether.EvenwhenDaddidn’tgethomeuntilaftereightoreightthirty,Ididn’tmind.Afewyearsago,Dadboughtmeabackboardandhoopandinstalledatallmetalpoleonthesideofthedrivewaysowecouldhaveourownbasketballcourt.Itwasacourtmadeofdirtandpebbles,butstill,itwasafunplace.Iwouldshootbasketsinmysparetime.Still,duringthesummermonths,betweenparttimejobsdeliveringnewspapers,helpingDadcuttinglawns,wecameprettyclosetospendingasmuchofthedayaswecouldonthecourt.Dadtaughtmeallsortsofshotshookshots,foulshots,fadeawayjumpers,shotsfromtheer,triedtosendtheballthrougheachother’slegsandpasseditbehindourbacks.EachtimeIfeltfrustratedanddepressed,Dadwouldinvitemetojoininashotgame.Ididn’tknowwhatitwasaboutholdingaballandsendingitintotheairandwaitingforittodropintothehoop(圈),butitfeltlikemagicAlltheproblemsoftheworldseemedtofadeaway,andIwasthemagician.Dadoncetoldmehefeltprettymuchthesamewaywhileplayingbasketball.ItwasoneofthethingsDadandIsharedthemagicinbasketball.Lately,though,itdidn’tseemlikeDadsawalotofmagicinhisjob.Whenhecamehomeeachnight,itwasearlierthanwhenheusuallyarrivedhome.Icouldperceivesomethingdifferent.注意:1.
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请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Withthefinancialcrisisspreading,mostofhiscustomerslosttheirjobs.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ibouncepassedtheballtohim,andDadcaughtitnaturally._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意爸爸在佐治亚州做园艺工作,经常很晚回家。几年前爸爸给“我”安装了一个简陋但好玩的篮球场。“我”在空闲时间会在那里打球,爸爸教“我”各种投篮技巧。篮球有一种魔力,能让“我”的烦恼消失。但最近爸爸回家比往常早,感觉他对工作没了热情,因为金融危机,他的很多客户都失业了。几处伏笔及在续写中的回应伏笔:爸爸工作受金融危机影响,以及篮球对父子二人的特殊意义。回应:续写中通过篮球缓解爸爸的压力,重新找回对生活的热情。续写要点第一段(Withthefinancialcrisisspreading,mostofhiscustomerslosttheirjobs.)情感线:从担忧爸爸的工作到希望能帮助他缓解压力。故事线:讲述爸爸工作机会减少,心情低落,“我”想让他重新感受篮球的魔力来缓解压力。续写示例:Withthefinancialcrisisspreading,mostofhiscustomerslosttheirjobs.SoDadhadlessworktodo.Hewasreallydown.Iknewhewasworriedaboutprovidingforthefamily.Ithoughtaboutthemagicofbasketballthatalwayscheeredmeup.MaybeitcouldworkforDadtoo.Idecidedtoinvitehimtoplaywithmetonight.第二段(Ibouncepassedtheballtohim,andDadcaughtitnaturally.)情感线:父子情感升温,重拾快乐和希望。故事线:父子在球场上互动,爸爸逐渐恢复活力,重新感受到篮球的魔力。续写示例:Ibouncepassedtheballtohim,andDadcaughtitnaturally.Ashedribbledtheball,Icouldseeaglimmeroftheoldsparkinhiseyes.Westartedplaying,passing,shooting.Dad'smovementsbecamemoreenergetic.Themagicofbasketballwasworking.Itwasbringingbackthejoyandhopebetweenus,makingusforgetthehardtimesforawhile.主旨升华句Basketballisnotonlyasportbutalsoabondthatcanhealourheartsintoughtimes.(篮球不仅是一项运动,更是在艰难时刻能治愈我们心灵的纽带。)Inthegameofbasketball,wefindthestrengthtofacedifficultieswithourlovedones.(在篮球比赛中,我们找到了和所爱之人一起面对困难的力量。)Themagicofbasketballliesinitsabilitytorekindlehopeduringthedarkesthours.(篮球的魔力在于它能在最黑暗的时刻重燃希望。)Whenlifegetstough,thesharedloveforbasketballcanbringlightbackintoourlives.(当生活艰难时,对篮球的共同热爱能让我们的生活重见光明。)Basketball,likeamagicwand,wavesawaythegloomandrestoresthewarmthbetweenfatherandson.(篮球就像一根魔杖,驱散阴霾,恢复父子间的温暖。)写作示范第一篇第一段:Withthefinancialcrisisspreading,mostofhiscustomerslosttheirjobs.Dad'sworkloaddecreaseddrastically.Heseemedtiredandlosthisusualenthusiasm.Iknewhowmuchhelovedhisjobandseeinghimlikethispainedme.Irememberedhowbasketballalwaysliftedourspirits.IhopeditcoulddothesameforDadnow.Ipreparedthebasketballandwaitedforhimtoehome.
第二段:Ibouncepassedtheballtohim,andDadcaughtitnaturally.Hesmiledalittle.Westartedplaying.Asweplayed,Dad'smovementsbecamemorefluid.Thejoyofthegamefilledhisface.ThemagicofbasketballwasbringingbacktheDadIknew.Welaughedandplayed,forgettingtheoutsideworld'stroublesforamoment.第二篇第一段:Withthefinancialcrisisspreading,mostofhiscustomerslosttheirjobs.BusinesswasreallybadforDad.Hespentmoretimeathome,lookingworried.Ifeltsadforhim.ButIknewthatourbasketballcourtheldaspecialpower.Ithadalwaysbeenaplaceofjoyandescapeforus.IthoughtitwastimetosharethatmagicwithDadagaintolifthisspirits.
第二段:Ibouncepassedtheballtohim,andDadcaughtitnaturally.Atfirst,hewasabithesitant,butashestartedmovingwiththeball,hisenergyreturned.Weplayedhard,witheachshotandpassreignitingtheconnectionbetweenus.ThemagicofbasketballmadeDad'seyesshineagain,remindingusthateveninhardtimes,therearealwaysthingstocherish.参考答案Withthefinancialcrisisspreading,mostofhiscustomerslosttheirjobs.
SodidDadasamatterofcourse,awaveofhelplessnesswashingoverhim.Hedraggedhimselfbackhomewithheavysteps.Atthesightoftheworriedexpressiononhisface,Ifellapartinside.WhatcouldIdotostophimsinkingintoadarkabyss?Theballheldinmyhandssparkedlikeaninspiration.“Wanttojoininashotgame,Dad?”Ias
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