版权说明:本文档由用户提供并上传,收益归属内容提供方,若内容存在侵权,请进行举报或认领
文档简介
A读后续写重点话题突破
08文化、艺术类
1精选最新名校试题
2话题故事背诵模板
3分类话题情节分析
4分类话题写作步骤
5分类话题高分词汇
6分类话题写作高分句型
1.(2023•湖南岳阳•统考三模)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
IlovetoplaythepianoandIgreatlyenjoyperformingmysongs,sowhentheannualwinterrecitalwas
canceled,Iwasdisappointed.Ihadlookedforwardtoitforalongtimeandhadalreadypreparedtwoofmybest
songs.
Mymomhadawonderfulidea,however,toturnthisdisappointingletdownintosomethingworthwhile.a6Ybu
canperformyoursongsatCarriageHouseSeniorLiving,“mymomsuggestedbrightly.i6Vmsuretheseniorsthere
whodonothavefamiliesvisitthemthatoften,wouldreallyappreciatethemusicandyoucouldplaymorethanjust
twosongs.^^
Iimmediatelythoughtthiswasagreatidea.OneofthethingsIdidnotlikeabouttherecitalswasthatIwas
limitedtoplayingjustacoupleofsongs.PlayingthepianoatCarriageHouseseemedlikeawin-winsituation
becausenotonlywouldIgettoplaymoresongs,butIwouldalsohavethechancetocheeruptheresidentsthere
withsomelivelytunes.
MymomcalledCarriageHouseandmadearrangementsformetoperform.Inthecomingdays,Iworked
especiallyhardtopolishupfifteenpiecesthatIthoughtthecrowdwouldenjoy,includingmanyoldclassics.
Whenthemuch-anticipateddayfinallyarrived,myfamilyandIdrovetoCarriageHouse.Walkingthroughthe
enormousdoubledoors,westeppedintoanentrywaythatoverlookedthespaciousgranddiningroom.Rightatthe
entrancetothediningroomstoodthepianoasifitwerejustwaitingtomakesomemusictoliventheplaceupabit.
Atnearlyeverytableseveralgray-hairedwomenormenwereseatedenjoyingtheirdinnerandthecompanythat
thecrowdedroomprovided.Despitetheconversationsgoingonatvarioustablesthough,isolationhunglikeadark
cloudintheroom.
Almostimmediately,weweregreetedbyanoldwomanwithawalkerwhointroducedherselfasPhyllisin
chargeofCarriageHouse.Shewelcomedmeandledmetothestage.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
AsIsatdownonthebench,Ipressedakeyonthepianoandwassurprisedtohearnosound.
NervousnessmeltedawayandIstartedtoenjoytheperformancewiththeold.
2.(2023•山西•长治市上党区第一中学校校联考)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
WecallTalentShowthebiggeststageinourcountry.Istoodonthathugestage,withmythroatdry.AsI
staredattheaudience,Iknewthismomentcouldchangemylifeforever.WhenjudgesaskedmynameandItried
tospeak,nothingcameout.Thecrowdfellsilent,waitingforthewordstocome.FinallyIstuttered(结巴地说)my
nameandmyage."AsyoucanIsaid,“Ihaveaspeechdisorder...9,
rdlovetosingandhadalreadysignedupfortheschooltalentshowinfourthgradewhenIstarted
stuttering.Fortunately,mostofthekidsatmyschoolwerekind,andIwasrarelymadefunof.Itriedspeechtherapy
too,butitdidn'thelp.Ifearedtosingintheschooltalentshow.Therefore,Idecidedtopracticeathome.Tomy
surprise,thewordscamesmoothlywhenIsang.AndthenIdecidedtolearntoplaytheguitar,whichwasgivenasa
birthdaygiftbymyfather.
Oneafternoon,Iwalkedintothebasement,whereIkeptmymusicalequipment.Myeyeslitontheguitar.I
pickeditupandstartedplaying.Iopenedmymouth,andthewordscamefloodingout.ThenIwroteasongcalledI
WillTrust,tellingthepainIP'dexperienced.Thenextday,Ifilmedavideoofperformingthesongandpostedit
online.HundredsofstrangersleftcommentsthatIhadupliftedthemwithmymusic.Eversince,I'vebeenwriting
songs.
Lastyear,Istartedcollegeandmajoredinmusicproduction.WhenIsawTalentShowaudition(试
唱)announcementpopuponmycomputer,Iwantedtohaveatry.Severalmonthslater,Iwasstandingonthatstage,
tryingtocalmmynervesasIintroducedmyself,“Ihaveaspeechimpediment.1said,t4Itwasdefinitelysomething
thatcausedmeItookalongpausetofindthewords.t4...tohide.ButIfoundthatIdon'tstutterwhenIsing.”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
ThenIbegantosinganewsongrdjustwritten.
MyperformanceonTalentShowhadadeepinfluenceonme.
3.(2023•全国•高三专题练习)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
YouWillAlwaysBeMyTeacher,Grandpa
ChitosewasleavingforFrancetogetfurtherstudy.However,thelastlessonwasadisaster.Chitoseandher
grandpahadahugefight.Shearrivedatthestudiosmilingandsaid,"LookGrandpa,Ipaintedthisportraitofyou.^^
Themanintheportraithadalotofhair,stoodstraight,lookedyoung,andsmiled.Chitosemightbetalented
enoughtoattendanartcollegeinFrance,butshehasabigweaknessasanartist.Whenshepaintsaperson,too
oftenshepaintsanidealizedimageratherthantherealperson.Grandpahadbeenexplainingthispointtoherfor
severalmonths,butshejustwouldn5tlisten.
Grandpagotalittleangryandsaidtoher,"Thisisnotme,andyouarenotarealartist.9,Shegotangrytooand
saidshedidn'tcarebecauseshedidn'tneedhimasateacheranymore.Grandpathenshowedhertheportraithehad
paintedasherfarewellgiftandsaid,t4Thisistherealyou!^^Shetookonelookatitandsaid,“No,itisn^t!^^andthen
left.
GrandpagavetheportraitofChitosetoherparents.Hehaddonetheportraitacoupleofmonthsbefore
Chitosestartedchangingherstyle,andhethinksitshowsthehighschoolstudenthetaughtfortwoyears.When
Grandpapaintedit,shestillhadhernaturalcurlyhair.Shewasnotwearingalltheaccessories(酉己饰)shehasnow,
includingtheringshapedearringssheloves.Shealsoneverworemakeupthen.ThiswasaChitosewithafantastic
futurewhoknewshewasstillanamateurartist.Butnowsheisgettingolderandwantstoactandlookmorelikean
adult.However,shewillneverbecomeagreatartistifshestopslearning.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Chitose'smomsecretlyputtheportraitintooneofChitose'ssuitcaseswhenshelefthomeforFrance.
Chitosepaintedaportraitofhergrandpaandherself.
4.(2023•湖南娄底•高三校联考阶段练习)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
TheGreatestAudience
Iwas16yearsold,andlikemanyotherteenageboys,Iwasinaband.Oneday,weweretoldtoperformfora
charityeventatalargerehabilitation(康复)hospital.Itwouldn'tpaymuch,butitwasourfirstrealjob.Fortwo
weekswepractisedhard,gettingtogethereverydayafterschooltosharpenourskillsandlearnenoughsongstofill
aone-hourshow.
Finallycamethebigday.Weshowedupearlytocheckoutthestage,thenthehospital'sentertainmentdirector
cameovertous."OK,boys,Ijustwanttosharesomedetailswithyou,^^shesaid."Alotofthepeopleinthe
audiencearesufferingfromseverephysicalormentaldisabilities.Manyofthemareold,intheirsixtiesand
seventies.Thesepatientshaveveryfewchancestoseeliveentertainment,sotheyenjoyanykindofmusicaltalent
thatwecanbringin.Justplayyourregularshow."Withthat,sheleft,goingintotheauditorium(礼堂)toassistthe
patientstotheirseats.
Soonitwasshowtime.Aswepickedupourinstruments,wegotourfirstreallookattheaudience.The
auditoriumwasfull.Themajorityofthepeoplewatchingushadeitherbeenseriouslyinjuredinaccidentsorbom
withmajorbirthdefects(缺陷).Someweretalkingquietly,butmostwerejustsittingthere.Thequietwas
disturbing,aswewereusedtoenergeticaudiences.
Tommy,theleadsinger,signaledustostartthefirstsong.Everythingwasperfect,andweplayedprobablythe
bestshowofourlives.Wehardlymissedanoteonanyofoursongs,eventheonesthatwe'donlyrecentlylearned.
Myguitarsolosseemedtofloweffortlesslyoutofmyfingers,andIfeltsurroundedbyawallofmusic.However,
wecouldn'tenjoyourperformance.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Aseachsongfinished,wedidn'treceivethunderingapplause.
Whathappenednextshockedmemorethananything.
5.(2023•山西太原•高三统考期末)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
ThesoundcomingfromAlpertroomwasabsolutelyawful...Hismumopenedthedoor.
“Son,I'vegotaheadache.Canyougiveitarest?”
“ButI'mpracticingtheguitar.^^
("Practicing?Sometimesyouhitthestringsandsometimesyouslaptheguitar...Andyourmouthisopenallthe
time.Andyoukeepshouting.Thafsnotsinging!Wesendyoutoaguitarcoursebutifsawasteoftimeandmoney!
Didn'ttheygiveyousongsyou9resupposedtopracticewith?Youshouldlearnhowtoplaythesefirstuntilyouget
themright.9,
"Oh,Idoplaythosesongssometimes.They5rereallyboringthough.Anyway,ithurtsmyfingerswhenIplay
thestringsaccordingtotherulestheyteachusatthecourse.Iplaywithmyheart.Notaccordingtorules...Ifsalot
morefunthatway.”
“Well,Ihopeyourdaddoesn'thearthatafterspendingallthismoney.It'sdisturbingtheneighbours.Last
night,Mr.Ariffromupstairswasdrivenmad.Hesaidthatyoursingingsoundedasifyouhadfallenintoapotof
boilingwater!,?
Hismum'swordsreallydepressedhim.Atfirsthethoughtthatheonlyneededtotouchtheguitarand
beautifulmusicwouldjustcomeoutonitsown.Butinsteaditwasonlypractice,practice,practice.Hecouldn't
standthisHewantedtolearnhowtoplayhisownmusic!Hespentdaysanddayswritinglyrics...Thelightinthe
air...cats...birds...sweetbreezes...Alperwroteabouteverything!But...Alperhadnomusicforhiswords.He
couldn'twritemusic.Hedidn'tknowanynotesatall.Hepickeduphisguitarandwentoutsidetotheparkopposite
theirhouse,whichwasnearlyemptyatthistimeofday.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then,agroupofyoungpeoplewithdifferentinstrumentsstreamedintothepark.
Joininginthegrowingcrowd,Alperwasfinallyhappy,andwithhisguitarleftonthegrasshestartedtosingout
loud.
6.(2023•山东•沂水县第一中学校联考模拟预测)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
TheScienceofHappiness
Kateisabrightyoungwomanwithanintensefocusonacademicsandalong-termgoalofbecominga
neuroscientist(神经系统科学家).Herpathischartedverycarefullyeachdayaccordingtoschedule.Shemeets
afterschoolwiththeBrainClub,agroupshestartedthatdiscussesneuroscienceandtradesacademicpaperslike
baseballcards.Ifsthekindofgroupyouwouldneverimagineinhighschool,whichismaturebeyondtheiryears
andledbytheirowninitiative.
ItwouldseemtherewasnoroominKate'sscheduleforfun,letalonehelpingothers.Butthenshefoundout
aboutanelementaryschoolhithardbythepandemic,theninflation,andnowarecession(衰退).Itsitsinthe
middleofaworking-classneighborhoodandmostofparentsweretiredoutbyworkingphysicallydemandingjobs
fromdawntodark.Mostfamiliesweredoingthebestbuttheycouldjustputafewgroceriesonthetable.
Halloweenwasapproaching,andmanyofthefamiliesdidn'tparticipatebecausetheylackedcostumesand
couldn'taffordtogiveoutcandythemselves.SoKatecalledtheheadmasteroftheelementaryschool.Shewastold
thefamilieswantedtheirkidstohavefunonHalloween,buttheyalsoneededmorebooksinthehome.
SoKatewenttowork.ShebeganwiththeBrainClubandthenbranchedouttootherclubs.Theywould
sponsoratrick-or-treateventfeaturinggames,candyandbookgiveaways.Itwasahugeorganizational
challenge-onethatonlyaveryorganizedpersoncouldhandle.SoKateputhersmartstouse.Shearrangedfor
groupsofherfellowstodecoratetheircarsandcreategames.ShefoundaDJandroundedupboxesofcostumesfor
thekids.Sheevengotthelocalpolicetodecoratetheircruiser(巡逻车).Andshewenttoworkgettingkidsbooks
donated.
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
AtduskonHalloween,thecarsarrivedintheparkinglot.
Theheadmastersaidthiswasthehappiesttimeforthekids.
7.(2023•河北•校联考模拟预测)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
TheChristmasIwillneverforgethappenedwhenIwas9.IbelievedinSantawithallmyheart.HowcouldI
notwhenIreceivedeverythingIwishedfor.
December1st.Momwouldannounce,64IfsHearingthosewords,weallknewitwastimetowriteour
letterstoSanta.OnedayIaskedmomwhywealwayswroteourlettersonDecember1st.Shesaidbecausesomany
kidswerewritingletterstoSanta,heneededtimetoreadthemandmakeallthetoysthekidswanted.Onceour
letterswerefinished,momwouldputtheminherpurseandmailthemthenextday.
ChristmasEvefinallyarrived.Wewereallsoexcited.WedidourChristmasEvetraditions.DaddyreadusThe
NightBeforeChristmas5story.Thenitwastimeforsleep.IhadsuchagoodfeelingaboutChristmasthisyear.It
wasdifficulttofallasleep.ButsleepfinallycameandsodidChristmasmorning.Iwokeuphearingmybrothers
yelling.Jimmycamerunningandjumpingonmybed."Santa'sbeenhere,sister!Lefsopenpresents!,?
Werandownthestairs.Oureyeswereglowinglikewildfireasweeyedoverthepresentsunderthetree.My
brothersandIquicklysnuggled(依偎)amongthepackages.Weallwatchedaseachpersonunwrappedagift.I
keptwatchingasmybrothersunwrappedgifts.Mydaddidn'thandmeanypackage."'Thisyearyouaregoingtobe
thelasttogetyourpresentsbecauseyouaretheoldest.^^hedeclared.Ididn'tthinkanythingofit,soIwhispered
“OK.”
Onebyoneallofthepackageshadbeenopened.Therewasnoneleft.Icouldn'tunderstand.Ihadbeenso
goodthisyear.Tearsbeganslidingdownmycheeks.Iranuptomyroom.Mymomwentupthestairsformeto
comebackdown.Dadwantedtotalktome,sobbing,Islowlymademywayback.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dadsignedtometofollowhim.
ThememoryofthatChristmasstayedwithmealltheseyears.
8.(2023•海南省•统考二模)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
ThefamilyhadjustmovedtoRhodeIsland,andtheyoungwomanwasfeelingalittlesadonthatSundayin
May.Afterall,itwasMother'sDay-and800milesseparatedherfromherparentsinOhio.
ShehadcalledhermotherthatmorningtowishherahappyMother'sDay,andhermotherhadmentionedhow
colorfultheyardwasnowthatspringhadarrived.Astheytalked,theyoungerwomancouldalmostsmellthe
tantalizingaromaofpurplelilacs(紫丁香)hangingonthebigbushoutsideherparents*backdoor.
Later,whenshementionedtoherhusbandhowshemissedthoselilacs,hepoppedupfromhischair."Iknow
wherewecanfindyouallyouwant,^^hesaid."Getthekidsandcomeon.^^Soofftheywent,drivingonthecountry
roadsofnorthernRhodeIsland.Eventually,hestoppedthecar.
“Comewithme,“hesaid.t4Overthathillisanoldcellarhole,andtherearelilacsallaroundit.Gopickafew.99
There,onthetopofthehill,werethetoweringlilacsbushes.Whilethemanexaminedthecellarholeandtried
toexplaintothechildrenwhatthehousemusthavelookedlike,thewomanhadbeencheeredup,driftingamong
thelilacs.Carefully,shepickedsomeout.Shewasinnohurry,admiringeachblossomasarareanddelicate
treasure.
Finally,though,theyreturnedtotheircarforthetriphome.Whentheywerealmosthome,shesuddenly
shoutedtoherhusband:"Stopthecar.Stoprighthere!^^
Inasecond,thewomanwasoutofthecarandhurryingupanearbygrassyslopewiththelilacsstillinher
arms.Atthetopofthehillwasanursinghomeand,becauseitwassuchabeautifulspringday,thepatientswere
outdoors,walkingwithrelativesorsittingontheporch(走廊).
注意:
(1)所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
(2)至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语:
(3)续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
(4)续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:Theyoungwomanwenttotheendoftheporch,whereanelderlypatientwassittinginher
wheelchair,alone.
Paragraph2:Curiositywasarousedamongthekidsandthehusband.
9.(2023•河北石•高三石家庄二中校考阶段练习)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
ItwasnowDecembertwenty-fourth.Soherewewere,travellingabout2,000milesandfinallyreachingour
destinationSanDiegoatlast.We'drentedaroominasmall,well-wornmotel(汽车旅馆)nearthebeach.
Six-year-oldChatfrowned."ThereisnoChristmastree,Mommy!ButifsalmostChristmas.HowcanSanta
knowwheretoputourpresentswithoutaChristmastree?”
“Yes,aChristmastree!^^echoed(附和)hisfour-year-oldbrotherJay."IwantaChristmastree!^^
“Couldn'twejustgetasmallChristmastreeandsetitupinthisroomsomewhere?46askedChat."Thatway,
SantaClauswillknowwheretoputourpresents.9,
Isighed,lookingaroundatoursqueezed-inbedsandbags.66But,honey,thefiveofuscanbarelymovearound
inherewithalloursuitcasesandeverything.I'msorry,butwejustdon'thavetheroomforsomethingextralikea
Christmastree.^^
Ouroldestson,seven-year-oldRobin,hadbeenlisteningquietly.Suddenly,hegrinned(咧嘴笑).“Yes,we
do.”
Istared.acWhere?^^
Hepointedtoourmotelroom'sdoor."Rightthere——onthebackofthatdoor.Please,Mommy,ifwecan'tgeta
realtree,can'twemakeapretendtreeandputitupthere?ThenSantawillknowweloveChristmasjustasmuchas
hedoes.^^
“Andleaveussomepresents,too!”Chatadded.
Makeatree?IlookedatthenewspaperthatIhadboughtwhenIwassearchingforplacestorent.IfItaped
someofthosepagestogether,cutthemoutintoatreeshape,andboughtsomeposterpaintandbrushesatthestore
nextdoor...
Now,Iwasgrinning,too."Okay,boys!ReadytomaketheverybestChristmastreeinthewholewideworld?^^
“Yes!”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Soweboughtsomepaintandthentapedandcutandpainted.
Thenextmorning,Iheard,“Mommy!Daddy!Look!Santadidfindusafterall!”
10.(2023•湖北•统考二模)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
TwelveDaysofKindness
AlthoughitwaslessthantwoweeksbeforeChristmas,Ifounditdifficulttobeinafestivemood.Wehad
movedtoCanada,andholidaysweredifficultforusbecausewemissedourfriendsandrelativesinMinnesota.Our
familywasalsogoingthroughaverydifficultyear,withhealthproblemsandaseriouswork-relatedproblemfor
myhusband.
“Mom,HowIwishwecouldspendChristmaswithGrandpaandGrandmainMinnesota.Ireallymissthem
andmyfriendsthere."saidmyfifteen-year-olddaughter,Rachel.
“Iknow,Rachel.SowouldI,“Isaid."ButMinnesotais2,000kilometersaway.Don'tyourememberhowhard
itwastodriveinthatsnowstormlastyear?Andthenthetemperaturedroppedto-30℃onourwayback?”
“Iremember,9,shesaidandduckedherheaddisappointedly.
WethoughtdrivingtoMinnesotaforChristmaswastooriskyandbuyingairlineticketsforthreepeoplewas
outofthequestion.WewouldbespendingChristmasaloneinCanada,andhadnomoneyforaChristmastreeora
Christmasdinner.
Weweresurprisedwhenthedoorbellrang.Itwasdarkandcoldoutside,andweweren'texpectinganyone.
Hesitantly,Rachelstoodupandwentforwardtoopenthedoor,andthensaid,“Mom,there9sabigboxonthe
doorstepandnobodyisouthere!^^Myhusbandalsowentandlooked.Buttherewasnobodyinsight.
Theybroughttheboxin.Weweresurprisedtofindthattheboxcontainedmanypackagescoveredinbright
Christmaspaper.Eachhadatypewrittennote:OpenDec.14,OpenDec.15...Therewereatotaloftwelve——the
"TwelveDaysofChristmas.9,Thenoteread:OurLOVEisgivenanonymously(匿名地),soenjoyfunwithyour
family,butdon'ttellanyoneplease.
注意:
1.续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph1:
Afterthat,weopenedonemoregifteachday.
Paragraph2:
Weopenedthe12thpackageonDecember25th.
A读后续写重点话题突破
08文化、艺术类
1精选最新名校试题
2话题故事背诵模板
3分类话题情节分析
4分类话题写作步骤
5分类话题高分词汇
6分类话题写作高分句型
1.(2023•湖南岳阳•统考三模)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
IlovetoplaythepianoandIgreatlyenjoyperformingmysongs,sowhentheannualwinterrecitalwas
canceled,Iwasdisappointed.Ihadlookedforwardtoitforalongtimeandhadalreadypreparedtwoofmybest
songs.
Mymomhadawonderfulidea,however,toturnthisdisappointingletdownintosomethingworthwhile.a6Ybu
canperformyoursongsatCarriageHouseSeniorLiving,“mymomsuggestedbrightly.i6Vmsuretheseniorsthere
whodonothavefamiliesvisitthemthatoften,wouldreallyappreciatethemusicandyoucouldplaymorethanjust
twosongs.^^
Iimmediatelythoughtthiswasagreatidea.OneofthethingsIdidnotlikeabouttherecitalswasthatIwas
limitedtoplayingjustacoupleofsongs.PlayingthepianoatCarriageHouseseemedlikeawin-winsituation
becausenotonlywouldIgettoplaymoresongs,butIwouldalsohavethechancetocheeruptheresidentsthere
withsomelivelytunes.
MymomcalledCarriageHouseandmadearrangementsformetoperform.Inthecomingdays,Iworked
especiallyhardtopolishupfifteenpiecesthatIthoughtthecrowdwouldenjoy,includingmanyoldclassics.
Whenthemuch-anticipateddayfinallyarrived,myfamilyandIdrovetoCarriageHouse.Walkingthroughthe
enormousdoubledoors,westeppedintoanentrywaythatoverlookedthespaciousgranddiningroom.Rightatthe
entrancetothediningroomstoodthepianoasifitwerejustwaitingtomakesomemusictoliventheplaceupabit.
Atnearlyeverytableseveralgray-hairedwomenormenwereseatedenjoyingtheirdinnerandthecompanythat
thecrowdedroomprovided.Despitetheconversationsgoingonatvarioustablesthough,isolationhunglikeadark
cloudintheroom.
Almostimmediately,weweregreetedbyanoldwomanwithawalkerwhointroducedherselfasPhyllisin
chargeofCarriageHouse.Shewelcomedmeandledmetothestage.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
AsIsatdownonthebench,Ipressedakeyonthepianoandwassurprisedtohearnosound.
NervousnessmeltedawayandIstartedtoenjoytheperformancewiththeold.
AsIsatdownonthebench,Ipressedakeyonthepianoandwassurprisedtohearnosound.Feelingasifthe
wholeworldwaswatchingme,Iwasstruckdeadwithembarrassment.HowcouldIperformthesongwithoutthe
piano?IwasonpinsandneedleswhenPhyllisslowlymadeherwaytothefrontofthecrowdofdinnersand
announcedinacomfortingtone,ctThisgirlhascometosingforusbutthepianoseemstobealittlenervous.
Almostimmediately,therewasscatteredapplauseandseveralpeoplesteppedforwardtohelpmepluginthepiano
andsetthemicrophone.Witheverythingready,Itookadeepbreathandcommencedmyperformance.
NervousnessmeltedawayandIstartedtoenjoytheperformancewiththeold.Onewomangotupandbeganto
animatedlydanceabouttheroom.Someofthepeopleswayedintheirchairstothebeatofthemusicwhileothers
tappedtheirstoes.Theperformanceendedupwithastormofapplausefromthecrowd.Irealizedthatitwasfar
betterthanapianorecitalbecausealmosteveryoneseemedtotrulyappreciatemymusicandVmproudthatIhave
thepowertospreadkindnesstothem.Itendedupbeingablessingindisguisethattherecitalwascanceled,leading
tomesharingthegiftofmusicwiththosewhoneededitmost.
【情节分析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者喜欢弹钢琴,也非常喜欢表演自己的歌曲,所以当年度冬季独奏
会被取消时,作者很失望。然而,妈妈提议去CarriageHouse为老年人表演时,作者欣然同意并为之积极
的做准备。
|【写作步骤】
1.段落续写:
由第一段首句内容“当我坐在长凳上时,我按下了钢琴的一个键,奇怪的是没有听到任何声音。”可知,第一
段可描写作者表演时发现钢琴没有声音的内心的紧张以及问题解决后大家对作者的鼓励。
由第二段首句内容“紧张的情绪消失了,我开始喜欢上了和老人一起的表演。“可知,第二段可描写作者的演
奏给老人带来的快乐和作者的感受。
2.续写线索:演出时钢琴出问题一紧张不已一老人鼓励一紧张消失一融入音乐一感悟
【高彳
行为类
①表演:perform/show
②.宣布:announce/declare
情绪类
①.尴尬:embarrassment/awkward
②.紧张的:nervous/intense/beonpinsandneedles
IwasonpinsandneedleswhenPhyllisslowlymadeherwaytothefrontofthecrowdofdinnersandannouncedin
acomfortingtone(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】
Irealizedthatitwasfarbetterthanapianorecitalbecausealmosteveryoneseemedtotrulyappreciatemymusic.
(运用了由关系代词that引导的宾语从句)
2.(2023•山西•长治市上党区第一中学校校联考)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
WecallTalentShowthebiggeststageinourcountry.Istoodonthathugestage,withmythroatdry.AsI
staredattheaudience,Iknewthismomentcouldchangemylifeforever.WhenjudgesaskedmynameandItried
tospeak,nothingcameout.Thecrowdfellsilent,waitingforthewordstocome.FinallyIstuttered(结巴地说)my
nameandmyage."Asyoucantell,^^Isaid,“Ihaveaspeechdisorder...9,
rdlovetosingandhadalreadysignedupfortheschooltalentshowinfourthgradewhenIstarted
stuttering.Fortunately,mostofthekidsatmyschoolwerekind,andIwasrarelymadefunof.Itriedspeechtherapy
too,butitdidn'thelp.Ifearedtosingintheschooltalentshow.Therefore,Idecidedtopracticeathome.Tomy
surprise,thewordscamesmoothlywhenIsang.AndthenIdecidedtolearntoplaytheguitar,whichwasgivenasa
birthdaygiftbymyfather.
Oneafternoon,Iwalkedintothebasement,whereIkeptmymusicalequipment.Myeyeslitontheguitar.I
温馨提示
- 1. 本站所有资源如无特殊说明,都需要本地电脑安装OFFICE2007和PDF阅读器。图纸软件为CAD,CAXA,PROE,UG,SolidWorks等.压缩文件请下载最新的WinRAR软件解压。
- 2. 本站的文档不包含任何第三方提供的附件图纸等,如果需要附件,请联系上传者。文件的所有权益归上传用户所有。
- 3. 本站RAR压缩包中若带图纸,网页内容里面会有图纸预览,若没有图纸预览就没有图纸。
- 4. 未经权益所有人同意不得将文件中的内容挪作商业或盈利用途。
- 5. 人人文库网仅提供信息存储空间,仅对用户上传内容的表现方式做保护处理,对用户上传分享的文档内容本身不做任何修改或编辑,并不能对任何下载内容负责。
- 6. 下载文件中如有侵权或不适当内容,请与我们联系,我们立即纠正。
- 7. 本站不保证下载资源的准确性、安全性和完整性, 同时也不承担用户因使用这些下载资源对自己和他人造成任何形式的伤害或损失。
最新文档
- 食品安全稽核管理制度(3篇)
- 摊位拍摄活动策划方案(3篇)
- 挡墙砌砖施工方案(3篇)
- 2026年福建莆田市市直学校新任教师招聘2人备考考试题库及答案解析
- 2026湖北荆州岑晟置业有限公司社会招聘4人备考考试题库及答案解析
- 读不完的大书第一课时
- 2026云南楚雄州武定县综合行政执法局招聘城市管理协管员10人备考考试试题及答案解析
- 镇痛泵植入术后护理注意事项与实践
- 2026湖北天门职业学院人才引进(第一批)130人备考考试试题及答案解析
- 2026北京急救中心第一批招聘考试参考试题及答案解析
- 麻醉科2025年度工作总结与2026年发展规划
- 2026届安徽省合肥一中八中、六中生物高一上期末联考试题含解析
- 中西医结合治疗慢性病康复优势
- 诊所医生营销培训课件
- 2026年开封大学单招职业倾向性测试题库及答案详解1套
- 2025辽宁葫芦岛市市直部分事业单位招聘高层次人才84人参考考试试题及答案解析
- 《小学数学课程与教学论》课程教学大纲
- 地下停车库申请书范文
- 幼儿园教育活动座位摆放指南
- 施工现场吊装令标准格式模板
- 移动支付安全体系架构-洞察与解读
评论
0/150
提交评论