福建省2024中考英语话题写作话题七学生与学习课件

话题七学生与学习考情分析1写作指导2实战演练3考情分析1写作指导五步写作法——审列扩连查第一步细审题定要点［2022南充改编]假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tracy的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她正在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。审人称：第一人称、第二人称2审时态：一般现在时请你根据以下导图的提示，给她写封关于选修汉语的理由，以及汉语学习方法的回信。审主题：提出建议

审文体：应用文Youradvice：choose，course，...定要点1：建议Tracy选修汉语TheimportanceoflearningChinese：popular，...定要点2：选修汉语的理由MethodsoflearningChinese：readChinesebooks，joinaChineseclub，...定要点3：学汉语的方法注意事项：1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4.词数80左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。DearTracy，I’msogladtohearfromyou.

⁠Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours，LiHua

第二步分段落列要点首段：给出建议，是否应该选修汉语以及学习汉语的重要性

(choose，course)。中间段：结合自身经历，介绍学习汉语的方法(useful，practice)。结尾：呼应首段，提出希望：自己的建议能有所帮助(已给出)。第三步扩句子精加工首段：要点一

建议Tracy选修汉语<错误句>YouhadbettertochoosetheChinesecourse.<一般句>YouhadbetterchoosetheChinesecourse.<高分句>1.

IsuggestyouchoosetheChinesecourse.

⁠IsuggestyouchoosetheChinesecourse.

要点二

学习汉语的重要性<错误句>LearningChinesehelplearnaboutChineseculture.<一般句>LearningChinesehelpslearnaboutChineseculture.<高分句>2.

LearningChineseisnotonlyawaytocommun

icate，butalsoachaadmireChineseculture.

⁠LearningChineseisnotonlyawaytocommunicate，

butalsoachancetoadmireChineseculture.

<错误句>YoumustjoininaChineseclubandkeeppracticeeveryday.<一般句>YoumustjoinaChineseclubandkeeppracticingeveryday.<高分句>3.

What’smore，youaresupposedtojoinaChinese

clubtopracticeyourspokenChinese.Keeppracticinge

veryday，andthenitwillbringsomethingnew.

⁠What’smore，youaresupposedtojoinaChineseclubtopracticeyourspokenChinese.Keeppracticingeveryday，

andthenitwillbringsomethingnew.

中间段：介绍学习汉语的方法第四步连句子成短文<优秀范文>DearTracy，I’msogladtohearfromyou.KnowingyouhaveaninterestinChinese，IsuggestyouchoosetheChinesecourse.WiththedevelopmentofChina，Chineseisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.LearningChineseisnotonlyawaytocommunicate，butalsoachancetoadmireChineseculture.过渡句：先从自身学习汉语的经历说起，然后引出下文对汉语学习方法的介绍AsaChinese，IhavebeenlearningChineseformanyyears.Ihavemuchexperiencetosharewithyou.

Inmyopinion，therearemanywaystolearnChinese.It’susefultoreadChinesebooksandlistentoChinesesongs.What’smore，youaresupposedtojoinaChineseclubtopractice与上句巧妙衔接，语言流畅，思路清晰yourspokenChinese.Keeppracticingeveryday，andthenitwillbringsomethingnew.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours，LiHua第五步查全文得高分首先依次检查人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。实战演练［2023三明一模]为了落实国家“双减”政策，英语老师们设计了词汇大王、故事阅读、情景剧表演等丰富多彩的作业，达到了提质减负的良好效果。你校英语社团将举办以“ColorfulEnglishHomework”为题的征文比赛，请你根据以如图文提示，写一篇参赛短文，谈谈你们的做法和收获。3ColorfulEnglishHomework注意事项：1.请勿在短文中使用真实的人名、校名；2.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；3.词数80左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。ColorfulEnglishHomeworkSinceChinaintroducedthe“doublereduction”policy，ourteachershavedesignedalotofcolorfulEnglishhomework.

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