Module6写作课件英语八年级下册

M6Hobbies写作Hobbyisthefirststeptoknowledge.Healthyhobbycanhelpusgetinthewayofsuccess.Foreverything,onlyinterestisthebestteacher.climbingpaintingmountainbikingdancinggrowingvegetableslookingaftertheanimalssailingplayingvolleyball1.我有很多兴趣爱好，比如...2.除了...之外，我还喜欢...3.我很喜欢...结果...4....可以使我...5....可以给我带来...Ihavemanyhobbies,suchasclimbing,dancingandsailing.Aswellaspainting,Ialsolikemountainbiking.Ilikeplayingvolleyballverymuch.

Asaresult,Ihavelearntalotofskills.Lookingafteranimalscanmakemebecomemorepatientandmorefriendly.Dancingcanbringmepleasureandsuccess.Writingaperson'shobbyWhatWhyWhen...Whattowrite?写什么What'shis/herhobby?Whydoeshe/sheenjoyit?Whendidhe/shestartdoingit?Howoftendoeshe/shedoit?Wheredoeshe/shedoit?...Howtowrite?HowtotalkabouthobbiesindifferentwaysIamfondofplayingbasketball.我喜爱……Iamcrazyaboutplayingbasketball.我痴迷于……Ilosemyselfinplayingbasketball.我沉迷于……Ifallinlovewithplayingbasketball.我爱上了……Tip1:Userichwordsandexpressionstodescribehobbies.（用丰富的单词和短语描述爱好）Ilike/loveplayingbasketball.

Ienjoyplayingbasketball.我享受……Iaminterestedinplayingbasketball.我对……感兴趣Nowwriteyouranswersonyourworksheet.在学习单中写一写。1minuteHowtotalkaboutadvantagesofhobbiesIlikeplayingbasketballasitbenefitsmealot.因为它让我受益良多Ithelpsme...Itmakesme...Itbringsme...Itdevelopsmy...Itopensmy...Ithelpsmekeephealthy/fit.它帮助我保持健康。Itmakesmehappyandenergetic.它使我快乐又精力充沛。Itbringsmepleasureandsuccess.它带给我快乐和成功。Itdevelopsmyinterestsindoingsports.它培养我锻炼的兴趣。Itopensmymindtoworkasateam.它打开我的心灵以团队形式合作。Tip2:Usedifferentsentencepatternstodescribeadvantagesofhobbies.（用不同的句型描述爱好的优点）1minute主语+谓语+宾语+宾补主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语主语+谓语+宾语+状语HowtotalkaboutadvantagesofhobbieslogicallyIlikeplayingbasketballasitbenefitsmealot.Itcanhelpmekeephealthy.Itbringsmehappinessandpleasure.Itdevelopsmyinterestsindoingsports.Ilikeplayingbasketballasitbenefitsmealot.Foronething(一方面),itcanhelpmekeephealthy.Foranother(另一方面),itbringsmehappinessandpleasure.Inaddition(此外),itdevelopsmyinterestsindoingsportsaswell.Tip3:Uselinkingwordstodescribeadvantagesofhobbieslogically.（用衔接词有逻辑地描述爱好的优点）Ilikeplayingbasketballasitbenefitsmealot.Itcanhelpmekeephealthy.Italsobringsmehappinessandpleasure.Itdevelopsmyinterestsindoingsportsaswell.OntheonehandOntheotherhandFurthermoreLet'shaveatry!

小试牛刀Rewritetheunderlinedsentencestomakeitbetter.(改写美化加下划线的句子)1.Ihavemanyhobbies.Ilikereading.Ialsolikelisteningtomusic.Ifallinlovewithreadingbecausereadingmakesafullman.Aswellasreading,Iamcrazyaboutlisteningtomusic,especiallylightmusic.2.Ilovereading,especiallyhistorybooks.Itcanmakemegrowasaperson.Itbringsmehappiness.Itdevelopsmyinterestsinhistory.Foronething,itcanmakemegrowasaperson.Foranother,itbringsmehappiness.Furthermore,itdevelopsmyinterestsinhistory.Nowwriteyouranswersonyourworksheet.在学习单中写一写。2minutesHowtomakeyourarticlebelievableIlikeplayingbasketballasithasmanybenefitsforme.Foronething,itcanhelpmekeephealthy.Foranother,itbringsmehappinessandpleasure.Inaddition,itdevelopsmyinterestsindoingsportsaswell.

WhenIwasonlyeightyearsold,myfatheroftentookmetothegymandplayedbasketballthere.Fromthenon,Igraduallyfellinlovewithit.

NowIalwaysplaybasketballwithmyfriendsatschool.Iplaybasketballnearlythreetimesaweek.Tip4:Adddetailedinformationtomakeyourarticlebelievable.（添加细节信息使你的文章真实可信）When&WhatWho&Where&HowoftenLet'shaveatry!

小试牛刀Makesentencesafterthemodel.(句子仿写)Model:fiveyearsold/mymother/givemeabookasmybirthdaypresentWhenIwasfiveyearsold,mymothergavemeabookasmybirthdaypresent.1.tenyearsold/myfather/buymethefirststampalbum(集邮册)WhenIwastenyearsold,myfatherboughtmethefirststampalbum.2.mygrandfather/teachmehowtoplantvegetables/sixyearsoldMygrandfathertaughtmehowtoplantvegetableswhenIwassixyearsold.Nowwriteyouranswersonyourworksheet.在学习单中写一写。1minuteHowtowriteagoodending

Ilikeplayingbasketball.Itisgoodforbothmybodyandmind.It'smyfavouritehobby.WhenIwasonlyeightyearsold,myfatheroftentookmetothegymandplayedbasketballthere.Fromthenon,Igraduallyfellinlovewithit.

NowIalwaysplaybasketballwithmyfriendsatschool.Iplaybasketballnearlythreetimesaweek.Ilikeplayingbasketballasithasmanybenefitsforme.Foronething,itcanhelpmekeephealthy.Foranother,itbringsmehappinessandpleasure.Inaddition,itdevelopsmyinterestsindoingsportsaswell.Tip5:Writeagoodendingtoechofrombeginningtoend.（写一个好的结尾实现首尾呼应）What&WhyLet'shaveatry!

小试牛刀Writeagoodendingaccordingtothebeginning.(根据所给的开头写一个好的结尾)1.Everyonehashisownhobbies.Ihavemanyhobbies,butIlikereadingbest.Ilovereading!Ithasbroughtmepleasureandimprovedmywritingskillsaswell.It’smyfavouritehobby.2.Ihavemanyhobbies,suchascollectingstamps,swimmingandsingingandsoon.Amongthem,singingismybiggesthobby.Ilikesingingbest,becauseitcannotonlymakemehappybutalsobringmesuccess.Thisismyfavouritehobby.Whataboutyours?Nowwriteyouranswersonyourworksheet.在学习单中写一写。2minutesMyHobby

WhenIwasonlyeightyearsold,myfatheroftentookmetothegymandplayedbasketballthere.Fromthenon,Igraduallyfellinlovewithit.NowIalwaysplaybasketballwithmyfriendsatschool.Iplaybasketballnearlythreetimesaweek.

Ilikeplayingbasketballasithasmanybenefitsforme.Foronething,itcanhelpmekeephealthy.Foranother,itbringsmehappinessandpleasure.Inaddition,itdevelopsmyinterestsindoingsportsaswell.Ilikeplayingbasketball.Itisgoodforbothmybodyandmind.It'smyfavoritehobby.When&What(Beginning)Who&Where&HowoftenWhyEndingSample范文Summary小结Tip1:Userichwordsandexpressionstodescribehobbies.（用丰富的单词和短语描述爱好）Tip2:Usedifferentsentencepatternstodescribeadvantages.（用不同的句型描述爱好的优点）Tip3:Uselinkingwordstodescribeadvantageslogically.（用衔接词有逻辑地描述爱好的优点）Tip4:Adddetailedinformationtomakeyourarticlebelievable.（添加细节信息使你的文章真实可信）Tip5:Writeagoodendingtoechofrombeginningtoend.（写一个好的结尾呼应开头）Usefulexpressions表达爱好的好词loseoneselfin...becrazyabout...fallinlovewith...表达爱好的佳句Ithelpssb....Itmakessb....Itbringssb....Itdevelopsone's...Itopensone’s…衔接词Foronething,...Foranother,...Furthermore,...Ontheonehand,...Ontheotherhand,...Inaddition,…表达何时开始的爱好WhenIwas...,...结尾点题Ilike...Because/Itisgoodfor/Itbringssb....It’smyfavouritehobby.

假如你是李华，你学校的英文周报有个专栏向全校征集关于爱好的文章。请你以“MyHobby”为题，写一篇短文，内容包括介绍自己的爱好并谈谈爱好带来的好处。注意：1.包含要点，可适当发挥；2.词数：100词左右。Writingpractice写作练习①②MyHobby

1.Arethererichexpressionstotalkabouthobbies?

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是否使用丰富的表达来谈论爱好？2.Aretheresentencepatternsaboutadvantagesofhobbies?

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是否有关于爱好带来的好处的句型？3.Doyouuselinkingwordstomakethearticlemorelogical?

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是否使用衔接词使文章更有逻辑？4.Doyouadddetailedinformationtomakeyourarticlebelievable?

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是否添加细节信息让文章真实可信？5.Doyouwriteagoodendingtoechofrombeginningtoend?

1分2分3分是否写一个好的结尾呼应开头？Checklist评价表（满分15分）√√√√√

假如你是李华，你学校的英文周报有个专栏向全校征集关于爱好的文章。请你以“MyHobby”为题，写一篇短文，内容包括介绍自己的爱好并谈谈爱好带来的好处。注意：1.包含要点，可适当发挥；2.词数：100词左右。①②MyHobby

1.Arethererichexpressionstotalkabouthobbies?

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是否有用丰富的表达来谈论爱好？2.Aretheresentencepatternsaboutadvantagesofhobbies?

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是否有关于爱好带来的好处的句型？3.Doyouuselinkingwordstomakethearticlemorelogical?

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是否使用了衔接词使文章更有逻辑？4.Doyouadddetailedinformationtomakeyourarticlebelievable?

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是否添加了细节信息让文章真实可信？5.Doyouwriteagoodendingtoechofrombeginningtoend?

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