高三上学期九调英语试题读后续写作文解析+讲义

读后续写高三九月调考（校园生活/人与自我）AHeartyWelcome Chasecountedhisnewyeargiftsonemoretimeasheputarobot-shapederaserintoeachenvelope.“Twenty,twenty-one,twenty-two.” “Doyouhaveoneforeveryoneinyourclass?”Momasked. “Yep!”Chasesaid.“I’mreadyforthepartytomorrow!” WhenChasegottoschoolthenextday,hesawanewgirlinhisclassroom.ShestoodnearMs.Robinsandlookedaroundshyly. “ThisisEva,”saidMs.Robins.“Willsomeonevolunteertoshowheraroundtoday?“Chaseraisedhishandsincehelikedshowingthenewkidsaroundandhelpingthemfeelwelcome. “Thanks,Chase,“Ms.Robinssaid.“Nowlet’sgetdowntoourwork.” That’swhenChaserealizedhedidn’thaveanewyeargiftforEva.Nooneelsewouldhaveonecither.Chasepicturedhisclassmates’deskscoveredwithgiftswhileEva’sdeskwasempty.Hefeltsadaboutthat. Atabreak,hewascarefulnottomentionthepartyasheshowedEvaaroundtheplayground.Atlunchtime,hewalkedEvatothelunchroom,stillworriedaboutwhatwouldhappenattheparty.Evahadbroughtapackedlunch.soChaseshowedherwhereshewassupposedtositandintroducedhertosomeofthekidsathertable. Whileeating,Chasesuddenlyrememberedthatkidsoftenincludedcandyheartswiththenewyeargiftstheyexchanged.Thiswon’tbeaNewYear’sDayforEvawithnogifts.Butashesatdownathistable,anideafloodedintohishead.Hewhisperedittothekidsaroundhim.Sooneveryoneatthetablewasnoddingandwhispering. Whentheywerebackintheclassroomafterlunch,ChasetoldMs.Robinsabouttheirplan.Ms.Robinssmiled.“That’sverythoughtful,“shesaid.“Let’sgoforit.” Itwasmathtime,soChaseinvitedEvatostudywithhim.HemadesureEvasatwithherbacktotheroomsoshewouldn’tnotice.1.续写词数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位登作答。 Meanwhile,hernewclassmateswerebusyingworkingonsomething.____________________________________________________________________“Here’syournewyeargift,Eva.It’sfromeveryone,”Chasesaid.____________________________________________________________________【原创范文讲解】1.本人以“Chase”为视角，表格如下：人物时间地点起因Chase（男孩）Eva（女孩）Chase同班同学Ms.Robins（老师）在中学的一天在班上Chase为每个同学准备了新年礼物。当老师带来了新同学Eva时,显然他没有给她准备礼物。没有新年礼物，Eva会伤心。Chase突然想到了一个主意（收集糖果），大家十分赞同。数学课上，Eva背对这房间，这样她就不会注意到大家的行动。文章构思：第一段开头句讲述了“她的新同学开始忙碌起来。”根据第二段首句（这是我们每个人送你的新年礼物），可推断首段应描述Chase，同学以及老师准备礼物的过程。主线：同学悄悄收集糖果—Chase拖住Eva，不让她发现同学的行动—Ms.Robins将这些糖果收到袋子里并交给Chase。第二段开头引出了Chase给Eva的礼物，重点描写Eva收到礼物的反应，可以描述她的表情、动作、神态和语言。最后升华主题主线：Chase把礼物给Eva并告知礼物的内涵—Eva的反应—升华主题。原创范文Meanwhile,hernewclassmateswerebusyingworkingonsomething.Theywerecollectingtheircandyhearts.Fiveminuteslater，fetchingthebeautifulbagfromheroffice，Ms.Robinswalkedroundtheclassroomtocollectthecandyheartscarefullyandquickly.Soon,thebagwasfullofthecandyhearts.WhilesittingbyEva,Chasedidfeelhisheartracing.HepretendedtobediscussingmathproblemswithEvaincaseheruinedthesurpriseforher.TheburdenonhisshouldersdisappearedwhenMs.Robinsaskedhimtogooutsidetheclassroom,givinghimthebag.Soonafter,Chaseenteredtheclassroomwiththebaginhishand.“Here’syournewyeargift,Eva.It’sfromeveryone.”EverybodycouldfindasurprisewrittenonEva’sface.“Openit,Eva.”saidMs.Robins.Sheopenedthebagwithcarefulness,discoveringthecandyhearts.Atthemoment,everyonepresentcheered,“HappyNewYear!”.Itwasthecandiesheartsthatshinedherbigeyes,whichmadeanyonesenseherexpressionwasfilledwithgratitude.Allofasudden,Evabowedtohernewclassmates,responding“Thanksalot.Whatyouhavedonenotonlytakesawaymyanxietybutalsoplantstheseedofhappinessinmyheart.”AwarenessdawneduponChasethatthekindnesstothenewclassmatescouldbecomeaburstofsunshine,comfortingtheiranxiety.好句赏析第一句：Fiveminuteslater，fetchingthebeautifulbagfromheroffice，Ms.Robinswalkedroundtheclassroomtocollectthecandyheartscarefullyandquickly.fetchingthebeautifulbagfromheroffice是现在分词结构作时间状语，相当于Aftershefetchedthebeautifulbagfromheroffice。carefullyandquickly是两个并列的副词，属于尾韵的修辞手法。第二句：WhilesittingbyEva,Chasedidfeelhisheartracing.本句用了while的省略结构，相当于WhilehewassittingbyEva。didfeel“由did+动词原形”构成，属于强调结构。第三句：HepretendedtobediscussingmathproblemswithEvaincaseheruinedthesurpriseforher.句中用了pretendtobedoing结构，表示“假装正在做某事”。incase表示“以防”，引导目的状语从句。第四句：Itwasthecandiesheartsthatshinedherbigeyes,whichmadeanyonesenseherexpressionwasfilledwithgratitude.本句用了强调句型“Itwas+强调词+that+其他”句型。which引导非限制性定语从句，可转换为现在分词结构makinganyonesenseherexpressionwasfilledwithgratitude。第五句：Allofasudden,Evabowedtohernewclassmates,responding“Thanksalot.Whatyouhavedonenotonlytakesawaymyanxietybutalsoplantstheseedofhappine