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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。TheJulysunwasburningoverOakwoodAvenue.Twelve-year-oldMiafeltsweatdroppingdownherbackasshearrangedthefreshlymadelemonade(柠檬水)onherfoldingtable.She’dmadethechalkdrawingsthatmorning:pinkheartsandblueskateboards.Herbigposterswungdesperatelyinthehotwind:Lemonade50cents—SaveforSkateboard!“Businessslow,eh?”Mr.Rossi’svoicecarriedflour-dustedkindnessfromhisgrocerystoredoorway.Andthesmelloffreshlybakedbreadfollowedhim.Mianodded,smoothingsevensweatycoinsonthetable.Astheyweretalking,asilvercarstoppedby.Abusinessmaninanicesuitsteppedout,phonegluedtohisear.“IsaidIwouldbetheresoon!”Heseemedtobeinahurry.Grabbingabottleoflemonade,heputa$20billontothetable.“Keepthechange!”Miawassurprised.“No,sir.But...”Hurriedly,shecountedout$19.50.“Here’syourchange,sir.”“Keepit.Consideritatip.”Thebusinessmansaidwithagentlesmile.“No,Ican’t.Thelemonade’sfiftycents.”Miainsisted.Thecardoorwasclosed,withonlytire(轮胎)marksleftonthedirtroad.Miastaredatthebill.Twentydollars.Enoughforskateboardwheels!Herfingersbrushedthroughthecashbox.“Wow,goodluck.”Mr.Rossisaidandwentbacktohisgrocerystore.“Butmymomusedtosaymoneyweighsheavyindishonestpockets.”Miawhispered.Asshewasabouttoputawaythemoney,shespottedsomethingunderthemapletree—ablackleatherwalletstickingoutthroughdeadleaves.Mia’sfingersshookassheopenedit.Creditcards.Adriver’slicense.Andahundred-dollarbill.Herskateboardfundscreamedinherears,butMom’svoiceshoutedlouder.Miacouldfeelthewalletwasheavyandrealizedtheownerwouldbeveryworried.Withoutanyhesitation,MiawenttoMr.Rossiforhelp.Lookingthroughthecontentsofthewallet,Mr.Rossisaidtheownerwouldsurelyreturnandlookforit.Somaybethebestchoicewastowait.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Miawaitedatherlemonadestanduntildarknessfell.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThebusinessmanpromisedtobuyMiaaskateboard.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一．续写需要回答的问题WhathappenedafterMiawaiteduntildarknessfell?​Miawaitedatherlemonadestanduntildarknessfell.Disappointedbutdetermined,shedecidedtogohomewiththewallet.ShetoldMr.Rossithatshewouldcomebackearlythenextdaytocontinuewaiting.Whenshegothome,sheshowedthewallettohermom,whopraisedherforherhonesty.​HowdidMiafeelwhenwaitingfortheowner?​Miafeltanxiousandimpatientwhilewaiting.Shekeptlookingaround,hopingtoseetheownercoming.Eachpassingminutemadehermoreworriedthattheownermightnotshowup,buthersenseofhonestykeptherwaiting.​WhydidthebusinessmanpromisetobuyMiaaskateboard?​ThebusinessmanpromisedtobuyMiaaskateboardbecausehewasdeeplytouchedbyherhonesty.First,shehadrefusedtokeephis$20tipforthe50-centlemonade.Then,helearnedthatshehadbeenwaitingalldaytoreturnhislostwallet.Herintegrityimpressedhimsomuchthathewantedtorewardher.​Whatwastheowner'sreactionwhenhegothiswalletback?​Whentheowner,thebusinessman,gothiswalletback,hewasextremelygrateful.Hiseyeswidenedinsurpriseandrelief.Heexpressedhisgratitudeprofusely,sayingthathehadthoughthehadlostitforeverandalltheimportantthingsinit.​WhatdidMialearnfromthisexperience?​Mialearnedthathonestyalwayspaysoff.Atfirst,shewastemptedbythemoneyforherskateboard,buthermom'swordsandherownconscienceguidedhertodotherightthing.Intheend,herhonestywasrewarded,andsherealizedthatdoingtherightthingmakesonefeelgoodandcanbringunexpectedblessings.​二、故事主旨​Thestoryisabouttheimportanceofhonesty.Despitethetemptationofmoneyforherskateboard,Miachoosestobehonest,whicheventuallybringsherapleasantreward.Itshowsthatintegrityisavaluablevirtuethatcanleadtopositiveoutcomes.​三、故事山​Beginning：Miasetsupalemonadestandtosavemoneyforaskateboard.Abusinessmangiveshera$20billfora50-centlemonadeandtellshertokeepthechange,butsheinsistsongivingbackthecorrectchange.​RisingAction：Miafindsawalletwithahundred-dollarbillandotherimportantitemsunderatree.SheistemptedbythemoneyforherskateboardbutdecidestobehonestandwaitsfortheownerwithMr.Rossi'shelp.​Climax：Thebusinessmanreturnstolookforhiswallet.HeistouchedbyMia'shonestywhenherealizesshenotonlyreturnedhiswalletbutalsorefusedhistipearlier.​FallingAction：ThebusinessmanpromisestobuyMiaaskateboardasarewardforherhonesty.​End：Mialearnsthathonestyisthebestpolicyandgetsherskateboardinanunexpectedway.​四、故事发展线索​Mia'slemonadestandsetup→Thebusinessman'spurchaseandtip→Miafindingthewallet→Miawaitingfortheowner→Thebusinessman'sreturn→Thebusinessman'spromisetobuyaskateboard.​五、情感线索​Mia'sinitialexcitementforherlemonadestandandsavingforaskateboard→Surpriseatthebusinessman'slargetip→Temptationwhenfindingthewallet→Determinationtobehonestandwait→Disappointmentasitgetsdark→Reliefandjoywhenthebusinessmanreturnsandrewardsher.​六、续写布局与框架​Paragraph1：DescribeMia'ssituationwhendarknessfalls.Sheisdisappointedthattheownerhasn'tcomeyet.ShedecidestogohomewiththewalletandtellsMr.Rossiherplan.Athome,hermompraisesher.​Paragraph2：Whenthebusinessmanreturnsthenextday,heisgratefultogethiswalletback.HelearnsaboutMia'shonestyinmoredetailandissotouchedthathepromisestobuyheraskateboard.Miaisoverjoyedandrealizesthevalueofhonesty.​七、续写注意事项​承接原文：Referbacktodetailsintheoriginaltext,suchasthelemonadestand,themoney,andMia'sdesireforaskateboard.Usethesamecharactersandtheirpersonalitiesestablishedintheoriginal.Forexample,Mia'sinsistenceonhonestyshouldbeconsistentthroughout.​整体设计：Makesurethetwoparagraphsflowsmoothlytogether.Thefirstparagraphsetsthestageforthesecond.Theactionsandemotionsineachparagraphshouldbuildonthepreviousones.​巧妙设计：Createsomeemotionalmoments,likethebusinessman'sreactionwhenhegetshiswalletback.Adddetailstomakethestorymorevivid,suchasthedescriptionofthebusinessman'sexpression.​八、高分语句​呼应原文：“JustlikeIrefusedtokeepyourbigtipyesterday,Icouldn'tkeepthemoneyinthewalleteither,”Miasaid,lookingupatthebusinessmanwithhonesteyes.​高级句型：ItwasnotuntilthebusinessmanheardthewholestorythathetrulyunderstoodthedepthofMia'sintegrity.​九、主题表达&意义延伸​直接引语点明主旨：“Honestyisalwaysthebestchoice,Mia,”hermomhadsaid,andnowMiatrulyfeltthetruthofthosewords.​促成转变，引发感悟：Mia'sdecisiontobehonestchangedthecourseofevents.Fromasimplelemonade-sellingday,shelearnedavaluablelifelesson.Sherealizedthatdoingtherightthing,evenwhenit'shard,canleadtowonderfulsurprises.​借象征物点明主旨：Theskateboard,whichwasinitiallyjustamaterialobjectshedesired,nowsymbolizedtherewardofherhonesty.Itwasareminderthatintegritycanbringnotonlymoralsatisfactionbutalsotangiblebenefits.​十、学生写作示范​Paragraph1​Miawaitedatherlemonadestanduntildarknessfell.Thestreetlightsflickeredon,castingadimglowovertheemptyroad.Withaheavyheart,sherealizedtheownerwasn'tcomingthatday.Shecarefullypickedupthewalletandthemoneyfromthelemonadestand.“Mr.Rossi,I'mgoinghome.I'llcomebackearlytomorrow,”shesaid,hervoiceabitshaky.Athome,sheshowedthewallettohermom.“Youdidtherightthing,Mia,”hermomsaid,huggingher.Mianodded,butshecouldn'thelpfeelingabitsadthatshestilldidn'thaveenoughmoneyforherskateboard.​Paragraph2​Thenextmorning,Miarushedbacktoherlemonadestand.Notlongafter,thesilvercarpulledupagain.Thebusinessmansteppedout,lookingworried.WhenMiahandedhimthewallet,hisfacelitup.“Thankyousomuch!IthoughtIhadlostitforever,”heexclaimed.AfterhearinghowMiahadwaitedforhim,hewasdeeplymoved.“Youaresuchanhonestgirl.I'mgoingtobuyyouthatskateboardyou'vebeensavingfor.”Mia'seyeswidenedinsurpriseandjoy.“Really?Thankyou,sir!”Sherealizedthatbeinghonesthadfinallypaidoff.​读后续写参