新高考英语读后续写专项突破之品德故事

专题04高考英语专项突破“读后续写”一品德故事

品德，一个需要重视，呵护的“珍品”……

01

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

Oneafternoonafterschool,Maryandherbrother,Keith,wereeatingatacafeneartheirhome.

Thatafternoon,theyhadtosharetheirtablewithanotherperson.Thatpersonwasayoungladyin

hertwenties.Aftereating,shewenttotherestroom.Withoutrealizing,shehadleftherhandphone

onthetable.Fiveminuteslater,shecameoutandwalkedoutofthecafewithoutlookingback.

Marysawthehandphoneonthetable.ShequicklytoldKeithJKeith,thegirlleftbehindher

handphone.^^

Keithlookedatthehandphone.Ittookhisbreathaway.Itwasoneofthelatestmodelsonthe

market.Keithhadalwayswantedahandphone.Buthisparentshadtoldhim,“Youdon'tneed

one.Youcanalwaysusethehousephone.^^

Hestaredatitforsomeminutes.Thenhesaidslowly,pausingoneveryword；〕wanttotake

thehandphone.

Marycouldnotbelieveherears.Shemerelystaredatherbrother.a4Youcan't!Whatifthe

ownercomestolookforit?”

Havingmadethedecision,Keithquicklygrabbedthehandphoneandputitinhisschoolbag.

Then,hetookMary'shandandledheroutofthecafequickly.

Oncebackhome,Keithlockedhishousedoorwithtremblinghands.Insidehisroom,hetook

outthepieceofbeauty.Oh,helikeditsomuch.Nowhehadhisownhandphone.Soon,hewas

polishingithappily.

ButMarytoldhim,“Keith,youcannotkeepthehandphone.WhatwillyoutellFatherabout

this?Hewillaskyouhowyougotthehandphone.^^

Keithsaidquickly,UIwillsayafriendlentittome.”

Marysaid,“Nowyouarelyingtoo."Ohdear!WhenhadKeithturnedsodishonest?

ThenMarysawahousephonenumberontheplasticcoverofthehandphone."Thisisthe

girFsphonenumber.Whydon'twejustcallthisnumber?Wewilltalktoherandaskhertocome

andtakebackherhandphone.^^Shewastryingtotalksomesenseintohim.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.

Marywasveryhappytohearthat.

【答案】Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.Hehaddifficultysleeping,

uncertainaboutwhatheshoulddo.Ofcourse,helikedthenewhandphone.However,hewas

feelingsorryfortheowner.Whenhethoughthowsadtheyoungladywouldbeatthelossofher

handphone,hewasfullofguiltandshame.Thenextmorning,afteralongandrestlessnight,he

wasdeterminedtoreturnthehandphonetotheowner.Afterschool,hetoldMary,“Iamgoingto

phonetheowner.9,

Marywasveryhappytohearthat.Backhome,theyphonedtheowner'shousephone.Agirl

answeredthephone.Kevinasked,“Areyoutheownerofthehandphone?I'mKeith.Ihaveyour

handphone.Canyoucomeandgetit?”Thegirlreplied'Yes'excitedly,expressinghergratitude

repeatedly.Tenminuteslater,shewasatthesamecafetomeetKeith.Handingbackthe

handphonetoherandseeinghersmilehappily,Keithrealizedthathonestywasindeedthebest

policy.

【解析】

本文以玛丽和她的弟弟基思捡到一部手机为线索展开，讲述了玛丽和她她的弟弟在咖啡馆

吃饭时，无意中捡到了一个女孩落在桌上的手机。基思非常喜欢这部最新型号的手机，尽

管玛丽阻止，他还是把手机带回家了。玛丽发现手机塑料盖上有一个电话号码，她劝说基

思打这个电话联系女孩。基思经过思想斗争，意识到诚实才是最重要的，终于打了那个电

话，他们相约在那个餐馆见面，把手机还给那个女孩。

【详解】

1.段落续写

①由第一段首句内容“那天晚上，基思不时在床上翻身。”可知，第一段可描写基思经过思

想斗争，意识到自己把别人的手机据为己有是不正确的行为，决定给女孩打电话。

②由第二段首句内容“玛丽听到这个消息很高兴。”可知，第二段可描写玛丽听说基思归还

手机非常高兴，他们通过电话联系女孩，约在了同一家咖啡馆见面，归还了手机。

2.续写线索：基思经过思想斗争——打电话给女孩——相约在咖啡馆——归还手机一

感悟到诚实才是最好的策略

3.词汇激活

行为类

①犹豫不决：uncertain/hesitate

②充满:befullof?befilledwith

③决心做某事：bedeterminedtodo/decidetodo

情绪类

①羞耻：shame/abashment

②高兴地：happily/delightedly

【点睛】

[高分句型1]

Hehaddifficultysleeping,uncertainaboutwhatheshould

do.（运用了连接代词what引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]

Handingbackthehandphonetoherandseeinghersmilehappily,Keithrealizedthathonestywas

indeedthebestpolicy.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

02

WhenthelastcustomerleftKFC,itwasalready10:30pm.Adam,an18-year-oldcollege

student,draggedhimselfhome.HehadbeenworkingatKFCforoveramonththatsummer

vacation.

Enteringhisroom,AdamfoundhisyoungerbrotherBillsittingontheedgeofhisbedwith

anuneasyexpressiononhisface.

“Sorry,Adam.I...Ididsomethingwrong,9,Billsprangupandsaidnervously.

“Whatisit?”

“ThisafternoonIsneaked（溜）outforarideonyourmotorcycleandaccidentallyhitour

neighborOsmanBrook'scar.IwassoscaredandI...Ihurriedhomeinpanic.^^

“Isthecarseriouslydamaged?”

“Theleftheadlightgotbroken.^^

“It'strulyyourfaultandifsreallydangeroustorideamotorcycleatyourage.Besides,ifs

illegal/Adamraisedhisvoice,obviouslyannoyed.Hearingthis,Billloweredhisheadandbithis

lipshard.

“Anyway,it'snousecryingoverspiltmilk.Iwilldealwithittomorrow.Nowyougotobed

andhaveagoodsleep.^^

ThenextmorningwhenAdamgotup,Billwasstillsleepingsoundly.Adamwasmore

determinedaboutwhatheoughttodoasanelderbrother.

Afterbreakfast,Adamtookoutallthemoneyhehadearnedandwentoutofthehousewith

it.Intheyardhesawhismotorcycle,onwhosesidethescratches（戈U痕）wereclearlyvisible.

Adamshookhisheadandsighedslightly.Thenhesquaredhisshouldersandquickenedhispace

toOsman'shouse.

Whenhearrived,hewaswelcomedbyOsman'swifeMary,whotoldhimthatOsmanhad

gonetothegaragetohavehiscarrepaired.

“Ihavesomethingimportanttotellhim.CanIwaituntilhecomesback?”Adamrequested

eagerly.

“Ofcourse.Heshouldbehomesoon,^^MaryinvitedAdamin,servedhimacupofcoffeeand

beganchattingwithhim.

Afterhalfanhour,thedooropenedandincameOsman.Havingsaidhellotoeachother,

OsmanandAdambothsatdownonthesofa.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Adamclearedhisthroatandbegantospeak.

Justthen,therecameaknockatthedoor.

【答案】

Adamclearedhisthroatandbegantospeak."Mr.Brook,I'mheretomakeanapology.

YesterdayafternoonmybrotherBilldamagedyourcarandranawayinpanic.Weareawfully

sorryforthat.”"Oh,Isee.Butifsnobigdeal,^^Osmansmiled.ThenAdamdrewoutthemoney

fromhispocketandsaidtoOsmanwithsincerity,a4ThisisallthemoneyIhave.Iwonderifitcan

payforyourloss."However,Osmaninsistedthatitwasonlyminordamageanddeclinedtotake

it.

Justthen,therecameaknockatthedoor.Osmanwenttoanswerit,onlytofindBill

standingoutside."'Morning,Mr.Brook.I...I'vecometosaysorryfor...”Billstammered.But

Osmanlaughedandlethimin.Thetwobrotherswerebothsurprisedandgladtoseeeachother.

Osmangavethemathumbs-upandpraisedthemhappily,“Goodboys,Itrulyappreciateyour

honesty.Justforgetaboutmycar."Whatevertheboyssaid,Osmanwouldn'ttakethemoney.

Finally,heacceptedtheirsuggestionthattheymakeituptohimbydoingsomeworkinhis

garden.

【解析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在肯德基打暑假工的亚当深夜回家后得知弟弟比尔偷开他

的摩托车还把邻居奥斯曼的汽车的左前灯撞坏了，尽管亚当很生气，但是第二天一早带着

打工赚的钱就去奥斯曼家道歉，他正要掏钱赔偿时，比尔也来了，奥斯曼很欣赏兄弟俩的

诚实，没有收钱，但是接受了他们在他家花园里干点活来补偿他的损失的建议。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“亚当清了清嗓子，开始说话。”可知，第一段可描写亚当为弟弟的过

错向奥斯曼道歉，并愿意赔偿，但是奥斯曼认为没有必要赔偿了。

②由第二段首句内容“正在这时，传来了敲门声。”可知，第二段可描写比尔也来道歉，奥

斯曼很欣赏兄弟俩的诚实，坚决不收钱，但是接受了两人在花园里干点活来补偿他的损失

的建议。

2.续写线索：亚当道歉并赔偿—奥斯曼拒绝赔偿——比尔上门道歉——

奥斯曼欣赏两人的诚实——奥斯曼拒绝接受赔偿但接受帮干园艺活的建议

3.词汇激活

行为类

①.道歉：makeanapology/apologize/saysorry

②.取出：drawout/takeout

③.拒绝：decline/refusepolitely

情绪类

①.非常抱歉：beawfullysorry/feelmostregretful

②.惊慌地：inpanic/inalarm

【点睛】

[高分句型1].Osmaninsistedthatitwasonlyminordamageanddeclinedtotake

it.（由连接词that引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2].Osmanwenttoanswerit,onlytofindBillstandingoutside.

（由不定式短语作状语，表意料之外的结果）

[高分句型3].Whatevertheboyssaid,Osmanwouldn'ttakethe

money,（whatever引导的让步状语从句）

03

Apainterlivingbypaintingportraitswasleadingapoorlife.

Oneday,awomancameby.Shelikedthepaintingsverymuchandaskedthepaintertodraw

aportraitforher.Theyagreedon2,000dollars.

Beforepaintingtheportrait,thewomanaskedthepaintertodrawmorejewels.Thepainter

curiouslyaskedwhy,butthewomanrefusedtoexplain.Afteraweek,theportraitwasdoneand

thewomancametotakethepainting.Atthismoment,shehitonanevilideaofbullyingthe

unknownyoungartist.Shethought,ccTheportraitisme.IfIdon'tbuythepainting,nobodywill

buyit.WhyshouldIpaysomuchmoney?,,Sothewomansaidtotheyoungpainter,t4Iwillonly

pay200dollarsforit.”

Theyoungmanwassurprised,forhehadnevercomeacrosssuchanexperience.Heargued

withher,expectingthiswomantokeeptotheagreement.

“Icanonlypay200dollarstobuythepainting,9,thewomanthoughtshewouldwinforsure.

Theyoungpainterknewthewomanbrokeherpromiseonpurpose,sohefeltannoyed.He

saidinafirmvoice,“No,Iwouldprefertokeepthispaintingratherthanbehumiliatedbyyou.

Todayyoubreakyourwordandsomedayyoumustpay20timesfbrit”

“Whatajoke!20timeswillbe40,000!Iwon'tbestupidtopay40,000dollarstobuythe

painting!?,

“Well,we'dbetterwaitandsee,“theyoungartistshoutedtothewomanwholeftangrily.

Afterthestimulationofsuchanincident,thepaintermovedoutofthissadplace,studiedunder

acknowledgedteachersandworkedharddayandnight.Morethanadozenyearslater,hefinally

startedanewwayandbecamepopularinthecircleofart.However,thewomanhadforgottenthe

artist9spaintingandwordsthenextday.

注意：

1）续写词数应为150左右；

2）请按如下格式作答。

Oneday,thatfamouspainterdecidedtoholdanartexhibition.

Thewomanwenttherehurriedly,apologisedamilliontimesandpromisedthatshewould

buyherportraitassoonaspossible.

【答案】Oneday,thatfhmouspainterdecidedtoholdanartexhibition.Presentinthe

exhibitionhallwerecrowdsofcelebritiesandartists.Itwasafeastinthecircleofart.Inthecentre

wasapaintingentitled"Thief,pricedat40,000dollars.Strangelyenough,thewomaninthe

paintinglookedjustthesameasthevainwomaninreality.Wordspreadandfinallyitreachedthe

woman,sears.Sherecalledtheincidentandthepainter.Itdawnedonherthatthepainter

humiliatedherinthisway.

Thewomanwenttherehurriedly,apologisedamilliontimesandpromisedthatshewould

buyherportraitassoonaspossible.Thesuccessfulpainterturnedhisbacktoher,speechless.

Withmanyvisitorsaround,soembarrassedwasshethatshestoodthereawkwardly,feelingthe

bloodrushtoherface.Thenthepainterturnedaroundandhandedhertheportrait.Beforethe

womancouldpay,thepainterexplainedthatitwasagiftforher,hopingshewouldbeanhonest

womanwithoutvanity.Anyway,forthepainter,itwasthisincidentthatmadehimwhatheis

today.

【解析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个靠画肖像为生的画家过着贫穷的生活，他为一位女士

画像，结果女士故意违背诺言，不按约好的价钱支付费用，让画家很生气。十几年后，画

家终于在艺术界大受欢迎，决定举办一次艺术展，展览上画家把这位女士的画像挂出来，

取名《小偷》，女士得知后赶到，给画家道歉，最终画家把画像还给了她，希望她能做一

个诚实的女人。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“一天，那位著名的画家决定举办一次艺术展。”可知，第一段可描写

画家把女士的画像挂出来，取名《小偷》，消息传开了，最后传到了那个女人的耳朵里。

②由第二段首句内容“女子匆匆赶到，道了无数次歉，并承诺会尽快买下她的画像。”可知

,第二段可描写画家是如何应对女士道歉的以及事情的最终结局。

2.续写线索：举办艺术展——挂出女士画像，取名《小偷》——女士得知消息一

女士赶到——女士道歉——画家赠画

3.词汇激活

行为类

举办：hold/host

侮辱：humiliate/insult

意识至U：itdawnonsb.that/sb.cometorealizethat

情绪类

匆忙：hurriedly/inahurry

无言：speechless/silent

【点睛】

【高分句型11Beforethewomancouldpay,thepainterexplainedthatitwasagiftfbrher,

hopingshewouldbeanhonestwomanwithoutvanity.（运用了that弓|导宾语从句）

【高分句型21Withmanyvisitorsaround,soembarrassedwasshethatshestoodthere

awkwardly,feelingthebloodrushtoherfhce.（运用了部分倒装）

04

Itwasmytwelfthbirthday,andwhatIreallywantedmostwasanewbicycle.ButIknewthat

myfamilycouldn,taffordone,soIsettledforabedsidetablewithlockabledrawers,asafeplace

tokeepmyprivatestuff.

Wewenttothecharityshopwherewefoundanolddarkone.Itdidn'tlooktoocool,butI

thoughtthatIwouldpaintittomakeitlookbetter.

Afterwetookithome,Iwasgettingreadytopaintit.WhenIpulledthedrawersout.Ifelt

somethingstucktotheback.Ireachedinalltheway,andguesswhat?Asealedbagwithsome

papersinit.

WhenIopenedthebag,Irealizedthatthepaperswereofficialdocuments.And,wrappedin

themwereabunchoftenandtwentydollarbills!Talkaboutfindingatreasure!Andonmy

birthday!

“Isthissomekindofjoke?,,Isaidaloud.Iwentaheadandreadthepapers,anditturnedout

tobeawill.Someoldladywasleavinghersavingsforhersonandgrandchildren.

Mymindwasgoingcrazy.WasItheluckiesttwelve-year-oldever?WiththismoneyIcould

buythecoolestbicycle.Whoknows?

Ibegancounting.WhenIreachedathousanddollars,mymotherwasknockingonmy

bedroomdoor.Iquicklyclosedthedrawerwiththemoneyinit.

“Doyouwantsomehelp?Iseverythingallright?^^sheasked.

No,everythingwasnotright.Actually,mystomachwasgrowling（低吼）.

'Tmokay,"Ilied.

Whenmymotherleftmyroom,Ilayonmybed,startingthinking.Whatadilemma（窘境）！I

wishedthereweresomeoneIcouldtalkwith.CouldIkeepitandgetallkindsofstuffformeand

myfamily?Itwouldn'tbetoobadformetokeepit,ifIsharedit...right?Thoughtsranthroughmy

mind.ButIreallydidn'tneedsomeoneelsetogivemetheanswer.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Ifinallymadeadecisionandcalledmyparentsintomybedroom.

Thoughsurprised,theshopownerhelpedfindthefamily'stelephonenumber.

［答案］Ifinallymadeadecisionandcalledmyparentsintomybedroom.Whenmyparentssaw

whatIhadfoundinthedrawertheywerewide-eyedandspeechless!Then,theyreadthepapers

carefullyandweremovedtotears.Whentheyasked,"Whatshouldwedo?”Isaid,"Let'stakeit

backtothestoreandfindherMyfathernoddedwithasmileonhisfaceandmymother

huggedmewarmly,saying"Youaremypride,dear."IfeltveryhappybecauseIalreadyknew

rightfromwrong.Wecollectedallthemoneyandpapersatonce,puttingtheminthedrawer.We

rushedtothecharityshopwiththedrawerinthehopetofindtheownerassoonaspossible.

Thoughsurprised,theshopownerhelpedfindthefamily'stelephonenumber.Withinafew

minutes,thefamilyallcameover.WhenIshowedthemwhatIhadfoundinthedrawer,they

couldn'tbelievetheireyes.Theparentshadtearsintheireyes.Theywerestillsadaboutthelady9s

deathandthefatherhadjustlosthisjob.Itwaseasytoseethatmyactofhonestygavethemhope.

Theyshowedmesinceregratitudefromthebottomoftheirhearts.Infact,Ihadneverfeltbetter

before.NonewbicyclecouldhavemademefeltasgoodaboutmyselfasIfeltthatdaybecauseI

passedaveryimportanttest-alostandfoundtestofmyowncharacter.

【解析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在12岁生日时，父母给他买了一个二手的床头柜作为

生日礼物，作者发现在床头柜里有以前主人的遗书和很多现金，经过一番思想斗争之后，

作者和家人一起把钱还给了去世老人的家人们。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“我终于做了决定，把父母叫到我的卧室。”可知，第一段可描写作者

与父母分享这件事后，他们做出归还东西的经过。

②由第二段首句内容“店主虽然很惊讶，但还是帮他找到了这家人的电话号码。”可知，第

二段可描写作者与那一家人见面的经过以及个人的深切感受。

2.续写线索：做出决定——父母的表扬——寻找失主——失主的感激——个人感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

①着急去：rushto/hurryto

②归还：takesth.back/returnsth.

③拥抱：embrace/holdinone*sarms

情绪类

①感动落泪：bemovedtotears/betouchedtotears

②感谢：showsinceregratitude//begrateful

【点睛】

[高分句型1]WhenmyparentssawwhatIhadfoundinthedrawertheywerewide-eyedand

speechless!（由when引导的时间状语从句和what引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]Wecollectedallthemoneyandpapersatonce,puttingtheminthe

drawer.（用现在分词作伴随状语）

[高分句型3]Itwaseasytoseethatmyactofhonestygavethem

hope.（由that引导的主语从句）

05

Havingmarchedacrossthegrasslandforfivedays,General,ChenGeng（陈俄）wasdragging

hisexhaustedbodycarefullystepbystep,leadinghisweakhorse.

Hesuddenlysawthefigureofasmallboyappear.ChenGengwasabouttogreetthelittle

RedArmysoldierwhenhesawthattheboywasstaggering促前跚）andthenfelldown.ChenGeng

hurriedforwardafewstepsandhelpedthelittlesoldierbackonhisfeet.Heaskedtheboyina

kindtone,"Areyouallright?^^Thelittlesoldierturnedaround.Hisfacewaspaleandbloodless,

withthetwoeyesunusuallywideasaresultofhunger,yetshiningwithspirit.

“Youmustbe...GeneralChenGeng!^^thelittlesoldierrecognizedtheman.

“Yes,IamChenGeng.Howareyou,youngman?Youcertainlyhavetobecarefulcrossing

thisswampygrassland.Onecarelessslip,andyoucanfindyourselfindanger.Itisessentialthat

wecomeoutofthisgrasslandalive.^^

Thelittlesoldiernoddedinagreement."Don'tworry,General,hesaid.'Tmphysically

strong.^^Inspiteoftheboy'sconfidentreply,ChenGengwasstillworriedabouthim.Hecould

seethatthelittlesoldierlackedenergy:couldthischildpullthroughthetrials?

GeneralChenGengorderedthelittlesoldiertomounthishorse,intendingtogivehimarest.

Buttohissurprise,theboyrefusedhimwithalookofannoyance,t4What!DoyouthinkI'mnot

goodenough?^^theboycried."I'mstrongerthanyou.Ifyoudon'tbelieveme,lefshavea

contest.^^

Atthattime,ChenGengwastooexhaustedtoengageinacontestofenergy.Allhecoulddo

wastakeabarleydumpling（青裸面），andsaytothelittlesoldier,4tWell,here,haveit!”Butthe

boysimplysmiled,saying,46Youkeepit.Ihavemorefoodthanyouhave,“pointingtoabulging

（鼓鼓的）blackbaghewascarryingonhisback.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Intheend,ChenGenggavein,mountedhishorseandrodeon.

Heopenedtheboy'sbackpack,onlytofindabundleofbark（树皮）.

【答案】Intheend,ChenGenggavein,mountedhishorseandrodeon.Andthelittle

soldierfollowedhim.Althoughthelittlesoldierwasweak,hetriedhisbesttomoveonstepby

step.Suddenly,hewasstumbledbyabrunch.ChenGengatoncegotdownfromhishorseand

helpedhimstandup.Atthattime,ChenGengsaidtohim,“Youmusthavearestandeat

something,whichcanmakeyouhavestrength.Youaresoweakthatifyoucontinuetomoveon,

youwillbeeasytosinkinaswamp.Ifsmyorder.^^ThenChenGengtookdowntheboy'sbag.

Heopenedtheboy'sbackpack,onlytofindabundleofbark（树皮）.Andimmediatelythe

littlesoldiertookbackthebagandhidit.ButChenGenghadalreadyseenthebark.Withtears

wellingupinhiseyes,ChenGenggavethelittlesoldierabarleydumpling.Butthelittlesoldier

refused.Again,ChenGengorderedtheboytohaveit.Thelittlesoldierhadtotakeitandwasvery

grateful.Thenhegobbledthedumpling.Afterthat,hefeltenergeticandthencontinuedtomarch

onwithGeneral,ChenGeng.

【解析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了陈窿在草原上行军了五天，身体疲惫，突然他看到一个小

红军倒在地上，他走过去把小士兵扶起来。小士兵认出了陈康将军。因为穿过沼泽地很危

险，所以陈廉让小士兵休息一会，但是小士兵不肯休息。于是陈震只能给小士兵拿出一个

青棵面，但是小士兵说自己包里有吃的。陈麋拗不过小士兵，于是上马和小士兵前行，但

是小士兵太虚弱，被一个树枝绊倒。陈麋把他扶起来，命令他吃一些东西。但是发现小士

兵的包里不是食物而是树皮。于是他将自己的青棵面给了小士兵，并命令他吃下去，小士

兵吃了青棵面后，有了力气，随后两人一起继续前进。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“最后陈窿屈服了，骑上马开始前行。”可知，第一段可描写陈廉不在

劝小士兵吃东西，两人开始前行，但是小士兵因为身体虚弱，被树枝绊倒。

②由第二段首句内容“他打开小男孩的背包，发现里面是一捆树皮。”可知，第二段可描写

陈展发现小士兵的背包里都是树皮，于是将自己的青棵面给了小士兵，并命令他吃下去。

2.续写线索：继续前行——小士兵被绊倒—陈鹰把他扶起来——命令他吃东西一一

打开包，发现是树皮——陈展将自己的青裸面给小士兵，命令他吃下去一

小士兵吃下青棵面——俩人继续前行

3.词汇激活行为类

①前进:moveon/advance/goforward

②休息：havearest/takearest

③命令：order/command

情绪类

①感谢的：begrateful/bethankfiil/showone'sgratitude

【点睛】

[高分句型1]Youmusthavearestandeatsomething,whichcanmakeyouhave

strength.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Youaresoweakthatifyoucontinuetomoveon,youwillbeeasytosinkina

swamp.（运用了“so...that+句子”句型，表示“如此...以至于"）

专题04高考英语专项突破“读后续写”一品德故事

品德，一个需要重视，呵护的“珍品”……

01

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

Oneafternoonafterschool,Maryandherbrother,Keith,wereeatingatacafeneartheirhome.

Thatafternoon,theyhadtosharetheirtablewithanotherperson.Thatpersonwasayoungladyin

hertwenties.Aftereating,shewenttotherestroom.Withoutrealizing,shehadleftherhandphone

onthetable.Fiveminuteslater,shecameoutandwalkedoutofthecafewithoutlookingback.

Marysawthehandphoneonthetable.ShequicklytoldKeithJKeith,thegirlleftbehindher

handphone.^^

Keithlookedatthehandphone.Ittookhisbreathaway.Itwasoneofthelatestmodelsonthe

market.Keithhadalwayswantedahandphone.Buthisparentshadtoldhim,“Youdon'tneed

one.Youcanalwaysusethehousephone.^^

Hestaredatitforsomeminutes.Thenhesaidslowly,pausingoneveryword；〕wanttotake

thehandphone.

Marycouldnotbelieveherears.Shemerelystaredatherbrother.a4Youcan't!Whatifthe

ownercomestolookforit?”

Havingmadethedecision,Keithquicklygrabbedthehandphoneandputitinhisschoolbag.

Then,hetookMary'shandandledheroutofthecafequickly.

Oncebackhome,Keithlockedhishousedoorwithtremblinghands.Insidehisroom,hetook

outthepieceofbeauty.Oh,helikeditsomuch.Nowhehadhisownhandphone.Soon,hewas

polishingithappily.

ButMarytoldhim,“Keith,youcannotkeepthehandphone.WhatwillyoutellFatherabout

this?Hewillaskyouhowyougotthehandphone.^^

Keithsaidquickly,UIwillsayafriendlentittome.”

Marysaid,“Nowyouarelyingtoo."Ohdear!WhenhadKeithturnedsodishonest?

ThenMarysawahousephonenumberontheplasticcoverofthehandphone."Thisisthe

girFsphonenumber.Whydon'twejustcallthisnumber?Wewilltalktoherandaskhertocome

andtakebackherhandphone.^^Shewastryingtotalksomesenseintohim.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.

Marywasveryhappytohearthat.

【答案】Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.Hehaddifficultysleeping,

uncertainaboutwhatheshoulddo.Ofcourse,helikedthenewhandphone.However,hewas

feelingsorryfortheowner.Whenhethoughthowsadtheyoungladywouldbeatthelossofher

handphone,hewasfullofguiltandshame.Thenextmorning,afteralongandrestlessnight,he

wasdeterminedtoreturnthehandphonetotheowner.Afterschool,hetoldMary,“Iamgoingto

phonetheowner.9,

Marywasveryhappytohearthat.Backhome,theyphonedtheowner'shousephone.Agirl

answeredthephone.Kevinasked,“Areyoutheownerofthehandphone?I'mKeith.Ihaveyour

handphone.Canyoucomeandgetit?”Thegirlreplied'Yes'excitedly,expressinghergratitude

repeatedly.Tenminuteslater,shewasatthesamecafetomeetKeith.Handingbackthe

handphonetoherandseeinghersmilehappily,Keithrealizedthathonestywasindeedthebest

policy.

【解析】

本文以玛丽和她的弟弟基思捡到一部手机为线索展开，讲述了玛丽和她她的弟弟在咖啡馆

吃饭时，无意中捡到了一个女孩落在桌上的手机。基思非常喜欢这部最新型号的手机，尽

管玛丽阻止，他还是把手机带回家了。玛丽发现手机塑料盖上有一个电话号码，她劝说基

思打这个电话联系女孩。基思经过思想斗争，意识到诚实才是最重要的，终于打了那个电

话，他们相约在那个餐馆见面，把手机还给那个女孩。

【详解】

1.段落续写

①由第一段首句内容“那天晚上，基思不时在床上翻身。”可知，第一段可描写基思经过思

想斗争，意识到自己把别人的手机据为己有是不正确的行为，决定给女孩打电话。

②由第二段首句内容“玛丽听到这个消息很高兴。”可知，第二段可描写玛丽听说基思归还

手机非常高兴，他们通过电话联系女孩，约在了同一家咖啡馆见面，归还了手机。

2.续写线索：基思经过思想斗争——打电话给女孩——相约在咖啡馆——归还手机一

感悟到诚实才是最好的策略

3.词汇激活

行为类

①犹豫不决：uncertain/hesitate

②充满:befullof?befilledwith

③决心做某事：bedeterminedtodo/decidetodo

情绪类

①羞耻：shame/abashment

②高兴地：happily/delightedly

【点睛】

[高分句型1]

Hehaddifficultysleeping,uncertainaboutwhatheshould

do.（运用了连接代词what引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]

Handingbackthehandphonetoherandseeinghersmilehappily,Keithrealizedthathonestywas

indeedthebestpolicy.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

02

WhenthelastcustomerleftKFC,itwasalready10:30pm.Adam,an18-year-oldcollege

student,draggedhimselfhome.HehadbeenworkingatKFCforoveramonththatsummer

vacation.

Enteringhisroom,AdamfoundhisyoungerbrotherBillsittingontheedgeofhisbedwith

anuneasyexpressiononhisface.

“Sorry,Adam.I...Ididsomethingwrong,9,Billsprangupandsaidnervously.

“Whatisit?”

“ThisafternoonIsneaked（溜）outforarideonyourmotorcycleandaccidentallyhitour

neighborOsmanBrook'scar.IwassoscaredandI...Ihurriedhomeinpanic.^^

“Isthecarseriouslydamaged?”

“Theleftheadlightgotbroken.^^

“It'strulyyourfaultandifsreallydangeroustorideamotorcycleatyourage.Besides,ifs

illegal/Adamraisedhisvoice,obviouslyannoyed.Hearingthis,Billloweredhisheadandbithis

lipshard.

“Anyway,it'snousecryingoverspiltmilk.Iwilldealwithittomorrow.Nowyougotobed

andhaveagoodsleep.^^

ThenextmorningwhenAdamgotup,Billwasstillsleepingsoundly.Adamwasmore

determinedaboutwhatheoughttodoasanelderbrother.

Afterbreakfast,Adamtookoutallthemoneyhehadearnedandwentoutofthehousewith

it.Intheyardhesawhismotorcycle,onwhosesidethescratches（戈U痕）wereclearlyvisible.

Adamshookhisheadandsighedslightly.Thenhesquaredhisshouldersandquickenedhispace

toOsman'shouse.

Whenhearrived,hewaswelcomedbyOsman'swifeMary,whotoldhimthatOsmanhad

gonetothegaragetohavehiscarrepaired.

“Ihavesomethingimportanttotellhim.CanIwaituntilhecomesback?”Adamrequested

eagerly.

“Ofcourse.Heshouldbehomesoon,^^MaryinvitedAdamin,servedhimacupofcoffeeand

beganchattingwithhim.

Afterhalfanhour,thedooropenedandincameOsman.Havingsaidhellotoeachother,

OsmanandAdambothsatdownonthesofa.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Adamclearedhisthroatandbegantospeak.

Justthen,therecameaknockatthedoor.

【答案】

Adamclearedhisthroatandbegantospeak."Mr.Brook,I'mheretomakeanapology.

YesterdayafternoonmybrotherBilldamagedyourca