2025届高考英语二轮复习读后续写：个人成长类之下定决心调整自己的学习生活优先级事务的男孩（讲义）

读后续写：个人成长类之下定决心调整自己的学习生活优先级事务的男孩

读后续写题目（山东省齐鲁名师联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期开学英语试题）

Matthewkeptstaringattheclockontheclassroomwall,theslowlymovingsecond

handseemedtomockhisanxiety.Hewaseagerforthephysicsclasstoendsothathe

couldmakeitontimetohispaintinghobbygroup.Whenthebellfinallyrang,Matthew

boltedoutoftheclassroomlikeawildhorsefreedfromitsreins,grabbinghisbackpack.

Asheroundedthecornerofthehallway,heaccidentallycollidedwithaclassmate,

scatteringhiscanvasandpaintsalloverthefloor.Thejumbledpaintboxesburstopen,

mixingthecolorsintoabizarrepatchwork.Hequicklyapologized,pickingupeverything

whilestartingtorunagain,leavingatrailofcolorfulfootprintsonthefloor.

Afterthepaintinghobbygroupsessionended,Matthewhurriedlyjoinedtheother

membersoftheschoolband.Theyhadanimportantperformancethatday.Asexpected,

Matthewwaslateagain,hisbodycoveredindriedcolorfulpaintsandsweatingprofusely.

Hewalkedbrisklyintothebackstage,changedintotheband'suniform,butthepaint

stainswerestillfaintlyvisible.Unfortunately,Matthewhadnotpreparedhissheetmusic,

soheappeareddistractedduringtheperformance,oftenhittingwrongchordsandunable

tokeepupwiththerhythm,disappointingtheteam.Eventually,afteralongdayatschool,

Matthewreturnedhomeexhausted.

Inhisbedroom,Matthewsatathisdesk,heavingaheavysighashelookedatthedesk

strewnwithstudybooksandsheetmusic.Heneededtopreparefortheupcomingexams,

buthecouldhardlykeephiseyesopen.Thenextthingherememberedwashismother

wakinghimup.Hehadfallenasleepwithhisheadburiedinthedesk.Ashesatup,his

mothergentlyremovedasheetofmusicstucktohischeek.Shelookedathersonlovingly,

smoothinghismessyhair.

“so,"shebegan,/zhowwasschooltoday?7"

Matthewnervouslylookedather,takingadeepbreath."'Honestly,nottoogood,"he

admittedsheepishly.Icouldn'tfocusinclass,Ibumpedintoaclassmate,andIletthe

banddown.Itcouldn/tgetanyworse,right?""Well,“Matthew'smothersaidgentlyyet

seriously,Ithinkyou'retakingontoomuch.”

Thatnight,beforegoingtobed,Matthewrealizedthatthingscouldn'tgoonlikethis.

注意：

（1）续写词数应为150个左右；

（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

Thenextday,Matthewsetaboutmakingchangestohisbusyschedule.

AfterMatthewputhisnewscheduleintopractice,thingsbegantoimprove.

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Matthewkeptstaringattheclockontheclassroomwall,theslowlymovingsecond

handseemedtomockhis可积累语料）.Hewaseagerforthephysicsclassto

endsothathecouldmakeitontimetohispaintinghobbygroup（状从）.Whenthebell

finallyrang（时间状从），Matthewboltedoutoftheclassroomlikeawildhorsefreedfrom

itsreMs（可积累语料）,Hrabbinghisbackpack（非谓语动词做伴随动作）herounded

thecorneroftheha/lway（状从,可积累语料），heaccidentallycollidedw/tM可积累语

料）aclassmate,scatteringhiscanvasandpaintsallovert/?e//oor（mp谓语动词做伴随动

作）.Thejumbledpaintboxesburstopen,mixincithecolorsintoabizarrepatchwork（^iM

语动词做伴随动作）.Hequicklyapologized,pickinaupeverythingwhilestartingtorun

again（非谓语动词做伴随动作），leavinaatrailo/colorfulfootprintsonthefloor.

Afterthepaintinghobbygroupsessionended（状从），Matthewhurriedlyjoinedthe

othermembersoftheschoolband.Theyhadanimportantperformancethatday.As

expected（可积累语料），Matthewwaslateagain,hisbodycoveredindriedcolorfulpaints

andsweatingpro/use/y（独立主格）.Hewalkedbrisklyintothebackstage,changedinto

theband'suniform,butthepaintstainswerestillfaintlyvisible.Unfortunately,Matthew

hadnotpreparedhissheetmusic,soheappeareddistractedduringtheperformance,

oftenhittinawrongchordsandunabletokeepupwiththerhythm,disappointinathe

team（非谓语动词做伴随动作）.Eventually,afteralongdayatschool,Matthewreturned

homeexhausted（非谓语动词做伴随动作）.

Inhisbedroom,Matthewsatathisdesk,heavingasig/iGF谓语动词做伴随动

作）ashelookedatthedesk（状从）strewnwithstudybooksandsheetmusic.Heneeded

topreparefortheupcomingexams,buthecouldhardlykeephiseyesopen.Thenext

thingherememberedwashismotherwakinghimup.Hehadfallenas/eep（mp谓语动词做

伴随动作）withhisheadburiedinthedesk（非谓语动词做伴随动作）.Ashesatup（状从）,

hismothergentlyremovedasheetofmusicstucktohisc/）eek（非谓语动词做伴随动作）.

Shelookedathersonlovingly,smoothinghismessy（非谓语动词做伴随动作）.

"so,"shebegan,“howwasschooltoday?"7

Matthewnervouslylookedather,takinqadeep非谓语动词做伴随动作）.

"'Honestly,nottoogood,“headmittedsheepishly.aIcouldn'tfocusinclass,Ibumped

intol^T积累）aclassmate,and/letthebanddown.Itcouldn'tgetanyworse,

right?”〃Well/'Matthew'smothersaidgentlyyetseriously（可积累），“Ithinkyou're

takingontoomuch.”

Thatnight,beforegoingtobed,Matthewrealizedthatthingscouldn'tgoonlikethis.

注意：

（1）续写词数应为150个左右；

（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

Thenextday,Matthewsetaboutmakingchangestohisbusyschedule.

AfterMatthewputhisnewscheduleintopractice,thingsbegantoimprove.

剖析语篇细节，夯实基础

先读，后写

1.对提示句PLP2做逐词逐句的解读，理解其背后深意；

2.回溯原文，找到对应的文本，确定基本元素，时间，地点，人物，所涉及的物品，细

节等信息;

3.试图对时间线，地点线结合P1,P2的提示句，看是否有所变化，以确定是否需要展开;

4.构思情节

5.读懂最后2段尤其是最后1段的信息，合理结合生活实际，构思文章，并完成

成长前的困扰

情境描写+消极情绪的累积-高潮

成长中的蜕变

成长的动机+过程中变化的心情

成长后的升华

成长后的收获+积极情绪（喜悦、满足和骄傲等）

重点词汇和短语

语法现象分析

进行时态:

例子：Matthewkeptstaringattheclock...

讲解：进行时强调动作正在进行中，表现出Matthew的焦虑感和迫切感。

不定式:

例子：eagerforthephysicsclasstoend...

讲解：不定式"t。end”用于表示目的，说明Matthew渴望上完物理课的原因。

分词短语:

例子：grabbinghisbackpack和scatteringhiscanvasandpaints...

讲解：分词短语用于提供额外信息，描述同时发生的动作。

独立主格结构:

例子：hisbodycoveredindriedcolorfulpaints...

讲解：这种结构提供背景信息，强调Matthew的状态。

倒装句:

例子：Asexpected,Matthewwaslateagain...

讲解：使用倒装结构"asexpected"来强调结果。

高分例句

Havingstudieddiligently,sheacedtheexamwithflyingcolors.

（由于努力学习，她以优异的成绩通过了考试。）

Soanxiouswasheabouttheperformancethathecouldhardlysleepthenightbefore.

（他对演出如此焦虑，以至于前一晚几乎无法入睡。）

重点单词分析

单词的替换现象是写作非常重要的加分点

1.mock

-词性：动词

-词义：嘲弄，嘲笑

-近义词：ridicule,tease

-联想词：mockery,mockup

-例句：Theteachermockedthestudent'sincorrectanswer.

Thecomedian'sactwasfilledwithmockeryofeverydaylife.

2.rein

-词性：名词

-词义：缰绳；控制，约束

-近义词：control,restraint

-联想词：reins,reining

-例句：Hepulledonthereinstoslowdownthehorse.

Themanagerkeptatightreinontheproject.

3.collidewith

-词性：短语动词

-词义：与…碰撞

-近义词：crashinto,bumpinto

-联想词：collision,collide

-彳列句：Thecarcollidedwithatree.

Twoideascollidedinthediscussion.

4.scatter

-词性：动词

-词义：散开，分散

-近义词：disperse,spread

-联想词：scattering,scattershot

-例句：Shescatteredtheseedsinthegarden.

Thechildrenscatteredinalldirections.

5.jumble

-词性：动词

-词义：使混乱；混杂

-近义词：mixup,muddle

-联想词：jumbling,jumbled

-例句：Hejumblethepapersonhisdesk.

Theitemsintheboxwereallinajumble.

6.canvas

-词性：名词

-词义：画布

-近义词：paintingsurface,fabric

-联想词：canvasbag,canvasser

-仞!］句：Theartiststretchedthecanvasbeforepainting.

Thecanvaswasfilledwithvibrantcolors.

7.bizarre

-词性：形容词

-词义：奇异的，离奇的

-近义词：strange,unusual

-联想词：bizarrely,bizarreness

-例句：Thestoryhadabizarretwistattheend.

Hisbehaviorwastrulybizarre.

8.profusely

-词性：副词

-词义：大量地，过多地

-近义词：abundantly,excessively

-联想词：profuse,profusion

-例句：Sheapologizedprofuselyforbeinglate.

Theflowersbloomedprofuselyinspring.

9.rhythm

-词性：名词

-词义：节奏，韵律

-近义词：beat,tempo

-联想词：rhythmic,rhythmical

-例句：Themusichadacatchyrhythm.

Shedancedtotherhythmofthedrums.

10.strewn

-词性：形容词（过去分词）

-词义：散布的，散落的

-近义词：dispersed,scattered

-联想词：strew,strewed

-例句：Thefloorwasstrewnwithtoys.

Leaveswerestrewnacrossthepath.

11.heave

-词性：动词

-词义：举起，扔

-近义词：lift,heaveup

-联想词：heaving,heaved

-例句：Heheavedtheboxontotheshelf.

Sheheavedasighofrelief.

12.sheepishly

-词性：副词

-词义：害羞地，羞愧地

-近义词：embarrassedly,bashfully

-联想词：sheepish,sheepishness

-例句：Hesmiledsheepishlyaftermakingamistake.

Shelookedsheepishlyatthefloor.

13.bump

-词性：动词

-词义：碰撞

-近义词：collide,hit

-联想词：bumpinto,bumpiness

-例句：Ibumpedintoanoldfriendyesterday.

Thecarbumpedagainstthecurb.

14.allocate

-词性：动词

-词义：分配，划拨

-近义词：assign,distribute

-联想词：allocation,allocated

-例句：Theteacherallocatedtaskstoeachstudent.

Fundswereallocatedforthenewproject.

15.rehearsal

-词性：名词

-词义：排练，复习

-近义词：practice,rehearsalsession

-联想词：rehearse,rehearsing

-例句：Therehearsalfortheplaywasintense.

Sheattendedeveryrehearsaltoimproveherperformance.

16.resonate

-词性：动词

-词义：产生共鸣，回响

-近义词：echo,reverberate

-联想词：resonance,resonant

-例句：Themusicresonatesinmyheart.

Hiswordsresonatedwiththeaudience.

17.prioritize

-词性：动词

-词义：优先处理

-近义词：rank,arrange

-联想词：prioritization,prioritized

-例句：It'simportanttoprioritizeyourtasks.

Sheprioritizedherhealthoverwork.

18.nurture

-词性：动词

-词义：培养，养育

-近义词：cultivate,raise

-联想词：nurturing,nurturer

-例句：Parentsnurturetheirchildren'stalents.

Shenurturedaloveforartinherstudents.

19.synergy

-词性：名词

-词义：协同作用，协作

-近义词：cooperation,collaboration

-联想词：synergistic,synergize

-例句：Thesynergybetweenthetwoteamswasremarkable.

Theircollaborationcreatedasynergythatenhancedtheproject.

20.flourish

-词性：动词

-词义：繁荣，兴旺

-近义词：thrive,prosper

-联想词：flourishing,flourishment

-例句：Thebusinessbegantoflourishafterthenewmarketingstrategy.

Plantsflourishintherightconditions.

21.ample

-词性：形容词

-词义：充足的，丰富的

-近义词：sufficient,plentiful

-反义词：scarce,insufficient

-例句：Therewasampletimetofinishtheproject.

Thegardenprovidedamplespaceforactivities.

PossibleVersion1

Pl:Thenextday,Matthewsetaboutmakingchangestohisbusy

schedule.Heprioritizedhistasks,promisinahimselftospendmoretimeon

语动词做伴随动作）whilestillnurturinghispassionforpaintingandmusic（状从省略）.

Thistime,hesetalarmstoremindhimwhentoswitchactivities（状从省略）,ensuring^

谓语动词做伴随动作）hewouldnotlosetrackoftime（非谓语动词做伴随动作）.

P2:AfterMatthewputhisnewscheduleintopractice,thingsbegantoimprove.He

foundthatwithfocusedstudysessions,hisunderstandingofphysicsdeepened（宾从，可

积累）.Paintingbecameajoyagain;helosthimselfin（可积

累）colors,creatinamasterpieces（非谓语动词做伴随动作）thatexpressedhis

emotions（定从）.Whenthebandrehearsed,hearrivedearly,sheetmusicin/rnr7d（独立主

格），readytopractice.Thesynergyamonghisbandmatesflourished,andtheyperformed

beautifullytogether.Onthenightoftheconcert,standinainfrontoftheaudience（^^

语动词做伴随动作），hefeltproud.Eac