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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thirteen-year-oldLilyhadalwaysbeencuriousabouttheoldjaronherfather’sdesk.Itwasaplainclaypotwithfadedpaint,itsedgedarkenedbydecadesoffingerprints.HerbusdriverfatherpolishediteverySundayafternoon,hisroughhandsmovingwithheartycare.“Onedayyou’llunderstand,”he’dsaywhensheaskedaboutitspurpose,thebuspetrolscentclingingto(附着)hisuniform.Mom’shospitalbillsemptiedthejarfiveyearsago,whichmadeLily’sthroattighten.Onerainyafternoon,whilecleaningthelivingroom,Lily’selbowbrushedpastthejar.Itfellslowly,shininglikebrokenpiecesofthemoon.Coinsandwrinkledbillserupted—over1,000dollars!Herfingersshookasshewantedtoputthepiecesofthejartogether,claydustmixingwithtearsonhercheeks.Thenshefoundthenotebeneaththecoins:“ForLily’scollegefund—nevergiveupdreams.”Shemadeuphermindtobuyajartostorethesecoinsandbills.Anewjarwouldholdmorethanmeremoney;itwouldcontainherdreamsandthewarmthofherfather’ssilentlove.Thatevening,lightrainpaintedthestreetssilver.OutsideMr.Tom’sgrocerystore,ahomelessmanhuddled(蜷缩)undercardboard,hissignreading:“Need500dollarsfordaughter’sdisease.”Theman’ssocks—onewornandholey,theothermismatchedandfaded,showedhowhardhislifewas.Hiscrackedlipsmovedsoundlessly,mutteringwordsthatneverreachedpassersby.Lily’sfingersbrushedthe20dollarsinherpocket.Everypennycarriedthesweatofherfather.Theman’seyesmethers,holdingthesamedesperatelightshe’dseeninDad’seyesduringMom’sfinalhours.Atthatmoment,thejar’struelessonrevealeditself—notasacontainerofmoney,butassomethingmuchmoreimportant.Lilydecidedtogobackhomeandgetmoremoneytohelpthepoorhomelessman.注意：1．续写的词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Holdingthemoneytightly,Lilyrushedtothehomelessman.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Arrivinghome,Lilyfoundherfatherstaringatthebrokenjar’spieces.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________续写分析第一段：Holdingthemoneytightly,Lilyrushedtothehomelessman.情节衔接：该段承接上文Lily决定帮助流浪汉的情节，以“紧握钱冲向流浪汉”为动作起点，需重点刻画Lily助人的具体过程及双方互动。通过对流浪汉收到钱后的神态、语言描写（如“眼睛噙满泪水”“声音哽咽”），与Lily的温柔回应形成情感呼应，展现善意传递的瞬间。同时，Lily内心对“罐子真正意义”的感悟进一步深化，从单纯的物质储蓄认知，转变为对“帮助他人”价值的认同。情感推进：从Lily最初对使用父亲积蓄的犹豫，到果断助人时的坚定，再到流浪汉感激时她内心的温暖，情感逐步递进。这段描写通过细腻的心理刻画，将“给予带来的快乐”与“罐子承载的爱”紧密相连，为后文与父亲的对话做情感铺垫。细节补充：可添加环境描写（如“雨丝轻轻落在两人身上”），营造氛围；通过对流浪汉外貌更细致的描写（如“脸上的皱纹如干涸的河床”），增强画面感，凸显其困境，使Lily的善举更具感染力。第二段：Arrivinghome,Lilyfoundherfatherstaringatthebrokenjar’spieces.情节衔接：Lily回家面对父亲，打破的罐子成为关键冲突点。父亲的“凝视”暗示他已得知事情经过，此时需展现父女间的沟通与理解。父亲的话语（“我看到你帮助那个人了”）直接点明他对Lily行为的认可，化解了潜在的矛盾，转而将话题引向对“罐子精神”的探讨。情感升华：父亲的骄傲、对母亲的怀念，以及Lily内心的释然交织在一起，使情感达到高潮。通过父女共同捡拾碎片的动作，象征着“虽然罐子破碎，但爱与精神永存”，将个人情感与家庭传承、助人精神紧密结合。主题深化：结尾点明“罐子虽破，爱与教训永恒”，将具体事件升华为对“奉献精神代代相传”“物质价值与精神价值”的思考，呼应前文罐子承载的梦想与爱，完成主题的升华。故事线好奇与破碎：Lily对父亲桌上旧罐子充满好奇，意外打碎后发现里面是为她存的大学基金及父亲的爱。抉择与助人：偶遇为女儿治病的流浪汉，Lily在金钱的个人用途与助人之间抉择，最终决定帮助流浪汉。理解与传承：回家后父亲不仅未责怪，反而认可她的善举，父女共同领悟罐子的真正意义——爱与奉献的传承。短语brimmingwithtears（热泪盈眶）chokeout（哽咽着说出）etchedonone’sface（刻在某人脸上）anewfoundunderstanding（新的领悟）reachout（伸出援手）inone’stimeofneed（在某人困难时）clutchsth.close（紧紧抓住某物）maketherightdecision（做出正确决定）silencesb.withagesture（用手势让某人安静）pullsb.intoahug（将某人拉入怀中）pickupthepieces（收拾残局；重拾信心）staywithsb.forever（永远陪伴某人）emptythejar（掏空罐子）mixwithtears（与泪水混合）polishthejar（擦拭罐子）eruptwithmoney（钱散落出来）holdthesamedesperatelight（有着同样绝望的眼神）revealitself（显现；展现）主旨升华句ThebrokenjartaughtLilythatlove,oncegiven,nevertrulyshatters;instead,itspreadslikeripples,touchinglivesfarbeyonditsoriginalbounds.（破碎的罐子让Lily明白，给予的爱永远不会真正破碎，它会像涟漪般扩散，触及远超其最初范围的生命。）Inthatmomentofselflessgiving,Lilydiscoveredthatthegreatesttreasuresarenotcoinsinajar,butthewarmthofaheartwillingtoshare.（在无私给予的那一刻，Lily发现，最珍贵的宝藏不是罐子里的硬币，而是一颗愿意分享的心的温暖。）Theoldjarmayhavecrumbled,butitsspirit—alegacyofcompassionandsacrifice—wouldcontinuetoguideLilythroughlife’sstorms.（旧罐子或许已经破碎，但其精神——同情与牺牲的传承——将继续指引Lily穿越生活的风雨。）Asfatheranddaughterembracedoverthebrokenpieces,theyunderstoodthattruewealthliesnotinpossessions,butinthecouragetohelpotherswithopenhandsandopenhearts.（当父女在破碎的碎片前相拥时，他们明白，真正的财富不在于拥有，而在于敞开心扉、伸出援手帮助他人的勇气。）Thestoryofthejarbecameatimelessreminder:sometimes,themostpreciousgiftsarehiddennotinthebeautyofanobject,butinthelessonsitteachesaboutloveandhumanity.（罐子的故事成为一个永恒的提醒：有时，最珍贵的礼物不在于物品的美丽，而在于它所传授的关于爱与人性的教训。）写作示范示范一Holdingthemoneytightly,Lilyrushedtothehomelessman.Theraingrewheavier,butLilydidn’tcare.Shekneltbesidethemanandplacedthemoneyintohiscold,callousedhands.“Takethis,”shesaid,hervoicesteady.Theman’seyeswidenedindisbelief.“Why...whyareyoudoingthis?”hestammered.“BecauseIknowwhatit’sliketoseesomeoneyouloveinpain,”Lilyreplied,thinkingofhermother.Tearsstreameddowntheman’sfaceasheclutchedthemoney.“Thankyou.You’vegivenmydaughterachance,”hesobbed.Lilyfeltasenseofpeace.Shefinallyunderstoodwhatthejartrulyrepresented—hopeforothers.Arrivinghome,Lilyfoundherfatherstaringatthebrokenjar’spieces.Lily’sheartsank.Shepreparedforanger,butherfatherturnedtoherwithagentlesmile.“Isawyouhelpthatman,”hesaidsoftly.“Yourmotherwouldhavebeenproud.Thejarwasjustavessel;therealvaluewastheloveinside,andyou’vesharedthatlove.”HepulledLilyintoahug.Together,theygatheredthebrokenpieces,vowingtokeepthespiritofthejaralive—notwithanewcontainer,butwithactsofkindnessthatwouldlastalifetime.示范二Holdingthemoneytightly,Lilyrushedtothehomelessman.Withraindropssplashingaroundher,Lilyapproachedthemanwithdetermination.“Here,”shesaid,placingthecashintohistremblinghands.“It’snotmuch,butIhopeithelps.”Themanlookedupather,hiseyesshiningwithgratitude.“You’reanangel,”hewhispered.Lilyshookherhead.“No,justsomeonewhobelievesinhelpingothers.”Asshewalkedaway,shefeltlighter,asifaweighthadbeenliftedoffhershoulders.Thejar’ssecretwasnolongeraboutsavingmoney;itwasaboutsavingsouls.Arrivinghome,Lilyfoundherfatherstaringatthebrokenjar’spieces.Lilytookadeepbreath,readytofaceherfather’sdisappointment.Buthisexpressionwasoneofpride.“Iheardwhatyoudid,”hesaid,hisvoicefilledwithadmiration.“Thatoldjartaughtyouwell.Itwasn’taboutthemoney;itwasabouttheloveandthewillingnesstogive.You’velearneditslessonbetterthanIevercouldhavehoped.”Theysattogether,talkingaboutthemanandhisdaughter,andthepowerofkindness.Thebrokenjarbecameasymbolofanewbeginning,aremindertoalwaysreachouttothoseinneed.示范三Holdingthemoneytightly,Lilyrushedtothehomelessman.Thewindhowled,butLilypressedon.Whenshereachedtheman,shecroucheddownandhandedhimthemoney.“Thisisforyourdaughter,”shesaidfirmly.Theman’slipsquivered.“Ican’tacceptthis.You’rejustachild,”heprotested.“ButI’machildwhowantstohelp,”Lilyreplied.Finally,hetookthemoney,hisshouldersshakingwithemotion.“Thankyou.I’llneverforgetthis,”hesaid.Lilysmiled.Sheknewthatbygiving,shehadreceivedsomethingfarmorevaluable:thejoyofmakingadifference.Arrivinghome,Lilyfoundherfatherstaringatthebrokenjar’spieces.Lilystoodinthedoorway,waitingforherfather’sreaction.Insteadofscoldingher,hemotionedforhertositbesidehim.“Youdidtherightthing,”hesaid,puttinghisarmaroundher.“Thejarwasmeanttoteachyouaboutcompassion,andyou’veshownitinthemostbeautifulway.Yourmother’sspiritlivesonthroughyou.”Theysatinsilenceforawhile,thenbegantocleanupthepieces.Thoughthejarwasbroken,itsmessagewasclear:loveandkindnesscanhealeventhemostshatteredhearts.示范四Holdingthemoneytightly,Lilyrushedtothehomelessman.ThestreetlightsflickeredasLilyrantowardstheman.Shekneltbesidehimandplacedthemoneyinhislap.“Please,takeit,”shepleaded.Themanlookedatherinastonishment.“Youdon’tevenknowme,”hesaid.“Iknowyou’reafatherwholoveshisdaughter,justlikemydadlovesme,”Lilyreplied.Themanburstintotearsandpulledherintoahug.“Thankyoufromthebottomofmyheart,”hesaid.Lilyleftwithasenseofpurpose,knowingthatshehadhonoredthetruemeaningofthejar.Arrivinghome,Lilyfoundherfatherstaringatthebrokenjar’spieces.Lilywalkedinslowly,expectingtheworst.Butherfathersmiledather.“Iheardaboutthemanyouhelped,”hesaid.“Yourmotherusedtosaythatthemeasureofaperson’swealthisn’tintheirbankaccount,butintheirheart.You’veprovenherright.”Hepickedupapieceofthebrokenjar.“Thismaybeinpieces,buttheloveitheldwillneverbreak.”Together,theydecidedtostartanewtradition—a“jarofkindness”—tocontinuespreadingloveandhope,oneactatatime.【参考答案】Holdingthemoneytightly,Lil