英语作文有关词汇

四．附录（45大俗词）

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people，persons

替换为individuals，characters，folksEg.Whileitwasfineforearlyphysiciststolearnandunderstandthefewlawsandideasthatexistedduringtheirtimes,now,nooneindividualcanpossiblydigestandassimilatealloftheknowledgeinanygivenarea.（给大家一个长难句玩玩，过瘾吧！J）Eg.Folksaroundherewillalwayslendahandifyouneedit.2、

good

替换为positive，sound,decent,desirable,favorable，rosy，promising，perfect，pleasurable，excellent，outstanding等等Eg.Heischaracterizedbyhisdecentlanguageanddecentbehavior.Eg.Hejustacceptedadesirablejobinthefilmindustry.Eg.Theperformancereceivedafavorablereview.Eg.Peopleallovertheworldarelongingforrosyfinance-predictions.3、

bad

替换为dreadful，unfavorable，poor，adverse,undesirable,unpleasant等Eg.Internet,theindispensibletoolinmodernlife,oftencontainssomeundesirablemessages.Eg.Departmentsconcernedsupposedtodealwiththisunpleasantmatteringoodtime.Eg.Thisbehaviorhadexertedsomeadverseimpactsonthenormaldevelopmentofthesocietyasawhole.如果bad做表语，可以有belessimpressive代替。Eg.

Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames，enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.4、

Inbrief,brieflyspeaking

替换为Intheaggregate,simplyputitEg.Simplyputit,withoutspecialists,oursocietywouldfinditselfboggeddownintheSargassoseaofinformationoverloaded.5、

notonly…,butalso…

替换为notsimply…,but…aswellEg.Mr.FuLisongisnotsimplyapostgraduatestudent,butanexpertinCETaswell.6、

ThecauseofXisnotA,butB（X事件发生的原因不在于A，而在于B。）替换为FromwherewasXstemming?PartlyitwasduetoA.Nonetheless,AcouldnotbeheldresponsibleforX.Therehadtobeanothercause,andtherewas,B.7、

AbringaboutB

替换为Aistoserveasacatalyst（催化剂）forBEg.Theuseofmediainthetwentieswastoserveasacatalystfortherevolutionaryideasthatwerecirculation.8、

Sth.attractSb.

替换为Sth.sparkone’sinterest.Eg.Thefirstsentence,“Fancyalady?”immediatelysparkthereader’sinterest.9、

Sb.willnotdo…

替换为Sb.beleastlikelytodo….10、Sth.isgood,because…..

替换为Sth.distinguishesitselfinpartby…..Eg.Theessaydistinguishesitselfinpartbyitsexcellentorganization.11、Eachonemakesalittlecontribution,butwetogethercanachievemuchmore.

替换为Eachindividualcanonlyaddonesmallrungtotheladder,buttogetherwecanclimbtothemoon.12、Although

替换为While…,…Eg.Whilestillcatching-uptomeninsomespheresofmodernlife,womenappeartobewayaheadinatleastoneundesirablecategory.13、Themost+adj./theadj.-est+n.

替换为nothingismore…thann.Eg.Today,nothingismorerepresentativeofthefastpaceofmodernsocietythanfastfood.14、Affect替换为haveinfluenceon,haveimpacton,imposeinfluenceon,exertimpacton15、Thereisan.prep.+n.替换为Prep.+n.exist(s)an./pl.Eg.Infrontofhimexisttwopredicaments.16、many替换为anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,anarrayof,hordesof,swarmsof,massiveof17、some替换为asliceof,quiteafew,several18、think替换为clingtotheideathat,harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,

itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat19、thing替换为affair,business,matter20、common替换为sharedEg.ItisashearedviewthatCETisjustbullshit.21、getmuchbenefit替换为reaphugefruitsEg.Thebook,fromwhichIhavereapedhugefruits,iscomposedbyseveralprofessorsfromesteemeduniversities.22、inmyopinion替换为

formypart，frommyownperspective23、moreandmore替换为Increasing(ly)，growing。（注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly）Eg.Sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.24、hardly替换为littleifanything,littleornothing25、helpful替换为beneficialrewarding,bebeneficialof26、customer替换为shopper，client,consumer,purchaser27、very（非常）替换为exceedingly,extremely28、necessary，inevitable替换为hardlyunnecessary,hardlyevitable...29、sbtakeinterestin替换为sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb30、attractone'sattention替换为captureone'sattention31、aspect替换为facet，dimension，sphere32、indicate,suggest替换为beindicativeof,besuggestiveof33、fear替换为befearfulof34、cause,produce替换为giveriseto,resultin,trigger,contributeto,evoke,provoke35、..reasonsforsth替换为Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth36、Wanttodo替换为desiretodo,beinclinedtodo….37、payattentionto替换为pourattentioninto,focusone’sattentionto….38、Remember替换为bearinmindthatEg.Eachyear,therewerecertaincourseofferingsmadeavailable,andstudentsweretochoosefromthoseofferings,ofcoursesbearinginmindrequirementsforgraduationsetforthbytheadministration.39、Have替换为enjoy,possess（haveacupoftea,havearepair-work,haveanoperation）40、Communication替换为interaction41、beagainst,disagreewithsth替换为frownonsth42、forexample替换为tonameonlyafew,toillustrate,tobespecific,toexemplifyit,…43、nearly替换为nextto,virtually44、meaning替换为implication,connotation,indication45、一般否定替换为befarfromEg.Thefundraisedbythelocalgovernmentisfarfrombeingsufficient.46、Stop替换为putanendto小作文补充常用句式1.倡议书、建议信中常用表达：I’mwritingtoappealto…for…,giventhat…hasbecomeaseriousissue.I’mwritingthelettertocallon…,sincesomeofyoumayknowthat…..Itisobligatorythat….Hopefullyyouwilljoinintheactionandextendwarmhelptothoseneedypersons.Feelfreetocontactuswhenyouhavecometoadecision.It’slovethatsetstheworldgoing.Yourkindness/attention/effort/generousness/donation/participationwellbehighlyvalued.

2.感谢信常用表达Wearewritingtothankyouforthewonderfultimewehad…Wearewritingtoexpressmyappreciationforallthatyoudidformeduring…Weareindebtedtoyoufor…Wearegratefultoyoufor…Itwasvery(morethan)kind/generous/considerateofyouto…Nothingcouldconveymygratitudetoyoufor…Thankyouagainforyourgenerosity/hospitality…

3.邀请函常用表达ItiswiththegreatestpleasurethatIwritetocordiallyinviteyoutoattend(themeeting/seminar/party)…Itgivesmethegreatestpleasuretoinviteyoutovisit…WillyouandMrs.…(携夫人)givethepleasureofdinningwithusat…?(本句为接受邀请)Iamdelightedtoacceptyourkindinvitationto…andamlookingforwardtothat…(活动)withgreatpleasure…

4.请求信常用表达I’mwritingtorequestyoutomakeaninvestigationonthematter….Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgranttherequestfor…WouldyoumindifI….?(这句提出要求的口气客气的不得了)Willyoubekindenoughtogiveme….

5.询问信常用表达I’mwritingtoobtaintherelevantinformationconcerningthecoursesyouoffer.I’mwritingtoaskifyoucouldgrantmeafavor.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldsendmecopiesofthecourseoutline.Iwonderifitistoolatetoapplytothisposition.WouldyoupleasebekindenoughtosendmeanapplicationformandothermaterialsnecessaryformyapplicationsothatIcanbegintheapplicationprocedure?Iwouldbereallyindebtedtoyouifyoudidmethefavor.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.6.投诉信常用表达I’mwritingtobringyourattentionto…I’mwritingtocomplainabout…I’mwritingtoprotestagainst…I’mwritingtoexpressmyindignationat…Ithinkit’shightimethatyourealized(注意虚拟语气时态)…Weknowthatyouarenotgenerallycareless,butwewouldlikeyourassurancethatthiswillnothappenagain.ImustwarnyouthatunlessyoudosomethingaboutthesituationIwillbeforcedtotakelegalaction.Tobefrank,Iamnotpreparedtoputupwiththesituationanymore.Hopeyoucanaddresstheproblemsoon.Hopefullyyouwilltakestepstorectifythissituationsoon.Yourseriousconsiderationintomycomplaintwillbeverymuchappreciated.

7.申请信常用表达（申请职位）Iamwritingtoapplyforthepostof…Inreplytoyouradvertisementin…Ibegtoapplyforthepostof…inyourcompany.ImmediatelyIsawyouradvertisementintheSundayEveningfor…IfeltitwasjustthekindofpostforwhichIhavethequalificationandforwhichIhavelookingfor.Thekindofworkinwhichyourcompanyisengagedparticularinterestsme…Ihavethenecessaryqualificationsandexperiencesneededforthepositionof…advertisedinthepaper…Ishallbringwithmethefulldetailsofmytestimonialsasyourequest…IhopeImaybegrantedaninterview,whenIcanexplainmyqualificationmorefully.Ishouldbepleasedtoattendforaninterviewatyourconvenience,whenIcouldgiveyourfurtherdetailsconcerningmyself.Itseemstomethatthisexperience,togetherwithmyeducation,hasgivenmeidealpreparationtoassumetheroleof…insuchafirmasyours.（申请学位）IwouldliketoapplyforadmissiontoyourcollegeMymajorinterestsare…,andIunderstandyouruniversityhasagoodprograminthosefields.Enclosedpleasefindaresumeandaphoto…Shouldyouthinkfavorablyofmyapplication,kindlygrantmeaninterview?学生作文中常见句型错误P48

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TVnowplaysandimportantroleinourdailylife,Becausewethinkitextremelyimportant.书写错误、逻辑谬误TVnowplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife,becauseitprovidesuswithmessagesnecessarytous.

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Althoughanopportunityisrare,butwemustbereadytoseizeit.逻辑冗余、主干搭配不当Althoughopportunitiesarerare,wemustbereadytoseizethem.Opportunitiesarerare,butwemustbereadytoseizethem.

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Withariseinthenumberofcarsandbuses,trafficinShanghaihasbecomemoreandmorecrowded.主干搭配不当Withariseinthenumberofcarsandbuses,trafficinShanghaihasbecomeheavier.Withariseinthenumberofcarsandbuses,Shanghaihasbecomemoreandmorecrowded.

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Eachofusmaytakeapart-timejobtohelpsupportourselves,butifyouspendtoomuchtimeonit,yourstudywillbeaffected.指代不一致Eachofusmaytakeapart-timejobtohelpsupporthimself,butifhespendstoomuchtimeonit,hisacademicperformancemaybeaffected.

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Therearemanypeoplecomplainthepaper-makingmillpolluteourfreshwatercanbypeopleuse.成分冗余Therearemanypeoplewhocomplainthepaper-makingmillpollutingourfreshwaterusedbypeople.

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Attheageofsix,myfatherbegantogivemeEnglishlessons.逻辑主语前后不一致Attheageofsix,IwastaughtEnglishbymyfather.

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Beforesubmittinganywrittenwork,carefulproofreadingmustbedone.逻辑主语前后不一致Beforesubmittinganywrittenwork,onemustdocarefulproofreading.

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ThecomputerlikeTV,ithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.词性误用Likecomputer,TVhasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.

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Wenaturallyassumedthattheyhadarrivedthere.Theyleftseveralhoursago.句间逻辑缺失Wenaturallyassumedthattheyhadarrivedthere,fortheyleftseveralhoursago.

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Whendemandforgoodswasshrinking.Firmswouldclosedownorlayoffworkers.句间逻辑谬误Wheredemandforgoodswasshrinking,firmswouldclosedownorlayoffworkers.

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Youhavehadthedisease,youareimmunetoitfortherestofyourlife.句间逻辑缺失Onceyouhavehadthedisease,youareimmunetoitfortherestofyourlife.12.

Billyelledatthehowlingdoginhisunderwear.修饰成分造成歧义Inhisunderwear,Billyelledatthehowlingdog.

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Thefootballgamewasplayedinourstadiumthatwasfullofexcitement.修饰成分造成歧义Thefootballgamethatwasfullofexcitementwasplayedinourstadium.14.

However,everythinghasitsblackside.选词搭配不当However,therearetwosidestoeverything\everythinghasitsdrawbacks\everythinghasitsprosandcons.或However,everythinghasitsdark\negativeside.

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MylevelofEnglishhasthusbeenimproved.主谓