2024北京中考二模英语汇编：材料作文

2024北京初三二模英语汇编

材料作文

一、材料作文

1.(2024北京海淀初三二模)培育提升青少年网络素养，是我国网络强国战略的重要组成部分。

假设你是李华。你校正在举行“提升网络素养，争做校园好网民(BeaGoodTeenNetizen)”的主题教育

活动，请你用英文写一篇短文向学校英文网站投稿，阐述提升青少年网络素养的重要性，并说明具体做法。

注意：根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提

示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

提示词语：

onlinecommunity,benefit,polite,protect,personal

提示问题：

Whydoyouthinkitisimportanttobeagoodteennetizen?

Whatwouldyouadvisestudentstodotobeagoodteennetizen?

AstheInternethasbecomepartofourlives,ifsimportanttobeagoodteennetizen.

AstheInternethasbecomepartofourlives,itsimportanttobeagoodteennetizen.Developingonlineliteracy

helpsusbenefitfromtheInternetwhileavoidingitsrisks.Aresponsiblenetizenshouldbepoliteinonline

communication,respectothers,andavoidspreadingfalseinformation.

Tobeagoodteennetizen,weshouldprotectourpersonalinformationandbecautiouswhensharingdetails

online.Wemustalsothinkcriticallyaboutonlinecontentandavoidharmfulwebsites.Byfollowingthesepractices,

wecancreateapositiveandsafeonlinecommunity.Letsworktogethertoimproveouronlinebehaviorandmake

theInternetabetterplace!

2.（2024北京昌平初三二模）每个人都在变化中成长。在三年的初中生活中，你一定经历了很多改变。

假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号计划做主题为“MyChangeforGrowth”的系列推送。请你写一篇英文稿

件投稿，谈谈谁或什么事让你在改变中成长，你的感悟是什么。

提示词语：

parent,teacher,reading,learn,realize,confident

提示问题：

WhoAVhathaschangedyouforbettergrowth?

Whathaveyoulearnedfromit?

要求：根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提

示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

MyChangeforGrowth

Overthepastthreeyearsofjuniorhighschool,Ihaveexperiencedmanychangesthathavehelpedmegrow.

Oneofthemostimportantinfluencesonmygrowthhasbeenreading.Bookshaveopenedmymind,taughtme

valuablelessons,andhelpedmebecomemoreconfident.

Throughreading,Ihavelearnedtothinkcriticallyandseetheworldfromdifferentperspectives.Ihavealso

realizedthatknowledgeisthekeytopersonalgrowth.Thischangehasmadememoreeagertolearnandexplore

newideas.Iwillcontinuetoreadandgrowonmyjourneytobecomingabetterperson.

3.（2024北京东城初三二模）置身大自然的怀抱，不仅能放松身体，还能滋养精神。

某英文网站正在开展以“亲近大自然”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿,

谈谈你亲近大自然的一次经历以及你的感悟。

提示词语：camp,walk,tree,feel,relax

提示问题：

•Whatwasoneofyourexperiencesofgettingclosetonature?

•Whathaveyoulearnedfromit?

Itisimportanttogetclosetonatureinourlives.

GettingClosetoNature

Itisimportanttogetclosetonatureinourlives.Oneofmyunforgettableexperienceswasgoingcampingwith

myfriendsinthemountainslastsummer.Wewalkedalongtheforesttrails,surroundedbytalltreesandthesoundof

birdssinging.Itfeltsopeacefultobeawayfromthenoiseofthecity.

Duringthetrip,Irealizedhowrelaxingitistobesurroundedbynature.Thefreshairandthebeautyofthe

landscapemademefeelcalmandrefreshed.Ilearnedthatspendingtimeinnaturehelpsusrelax,clearourminds,

andappreciatethesimplejoysoflife.It'sagreatwaytoreconnectwithourselvesandfindpeaceinabusyworld.

4.（2024北京东城初三二模）假设你是李华，在学校英语社团负责宣传工作。你们社团将要举办英语

戏剧展演（EnglishDramaShow）。请你在学校公众号上用英语写一篇宣传稿，介绍该活动，包括时间、地点

和内容，并号召同学们前来观看。

提示词语：watch,choose,commenton（评论），fun,learn

提示问题：

•WhenandwherewilltheEnglishDramaShowbeheld?

•Whatactivitieswilltherebeattheshow?

•Whydoyouwanttocallonstudentstocometotheshow?

DoyoulikeEnglish

dramas?__________________________________________________________________________________________

JoinUsfortheEnglishDramaShow!

DoyouloveEnglishdramas?Don'tmissoutonourschool'sEnglishDramaShow,whichwillbeheldon

March15that3:00PMintheschoolauditorium.Thisexcitingeventwillfeatureavarietyofperformances,including

classicplaysandcreativeskits.

Comeandwatchyourclassmatesshowcasetheiractingskillsinfunandentertainingdramas!Notonlywillyou

enjoytheperformances,butyouwillalsohavethechancetocommentonthemandshareyourthoughtswiththe

actors.It'sagreatopportunitytolearnmoreaboutEnglishcultureandlanguagewhilehavingfun.

Weencourageallstudentstocomeandsupporttheshow!Itfsawonderfulchancetorelax,enjoysomecreativity,

andseethehardworkofyourpeerscometolife.Seeyouthere!

5.（2024北京石景山初三二模）读书，可以通理、明志、修身。假如你是李华。请你用英文写一篇短

文给学校英文网站投稿，介绍对你影响最大的一本书，以及书的内容和对你的影响。

提示词语：theLittlePrince,experience,story,courage,friendship

提示问题：

•Whichbookhasinfluencedyoumost?

•Whatisthebookmainlyabout?

•Howhasitinfluencedyou?

TheBookThatHasInfluencedMeMost

ThebookthathasinfluencedmethemostisTheLittlePrincebyAntoinedeSaint-Exupery.Ittellsthestoryof

ayoungprinceyvhotravelsfromplanettoplanet,meetingdifferentcharacterswhoteachhimvaluablelessonsabout

life,love,andtheimportanceofseeingtheworldwiththeeyesofachild.

Oneofthemostimportantmessagesinthebookisaboutthevalueoffriendshipandthecouragetocarefor

others.Thelittleprince'sjourneytaughtmethatrealstrengthcomesfromkindnessandempathy,notfrompower

orwealth.Ithasencouragedmetobemorebraveinexpressingmyfeelingsandmorepatientinunderstandingothers.

Thisbookhashadalastingimpactonmyoutlookonlife,helpingmerealizetheimportanceofkeepinganopen

heartandmind.Iamgratefulforthelessonsithastaughtmeandthewayitcontinuestoinspiremeinmydailylife.

6.(2024北京石景山初三二模)假如你是李华，你的学校下周日将组织全校师生去香山(FragrantHills

Park)徒步，请你给交换生Tom写一封邮件，通知他集合的时间，地点，需要做什么准备及原因。

提示词语：gate,lunch,picnic,water

提示问题：•Whenandwhereareyougoingtomeet?

•WhatdoesTomneedtoprepare?Why?Z)e〃rTom,

Howiseverythinggoing?

I'mlookingforwardtohikingwithyou.

Yours,

LiHua

DearTom,

Howiseverythinggoing?Ihopeyou'redoingwell!

IwantedtoletyouknowthatourschoolisorganizingahikingtriptoFragrantHillsParknextSunday.We'll

bemeetingat8:00AMatthemainschoolgate.Thetripwillbeagreatopportunitytoenjoynatureandspendtime

withclassmates.

You'llneedtobringafewthingswithyou:

•Watertostayhydratedduringthehike

•Lunchorasnackforapicnicbreak

•Comfortableclothesandshoessuitableforwalking

It'simportanttobepreparedsowecanenjoythehikewithoutanyissues.I'msureitwillbealotoffunand

agreatchancetogettoknowthebeautifulscenery.

I'mlookingforwardtohikingwithyou!

Yours,

LiHua

7.（2024北京房山初三二模）中华民族有五千年的文明，积淀了丰富多彩的传统文化，有精美的民间

工艺如剪纸、风筝，有古老的民族艺术如京剧、国画等。

假设你是李华，你们学校英语社团正在进行“中国传统文化”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投

稿，谈谈你最喜爱的一种中国传统民间工艺或民族艺术以及你是如何传承的。提示词语：papercutting,

practice,makevideos,introduce,foreigner

提示问题：•WhattraditionalChineseculturedoyoulikebest?

•Whatcanyoudotopassiton?

MyFavoriteTraditionalChineseArt:PaperCutting

AmongallthewonderfulaspectsofChinesetraditionalculture,myfavoriteispapercutting.Thisancientart

forminvolvescuttingintricatepatternsintopapertocreatebeautifuldesigns,oftendepictinganimals,flowers,or

scenesfromdailylife.Itisnotonlyaformofartbutalsoawaytoexpressgoodwishesandblessings.

Topassonthistradition,Ihavestartedpracticingpapercuttingmyself.Ihavelearnedthetechniquesfrommy

grandmother,whoisanexpertinthecraft.Tosharethisartwithothers,Ivealsomadevideosshoeinghowtomake

papercuttings,andIoftenintroduceittomyforeignfriends.Bydoingthis,Ihopetohelpmorepeopleappreciate

andenjoyChineseculture,nomatterwheretheycomefrom.

PapercuttingisameaningfulwaytoconnectwithChinesetraditions,andIbelieveit'simportanttokeepsuch

artformsaliveforfuturegenerations.

8.(2024北京顺义初三二模)某英文网站正在开展以“做更好的自己”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李

华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈为了成就更好的自己，你做过什么，有什么收获。

提示词语：challenge,takeaction,improve,confident

提示问题：

(1)Whatdidyoudotomakeyoubetter?

(2)Whathaveyoulearnedfromdoingso?

Everyonemaylookforwardtobeingbetter.

BecomingaBetterVersionofMyself

Everyonemaylookforwardtobeingbetter.Toimprovemyself,Ihavefacedseveralchallengesandtakenactions

togrow.OneofthebiggeststepsItookwasjoiningpublicspeakingclub.Atfirst,Iwasafraidofspeakinginfrontof

others,butIdecidedtopushmyselfoutofmycomfortzone.

Throughpracticeandperseverance,Igainedmoreconfidenceandimprovedmyspeakingskills.Ialsolearned

toorganizemythoughtsbetterandexpressthemclearly.Thisexperiencetaughtmethatgrowthcomesfrom

challengingyourselfandtakingaction,evenwhenitfeelsdifficult.

Now,Ifeelmoreconfidentinmanyareasofmylife,andIrealizethatcontinuouseffortandself-reflectionare

keytobecomingabetterperson.

9.（2024北京大兴初三二模）坚毅是青春的本色，也是青少年的必备品质。

你校英文公众号正在开展以“坚毅伴我成长”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短

文进行投稿，分享一次你在生活或学习中因坚持不懈而最终克服困难的成功经历，并谈谈你的收获。

要求：根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示

词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

提示词语：fail,overcome（克服）,passthetest,persistence（坚持）

提示问题：Whatproblemdidyouhave?

•Howdidyouovercomeit?

•Whathaveyouachievedfromtheexperience?

PersistenceHelpsMeGrow

Duringmylastsemester,IfacedadifficultchallengewhenIstruggledtopassamathtest.Despitestudyinghard,

Ifailedthefirsttwoexams,whichmademefeelfrustrated.However,insteadofgivingup,Idecidedtokeeppracticing

andaskmyteacherforhelp.Ialsospentextratimereviewingmymistakesandworkingonproblemareas.

Thankstomypersistence,Ifinallypassedthenexttestwithamuchbetterscore.Thisexperiencetaughtmethat

successdoesn'tcomeeasily,butwithdeterminationandeffort,wecanovercomeobstacles.velearnedthat

persistenceiskeytoachievingmygoalsandbecomingstrongerthroughchallenges.

10.（2024北京门头沟初三二模）向阳花会一直跟随太阳的方位生长，这种执著的精神告诉我们，要

乐观积极面对生活，向往美好和阳光，永不言弃。

学校英语网站正在举办“向阳花开SunflowersBloom”为主题的征文连载活动。假设你是李华，请你用

英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你对向阳花精神的理解，介绍一件帮助你对向阳花精神有了更深理解的事情。

提示词语：nevergiveup,challenge,encourage,support,confident

提示问题：-Whatdoyouthinkofthespiritofsunflowers?

•Whathashelpedyoudevelopadeeperunderstandingofthespiritofsunflowers?

TheSpiritofSunflowers

Thespiritofsunflowersteachesustonevergiveup,toalwaysfacelifewithoptimism,andtostriveforabrighter

future.Justlikesunflowersthatfallowthesun,weshouldlookforthepositivesideoflife,nomatterhowtoughthings

get.Theirpersistenceandbrightoutlookinspiremetostayhopefulandworkhardevenindifficulttimes.

Oneexperiencethatdeepenedmyunderstandingofthisspiritwasduringaschoolcompetition.Ifacedmany

challenges,andatonepoint,Ifeltlikegivingup.However,myfriendsandteacherencouragedmeandojferedtheir

support.Theirbeliefinmegavemetheconfidencetokeepgoing.Intheend,Ididmybestandachievedagoodresult.

Thisexperiencetaughtmethatwiththesupportofothersandapositiveattitude,wecanovercomeanychallenge,

justlikesunflowersthatkeepgrowingtowardsthesun.

n.（2024北京丰台初三二模）劳动创造世界，劳动创造美。在劳动中我们能发展技能，也能学会感

恩与奉献。

某英文网站正在开展以“劳动光荣”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，介

绍你生活中一次难忘的劳动经历，并谈谈你的收获。

提示词语：volunteer,cleanup,meaningful

提示问题：•Whatwasyourmostunforgettablelabor（劳动）experience?

•Whathaveyoulearnedfromthisexperience?

TheGloryofLabor

OneofmymostunforgettablelaborexperienceswaswhenIvolunteeredtohelpcleanupalocalparklastyear.

AgroupofclassmatesandIspentawholeafternoonpickinguptrash,trimmingtrees,andplantingflowers.Although

theworkwastiring,itwasalsoverymeaningful.Wecouldseetheparkslowlytransformintoacleanerandmore

beautifulplace,andthatgaveusagreatsenseofaccomplishment.

Fromthisexperience,Ilearnedtheimportanceofgivingbacktothecommunityandhowsmallactsoflaborcan

makeabigdifference.Ittaughtmethevalueofhardworkandteamwork,aswellastheneedtoappreciateandtake

careoftheenvironment.Mostimportantly,Irealizedthatthroughlabor,wenotonlyimprovetheworldaroundus

butalsogrowasindividuals.

参考答案

1.例文

AstheInternethasbecomepartofourlives,ifsimportanttobeagoodteennetizen.Foronething,beinga

goodnetizenbenefitsourselvesbecauseithelpsustowinacceptanceandrespectfromothers.Foranother,if

everyonebehavesproperlyonline,wecanhelptobuildasaferandmorepositiveonlinecommunity.Tobeagood

teennetizen,herearesomeusefultips.

First,weneedtocommunicateinapoliteway.Ithelpseveryonefeelgoodandrespected.Second,we'd

betterbecarefulaboutthepersonalinformationweshareonline.Ifitendsupinthehandsofthewrongpeople,we

couldfaceunexpectedproblems.Finally,weshouldusetheInternettoourbenefit,foreducationandself­

improvement,notjusttokilltime.

Ibelievethatbyworkingtogether,eachoneofuscancontributetobuildingapositiveandresponsibleonline

community,whileenjoyingthebenefitsoftheInternet.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为一般现在时；

③提示：内容提示已给出，注意不要有遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作的重点。

［写作步骤］

第一步，阐述为什么成为一名优秀的青少年网民很重要；

第二步，写出如何成为一名优秀的青少年网民；

第三步，书写结语。

［亮点词汇］

①helpsbtodo帮助某人做某事

②hadbetter最好

③endup最终

［高分句型］

Foranother,ifeveryonebehavesproperlyonline,wecanhelptobuildasaferandmorepositiveonlinecommunity,

（if引导的条件状语从句）

2.例文

MyChangeforGrowth

Wegrowupinchange.Growthmakesourlifefullofmeaning.Lookingbackonthethreeyearsofjunior

highschool,Ihaveexperiencedmanychangesinmystudy,thoughts,personality,lifeandsoon.Thebiggest

personalchangeI'veevermadeisthatIhavefalleninlovewithreading.

WhenIwasachild,Ididn'tenjoybooksatall.Later,mymotheralwaysreadstoriesformeandboughtme

books.Gradually,Ibegantolovereading.Whilereading,Ifeelliketalkingwithawiseman.Readingisalsoa

fantasticwaytoenjoymyfreetime.Booksaremyfriends.Andtheywillbenefitmealot.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；

o③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点

［写作步骤］

第一步，介绍自己在三年的初中生活中有很多改变；

第二步，介绍什么事让你在改变中成长；

第三步，最后表达感受或感悟。

［亮点词汇］

①fallinlovewith爱上

②begintodo开始做

③feellikedoingsth想要做某事

［高分句型］

WhenIwasachild,Ididn'tenjoybooksatall.（when引导的时间状语从句）

3.例文

Itisimportanttogetclosetonatureinourlives.LastSunday,Idrovetomyuncle'sfarmwithmyparents.In

themorning,wehelpedmyunclepickapplesonthetree.Appleswerenotonlybigandround,butalsodelicious.

Afterwehaddinner,Itookawalkfirst,andthenwecampedonthefarm.Myfathertoldmethestoryofhis

childhood.Itwasreallyinteresting.Thiskindofactivitythatgetsclosetonaturemakesmefeelveryrelaxed.And

letmeknowthatitisnoteasyforfarmerstolive.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

［写作步骤］

第一步，承接开头，介绍亲近大自然的一次经历；

第二步，表达自己的感受。

［亮点词汇］

①takeawalk散步

@notonly...butalso…不仅...而且....

［高分句型］

①Thiskindofactivitythatgetsclosetonaturemakesmefeelveryrelaxed,（that弓|导的定语从句）

（2）Andletmeknowthatitisnoteasyforfarmerstolive,（that引导的宾语从句；it固定句型）

4.例文

DoyoulikeEnglishdramas?ThencomeandwatchourEnglishDramaShow!

I'mgladtotellyouthere'llbeanEnglishdramashowthisweekend.Itwillbeheldat8:00thisSaturday

morning.Wearegoingtoholditinourmusicclub.Allofusaregoingtowearniceclothesandplaydifferentroles

ingroups.WewillperformEnglishdramas.Speecheswillbemadeduringtheshow.

Ihopeyoucanworkasjudgesandgivescoresforeachgroupaftertheperformances.Itcanbefunto

appreciateandlearnEnglishDrama.Thenattheendofthedramashow,youcancommentontheperformancesand

choosethewinner.IbelievethisEnglishdramashowwillbesuccessfulwithyourhelp.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：一般现在时、一般将来时；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

［写作步骤］

第一步，号召同学来观看英语戏剧展演；

第二步，具体介绍英语戏剧展演的举办时间、地点、活动、号召学生来参加演出的原因；

第三步，表达英语戏剧展演成功的期望。

［亮点词汇］

①performEnglishdramas表演英语戏剧

②workasjudges担任裁判

［高分句型］

①ThencomeandwatchourEnglishDramaShow!（祈使句）

②Fmgladtotellyouthere'llbeanEnglishdramashowthisweekend.（动词不定式作原因状语）

（3）IbelievethisEnglishdramashowwillbesuccessfulwithyourhelp,（that弓|导宾语从句,that省略）

5.Onepossibleversion:

Duringmyjuniorhighschoolyears,TheLittlePrincehasinfluencedmemostanditdeeplytouchedmy

heart.

ThisbooktellsthestoryabouttheLittlePrince'sexperiencesofvisitingdifferentplanetsaswellasthelove

betweenhimandhisredrose.Itcontainsdeepmeaningsinverysimplewords,whichmakesitinspiring.

WheneverIfeelconfusedorfrustrated,thewordsfromthisbookalwaysgivemecouragetofindmywayto

gothroughdifficulttimes.Moreover,thebookhastaughtmethetruemeaningoffriendship,whichmakesme

cherisheverymomentIhavewithmyfriends.

So,ifyouhavesometime,considerreadingthisbook,andyoumightgainalotfromit,justasIhavedone.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

［写作步骤］

第一步，介绍哪本书对你影响最大；

第二步，介绍这本书的主要内容；

第三步，最后描述这本书对你的影响。

［亮点词汇］

①aswellas以及

②gothrough经历

③considerdoingsth考虑做某事

［高分句型］

①Itcontainsdeepmeaningsinverysimplewords,whichmakesitinspiring.（定语从句）

②So,ifyouhavesometime,considerreadingthisbook,andyoumightgainalotfromit,justasIhavedone.（条

件状语从句）

6.Onepossibleversion:

DearIbm,

Howiseverythinggoing?I'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutourschoolh汰ingintheFragrantHills

ParknextSunday.Wearegoingtomeetattheschoolgateat7:30am.

Forthistrip,weallneedtotakelunchbecausetherearenorestaurantsontheway.Wewillhaveapicnic

togetherinthemountainsbecauseitisanopportunityforustostaytogethersinceweareleavingschoolsoon.How

funitwillbe!Also,pleaseremembertotakesomewatersinceyouaresuretoneeditduringthelonghiking.

Iamlookingforwardtohikingwithyou.

Yours,

LiHua

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；

②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；

③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的

逻辑关系，语意连贯。

［写作步骤］

第一步，介绍见面的时间和地点；

第二步，具体描述需要准备什么以及这样做的原因。

［亮点词汇］

①needtodosth需要做某事

②haveapicnic野餐

③remembertodosth记得做某事

［高分句型］

®Forthistrip,weallneedtotakelunchbecausetherearenorestaurantsontheway.（原因状语从句）

②Also,pleaseremembertotakesomewatersinceyouaresuretoneeditduringthelonghiking.（原因状语从

句）

7.例文

Asweallknow,protectingthetraditionalChinesefolkcraftisourobligation.Myfavouritetraditional

Chinesefolkcraftispapercutting.

Papercuttingcanbemadeindifferentshapes,suchasfigures,animals,flowersandChinesecharacterswith

goodmeaningsandsoon.PapercuttingisanimportantpartofChineseculture.Peopleoftenputthemuponthe

walls.Papercuttingoftenappearsatfestivalsorweddingsbecausepeoplethinkitcanbringthemhappinessand

goodluck.

Itrymybesttoprotectthistraditionalskill.ItakepartintheschoolpapercuttingclubandIteachmembers

howtodesigntheirownworks.IthinkIcanalsomakesomevideosonlinesothatmoreandmorepeopleareable

toknowaboutit.Lefsworktogethertoprotectthistraditionalfolkcraftandkeepitalive.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。

［写作步骤］

第一步，开篇点题，保护和传承中国传统技艺是我们的义务；

第二步，介绍自己最喜爱的传统技艺；

第三步，介绍自己可以做什么来传承。

［亮点词汇］

①suchas例如

②putup张贴

③tryone'sbesttodosth.尽力做某事

［高分句型］

①Papercuttingcanbemadeindifferentshapes,suchasfigures,animals,flowersandChinesecharacterswith

goodmeaningsandsoon.（含情态动词can的被动语态）

②Papercuttingoftenappearsatfestivalsorweddingsbecausepeoplethinkitcanbringthemhappinessandgood

luck.（because引导的原因状语从句）

（3）1thinkIcanalsomakesomevideosonlinesothatmoreandmorepeopleareabletoknowaboutit.（省略that

的宾语从句和sothat引导的目的状语从句）

8.例文

Everyonemaylookforwardtobeingbetter.Ialsotrymybesttofacechallengesinmylife.Threemonths

ago,Iwasnotgoodatrunningandfeltsad.Tochangemyself,firstly,IaskedmyPEteacherforhelp.Hetoldme

somerunningskills.ThenIran5kmeveryeveningtopracticethem.SometimesIfeltsotired,butItoldmyself

“wherethereisawill,thereisaway”.Dayafterday,Iimprovedmyspeedofrunning.Finally,Igotaperfectscore

intherunningracelastweek.

Fromthisexperience,Ilearnedthatifyoutryhard,youwillimproveyourselfandbecomebetterandbetter.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；

③提示：要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇

和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。

［写作步骤］

第一步，介绍为了成就更好的自己，做过什么；

第二步，阐述从中学到了什么。

［亮点词汇］

①tryone飞best尽某人最大努力

②begoodat擅长

③asksb.forhelp向某人寻求帮助

©wherethereisawill,thereisaway有志者事竟成

［高分句型］

©SometimesIfeltsotired,butItoldmyself"wherethereisawill,thereisaway”.（名言警句）

②Fromthisexperience,Ilearnedthatifyoutryhard,youwillimproveyourselfandbecomebetterandbetter,（if

条件状语从句）

9.例文

Lastyear,Ialwaysfailedtherunningtests.Inordertochangethesituation,Imadearunningplanand

carrieditouteveryday.Amonthlater,althoughIranfasterthanbefore,Istillcouldn,tpasstherunningtest.

However,Ididn'twanttogiveup.IaskedmyP.E.teacherforhelp,andthenheinvitedmetojoininthesports

club.Ikeptpracticingandmadealotofprogress.Lastmonth,Ipassedtherunningtestsuccessfully.Tmproudof

myself.Myexperiencemakesmerealizethatpersistencecanbringusconfidenceandsuccess.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：以一般过去时为主；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。

［写作步骤］

第一步，介绍自己遇到的问题；

第二步，介绍如何克服的问题；

第三步，介绍从中实现了什么。

［亮点词汇］

①Inorderto为了

②carryout实施

③beproudof以...为骄傲

［高分句型］

①Myexperiencemakesmerealizethatpersistencecanbringusconfidenceandsuccess.（宾语从句）

②Amonthlater,althoughIranfasterthanbefore,Ist