专题：书面表达 六年级英语下册期末复习考点培优专项鲁教版（五四学制）（含答案解析）

六年级英语下册期末复习专项鲁教版（五四学制）专题书面表达学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________1．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom对中国饮食文化很感兴趣，请你写一封邮件向他介绍中国的一日三餐。要点如下：1.早餐通常有粥、包子、油条等，简单且营养丰富；2.午餐较为丰盛，有米饭、炒菜、汤等，一家人或同事们常一起用餐；3.晚餐相对清淡，可能是面条、饺子或者一些小菜。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假设你是李华，学校食堂准备做下学期的采购计划并拟定三餐食谱，提前向全体学生征集意见。请根据以下要点提示，结合自己的实际情况，写一篇70词左右的意见征集稿交给班级生活委员，供学校统计和采购。写作要点：1.说明你最喜欢的食物和水果（一种或多种），并简要说明原因；2.介绍三餐最喜欢的食物和水果及理由；3.介绍你不喜欢的食物和水果。DearClassCommitteeMember,I’dliketosharemythoughtsoftheupcomingsemester’scafeteriaprocurementplan.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua3．随着网购的发展，团购又渐渐成为人们购物的新趋势。但是它给人们的生活带来方便实惠的同时，也给人们带来了很多的烦恼。请你以“BuyinginGroups”为题写一篇文章，谈谈你的看法。内容包括：1.你对团购的看法；2.赞成或不赞成的原因(3点)；3.呼吁人们注意团购安全。要求：1.不得出现真实的人名和学校名字；2.语句连贯，词数70左右。BuyinginGroups________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”。为了让运动更加深入人心,你校英语角组织了“运动与健康”活动,并以“Let’sDoExerciseTogether”为题,向广大中学生征文。请你写一篇60词左右的短文投稿。Let’sDoExerciseTogetherIt’sveryimportantforustodoexercise._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假设你是陈军，你的生日是下周六(10月22日)，请你给你们班来自美国的交换生Mike写一封邀请函，邀请他来参加你的生日聚会。要点：1.时间：下午5点。2.地点：家里。3.活动：很多朋友会来吃美食、玩游戏、看电视。要求：不少于60词。参考词汇：birthdayparty生日聚会；delicious美味的________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．不同的人有不同的生活习惯。请根据表格中的信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍Bill和Tina的生活习惯。NameBillTinaExercise一周两次每天Goonline每天一周两次或三次Eatjunkfood经常几乎不WatchTVfor2hours几乎每天每周一次写作要求：(1)短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；(2)词数：70词左右；(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假如你是Tom，你们学校下周英语角的主题是“比较运动习惯”，请你用英语准备一篇60词左右的小短文，介绍并比较你和好朋友Jack在锻炼身体方面的异同点。要求：1.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；2.词数60左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Goodmorning,everyone.I’mTomfromClassFour,GradeSix.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．请根据以下表格内容，写一篇关于你和你的朋友如何保持健康的短文。NameSport/ExerciseHowOftenYouRunningEverydayYourfriendSwimmingTwiceaweek要求：1.包含表格中的所有信息；2.语言通顺，逻辑清晰；3.不少于50词。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．请根据以下提示，写一篇关于你和你的家人饮食喜好的短文。提示：1.介绍你的家庭成员。2.分别描述他们喜欢和不喜欢的食物。3.谈谈你自己的饮食喜好。要求：1.语句通顺，逻辑清晰。2.不少于60词。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom想了解你保持健康的方式，请你根据以下提示给他写一封邮件。提示：1.你喜欢的运动（如跑步、游泳等）及运动的频率；2.你的饮食习惯（如多吃蔬菜、少吃垃圾食品等）；3.你的作息时间（如早睡早起等）。要求：1.邮件内容须包含以上提示要点，可适当发挥；2.80词左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．假设你是李华，请根据以下提示，写一篇关于自己饮食习惯的短文。1.你的好习惯：每天吃早餐，喜欢吃水果和蔬菜。2.你的坏习惯：有时候吃太多垃圾食品，不喜欢喝水。3.你打算如何改善饮食习惯：少吃垃圾食品，每天多喝水。要求：1.字数不少于60词。2.语句通顺，语法正确。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．假设你是Lisa，今年13岁，是建华中学一名七年级的学生，请以“MyDailyLife”为题写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍你的日常生活及感受。要求：1.语意通顺，语法正确；2.词数70左右；3.文中不能出现除“Lisa”和“建华中学”以外的其他人名、校名和地名。MyDailyLife________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13．本单元的话题是“谈论日常活动”。“介绍自己、家人或朋友的日常活动安排”是考试中的常见话题，该话题常见的命题形式有：介绍自己某一天的生活；介绍家人、老师或朋友的日常活动；介绍校内外活动安排等。典型例题（2024·河南开封通许期末）请以“MyHappySaturday”为题写一篇短文，就你在这一天的生活和活动内容进行描述。比如：什么时候起床？早餐吃什么？活动内容是什么？……写作要求：1.参考所给提示，可适当发挥；2.条理清晰，语句通顺；3.词数80左右。MyHappySaturday________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14．假如你是中学生李华，以下是你每周三的日常安排。请你根据表格提示用英语写一篇短文介绍一下。TimeActivity6:30a.m.getup7:50a.m.schoolbegins12:10p.m.havelunch6:30p.m.havedinner7:00p.m.domyhomework9:00p.m.gotobed写作要求：1.要点齐全，可适当发挥；2.60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。MynameisLiHua._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________15．假定你是大明，你打算给你的美国笔友Jacob写一封电子邮件，介绍一下在中国你是如何过生日的。内容包括：1.你庆祝生日的习惯；2.你庆祝生日的活动安排（时间、地点、人物）；3.你过生日的感受。注意：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJacob,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Daming16．假如你叫玛丽(Mary)，请你根据思维导图提示的内容，向你的朋友介绍一下怎样庆祝你的生日。要求：1.短文应包括思维导图中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；2.内容充实，可适当发挥；3.不少于60词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。I’mMary.Letmetellyouhowtocelebratemybirthday._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________17．假如你是来自加拿大的肖恩(Shawn)，作为交换生来到了新的班级。现在请你根据下面的英文提示向你的老师和新同学简单介绍一下自己的情况。提示：1.Howoldareyou?2.Whenisyourbirthday?3.Whomdoyoucelebrateyourbirthdaywith?4.Howdoyoucelebrateyourbirthday?要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯，语法正确；2.包含所给提示，并可适当发挥；3.不少于60词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。Hello,boysandgirls!MynameisShawn.I’mfromCanada._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwanttobefriendswithyou.That’sall.Thankyouverymuch!18．假如你是Mike，今天是你的14岁生日。你与家人和朋友一起享用了丰盛的生日午餐并进行了其他有意义的活动。请你根据提示写一篇不少于60词的英语短文，介绍一下你的生日概况。提示:1.Whatarethefoodanddrinksforthebirthdaylunch?2.Whatdoyougetonyourbirthday?3.Whatdoyoudoafterlunchonyourbirthday?参考词汇：cook烹饪,birthdaycake生日蛋糕书写区域Goodwritingmakesyourarticlebetter.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________19．运动使人快乐和健康，每个人都有喜欢的运动。请以“MyFavoriteSport”为题，写一篇短文，具体介绍你最喜欢的运动项目、原因、活动频率、收获及打算。提示词：sportsgocycling,playsoccer,exerciseinthegym...reasonsmakesb.strong,keephealthy,begoodfor...,agoodwayto...howoftenonce,twice,threetimes,everyday,onweekends...resultsandplanscheerup,feelrelaxed...begoingto...inthefuture,whenIgrowup,dream...要求：1.字迹工整，书写规范；2.文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校、班级的名称；3.80-120词。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________20．运动对我们的生活、学习以及身体健康有着重要的意义。假如你是李明，请给你的美国朋友迈克(Mike)写一封电子邮件，告诉他你对运动的看法。提示：1.What’syourfavouritesport?2.Whatsportdoyouusuallydo?3.Whatdosportsbringyou?要求：1.短文须包含提示内容，可适当发挥；2.词数70个左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案及试题解析1．范文：DearTom,I’mgladtohearthatyouareinterestedinChinesefoodculture.Now,I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutourthreemealsaday.Forbreakfast,weusuallyhaveporridge,steamedbunsandfrieddoughsticks.Theyaresimplebutfullofnutrition,whichcangiveusenoughenergytostartanewday.Lunchismoresubstantial.Weoftenhaverice,stir-frieddishesandsoup.It’satimeforfamilymembersorcolleaguestohaveamealtogether,sharingstoriesandfeelings.Dinnerisrelativelylight.Wemayhavenoodles,dumplingsorsomesidedishes.Ithelpsusdigesteasilybeforegoingtobed.IhopeyoucancometoChinasomedayandtasteourdeliciousfood.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【解析】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一封电子邮件；②时态：时态以一般现在时态为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，无语法和拼写错误。[写作步骤]第一步：开门见山，回应朋友兴趣，明确介绍目标；第二步：具体阐述三餐特点：早餐（简单营养）、午餐（丰盛且社交性强）、晚餐（清淡易消化）；第三步：书写结语，邀请对方来华体验。[亮点词汇]①begladtodosth.很高兴做某事②beinterestedin对……感兴趣③befullof充满④lookforwardto期待、盼望[高分句型]①Theyaresimplebutfullofnutrition,whichcangiveusenoughenergytostartanewday.（定语从句）②IhopeyoucancometoChinasomedayandtasteourdeliciousfood.（宾语从句）2．范文:DearClassCommitteeMember,I’dliketosharemythoughtsoftheupcomingsemester’scafeteriaprocurementplan.Myfavoritefoodispasta,whichisnotonlydeliciousbutalsogivesmeenergyformystudies.Asforfruits,Iloveapplesfortheirtasteandnutritionalvalue.Forbreakfast,Isuggestoatmealandyogurt,whicharehealthy.Forlunchanddinner,pastadisheswithasideofapplesliceswouldbefantastic.Thesemealsareappealing.However,I’mnotafanofspicyfood,suchaschilipeppers.Idon’tlikeoranges,either.Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestions.Yours,LiHua【解析】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。说明你最喜欢的食物和水果并简要说明原因；介绍三餐最喜欢的食物和水果及理由；介绍你不喜欢的食物和水果。第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愿望。[亮点词汇]①asfor至于、关于②suchas例如……③considermysuggestions考虑我的建议④nutritionalvalue营养价值[高分句型]①Myfavoritefoodispasta,whichisnotonlydeliciousbutalsogivesmeenergyformystudies.(notonly...butalso结构)②Forbreakfast,Isuggestoatmealandyogurt,whicharehealthy.(定语从句)3．例文BuyinginGroupsBuyingingroupsbecomespopular.Ithinkit’sagoodideatobuythingsingroups.First,thepriceismuchlower.Second,itismoreconvenient.Forexample,youjustneedtoclickandwait.Youdon’tneedtogotothestore.Inaddition,peoplecanhaveaquicklookatdifferentproductseasilythroughtheInternetandbuytheirfavouritethings.Buttherearealsosomeproblemsingroupbuying.Sowemustcareaboutthesafetywhenwebuythingsingroups.【解析】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，围绕“团购”这一现象发表看法。②时态：主要使用一般现在时，描述团购的现状、优缺点等情况。③提示：写作需涵盖对团购的看法、赞成或不赞成的3点原因，以及呼吁注意团购安全，不能遗漏要点，可适当补充细节使内容更丰富。[写作步骤]第一步：表明写作意图，开篇点明团购流行的现状，引出自己对团购的看法。第二步：具体阐述写作内容，从价格优势、便利性及商品选择进行详细描述。第三步：书写结语，指出团购存在问题，呼吁人们注意团购安全。[亮点词汇]①inaddition此外②careabout关心；注意[高分句型]①Buyingingroupsbecomespopular.(动名词作主语)②Ithinkit’sagoodideatobuythingsingroups.(it’s+名词+todosth.句型，it作形式主语)4．例文:Let’sDoExerciseTogetherIt’sveryimportantforustodoexercise.Doingexercisecanhelpuskeephealthy.Itcanalsohelpusmakemorefriends.What’smore,itishelpfultoourstudy.Itisgoodforustogotoschoolonfootorbybike.InPEclasses,wecandodifferentkindsofexercise,suchasrunning,jumping,playingbasketballandsoon.Onweekends,wecangoswimmingwithourfriends.Also,wecantaketripsduringtheholidays.Let’sdoexerciseandlivehappilytogether!【解析】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点需围绕运动的重要性展开，并适当添加细节，如运动的好处、建议等，以突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明运动的重要性，为后文详细阐述做铺垫；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。可以进一步说明运动对健康的具体益处，如增强体质、预防疾病等，并给出一些具体的运动建议，如选择喜欢的运动项目、坚持运动等；第三步，书写结语。呼吁大家共同参与运动作为结尾。[亮点词汇]①beimportantfor对……重要②keephealthy保持健康③makefriends交朋友④What’smore此外[高分句型]①Doingexercisecanhelpuskeephealthy.(动名词短语作主语)②Itisgoodforustogotoschoolonfootorbybike.(动词不定式作真正主语，it作形式主语)③InPEclasses,wecandodifferentkindsofexercise,suchasrunning,jumping,playingbasketballandsoon.(suchas举例说明)5．例文DearMike,I’m13yearsold.MybirthdayisonOctober22nd.It’snextSaturday.Iwillhaveabirthdaypartyatmyhomethatday.Wouldyouliketocometomybirthdayparty?Thebirthdaypartywillstartat5:00intheafternoon.Manyofmyfriendswillcometotheparty.Wecaneatdeliciousfood,playgamesandwatchTV.Ireallywantyoutocome.Yours,ChenJun【解析】总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。[写作步骤]第一步、介绍自己的年龄，生日日期；第二步、介绍生日聚会的时间、地点及活动；第三步、书写结语。[亮点词汇]①haveabirthdayparty生日宴会②cometo来③playgames玩游戏[高分句型]Ireallywantyoutocome.(动词不定式作宾补)6．例文：BillandTinaaregoodfriends.Buttheyhavedifferentlivinghabits.Billexercisestwiceaweek.Hegoesonlineeveryday.Andheofteneatsjunkfood.HewatchesTVfortwohoursalmosteveryday.However,Tinaisdifferent.Sheexerciseseveryday.Andshegoesonlinetwoorthreetimesaweek.Althoughshelikesjunkfood,shehardlyevereatsit.AndsheonlywatchesTVfortwohoursonceaweek.IthinkTina’slivinghabitsarehealthyandBillshouldexercisemoreandeatlessjunkfood.【解析】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已明确给出，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，同时可适当添加细节来丰富文章内容，使对比更加鲜明。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题。简短地提及“不同的人有不同的生活习惯”这一主题，以此作为文章的开头；第二步，具体阐述两人的生活习惯，分别介绍Bill和Tina在锻炼、上网、吃垃圾食品以及看电视方面的习惯，对比他们在这些方面的不同；第三步，总结或反思。[亮点词汇]①differentlivinghabits不同的生活习惯②twiceaweek一周两次③hardlyever几乎从不[高分句型]①Althoughshelikesjunkfood,shehardlyevereatsit.(Although引导的让步状语从句)④IthinkTina’slivinghabitsarehealthyandBillshouldexercisemoreandeatlessjunkfood.(宾语从句)7．例文：Goodmorning,everyone.I’mTomfromClassFour,GradeSix.Jackismygoodfriend.Wehavealotofgoodexercisehabits.Myfavouritesportisrunningalongtheparkfivetimesaweek.Ithinkit’sgoodexerciseforme.However,Jackthinksit’sagoodwaytorelaxbydoingsit-upsonweekdays.Also,weoftenplaytennistogetheratweekends,andsometimesweplaydoubles.Weenjoythesesportsfordifferentreasons.Itakeexerciseforfunandpleasure.However,Jackdoessportforhealth.Heisstrongerthanme.Goodhabitsmakeuskeepfitallthetimeandhelpuslivehappily.Everyonecanhaveagoodexercisehabit.Itneedsustokeepondoingitfromtimetotime.【解析】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已部分给出，考生需根据题目要求，介绍并比较自己和好朋友Jack在锻炼身体方面的异同点，注意条理清晰，并控制在60词左右。[写作步骤]第一步，简要开场并引出主题。第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“相似之处”和“不同之处”两个方面进行比较；第三步，简短总结或引发思考。[亮点词汇]①alotof许多②goodexercisehabits良好的运动习惯③keepfit保持健康[高分句型]①Myfavouritesportisrunningalongtheparkfivetimesaweek.(动名词作表语)②Ithinkit’sgoodexerciseforme.(宾语从句)8．例文Healthisveryimportantforus.Ihaveagoodwaytokeephealthy.IlikerunningandIruneveryday.Runningmakesmefeelenergeticandkeepsmeingoodshape.Myfriendalsohashisownwaytokeephealthy.Heprefersswimmingandgoesswimmingtwiceaweek.Swimmingisagreatexerciseforhim,whichhelpshimstayfitandstrong.Inaword,bothrunningandswimmingaregoodwaystokeephealthy.Weshouldchoosethesportwelikeandkeepdoingit.【解析】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。②时态：一般现在时。③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点,适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开门见山，直接阐述健康对我们很重要并介绍我保持健康的方式。第二步，阐述我的朋友保持健康的方式。第三步，书写结语并表示可以选择适合自己的锻炼方式来保持健康。[亮点词汇]①keephealthy保持健康②makesb.dosth.让某人做某事③preferdoingsth.更喜欢做某事[高分句型]①Swimmingisagreatexerciseforhim,whichhelpshimstayfitandstrong.(which引导定语从句)②Inaword,bothrunningandswimmingaregoodwaystokeephealthy.(both...and...表并列)9．例文Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.Theyaremyfather,mymotherandI.Myfatherlikesfishandbeef,buthedoesn’tlikevegetables.Mymotherlikesvegetablesandfruits,butshedoesn’tlikemeat.Ilikehamburgersandicecreambecausetheyaredelicious.ButIknowtheyarenothealthy.SoIalsolikefruitsandvegetables.【解析】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：应使用“一般现在时”；③提示：注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍家庭成员；第二步，介绍家人喜欢和不喜欢的食物；第三步，介绍自己的饮食喜好。[亮点词汇]①likesth喜欢某物②delicious美味的[高分句型]①Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.（therebe句型）②Ilikehamburgersandicecreambecausetheyaredelicious.（because引导的原因状语从句）10．例文DearTom,Howareyou?I’mverygladtotellyouhowIkeepfit.Ilikerunningandswimming.Irunthreetimesaweekandswimtwiceaweek.Ithinktheyaregoodformyhealth.Ialsohaveagoodeatinghabit.Ieatalotofvegetablesandfruit.Iseldomeatjunkfood.Igotobedearlyandgetupearlyeveryday.Itisimportanttohavethesegoodhabits.Whataboutyou?Howdoyoukeepfit?Pleaseshareyourgoodhabitswithme.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【解析】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件作文。

②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”。

③提示：不可遗漏写作要点，要介绍自己保持健康的方式，并适当补充，使文章内容充实，行文应使用第一人称。

[写作步骤]

第一步，点题，表明自己讲分享如何保持健康；

第二步，详细介绍自己运动、饮食和作息等信息；

第三步，收尾，询问对方如何保持健康。

[亮点词汇]

①threetimesaweek一周三次②begoodfor对……有好处

③alotof很多[高分句型]

①Ithinktheyaregoodformyhealth.（宾语从句）

②Itisimportanttohavethesegoodhabits.（it作形式主语）11．例文I’mLiHua.Ihavesomegoodeatinghabits.Ihavebreakfasteveryday.Ialsolikeeatingfruitsandvegetables.ButIhavesomebadeatinghabits.SometimesIeattoomuchjunkfood.AndIdon’tlikedrinkingwater.Inthefuture,Iwanttoimprovemyeatinghabits.Iwilleatlessjunkfoodanddrinkmorewatereveryday.【解析】［总体分析］①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。②时态：主要用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”。③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点［写作步骤］第一步，表明写作意图。开头介绍自己是李华，引出要讲述自己饮食习惯的话题。第二步，先列举自己饮食方面的优点，再说明存在的不足。第三步，针对上述不足，提出未来改进的具体计划。［亮点词汇］①eatinghabits饮食习惯②breakfast早餐③fruitsandvegetables水果和蔬菜④junkfood垃圾食品⑤drinkwater喝水⑥improve改善⑦less更少的⑧more更多的［高分句型］Iwilleatlessjunkfoodanddrinkmorewatereveryday.（and并列句）12．例文MyDailyLifeI’mLisa.I’mthirteenyearsoldandIstudyinJianhuaMiddleSchool.I’minGradeSeven.Igetupatsixo’