押广州卷第56题 书面表达（解析版）

押广州卷第56题书面表达年份考点真题素材2024年考向预测2023活动和计划安排类介绍“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动的安排2024年广州中考可能会以做法建议类，经历感受类，活动和计划安排类结合社会热点话题、要求学生用掌握的语言来完成写作任务,运用所学词汇、句型、语法等知识构建语篇,检测学生的书面交际能力,考查学生是否具备较强的语言表达能力,充分考查了学生的语言综合运用能力。2022人物、事物介绍类介绍你所设计(design)的绿色图书馆2021经历感受类写一则英文日记,记录一节云体育课。类别一活动和计划安排类(2023广州)你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题(theme)为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动,交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件,向他介绍活动的安排。ThemeHealthyYouandMeTime8:30a.m.-11:30a.m.PlaceSportsCenterActivities…Purpose…注意:1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;2.词数80左右(邮件的开头已给出,不计入词数);3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。DearSam,ThankyouforjoiningusinourvoluntaryworknextSaturday.

Yours,LiHua参考范文DearSam,ThankyouforjoiningusinourvoluntaryworknextSaturday.NowI'dliketotellyousomethingaboutthisactivity.Firstofall,Iwantyoutoknowthatthethemeofthisactivityis“Healthyyouandme”.Thepurposeistoencouragepeopletotakepartinvoluntaryworktoprotecttheenvironment,makingourcityamorebeautifulplacetolivein.OurtaskistocleantheSportsCenter.Wewillsetoutat8:30nextSaturdaymorningandtheworkisexpectedtobefinishedat11:30.I'msureyouwilllikethevoluntaryworkbecauseyoucanmakemanynewfriendsinthisactivity.I'mlookingforwardtomeetingyounextSaturday.Yours,LiHua类别二人物、事物介绍类(2022广州)你校将兴建新图书馆,学校英文报以“MyGreenSchoolLibrary”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿,介绍你所设计(design)的绿色图书馆。注意:1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;2.词数80词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入词数);3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。MyGreenSchoolLibraryIwanttodesignagreenschoollibrary.

参考范文MyGreenSchoolLibraryIwanttodesignagreenschoollibrary.It'sgoingtobelikeabigsilverballwithlotsofwindowstoprovidenaturallightforusreaders.Ontheoutsidewalls,therewillalsobesolarpanelstocollecttheenergyfromthesun.Sowedon'tneedtoworryabouttheelectricity.

Mygreenlibraryisgoingtobeofgreatuse.Sometimesourteacherswilltakeustothelibrarytohaveclasses.Wedon'tneedtotakeourtextbooksbecausetherearealotofe-booksforustouseinthelibrary.Afterschool,wecangotothelibrarytoreadandenjoyourfavouritebooks.Wecansearchforinformationonthecomputerinsideit.Ibelieveeveryonewilllikethishigh-techandcozyplace.类别三经历感受类(2021广州)今天,跳绳世界冠军李华给大家上了一节云体育课。请写一则英文日记,记录这特别的一课。日记需包括以下要点:1.授课者:李华,14岁,红星中学学生;2.上课内容:跳绳讲解和示范等;3.你的收获和感受。注意:1.参考词汇:跳绳(ropeskipping)、冠军(champion);2.词数:80词左右(日记的开头已给出,不计入词数);3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。Monday,May31st

DearDiary,

Today,wehadaspecialonlinePElesson.

参考范文Monday,May31st

DearDiary,

Today,wehadaspecialonlinePElesson.WefeltveryexcitedbecauseaworldropeskippingchampionnamedLiHuataughtusalesson.SheisfromRedStarMiddleSchool.

Duringthislesson,LiHuashowedushowtoskipwellandgaveussomedemonstrations.Herearethetips:First,choosetherightrope.Second,don'tjumptoohighandkeepyourbackstraight.Lastbutnotleast,keeppracticeeveryday.Afterthelesson,IfeltveryexcitedbecauseIlearnedhowtoskiprope.Iwilltrymybesttopracticemorefromnowon.一、题型特点书面表达要求考生运用所学词汇、句型、语法等知识构建语篇,完成写作任务。主要检测考生的书面交际能力,考查考生是否具备较强的语言表达能力,充分考查考生的综合语言运用能力。从近几年的书面表达主要以提示性作文为主,且内容一般与考生的生活贴近,让考生有话可说,考生只需要适当展开合理的想象,把规定的内容用英语表达出来即可。题目中经常要求列举一件生活中的事情,或描述一个自己身边的事例。二、解题技巧1.中考英语高分作文的特点高分作文 三．扬长避短,发挥优势。尽量使用自己熟悉的句式,切忌盲目追求难度较大的复杂句式,同时不要出现中式英语。四．文章结构尽量采用三段式(总—分—总)第一段(开头):简单明了,开门见山,点明写作目的或中心思想,引出下文,戏称“凤头”。第二段(主体):分要点阐述,要求内容翔实具体,具有真材实料,戏称“猪肚”。第三段(结尾):总结提升或呼吁建议,要求简洁,收尾有力,戏称“豹尾”。类别一体验感受类一你参加了劳动实践课程,如手工制作、植物栽培等。请你根据以下图示写一篇英文演讲稿,分享你的一个劳动成果、制作经历和收获。注意:1.词数80—120(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数,请根据提示适当拓展);2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。Hello,everyone.It'smypleasureto

参考范文Hello,everyone.It'smypleasuretostandhereandsharemyexperience.

Lastweek,ourheadteachertookustoanearbyfarmtoplanttrees.Assoonaswearrivedthere,wequicklybeganourwork.Sometriedhardtodigholes,andsomeputtheyoungtreesintotheholescarefully.Andtheotherswerebusywateringthetrees.Weworkedsohardthatwefinishedourworkinadvance.Lookingatthelinesoftheyoungtrees,wefelthappy,forgettingourtiredness.Ithinkitisnecessaryforschoolstosetuplaboreducationcourses,becausetheycanimproveourindependence.Labormakesushealthyandconfident.Solet'stakeanactivepartinlaborwork.二俗话说:“不劳动,无以立。”劳动既是中华民族的传统美德,也是我们自我发展的途径。请你结合自已的经历和看法写一篇短文。内容包括:(1)简单介绍你帮助父母做家务的一次经历;(2)说明劳动给你带来了什么影响;(3)说说你以后参与劳动的计划。作文要求:(1)不能照抄原文,不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。(2)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。AlthoughIambusywithmystudy,Isometimeshelpmyparentswiththehousework.

参考范文AlthoughIambusywithmystudy,Isometimeshelpmyparentswiththehousework.Lastweekend,myparentswereoutforbusiness.AfterIfinishedmyhomework,Idecidedtocleanthehousebymyself.Isweptthefloorandcleanedthetable.Whenmyparentsarrivedhome,theyweresurprisedatwhatIdid.TheypraisedmeandIwassohappy!

Ithinkitishelpfultodohousework.Ontheonehand,Icanlearnsomelifeskills.Ontheotherhand,itmakestherelationshipbetweenmyparentsandmebetter.Thoughitistiringtodoit,Istillenjoyit.SoIwillhelpmyparentswiththehouseworkatleastonehouraweekfromnowon.类别二人物、事物介绍类三假如你是李华,你想向你的外国笔友Tom介绍一位对你影响深远的老师。请根据以下提示,用英语写一封信。注意:1.请围绕所给的提示合理发挥;2.词数80左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);3.不得透露学校、真实姓名及任何个人信息,否则不予评分。DearTom,Throughmylifeinjuniorhighschool,oneofmyteachersplaysaveryimportantrole.

Whatdoyouthinkofmyteacher?Howaboutyours?Yours,LiHua参考范文DearTom,

Throughmylifeinjuniorhighschool,oneofmyteachersplaysaveryimportantrole.SheismyEnglishteacherMissZhao.

MissZhaoisawarm-heartedladywithacharmingsmileonherface.ItisshewhohelpedmemakeprogressinmyEnglish.IrememberthatmyEnglishwasverypoorwhenIenteredmiddleschool.Iwassoworriedandupset.Luckily,sheknewmysituationanddecidedtohelpmelearnEnglish.Withherhelp,myEnglishimprovedalot.ThisisMissZhaowhomadeadeepimpressiononme.Imadeupmymindtobeapersonlikehertocontributetooursociety.Whatdoyouthinkofmyteacher?Howaboutyours?

Yours,LiHua

四城市形象是一个城市文化的外显。假如你是李明，你的家乡正在进行主题为“Thehometown,theculture”的英文演讲比赛，请你写一篇英文演讲稿。内容包括：1.简要介绍家乡；2.以亲身经历说说家乡的两种传统文化形式，如食物、风俗或名胜古迹等；3.号召大家共同保护家乡本土传统文化。注意：1.词数：100左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Ladiesandgentlemen,it’smypleasuretotalkaboutthecultureinmyhometowntoday.

参考范文Ladiesandgentlemen,it’smypleasuretotalkaboutthecultureinmyhometowntoday.Qinzhouismyhometown.ItisinthesouthofGuangxi.It’sasmallcitybutIthinkthiscityisoneofthemostbeautifulcitiesintheworld.IthaslotsofculturalsymbolssuchasitsseafoodandCantoneseOpera.Myfatherisafisherman.WhenIwasyoung,Ioftenwentfishingwithhiminthesea.Theseafoodwasfreshanddelicious.Mymothersaideatingseafoodcouldmakemecleverer.MygrandparentslovewatchingtheCantoneseOperashowsandtheyliketosingwiththeirfriendsinthepark.AlthoughIcan’tunderstandwhattheysing,Ireallylikethebeautifulmusic.Thetraditionalculturenotonlyshowspeople’swaysoflifebutalsothelovefortheirhometown.Let’stakeactionstoprotectthecultureinourhometowns.That’sall.Thankyouforyourlistening.【解析】【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意内容全面，表述完整，可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，承接开头，简要介绍家乡；第二步，介绍家乡的传统文化形式；第三步，号召大家共同保护家乡本土传统文化；第四步，书写结语，感谢大家的聆听。[亮点词汇]①culturalsymbols文化象征②gofishing去钓鱼③liketodosth喜欢做某事④suchas例如[高分句型]①WhenIwasyoung,Ioftenwentfishingwithhiminthesea.（when引导时间状语从句）②AlthoughIcan’tunderstandwhattheysing,Ireallylikethebeautifulmusic.（Although引导让步状语从句）③Mymothersaideatingseafoodcouldmakemecleverer.（省略that的宾语从句）五假如你是李平，英国交换生Robin即将来你的学校学习，他对你校的拓展课程（extendedcourses）很感兴趣，请从以下或其它课程中推荐一种，结合自身学习经历，说明推荐理由，并向他介绍该课程的相关信息。要求：1.文中需包含所给问题的相关信息，并可作适当想象和发挥；2.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、班级和校名；3.词数100词左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。DearRobin,I’mgladtohearthatyouarecomingtoourschoolandinterestedinourextendedcourses.

Yours,LiPing参考范文DearRobin,I’mgladtohearthatyouarecomingtoourschoolandinterestedinourextendedcourses.OurextendedcoursesincludeTeaArt,Etiquette,Basketball,ArtsandcraftsandDIY.Eachcourseistaughtbyaprofessionalteacher.ItookpartinTeaArt.Ithinkit’sapartofChineseculture.Theteacherwhotaughtteaartisagreatteaculturelover.ItooklessonsinourschoolhalleveryFridayafternoon.Fromthiscourse,Ilearnedthehistoryanddevelopmentofteaandhowtomakeaperfectcupoftea.Whatimpressedmemostwasthatweworeancientcostumestoperformintheteaartcompetition.IhopeyoutakepartinTeaArt.ItwillshowyouthecharmofChineseteaculture.I’msureyou’llbeinterestedinit.Yours,LiPing【解析】详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题目给出的提示，并适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我校拓展课程的种类”来引出下文中对某一种课程的介绍；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“我选择的课程、授课教师、时间地点以及课程感观”四方面入手，重点介绍我校的拓展课程；第三步，书写结语。希望罗宾也一起参加。[亮点词汇]①takepartin参加②beinterestedinsth对某事感兴趣[高分句型]①Theteacherwhotaughtteaartisagreatteaculturelover.（who引导的定语从句）②Whatimpressedmemostwasthatweworeancientcostumestoperformintheteaartcompetition.（that引导的表语从句）类别三做法建议类六目前我国生态环境保护任务依然艰巨,生态环境部表示,2023年将积极推进美丽中国建设实践,扎实推动绿色低碳高质量发展,深入打好污染防治攻坚战,扎实推进蓝天保卫战、碧水保卫战、净土保卫战,加强固体废物和新污染物治理,深入推进“无废城市”高质量建设,切实维护生态环境安全,加快健全现代环境治理体系。假设你校的英语校报正在征集有关“环保周”的文章,请你根据以下提示写一篇关于环保的英语短文。生态环境现状河水变脏、天空变成灰色、一些地区没有干净的饮用水环保措施1.不往河里乱扔垃圾;2.节约用水;3.……(补充1—2点措施)呼吁携手共建美丽中国要求:1.内容完整,条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确;2.不少于80词(开头已给出,不计入总词数);3.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名;4.标点正确,卷面整洁。参考词汇:垃圾rubbish环保environmentalprotectionAsisknowntoall,theenvironmentaroundusisgettingworseandworse.

参考范文Asisknowntoall,theenvironmentaroundusisgettingworseandworse.Nowtheriverhasbecomedirty,theskyhasturnedgrey,andsomeareasdonothavecleandrinkingwater.Solet'sdosomethingtoprotecttheenvironment.

Don'tthrowrubbishintotheriver.Atthesametime,wealsoneedtosavewater.Itisnecessaryforustogotoschoolbybusoronfoot,becauseitcanhelpreduceairpollution.Besides,recyclingisgoodforourplanetbecauseitchangeswasteintosomethingthatwecanuseagain.Itiseveryone'sresponsibilitytoprotectourenvironment.Let'sbuildabeautifulChinatogether.七假设你是李华，最近你发现了班里有一些不健康的生活习惯，为了呼吁同学们关注自己的健康，你将在“HealthyHabitsAreImportant”的主题班会上发言。请你用英语写一篇发言稿。内容包括：1.你们班同学有哪些不良的生活习惯（饮食、运动、作息等方面）？2.对如何保持健康提出两点建议。3.呼吁培养健康的生活习惯。写作要求：1.条理清晰，意思连贯，词句通顺。2.不能照抄原文，不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。3.词数80个左右，发言稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数内。Goodmorning,everyone.IamLiHua.Iwanttotalkabouthealthyhabits.

参考范文Goodmorning,everyone.IamLiHua.Iwanttotalkabouthealthyhabits.Somestudentsinourclassliketoeatjunkfood,andtheydon’tlikesports.Somestudentsalsoliketostayuplateandplaycomputergames,sotheyoftenwakeuplate,whichalsoleadstothemnotbeingabletolistenattentivelyinclass.Sohowcanwestayhealthy?First,haveagoodeatinghabits.Drinkteaorwaterbeforebreakfast.Eatmorevegetablesandfruits.Second,developgoodlivinghabits.Itisnecessarytogetupearlyandgotobedearly.Keeptheroomclean.Third,dosportseverydaytokeephealthy.Inaddition,itisalsoimportanttokeepagoodmood.Solet’sdevelophealthyhabitstogether.八假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tracy的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她正在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。请你根据所给提示给她写封回信，内容包括：（1）给出你的建议（要选修汉语）；（2）谈谈学习汉语的重要性；（3）介绍至少三种学习汉语的方法。作文要求：（1）不能照抄原文：不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。（2）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。DearTracy,I’msogladtohearfromyou.

Yours,LiHua参考范文DearTracy,I’msogladtohearfromyou.KnowingthatyouhaveaninterestinChinese,I