2025年全国英语等级考试（PETS）四级试卷写作实战与批改建议

2025年全国英语等级考试（PETS）四级试卷写作实战与批改建议考试时间：______分钟总分：______分姓名：______一、写作部分1.请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于150词的短文，内容包含所有要点。最近你所在的学校举办了一次以“环保行动，从我做起”为主题的演讲比赛，请你结合自己的感受，描述比赛的情况，并谈谈你对环保的认识。（1）描述比赛的开场情况，包括时间、地点、参与人员等；（2）介绍比赛的过程，比如选手的演讲内容、评委的点评等；（3）谈谈你对环保的认识，以及你打算如何为环保出一份力。2.假设你是一位高中生，你的学校计划举办一次夏令营活动，你将参加这次活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于200词的短文，介绍你将如何为这次夏令营做好准备。（1）谈谈你对夏令营的理解，以及你参加夏令营的期待；（2）描述你打算如何为这次夏令营做好准备，比如学习、生活、社交等方面的准备；（3）谈谈你对这次夏令营的期望，以及你希望通过这次活动获得什么。二、批改建议1.阅读以下短文，找出其中的错误，并给出修改建议。短文中包含了语法、词汇、句子结构等方面的错误，请你逐一指出，并提出修改意见。Lastweekend,myfamilyandIwenttothecountrysideforatrip.Wewantedtorelaxandenjoythebeautifulnature.Inthemorning,wewentforahikeintheforest.Thetreesweresotallandthebirdsweresingingloudly.Wealsosawsomedeerandrabbits.Intheafternoon,wewenttotheriverandfished.Icaughtabigfish,butmybrotherdidn’tcatchanything.Intheevening,wehadapicnicbythefire.Weatedeliciousfoodandlaughedalot.ItwasagreattripandIreallyenjoyedit.2.请根据以下短文，给出批改建议。短文中包含了语法、词汇、句子结构等方面的错误，请你逐一指出，并提出修改意见。Lastmonth,IwenttoLondonforavacation.Ivisitedmanyfamousplaces,suchastheTowerofLondon,theBritishMuseumandtheBuckinghamPalace.IalsotriedsometraditionalEnglishfood,likefishandchips,teaandcake.IreallylikedthehistoricalbuildingsandthebeautifulgardensinLondon.Ispentalotoftimewalkingandexploringthecity.ItookmanyphotosandIwillneverforgetthistrip.三、写作部分3.请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于200词的短文，内容包含所有要点。你最近遇到了一件让你印象深刻的事情，请你描述这件事情的经过，并谈谈你对这件事的感受。（1）描述这件事情发生的时间、地点、涉及的人物等；（2）详细描述这件事情的经过，包括你当时的心情和想法；（3）谈谈你对这件事的感受，以及这件事对你产生的影响。4.假设你是一位大学生，你将参加一次国际交流项目，前往另一个国家学习一年。请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于250词的短文，介绍你将如何为这次国际交流做准备。（1）谈谈你对国际交流项目的理解，以及你参加这次项目的期待；（2）描述你打算如何为这次国际交流做准备，比如语言学习、文化了解、生活适应等方面的准备；（3）谈谈你对这次国际交流的期望，以及你希望通过这次活动获得什么。四、批改建议5.阅读以下短文，找出其中的错误，并给出修改建议。短文中包含了语法、词汇、句子结构等方面的错误，请你逐一指出，并提出修改意见。Lastyear,ItraveledtoJapanwithmybestfriend.WewantedtoseethecherryblossomsandexperiencetheJapaneseculture.InTokyo,wevisitedmanyfamousplaces,liketheTokyoTower,theImperialPalaceandtheShibuyaCrossing.WealsotriedsomeJapanesefood,suchassushi,ramenandtempura.InKyoto,wesawthebeautifultemplesandgardens.Welovedthetraditionalcultureandthefriendlypeople.ItwasawonderfultripandIwillneverforgetit.6.请根据以下短文，给出批改建议。短文中包含了语法、词汇、句子结构等方面的错误，请你逐一指出，并提出修改意见。Lastweek,Iwenttothebeachwithmyfamily.Itwasasunnydayandtheweatherwasgreat.Weplayedvolleyball,swamintheoceanandbuiltsandcastles.Icollectedsomeseashellsandmadeanecklace.Intheevening,wehadapicnicbythebeach.Weatedeliciousfoodandlistenedtothesoundsofthewaves.ItwasafundayandIreallyenjoyedit.五、写作部分7.请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于200词的短文，内容包含所有要点。你所在的学校即将举办一次文艺汇演，请你结合自己的兴趣，谈谈你打算如何参与这次活动。（1）描述你对这次文艺汇演的理解，以及你对参与这次活动的期待；（2）描述你打算如何参与这次文艺汇演，比如准备节目、练习技能、合作其他同学等；（3）谈谈你对这次文艺汇演的期望，以及你希望通过这次活动获得什么。8.假设你是一位高中生，你将参加一次社会实践活动，前往一个偏远山区的小学支教。请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于250词的短文，介绍你将如何为这次社会实践活动做准备。（1）谈谈你对社会实践活动的理解，以及你参加这次活动的期待；（2）描述你打算如何为这次社会实践活动做准备，比如了解当地情况、准备教学材料、锻炼自己的沟通能力等；（3）谈谈你对这次社会实践活动的期望，以及你希望通过这次活动获得什么。本次试卷答案如下一、写作部分1.答案：Lastweek,ourschoolheldaspeechcompetitionthemed"EnvironmentalActionStartswithMe."Ittookplaceintheschoolauditorium,andmanystudentsparticipated.Thecompetitionstartedat2p.m.Theopeningceremonywascolorful,withstudentsperformingadanceaboutenvironmentalprotection.MyclassmatesandIwereexcitedtowatch.Severalstudentsdeliveredspeeches.Theytalkedabouttheimportanceofrecycling,savingwater,andplantingtrees.Theirspeecheswereinspiring,andtheaudiencewasveryengaged.Aftereachspeech,thejudgesgavecomments,offeringsuggestionsforimprovement.Ilearnedalotfromtheirspeechesandthejudges'feedback.Throughthiscompetition,Irealizedthatprotectingtheenvironmentiseveryone'sresponsibility.Weshouldstartfromsmallactions,likereducingplasticuseandconservingenergy.Iplantoparticipateinmoreenvironmentalactivitiesandencouragemyfriendstojoinme.Thiscompetitionhasdeepenedmyunderstandingofenvironmentalissues,andIamdeterminedtomakeadifference.解析思路：本题要求考生描述一次演讲比赛，并表达对环保的认识。考生需要按照提示，分别描述比赛的开场情况、比赛过程以及对环保的认识。在描述比赛开场情况时，考生需要提到时间、地点、参与人员等基本信息。在描述比赛过程时，考生需要提到选手的演讲内容、评委的点评等。在对环保的认识上，考生需要表达自己的观点，并说明自己打算如何为环保出一份力。在写作过程中，考生需要注意使用正确的语法和词汇，并保持文章的连贯性和逻辑性。2.答案：Iamthrilledtoparticipateinthissummercamp,whichwillbeafantasticopportunitytolearnandgrow.Ihavealwaysbeeninterestedinoutdooractivitiesandculturalexchange,sothiscampalignsperfectlywithmyinterests.Toprepareforthecamp,Iamdoingseveralthings.First,IamstudyingEnglishtoimprovemycommunicationskills,asIknowIwillbeinteractingwithpeoplefromdifferentcountries.Second,Iamlearningaboutthecultureofthecountrywewillbevisitingtoshowrespectandcuriosity.Third,Iampackingmybagscarefully,ensuringIhaveallthenecessaryitems,suchassunscreen,ahat,andcomfortableshoes.Additionally,Iampracticingbasicsurvivalskills,likesettingupatentandpreparingacampfire.Iamveryexcitedaboutthiscampandhopetomakethemostofit.Iwanttomeetnewfriends,learnnewthings,andcreateunforgettablememories.Ibelievethisexperiencewillbeincrediblyvaluableandwillhelpmegrowasaperson.解析思路：本题要求考生描述自己将如何为夏令营做准备。考生需要按照提示，分别描述自己对夏令营的理解和期待、准备的具体措施以及期望通过这次活动获得什么。在描述自己对夏令营的理解和期待时，考生需要表达自己对夏令营的兴趣和期待。在描述准备措施时，考生需要提到语言学习、文化了解、生活适应等方面的准备。在描述期望时，考生需要表达自己希望通过这次活动获得什么。在写作过程中，考生需要注意使用正确的语法和词汇，并保持文章的连贯性和逻辑性。二、批改建议1.答案：Intheshortpassage,thereareseveralerrorsthatneedtobecorrected.First,"Lastweekend"shouldbechangedto"Lastweekend,"asitisacompletesentenceandshouldendwithacomma.Second,"Wewantedtorelaxandenjoythebeautifulnature"shouldbechangedto"Wewantedtorelaxandenjoythebeautifulnature,"asitisacompletesentenceandshouldendwithaperiod.Third,"Inthemorning"shouldbechangedto"Inthemorning,"asitisacompletesentenceandshouldendwithacomma.Fourth,"Thetreesweresotallandthebirdsweresingingloudly"shouldbechangedto"Thetreesweresotall,andthebirdsweresingingloudly,"asitisacompoundsentenceandshouldbeseparatedbyacomma.Fifth,"Wealsosawsomedeerandrabbits"shouldbechangedto"Wealsosawsomedeerandrabbits,"asitisacompletesentenceandshouldendwithaperiod.Sixth,"Intheafternoon"shouldbechangedto"Intheafternoon,"asitisacompletesentenceandshouldendwithacomma.Seventh,"Icaughtabigfish,butmybrotherdidn’tcatchanything"shouldbechangedto"Icaughtabigfish,butmybrotherdidn’tcatchanything,"asitisacompletesentenceandshouldendwithaperiod.Eighth,"Intheevening"shouldbechangedto"Intheevening,"asitisacompletesentenceandshouldendwithacomma.Ninth,"Weatedeliciousfoodandlaughedalot"shouldbechangedto"Weatedeliciousfoodandlaughedalot,"asitisacompletesentenceandshouldendwithaperiod.Tenth,"ItwasagreattripandIreallyenjoyedit"shouldbechangedto"Itwasagreattrip,andIreallyenjoyedit,"asitisacompoundsentenceandshouldbeseparatedbyacomma.修改后的短文：Lastweekend,myfamilyandIwenttothecountrysideforatrip.Wewantedtorelaxandenjoythebeautifulnature.Inthemorning,wewentforahikeintheforest.Thetreesweresotall,andthebirdsweresingingloudly.Wealsosawsomedeerandrabbits.Intheafternoon,wewenttotheriverandfished.Icaughtabigfish,butmybrotherdidn’tcatchanything.Intheevening,wehadapicnicbythefire.Weatedeliciousfoodandlaughedalot.Itwasagreattrip,andIreallyenjoyedit.解析思路：本题要求考生找出短文中的错误并给出修改建议。考生需要仔细阅读短文，找出其中的语法、词汇、句子结构等方面的错误，并提出修改意见。在找出错误时，考生需要注意句子是否完整，是否需要加逗号或句号，以及词汇是否使用正确。在给出修改建议时，考生需要明确指出错误所在，并提出正确的修改方法。通过这样的练习，考生可以提高自己的语法和词汇水平，并学会如何修改自己的文章。2.答案：Intheshortpassage,thereareseveralerrorsthatneedtobecorrected.First,"Lastmonth"shouldbechangedto"Lastmonth,"asitisacompletesentenceandshouldendwithaperiod.Second,"IwenttoLondonforavacation"shouldbechangedto"IwenttoLondonforavacation,"asitisacompletesentenceandshouldendwithaperiod.Third,"Ivisitedmanyfamousplaces,suchastheTowerofLondon,theBritishMuseumandtheBuckinghamPalace"shouldbechangedto"Ivisitedmanyfamousplaces,suchastheTowerofLondon,theBritishMuseum,andtheBuckinghamPalace,"asitisalistandshouldbeseparatedbycommas.Fourth,"IalsotriedsometraditionalEnglishfood,likefishandchips,teaandcake"shouldbechangedto"IalsotriedsometraditionalEnglishfood,likefishandchips,tea,andcake,"asitisalistandshouldbeseparatedbycommas.Fifth,"IreallylikedthehistoricalbuildingsandthebeautifulgardensinLondon"shouldbechangedto"IreallylikedthehistoricalbuildingsandthebeautifulgardensinLondon,"asitisacompletesentenceandshouldendwithaperiod.Sixth,"Ispentalotoftimewalkingandexploringthecity"shouldbechangedto"Ispentalotoftimewalkingandexploringthecity,"asitisacompletesentenceandshouldendwithaperiod.Seventh,"ItookmanyphotosandIwillneverforgetthistrip"shouldbechangedto"Itookmanyphotos,andIwillneverforgetthistrip,"asitisacompoundsentenceandshouldbeseparatedbyacomma.修改后的短文：Lastmonth,IwenttoLondonforavacation.Ivisitedmanyfamousplaces,suchastheTowerofLondon,theBritishMuseum,andtheBuckinghamPalace.IalsotriedsometraditionalEnglishfood,likefishandchips,tea,andcake.IreallylikedthehistoricalbuildingsandthebeautifulgardensinLondon.Ispentalotoftimewalkingandexploringthecity.Itookmanyphotos,andIwillneverforgetthistrip.解析思路：本题要求考生找出短文中的错误并给出修改建议。考生需要仔细阅读短文，找出其中的语法、词汇、句子结构等方面的错误，并提出修改意见。在找出错误时，考生需要注意句子是否完整，是否需要加逗号或句号，以及词汇是否使用正确。在给出修改建议时，考生需要明确指出错误所在，并提出正确的修改方法。通过这样的练习，考生可以提高自己的语法和词汇水平，并学会如何修改自己的文章。三、写作部分3.答案：Lastyear,Iexperiencedamemorableeventthatleftadeepimpressiononme.ItwasarainyafternoonwhenIaccidentallyfoundalostpuppyinthepark.Thepuppywasshiveringandlookingscared.Iimmediatelyfeltasenseofresponsibilityanddecidedtotakecareofit.Itookthepuppyhomeandgaveitfoodandwater.Iwrappeditinawarmblanketandmadeitfeelsafe.Icalledmyfamily,andweallhelpedtotakecareofthepuppy.Wecleanedit,gaveitabath,andplayedwithit.Thepuppygraduallywarmeduptousandstartedtotrustus.Wenamedit"Rainy"becauseitwasfoundonarainyday.Thisexperiencetaughtmetheimportanceofkindnessandcompassion.Itshowedmethatevensmallactsofkindnesscanmakeabigdifferenceinsomeone'slife.Rainyhasbecomeabelovedmemberofourfamily,andwearegratefulfortheopportunitytohelpit.Thiseventhashadalastingimpactonme,andithasmadememorecompassionateandresponsible.解析思路：本题要求考生描述一件让自己印象深刻的事情，并谈谈自己的感受。考生需要按照提示，分别描述事情的经过、当时的心情和想法，以及自己对这件事的感受和影响。在描述事情的经过时，考生需要详细描述事情的起因、经过和结果。在描述当时的心情和想法时，考生需要表达自己的情感和思考。在对这件事的感受和影响上，考生需要表达自己的感悟和收获。在写作过程中，考生需要注意使用正确的语法和词汇，并保持文章的连贯性和逻辑性。4.答案：Nextyear,Iwillhavetheincredibleopportunitytoparticipateinaninternationalexchangeprogram.Iamveryexcitedaboutthischancetostudyabroadforayear.Ihavealwaysbeenfascinatedbydifferentculturesandlanguages,andthisexperiencewillbeadreamcometrue.Toprepareforthisexchangeprogram,Iamdoingseveralthings.First,IamstudyinghardtoimprovemyEnglishskills,asIknowIwillneedtocommunicatewithpeoplefromdifferentcountries.Second,IamlearningaboutthecultureofthecountryIwillbevisiting.Iamreadingbooks,watchingmovies,andresearchingthecustomsandtraditionstoshowrespectandcuriosity.Third,Iampackingmybagscarefully,ensuringIhaveallthenecessaryitems,suchasmedications,atravelguide,andacamera.Additionally,Iampracticingbasicsurvivalskills,likesettingupatentandnavigatingusingamap.Iamveryexcitedaboutthisexchangeprogramandhopetomakethemostofit.Iwanttomeetnewfriends,learnnewthings,andcreateunforgettablememories.Ibelievethisexperiencewillbeincrediblyvaluableandwillhelpmegrowasaperson.Ihopetogainadeeperunderstandingoftheworldanditsdiversecultures.解析思路：本题要求考生描述自己将如何为国际交流项目做准备。考生需要按照提示，分别描述自己对国际交流项目的理解和期待、准备的具体措施以及期望通过这次活动获得什么。在描述自己对国际交流项目的理解和期待时，考生需要表达自己对项目的兴趣和期待。在描述准备措施时，考生需要提到语言学习、文化了解、生活适应等方面的准备。在描述期望时，考生需要表达自己希望通过这次活动获得什么。在写作过程中，考生需要注意使用正确的语法和词汇，并保持文章的连贯性和逻辑性。四、批改建议5.答案：Lastyear,ItraveledtoJapanwithmybestfriend.WewantedtoseethecherryblossomsandexperiencetheJapaneseculture.Thecompetitionstartedat2p.m.Theopeningceremonywascolorful,withstudentsperformingadanceaboutenvironmentalprotection.MyclassmatesandIwereexcitedtowatch.Severalstudentsdeliveredspeeches.Theytalkedabouttheimportanceofrecycling,savingwater,andplantingtrees.Theirspeecheswereinspiring,andtheaudiencewasveryengaged.Aftereachspeech,thejudgesgavecomments,offeringsuggestionsforimprovement.Ilearnedalotfromtheirspeechesandthejudges'feedback.Throughthiscompetition,Irealizedthatprotectingtheenvironmentiseveryone'sresponsibility.Weshouldstartfromsmallactions,likereducingplasticuseandconservingenergy.Iplantoparticipateinmoreenvironmentalactivitiesandencouragemyfriendstojoinme.Thiscompetitionhasdeepenedmyunderstandingofenvironmentalissues,andIamdeterminedtomakeadifference.解析思路：本题要求考生找出短文中的错误并给出修改建议。考生需要仔细阅读短文，找出其中的语法、词汇、句子结构等方面的错误，并提出修改意见。在找出错误时，考生需要注意句子是否完整，是否需要加逗号或句号，以及词汇是否使用正确。在给出修改建议时，考生需要明确指出错误所在，并提出正确的修改方法。通过这样的练习，考生可以提高自己的语法和词汇水平，并学会如何修改自己的文章。6.答案：Lastweek,Iwenttothebeachwithmyfamily.Itwasasunnydayandtheweatherwasgreat.Weplayedvolleyball,swamintheocean,andbuiltsandcastles.Icollectedsomeseashellsandmadeanecklace.Intheevening,wehadapicnicbythebeach.Weatedeliciousfoodandlistenedtothesoundsofthewaves.ItwasafundayandIreallyenjoyedit.解析思路：本题要求考生找出短文中的错误并给出修改建议。考生需要仔细阅读短文，找出其中的语法、词汇、句子结构等方面的错误，并提出修改意见。在找出错误时，考生需要注意句子是否完整，是否需要加逗号或句号，以及词汇是否使用正确。在给出修改建议时，考生需要明确指出错误所在，并提出正确的修改方法。通过这样的练习，考生可以提高自己的语法和词汇水平，并学会如何修改自己的文章。五、写作部分7.答案：Ourschoolisgoingtoholdaculturalperformance,andIamexcitedtoparticipate.Ihavealwaysbeeninterestedinartsandculture,sothisisagreatopportunityformetoshowcasemytalentsandcontributetotheevent.Togetinvolvedintheperformance,Iamplanningtoprepareadanceroutine.Ihavebeenpracticingrigorouslyforweeks,learningnewstepsandchoreography.Iamalsoworkingwithagroupoffriendstocreateabeautifulstagesetandcostumesthatreflecttheculturalthemeoftheperformance.Additionally,Iamcollaboratingwithotherstudentstoensureourperformanceiscohesiveandenjoyablefortheaudience.Iamlookingforwardtothisculturalperformanceandhopetoinspireotherswithmyparticipation.Ibelievethatthroughthisexperience,Iwillnotonlyimprovemyartisticskillsbutalsolearnthevalueofteamwork