2025届高考英语应用文写作训练1 书信类 告知+建议 讲义

2025届高考英语应用文写作训练1书信类告知+建议讲义应用文书信类(告知信+建议信)训练讲评

一书信类应用文格式、考情

书信类应用文首段一般包括开场寒暄，身份信息，背景事件，表达目的，衔接过渡五方面内容。

基于整体逻辑，中间段多采用虚（感受，想法等）实结合的内容构建模式

尾段一般包括重申，感受，互动等内容。

应用文高考趋势

1.注重考查创新思维、分析问题解决问题的能力；

2.内容要求更为具体；

3.中国故事、国际视野、环保意识、体美劳等内容贯穿其中。

写作注意事项

1.注意收信人身份（正式与非正式，语言的得体性）；

2.注意格式特征;

3.审题到位，写全要点

4.句子的流畅性（长句较多，尾重原则；避免单一句式，句句开头都不同；）

二告知信、活动介绍

(一)练后重写告知信给笔友写信，非正式

假定你是李华，为丰富同学们的课外活动，上周你校举行了爱国歌咏比赛(patrioticsongsingingcontest)。请给你的笔友Tom写一封信，分享其中的故事。内容包括:

1．比赛经过（整体+个人）；2．你的感悟（围绕爱国、歌曲、比赛）。

注意：

1．写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearTom,

_____________

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

问题：比赛经过要具体；感悟要契合话题

范文

DearTom,

Lastweek,ourschoolorganizedapatrioticsongsingingcontesttoenrichourextracurricularactivities,anditwastrulyaninspiringevent!

开场寒暄，身份信息，背景事件√，表达目的，衔接过渡（简单评价或总结概括）（总分总结构）

Studentsfromdifferentgradesparticipatedenthusiasticallyinit,singingpatrioticsongsthatcelebratedourcountry'sgloryandhistory.Theatmospherewaselectricaseveryonesangwithpassionandpride.Iperformedasongthatmygrandfatherusedtosing,whichmademefeelconnectedtoourheritage.长句，符合尾重原则；句句开头都不同

比赛经过：参加人员，具体唱了哪首歌，+评价气氛、学生风貌，我做了什么+我的感受

Ilearnthatexpressingpatriotismcantakevariousforms,andmusicisoneofthemostbeautifulwaystodoso.ItisaheartwarmingexperiencethatIwillalwaystreasure.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

或：

Para1:

Iamwritingtosharewithyouapatrioticsongsingingcontestheldbyourschoollastweek,whichistrulyaninspiringevent.开场寒暄，身份信息，背景事件√，表达目的√，衔接过渡（简单评价）（总分总结构）√

你的作品1

DearTom,

How'severythinggoingToenrichourafter-classactivities,ourschoolheldapatrioticsongsingingcontestlastweek.I'dliketosharesomedetailswithyou.衔接过渡，好！

Tobeginwithourheadmasterleftgavealectureconcerningthesignificanceoflovingcountry.Then,participatersparticipantswereinvitedtogivetheirperformancesandIengagedinitactively.Intheend.Iwonthesilvermedal.中间段要具体；因篇幅有限，校长讲话可以不写

Afterthiscontest，Iwasfullofexcitementandgratitude.Onlyourcountrybloomswillweliveabetterlife.IfeelsofortunatetobeborninChina.Only+状语位于句首才用倒装

I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.尾段有些突兀

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

帮你改进1-1（语言打磨）

Lastweek,ourschoolheldapatrioticsongsingingcontesttoenrichourafter-schoolactivities.I’dliketoshareitwithyou.（删掉寒暄部分，语言更流畅）

Itstartedwithalecturefromourheadmasterabouttheimportanceofpatriotism.Then,weallgottoperform.Iparticipatedandhadagreattime!Ievenwonasilvermedal!中间段内容偏少，需要进一步增加具体内容

I'msoexcitedandgrateful.Itrulybelievethatonlywithathrivingcountrycanwehaveabetterlife.IfeelincrediblyluckytobeChinese.

Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou!

帮你改进1-2（内容+语言优化）

Lastweek,ourschoolheldapatrioticsongsingingcontesttoenrichourafter-schoolactivities.Ican’twaittoshareitwithyou!

Manyclassesparticipated,eachperformingadifferentpatrioticsong.Thecompetitionwasfierce!Ourclasssang"MyMotherland,"andalthoughwedidn'twin,wegaveitourall.Seeingeveryonesoenthusiasticandsingingwithsuchpassionreallymovedme.Itmademefeelastrongsenseofnationalprideandtheimportanceoflovingourcountry.

ItissuchameaningfulandunforgettableexperiencethatIameagerformore.

尾段或：

WhatkindofextracurricularactivitiesarepopularatyourschoolLookingforwardtohearingfromyou!（合理使用Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou!）

你的作品2

DearTom,

I'mexcitedtotellyoumystorywhichhappened定语从句稍显啰嗦lastweek.It'saboutmyexperiencesandfeelingsfromapatrioticsongsingingcontest.句子.不够流畅

Whenhearingthenewsofthiscontest,Iactivelyparticipatedinit.IpracticedmysongsagainandagainandIbelievedIcouldmakeit.赛前篇幅过长Thenthebigdayfinallycame,despitealittlesenseofembarrassment,IfinishedmysongasIexpected.FinallyIhadwonthefirstprizewithbigapplause.比赛经过要具体

Fromthisexperience,Ihavelearntthat"Thereisawilling,thereissuccess.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway."感受与活动主题不契合

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

帮你改进2（内容+语言优化）

Iamwritingtosharewithyouthepatrioticsongsingingcontestheldinourschoollastweek,whichwasreallyinspiring.

Asarranged,eachclasstookthestageandsangapatrioticsong.Class3sang"OdetotheMotherland"enthusiasticallyandClass5'sperformanceof"TheEastisRed"wasparticularlymoving.Myclasschose"MyMotherland"andweevenwonthefirstprize!Singingtogether,feelingthepowerofthelyrics,Iwasoverwhelmedwithasenseofnationalpride.

Thecontestwasn'tjustaboutwinning;itwasaboutsharingourloveforourcountrythroughmusic.Itwasatrulyunforgettableexperience.

（二）高考题训练2024新课标卷告知信

假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：

（1）你完成的作品；（2）你的感想（围绕公园美术课）。

注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

DearChris,

I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.

___________________

Yours,

LiHua

难点：对美术作品的具体阐述；基于公园美术课的合理的感想

Para1：首段衔接过渡：

Youcannotimaginehowmeaningfulandinterestingitwas!

Itsdetailsareasfollows.代词衔接

Itwasanamazingexperiencethatleftadeepimpressiononme.

Itwasfilledwithcreativityandjoy.

Whathappenedtheretrulybroadenedmyhorizons.

Thecombinationofartandnaturewassimplyperfect.

Para2:内容构建：

你完成的作品：（美术课任务可以写但不要过多，）你的作品内容，（创作过程/灵感，效果如何）

你的感受（公园上美术课的感受）亲近自然，艺术灵感

范文片段1：Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Icreatedawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.Theentireexperiencewasincrediblyrefreshing.Beingsurroundedbynaturenotonlysparkedmycreativitybutalsoofferedamuch-neededbreakfromtheusualhustleandbustleofschoollife.IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.

任务——作品内容——感受

范文片段2：Uponarrivingattheparkat8o’clock,webeganpaintingthelandscapethere.Inspiredbythebeautyofthepark,Isoonhadagreatidea.Ipaintedtheparkscenes:thebrightsun,thegreengrass,thechildrenplayfullychasingafteroneanotherandthepeopleplayingchessintheshade,allofwhichmadeupapeacefulandhappypicture.Thisoutdoorartclasswasreallyunforgettable.Notonlydidwestudentsgetsomehands-onexperiencefromtheclass,butwealsodevelopedourinterestinbothartandnature!

时间顺序

虚实结合：到达，任务，开始，我的创意+灵感来源，我的画+整体印象；感受总——分

Para3:重申感受、期待、互动

Inaword,itwasnotjustanartclass;itwasamomentofconnectionwithnaturethatItrulycherished.

Theparkartclasswasincrediblyrefreshingandinspiring.I'meagerformore.

你的作品3

DearChris,

I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.少衔接过渡

Myworkillustratesacornerofthepark,inwhichstandsathintreecoveredwiththicksnow.Ifoundaredblossomonitsbranch.Astonished,Irecordeditwithmypaintbrush.Iwasinspiredbythistreeandmovedbyitsmight,whichtoldmethemeaningoflifeandthecouragewhenfacingdifficulties.Itwasthatspecialartclassthatgavemethechancetocomeacrosssuchaspecialtree.内容逻辑：先写灵感，再写画了什么

Inmypointofview,thiskindofclassesisessentialforourkeepingclosedtonatureandlearningfromnature.forustobeclosertonatureandgetsomeinspirationfromit.

DoyouagreewithmeLookingforwardtoyourreply.

修改意见：三段式比较好

帮你改进3

I’mwritingtosharetheexperienceofanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.Itwastrulyunforgettable!

Myworkcapturesaslendertree,coveredwithaheavycoatofsnow,standsuprightinthecold.Againsttheicywhite,avibrantredflowerbloomsbravelyononeofitsbranches,symbolizinglife'sstrengthinadversity.Theencounterwithnaturewastrulyinspiring,providingauniqueexperienceunattainableintheclassroom.

Notonlydidtheartclassstimulatemycreativity,butitalsodeepenedmybondwiththenaturalworld.Iameagerformoreofsuchenrichingexperiences.

（三）模拟题训练

假定你是李华，最近你们到一个外国游客较多的旅游景点上了一堂口语实践课。请你用英文给澳大利亚朋友Luke写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：

上课的过程；2．你的感想。

注意：1．写作词数应为80个左右：2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

DearLuke,

I’mwritingtosharewithyouaspecialspokenEnglishclassIhadtheotherday.

_________

Yours,

LiHua

范文

I’mwritingtosharewithyouaspecialspokenEnglishclassIhadtheotherday.Itwasanamazingexperiencethatleftadeepimpressiononme./Itwasheldatapopulartouristspotfrequentedbymanyforeignvisitors.

OurteacherorganizedinteractiveactivitieswherewehadtocommunicatewithtouristsinEnglishtopracticeourspeakingskills.Weweredividedintosmallgroupsandtaskedwithintroducinglocalattractionstothetourists.上课过程：任务——时间顺序

Theclasswasbothchallengingandexciting.Ifeltabitnervousatfirst,butasIstartedinteractingwiththetourists,myconfidencegrew.Itwasfascinatingtoseehowpeoplefromdifferentculturesrespondedtoourpresentations.Ilearnedalotabouteffectivecommunicationandtheimportanceofbeingadaptableinlanguageuse.感想：评价，感受，收获

Overall,theexperiencewasincrediblyenriching.ItnotonlyimprovedmyEnglishbutalsobroadenedmyperspectiveonculturalexchange.重申感受、期待、互动

范文2

DearLuke,

I’mwritingtoshareanextraordinaryspokenEnglishclasswehadrecently.

OurteacherledtheentireclasstoafamoustouristattractionfrequentedbyvisitorsfromWesterncountries.Wehadtheuniqueopportunitytoengageinconversationswithnativespeakers.Allofuswereactivatedbytheauthenticenvironment,eagertotalktotheforeigners.EventhemosttimidboymanagedtohaveahappyconversationwithatouristfromWellington.

Thisimmersiveexperiencewasincrediblybeneficial,asitsignificantlyboostedmyconfidenceandsharpenedmylanguageskills.IbelievethisexperiencewillhavealastingpositiveimpactonmyEnglishproficiency.

或：

Interactingwiththeminareal-worldsettingwasexcitingandprofoundlyenriching.Iameagerformoreofsuchactivities.

Yours,

LiHua

总结

首段开门见山：活动内容、目的、时间、地点、主办方等+衔接句(简单评价,或总结概括)；

中间段内容要具体：谁参加，唱了什么歌曲/具体画了什么/具体做了什么；

中间段要虚实结合：现场氛围、我的感受/对画作意境的阐述等；

感受可放在中间段最后，也可放在尾段；感受要与活动契合（爱国、唱歌与爱国、难忘的经历、希望有更多类似活动）；

首尾段不要过长。

三建议推荐

示范

SuggestionLettertoaSuperior正式

DearSir,

Afterspendingaconsiderableamountoftimewithmyteam,Ifeelthattherearealotofareaswherewecanimprove.Iamwritingthislettertoyoutogivemyhonestopinionontheworkingoftheteamsofar.

Ifeeltheteamismovingtowardsapositivedirectionandafewimprovementswillhelpusinachievingmore.Thefirstoneisthatweneedtoimproveuponthecommunicationswithintheteam.Alldelaysandlagswearefacingaresomewhatassociatedwithalackofcommunication.建议的理由Thesecondoneisthatweneedtoorganisesometeam-buildingactivitiestohelpusworktogetherasoneunit.

Ifeelifthesepointersareworkedupon,wewillwitnessgrowthineachindividualandthegroupaswell.

Yourssincerely,

PabloOrtega

或：

Iamwritingthislettertoyouregarding---

Ihopeyouwillacceptthesesuggestionsandtakethenecessaryactions.

（四）练后重写

假定你是李华，你校外教Chris想学习中国的水墨画，希望你能给他推荐一位老师。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.介绍老师的情况；2.授课时间和地点。

注意：1词数80词左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

DearChris,

I'mwritingtorecommendaChineseinkpaintingteachertoyouasyouexpressedyourinterestinlearningthisartform.IwholeheartedlysuggestMrLi,anaccomplishedandseasonedprofessionalinChineseinkpainting.

Withovertwodecadesofexperienceinteaching,Mr.Liiswidelyrecognizedforhisengagingandpracticalteachingstyle,whichhasearnedhimaconsiderablefollowing.Hisclassesarebothinformativeandentertaining.TheclassesareheldonSaturdaysfrom10amto12pmattheChineseCulturalCenter,situatedatNo.6KangningRoad.

Ihopethisrecommendationishelpfultoyou.Pleaseletmeknowifyouhaveanyquestions,asIwouldbehappytoassistyoufurther.

（五）高考题训练2023新课标卷建议信（分析问题+建议）

假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：

1.说明问题；2.提出建议。

注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearRyan,

I’mLiHuafromClass3.

____________________

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

难点：恰当地指出问题，具体合理的建议;得体的语言。

范文1

I’mLiHuafromClass3.Knowingyouaregoingtorandomlydividetwostudentsintoagrouptopracticethespeakingafterclass,Iamwritingtostatemyopiniononthegroupingway.

Thisgroupingmethodhassomedrawbacks.Oneofthedisadvantagestorandompairsisthatsomestudents,especiallytheonesunfamiliarwitheachother,havetodealwithembarrassments.What'smore,largelevelgapcanbringaboutdifficultiesincommunicationwithinthegroups.Itwouldbeidealifyoucanarrangethegroupaccordingtoourlevelsandobjectivessothatwecanstrengtheninteractivelearning.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply./Hopingyoucantakemyadviceintocarefulconsiderationandlookingforwardtoyourreply.

范文2

DearRyan,

Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell正式信件打招呼.Ihavesomeconcernsregardingtherandomgroupingofstudentsinpairsforpost-classspeakingpractice.

Randompairingsmaynotalwaysbeeffectiveasstudentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedwithsomeonetheyarenotfamiliarwith.Isuggestconsideringgroupingbasedonstudents'proficiencylevelsorinterests.Thiscanenhanceengagementandencouragebettercommunication.Itcouldalsofosterasupportiveenvironmentforlanguagepractice.

Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestions.

Bestregards,

LiHua

你的作品4

DearKyan,

I'mLiHuafromClass3.I’mwritingtoyouaboutthegroupsofpracticinglanguage.Youhavedeclaredthattwostudentsshouldbedividedintoonegroup.Ithinkitisimproper.Becausetherealwaysonelistener,heorshecouldn'tcheckoutyour人称错problems.It'sbadforyourfuturedevelopment.Inmyopinion,Ithink重复thegroupshouldinclude4studentsinwhichthemostofmistakescanbefiguredoutandtheycandevelopbetter.

Abovearemyviewsaboutthedivision不是建议信尾端写法.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.审题没有注意到“随机”

帮你改进4（仅语言）

DearRyan,

IamLiHuafromClass3,writingtoexpressmyopiniononthegroupingstrategyforlanguagepracticeyouhaveproposed.

Ibelievethatpairingtwostudentstogethermaynotbethemosteffectiveapproach.Havingjustonelistenermeansthaterrorsmightgounnoticed,blockingoverallprogress.Inmyopinion,forminggroupsoffourstudentswouldbemorebeneficial.Thissetupwouldallowforabroaderrangeoffeedbackandenablestudentstoidentifyandcorrectmistakesmoreeffectively,facilitatingthebetterdevelopmentoflanguageskills.

Iappreciateyourconsiderationofthesesuggestions.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

（六）模拟题训练

随着社会的发展，心理健康越来越受到人们的关注。10月10日是“世界精神卫生日”。假定你是李华,请你给校长就如何改善学生心理健康状况写一封信,内容包括:

心理健康的重要性;2.你的建议及理由。

难点：心理健康重要性；语言得体

DearPrincipal.

Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.AsWorldMentalHealthDayisapproaching.Iwanttotakethisopportunitytodiscusstheimportanceofmentalhealthamongusstudentsandsuggestsomeimprovements.

Mentalhealthiscrucialforoverallwellbeing.Itaffectsthoughts,emotionandbehavior,influencinghowwehandlestressandrelatetoothers.Toenhanceit,Isuggestorganizingworkshopsthateducatestudentsaboutstressmanagement,whichwillempowerthemwithpracticalskillstodealwithlife'schallenges.Additionally,establishingamentalhealthsupportsystem,includingtrainedcounselorsandasafespaceforstudentstoexpressthemselves,willbeinvaluable.Itwillencouragestudentstoseekhelpwhenneededandfosterasenseofbelongingandunderstanding.

Thankyouforconsideringthesesuggestions.Iamconvincedthatmentalhealthofusstudentswillreachnewheights.

Yours

LiHua

范文2

DearPrincipal,

Withthedevelopmentofsociety,mentalhealthisdrawingevermoreattention.AsWorldMentalHealthDayisapproaching,Iamwritingthisletterwiththeutmostrespectandeagernesstooffersomesuggestionsonhowtoimprovestudents'psychologicalconditions.

Goodmentalhealthiscrucialforpersonalgrowth,enablingindividualstodevelopapositiveself-image,buildconfidence,andhaveastrongsenseofself-worth.Isuggesttheschoolofferprofessionalpsychologicalguidance,suchashiringprofessionalpsychologiststoprovidecounselingservices.Thiswouldhelpstudentsdealwithstressandpromotetheirmentalhealth.What'smore,itmightbeagoodideaiftheschoolweretoorganizemoresportsactivities,likerunningcompetitionsandballgames.Engagingintheseactivitiescanhelpreleasestressandenhancestudents’physicalfitness.

Isincerelyhopethatmysuggestionscanbeputtousebytheschool.Ifirmlybelievethatthepsychologicalstateofourschoolwillgetbetterandbetter.

Yours

LiHua

你的作品5

Honoredheadmaster,

I'mLiHuainsenior3.TheworldmentalDayisaroundthecorner.It'sclearthatmentalhealthiscrucialtocreatestudentsabetterbasistolearnandimprovetheirphysicalhealth.衔接

IsuggestthatyoushouldaddamentalhealthclassinSaturdayafternoon.Also,everymonth,thereshouldbementalhealthspeech.Thesemeasureswouldnotinterruptstudents'studytimeandcouldhelpstudentsbeawareoftheimportanceofmentalhealthandimproveitgradually.

Hopeyoucouldapplymysuggestions.

Yourssincerely,

帮你改进5

DearPrinciple,

I'mLiHuainsenior3.AsWorldMentalHealthDayapproaches,Iwouldliketoseizethisopportunitytooffersomesuggestionsonenhancingthementalwell-beingofstudents.

Mentalhealthisundeniablythecornerstoneofabalancedlife,influencingnotonlyacademicachievementsbutalsoemotionalwell-beingandoverallhappiness.Toenhancestudentmentalhealthinourschool,Irecommendintroducingamentalhealthclasseveryweek.Furthermore,organizingamonthlymentalhealthtalkwouldbebeneficial.Thesemeasurescaneducatestudentsonhowtoeffectivelyaddressmentalhealthissues,thusofferingthempowerfulmentalsupport.

Ihopeyouwillconsiderimplementingthesesuggestions.

Yourssincerely,

总结：

首段：建议（推荐）的背景+过渡衔接

中间段：建议（推荐）+理由（根据具体题目可能会增加其他内容）

尾段：希望建议被采纳；希望问题得到解决

恰当的建议，得体的语气；

语言总结

提建议的句式+陈述理由

Itwouldbeideal/agoodideaifyoucanarrangethegroupaccordingtoourlevelsandobjectivessothatwecanstrengtheninteractivelearning.

Isuggest/recommendconsideringgroupingbasedonstudents'proficiencylevelsorinterests.Thiscanenhanceengagementandencouragebettercommunication.Itcouldalsofosterasupportiveenvironmentforlangua