重难点16 应用文写作-2024年高考英语专练（新高考专用）解析版

重难点16应用文写作

根据新高考三年的考情分析，应月文是每年高考考查频率最高的体裁之一，其中以书信、电子邮件最为常见。从内

容上看，近几年高考书信写作主要包括致歉信、致谢信、笔友信、慰问信、投诉信、邀请信、介绍信、求职信、读

者请求的解答信及其答好读者的信等。

预计2024年高考应用文写作考查形式仍以书信开放性为主。

近3年新高考应用文写作数据分析

试卷类型年份体裁话题

新高考I卷2023建议信分组练习口语

新高考II卷2023建议信分组练习口语

新高考I卷2022邀请信邀请外教做访谈

新高考II卷2022邀请信邀请外教做访谈

新高考I卷2021投稿短文读报经历

新高考II卷2021投稿短文读报经历

A重难诠释

01/词汇升级

多使用高级词汇，高级词汇指的是大纲中没有列入或没有识记要求，但在实际运用中却出现比较频繁的词汇，比如

frustration,awkward,awfully,concern等。这些词汇为作文增添光彩，从而使考生稳拿高分。

。亚旬式升级..............................

写作中精彩句式的合理使用会使文章读起来抑扬顿挫。固定句式（如感叹句、复合结构、强调句型等）、定语从句、

现在分词短语等都属于•较复杂的语法结构。这些结构的正确使用，可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映

出考生的语言运用能力。

。“逻辑升级..............................

衔接过渡词能使语言连贯性得以实现。句与句、段与段之间恰当地使用衔接过渡词不仅可以起到承上启下的作

用，也可以使文章脉络走向更为清晰明朗。所以在写作中运用过渡词，对写好文章有着重要意义。

典例分析

典例一

（2023年新高考I卷）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生陨机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这

样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：

1.说明问题；

2.提出建议。

注意：

I.写作词数应为80个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearRyan,

I'mLiHuafromClass3.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】DearRyan,

I'mLiHuafromClass3.1thinkitsnotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.

Thereasonsareasfollows.

Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscan

hindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheother

studentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon'tget

alongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.

Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.This

way,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.

Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.

Yourssincerely.

LiHua

【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写•封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人•组，让大家课后练习口语，

你认为这样分组存在问题。

【详解】1.词汇积累

首先：tobeginwith—>firstofall

提高：improve—>progress

建议:suggestion—>advice

选择：choose—>select

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.

拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoose

theirownpartners.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomforthe

otherstudentstoimprove.（运用了现在分词作状语）

[高分句型2]

Besides,Studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon'tgetalongwithorhave

difficultycommunicatingwith.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）

典例二

（2022年新高考I卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目"TalkandTalk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做

一次访谈。内容包括：

1.节目介绍；

2.访谈的时间和话题。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearCaroline,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】DearCaroline,

ThisismyfirsttimethatIhaveinvitedyoutoattendourprogram—TalkandTalk.ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalk

wasestablished.Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,whenhavingtroublein

learningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,

youraidcanhelpusalot.IfyouareavailableonthisSunday,ItogetherwiththewholeTalkandTalkstaffamwaitingfor

［答案】Nowadays,ArtificialIntelligence,shortforAI,hasbeenwidelyappliedtomanyaspectsinourlife.Manypeopleare

concernedthatAIwillreplacehumanlaborinthefutureandcausejobloss.［介绍社会现象】

ItcannotbedeniedthatAIwilldefinitelyreplacehumanlaborinsomeindustries,butit'sunlikelytobeusedinall

worksoflife.Insomespecialfields,robotscan'tdothehighlydemandingtaskbecausetheyareprogrammed,notcreative.

Wliat,smore,AItechnologystillhasalongwaytogotofiillmaturity,soit'sunnecessarytoworryaboutthejoblosses.［对

社会的看法】

Asstudents,weshoulddevelopourcreativity.Afterall,itistheabilitytocreatesomethingnewthatmakesussmarter

thanrobots.【应对措施】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你校英语报“头脑风暴”版块中提到一个社会现象：Artificial

Intelligenceandrobotscandovariousthingsforhumans,thusmakinganumberofpeoplelose（heirjobs.请考生写一，篇短

文，谈谈对该现象的看法。

【详解】1.词汇积累

代替：replace—>taketheplaceof

不可能的：unlikely—>impossible

此外：What'smore—>Besides

担心：worryabout—>beanxiousabout

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Nowadays,ArtificialIntelligence,shortfbrAI,hasbeenwidelyappliedtomanyaspectsinourlife.

拓展句：Nowadays,AI.whichisshortforArtificialIntelligence,hasbeenwidelyappliedtomanyaspectsinourlife.

【点睛］【高分句型1］ManypeopleareconcernedthatAIwillreplacehumanlaborinthefutureandcausejobloss.（运用

7that连接宾语从句）

［高分句型2］Afterall,itistheabilitytocreatesomethingnewthatmakesussmarterthanrobots.（运用了il作形式主语，

不定式作真正的主语和that引导的定语从句）

2.（2023・广东佛山•统考模拟预测）你校英语角将举办英语演讲比赛。请你"DevelopaReadingHabit”为题写一篇发言

稿参赛，内容包括：

1.养成阅读习惯的重要性：

2.你的建议。

注意：

1.词数应为80左右；

2.题目和首句已为你写好。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DevelopaReadingHabit

Areadinghabitisimportantforus.

［答案］Onepossibleversion:

DevelopaReadingHabit

Areadinghabitisimporlantforus.Undoubtedly,readinghelpstoexpandourknowledgeandunderstandingofthe

world.Byreadingbooksondifferenttopics,wccangaininsightsintodifferentcultures,histories,andperspectives.Thiscan

helpustobecomemoreempatheticandopen-mindedindividuals.Moreover,readingisagreatwaytorelax.Whenwcread,

wecanescapefromthestressesofeverydaylifeandenterintoadifferentworld,whichcanimproveourmentalhealth.

Todevelopareadinghabit,itisimportanttosetasidesometimeeachdayforreading.Startwithshortbooksorarticles

thatinterestyouandgraduallyincreasethereadingtime.Joiningabookcluborfindingareadingbaddycanalsomotivate

youtoreadmore.

Itisnevertoolatetostartreading,solefstakethetimetoenjoythepleasureandbenefitsofreading.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生以“DevelopaReadingHabit”为题写一篇英语演讲比赛的发言稿，

需阐述养成阅读习惯的重要性，并分享自己的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

亳无疑问：undoubtedly—>doubtlessly,unquestionably

思想开明的：open-minded—>broad-mindcd,open,receptive

止匕外：moreover—>inaddition,additionally,besides

改善：improve—>sharpen,enhance

重要的：important—^essential,crucial,significant,vital

从一一开始：startwith—>beginwith,commencewith

使...感兴趣，吸引：interest—^attract,intrigue,fascinate

激励:motivate—>inspire,stimulate

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Byreadingbooksondifferenttopics,wecangaininsightsintodifferentcultures,histories,andperspectives.Thiscan

helpustobecomemoreempatheticandopen-mindedindividuals.

拓展句；Byreadingbooksondifferenttopics,wccangaininsightsintodifferentcultures,histories,andperspectives,which

canhelpustobecomemoreempatheticandopen-mindedindividuals.

【点睛】【高分句型1］Whenweread,wecanescapefromthestressesofeverydaylifeandenterintoadifferentworld,

whichcanimproveourmentalhealth.（运用了When引导时间状语从句及which引导非限制性定语从句）

［高分句型2］Startwithshortbooksorarticlesthatinterestyouandgraduallyincreasethereadingtime.（运用了that弓|导

限制性定语从句）

3.（2023•江苏・统考模拟预测）假定你是高三学生李华，在上周的年级读后续写竞赛中，你的续写得分为16分（满

分25分），你觉得此分数偏低不太合理。请你给评委Mr.Davis用英语写一份邮件，内容包括：

1.说明问题；

2.给出理由。

参考词汇：读后续写continuationwriting

DearMr.Davis,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】DearMr.Davis,

IamLihua,aparticipantinyoucontinuationwritingcompetition.Havingscoredonly16formycontinuationwriting,1felt

itunfair,soIamwritingtoyoutostatemyreasons.

Formywriting,1feltittotallymeetstherequirementputforwardinthecontest.Tobeginwith,thestructureofmy

compositionisdefinitelyclearandtheplotdevelopsreasonably,noprolixityatall.Additionally,thewordsandsentences

usedarccolorful,withoutrepeatedlyusingthesamewordagainandagain.Ievenwrotesoniccompoundsentencestoupdate

mywriting,suchasattributiveclause,theemphaticpattern,invertedsentenceandsoon.Finally,awell-knownsayingis

usedtoendmyarticle,whichIthinkisaperfecthighlightofthepassage.

Inaword,withthemeritsmentionedabove,IwonderwhyIgotsuchalowscore.Ifitisconvenientforyou,pleasegiveme

anexplanation.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应月又。要求学生代替李华给续写竞赛的评委老师写一封邮件，陈述自己续写得分为

16分，觉得此分数偏低不太合理的理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累：

陈述：state一makeastatementof

而且：additionally—*what'smorc/inaddition/fiirthcrmorc

完美的：perfect—>excellent/outstanding

2.句式拓展：

同义句转换

原句：lbbeginwith,thestructureofmycompositionisdefinitelyclearandtheplotdevelopsreasonably,noprolixityatall.

拓展句：Tobeginwith,thestructureofmycompositionisdefinitelyclear,withtheplotdevelopingreasonably,noprolixity

atall.

【点睛】【高分句型1】

Havingscoredonly16formycontinuationwriting,Ifeltitunfair,soIamwritingtoyoutostatemyreasons.（运用了现在分

词作状语）

【高分句型2】

Finally,awell-knownsayingwasusedtoendmyarticle,whichIthinkisaperfecthighlightofthepassage.（运用了which弓|

导非限制性定语从句）

4.（2023•江苏扬州・江苏省高邮中学校考模拟预测）你校上周与新华中学举办了一场篮球比赛，你校以一分的优势险

胜对方。请你用英语写一份广播稿，在校广播站英语新闻栏目向全校师生广播。内容包括：

1.比赛概况;2.简短评论。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式作答。

Hello,everyone!HerecomestheschoolEnglishNews.

That'sthenewsofthehour.

【答案】Hello,everyone!HerecomestheschoolEnglishNews.TheCityStadiumwitnessedabasketballgamebetween

XinhuaMiddleSchoolandourschoollastSaturday,andourteamnarrowlywonbyonescore.

Inthefirsthalf,ourteamwasatadisadvantagebutallplayerscooperatedperfectlyandtriedtheirbesttoscoreand

blocktheopponentteam.Atthelastmoment,wewonwithaperfectshot.

Itwasreallyafantasticclosegame,whichhasnotonlystrengthenedthefriendshipbetweenthetwoschoolsbut

encouragedusnottogiveupinfaceofadversity.That'sthenewsofthehour.

【导语】本文是一篇应用文。你校上周与新华中学举办了一场篮球比赛，你校以一分的优势险胜对方。请你用英语

写一份广播稿,在校广播站英语新闻栏目向全校师生广播。内容包括：1.比赛概况：，简短评论。

【详解】1.词汇积累

见证：witness—>see

比赛：game—competition

尽力做：tryone'sbesttodosth—>sparenoefforttodosth

很棒的：fantastic—>fabulous

2.句式拓展

并列句变复合句

原句：TheCityStadiumwitnessedabasketballgamebetweenXinhuaMiddleSchoolandourschoollastSaturday,andour

teamnarrowlywonbyonescore.

拓展句：TheCityStadiumwitnessedabasketballgamebetweenXinhuaMiddleSchoolandourschoollastSaturday,when

ourteamnarrowlywonbyonescore.

【点睛X高分句蛰I]Inthefirsthalf,ourteamwasatadisadvantagebutallplayerscooperatedperfectlyandtriedtheirbest

toscoreandblocktheopponentteam.（运用了but连接的并列句）

[高分句型2]Itwasreallyafantasticclosegame,whichhasnotonlystrengthenedthefriendshipbetweenthetwoschools

butencouragedusnottogiveupinfaceofadversity.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

5.（2023•江苏镇江・统考模拟预测）假如你是某国际学校学生李华，在过去的一个月里，你多次参加所在社区的社区

服务活动，现向校英文报投稿，内容包括：

1.服务经历；

2.你的感受。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

[答案】LastmonthItookpartinacommunityserviceprojectorganized,whichprovedtobeatrulyrewardingexperience.

Tohelpyoungpeopledevelopabeltersenseofsocialresponsibilityandcontributemoretoourcommunity,aseriesof

activitieswereconducted.Forinstance,wepaidregularvisitstothenursinghometokeeptheseniorscompany.Wealso

handedoutleafletstopassers-bytoraisepeople'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.

Byvolunteeringinthoseactivities,Iclearlyunderstandthateveryonecandotheirpailtomakeapositiveimpactonthe

livesofothers.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生向校英文报投稿，介绍自己参加所在社区的社区服务活动的经历和感

受。

【详解】1.词汇积累

参加：takepartin—>participatcin

帮助：help->assist

例如：forinstance—>fbrexample

积极的：positive—►active

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Wealsohandedoutleafletstopassers-bytoraisepeople'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.

拓展句：Wealsohandedoutleafletstopassers-by,whichaimedtoraisepeople'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.

【点睛X高分句型1]LastmonthIlookpartinacommunityserviceprojectorganized,whichprovedtobeatrulyrewarding

experience.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2]lbhelpyoungpeopledevelopabettersenseofsocialresponsibilityandcontributemoretoourcommunity,a

seriesofactivitieswereconducied.（运用了非谓语动词不定式作目的状语）

6.（2023•江苏苏州・统考模拟预测）假定你是李华，是校学生会主席，你校将参观苏州古城墙遗址。请你以学生会名

义写一篇倡议书号召全校同学保护古城墙遗址。内容包括:

1.古城墙遗址的重要性；

2.保护古城墙遗址的倡议。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如卜.格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dearfellowstudents,

Students,Union

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

Dearfellowstudents,

Withourvisitto“SuzhouAncientCityWalls“approaching,Icalloneveryonetotakeanactivepartinprotectingthem.

Ancientcitywallsarcofcriticalimportancebecausetheyarcwitnessestooursplendidandprofoundculture.

Meanwhile,ancientcitywallsareacrystallizationofwisdomofpastgenerationsandanirreplaceablesourceofinspiration.

Thus,itisimperativetoprotectthem.

Weshouldbehaveproperlywhensteppingonthesetime-honoredwalls.Litteringandscribblingonwallsarestrictly

prohibited.Let'sworktogethertomakesuretheancientwallsremaintheiroriginallook.

Students'Union

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生写一篇倡议书号召同学保护古城墙遗址，需阐明古城墙遗址的重

要性，并说明保护古城墙遗址的具体倡议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

呼吁：callon—>appcalto,urge

参与：takepartin—►participatein,engagein

关键的:critical—*crucial,decisive

灿烂的：splendid—>glorious,magnificent,spectacular

同时：meanwhile—♦meantime,atthesametime

无法取代的：iireplaceable—»unique,incomparable

因此：thus—>asaresult,consequently,therefore

必要的：imperative—»essential,vital

禁止：prohibit—>fbrbid,ban

2.句式拓展

同义句

原句：Withourvisitto“SuzhouAncientCityWalls”approaching,Icalloneveryonetotakeanactivepartinprotecting

them.

拓展句：Asourvisitto“SuzhouAncientCityWalls”approaches,Icalloneveryonetotakeanactivepartinprotectingthem.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Ancientcitywallsareofcriticalimportancebecause（heyarewitnessescooursplendidandprofound

cullure.（运用了从属连词because引导原因状语从句）

[高分句型2]Let'sworktogethertomakesuretheancientwallsremaintheiroriginallook.（运用了不定式短语tomake...

作目的状语、连接词that引导名词性从句作makesure的宾语并被省略）

7.（2023•浙江杭州•校联考模拟预测）你校英语俱乐部拟创办校英文刊物，将召开俱乐部成员会议，商讨刊物栏目

（columns）。假如你是成员李华，请你写一份会议发言稿，提议开设一个栏目。内容包括：1.栏目名称；2.开设理由。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Hello,mydearfellows!

【答案】范文

Hello,mydearfellows.TmreallyexcitedtobeinformedthatwearegoingtostartanEnglishjournaltogether,whichis

definitelyawondcrfi.ilidea.It'ssuchagoldenopportunitytoenhancestudents'Englishcapabilityandappreciatethecharm

oltheEnglishlanguage.

Asforproposals,Fdliketorecommend“Students'Voice”asadistinctivecolumn.Asstudyingisalwaysstudents'top

priority,westudentsareundergreatpressureandlackopportunitiestobelistenedto.Whynothelpstudentsvoiceinner

feelingsandhaveagoodmoodtoembracethetoughyetbrightfuture?Thiscolumn,Ipromise,isboundtobeaprecious

outletandasteppingstonetocommunicatingfluentlyinEnglish.

That'sallformyadvice!Thankyou!

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校英语俱乐部拟创办校英文刊物，将召开俱乐部成员会议，商讨刊物栏目

(columns),假如你是成员李华，请你写一份会议发言稿，提议开设一个栏目。

【详解】I.词汇积累

压力：pressure—♦stress

拥抱：embrace—>hug

绝对：definitely—*absohitely

机会：opportunity—*chance

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Whynothelpstudentsvoiceinnerfeelingsandhaveagoodmoodtoembracethetoughyelbrightfuture?

拓展句：Ilwillbehelpfulforstudents（ovoiceinnerfeelingsandhaveagoodmood（oembracethetoughyelbrightfuture.

【点睛】[高分句型1]I'mreallyexcitedtobeinformedthatwearegoingtostartanEnglishjournaltogether,whichis

definitelyawonderfulidea.（运用了that引导宾语从句和关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Asstudyingisalwaysstudents'toppriority,westudentsareundergreatpressureandlackopportunitiestobe

listenedto.（运用了as引导原因状语从句）

8.（2023•江苏扬州・统考模拟预测）假定你所在的城市正在创建全国文明城市，请写一篇演讲稿，呼吁全体同学行动

起来，为创建文明城市作出自己的贡献。

内容包括：

1.仓J建文明城市的内容与意义；

2.呼吁同学们从身边小事做起（不少于两点）。

词汇：文明城市civilizedcity

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Boysandgirls,

Thankyou.

【答案】Boysandgirls,

Ashasbeenpromotedbyourschool,wearetobuildacivilizedcity,inwhichcaseourcitycanbecleanerandmore

competitive,andalltheresidentswi'lbebetteroff.

Oncampus,weshouldpickuplitterwhilewewalkaround,orhelpotherswhennecessary.Athome,wecanpersuade

ourparentstoquitsmokingandgetalongwellwithneighbors.Besides,thecoresocialistvaluesoughttobeputinto

practice.

Thankyou.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生演讲稿，呼吁全体同学行动起来，为创建文明城市作出自己的贡献。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建设：build—>setup

应该：should—►besupposedto

放弃：quit—>givcup

止匕外：besides—>whafsmore

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Besides,thecoresocialistvaluesoughttobeputintopractice

拓展句：Besides,thecoresocialistvaluesoughttobeputintopractice,which1thinkisessentialforustobuildacivilized

city.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Ashasbeenpromotedbyourschool,wearetobuildacivilizedcity,inwhichcaseourcitycanbe

cleanerandmorecompetitive,andalltheresidentswillbebetteroff.（运用as和“介词+which”号|导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Oncampus,weshouldpickuplitterwhilewewalkaround,orhelpotherswhennecessary.（运用了while

引导的时间状语从句以及状语从句的省略）

9.（2023・江苏・统考二模）假如你是李华，你刚刚参观了你市博物馆举办的一次“遇见艺术家”的展览，请为你校英文

报写一则评论，内容包括：

1.展览概况；

2.观展感受；

3.意见建议。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.为使行文连贯，可以适当增加细节。

[答案】LastSaturday,Ijustvisitedanexhibitiontitled“MeetingArtists**heldbyourcity'smuseum.Theexhibition

attractedmanymastersandamateursathomeandabroad.ManyartworksincludingChinesehandwritingandlandscape

paintingsfromancientandmoderntimeswereonshow.Thehostexplainedeveryworkindetailsonthespot.Theexhibition

leftadeepimpressiononme.Inmyview,i（notonlypromotedtheinheritanceofChinesetraditionalculturebutstrengthened

ournationalprideaswell.Ihopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikethisinthefuture.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写•则关于刚刚参观的市博物馆举办的•次“遇见艺术家”展览的评论。

【详解】1.词汇积累

参观：visit—>payavisitto

举刃'：hold—>throw

展览：onshow—>ondisplay

详细地：indetails—>dctailcdly

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：LastSaturday,Ijustvisitedanexhibitiontitled“MeetingArtistsMheldbyourcity'smuseum.

拓展句：LastSaturday,Ijustvisitedanexhibitionwhichwastitled"MeetingArtists**heldbyourcity'smuseum.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Inmyview,itnotonlypromotedtheinheriranceofChinesetraditionalculturebutstrengthenedour

nationalprideaswell.（由notonly...but引导的并列句结构）

【高分句型2]Ihopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikethisin（hefuture.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句）

10.（2023•江苏南京・统考二模）假定你是校学生会主席李华，外教Mike被评为本学期“最受欢迎教师”。请写一份颁

奖词，内容包括：

1.回顾M汰e的工作；2.简述他获奖的理由。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；2.结束语已为你写好，不计字数；3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dearall,

NowlefswelcomeourprincipaltopresentthisawardtoMike!

【答案】Dearall,

I'mhonoredtoannouncethatthissemester's"Mostpopularteacher”goestoMike!

HegivesourgradeoralEnglish,encouragingustospeakmore.Besides,heisresponsibleforourDramaClub,where

wcrehearsetogetherandpresentmarvelousplaysunderhisprofessionalguidance.

Mikeiswoilhyoflliisawaid.HiscxccpliunalIcacliingabilityliasgreatlyboosteduuiuoufidcnccinexpressing

ourselves.What'smore,hispassiontorteachingandfriendlinesstostudentsmakelearningwithhimareallyenjoyable

experience.

NowlefswelcomeourprincipaltopresentthisawardtoMike!

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。外教Mike被评为本学期“最受欢迎教师”，要求考生写一份颁奖词。

【详解】1.词汇积累

此外：besides—>what'smore

精彩的：marvelous—>wonderftil

增强：boost—>improve

愉快的：enjoyable—»pleasant

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Mikeisworthyofthisaward.Hisexceptionalleachingabilityhasgreatlyboostedourconfidenceinexpressing

ourselves.

展句：M汰cisworthyofthisawardbecausehisexceptionalteachingabilityhasgreatlyboostedourconfidencein

expressingourselves.

【点睛】【高分句型1]I'mhonoredtoannouncethatthissemester's"Mostpopularteacher“goestoMike!（运用了that

引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型21Besides,heisresponsibleforourDramaChib,wherewerehearsetogetherandpresentmarvelousplaysunder

hisprofessionalguidance.（运用了where引导的非限定性定语从句）

II.（2023•江苏・统考二模）每年的3月22日是“世界水日”（WorldWaterDay）,上周日上午你校学生会组织部分青年

志愿者走上街头开展公益宣传活动。假定你是李华，请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：

1.活动目的；

2.活动内容；

3.活动反响。

注意：

1.词数80左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

AYouthVolunteerActivityCelebratingWorldWaterDay

【答案】AYouthVolunteerActivityCelebratingWorldWaterDay

WorldWaterDayfallsonMarch22everyyear.LastSunday,someyoungstudentvolunteers,organizedbythestudent

union,tooktothestreetstocelebrateandadvertiseWorldWaterDay.

Firstly,theyhandedoutleafletstothecitizenstolectureaboutWorldWaterDay.Later,publicspeechesaboutthe

importanceofprotectingwaterresourcesweregivenbysomevolunteers.Notonlydidtheseactivitiesarousedpeople'sgreat

interestinWorldWaterDay,butalsoraisedtheirawarenessofwaterresourcesprotection.Thisactivityturnedouttobea

hugesuccess.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，报道上周日上午校学生会组织青年志愿者

走上街头开展的“世界水日''公益宣传活动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

分发：handout—►distribute

传单：leaflet—>flyer

重要性：importance—►significance

保护：protect—►preserve

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Firstly,theyhandedoutleafletstothecitizenstolectureaboutWorldWaterDay.

拓展句：Firstly,theyhandedoutleaflets,whichweredesignedbythestudentsthemselves,tothecitizenstolectureabout

WorldWaterDay.

【点睛】[高分句型1]LastSunday,someyoungstudentvolunteers,organizedbythestudentunion,（ooktothestreetsto

celebrateandadvertiseWorldWaterDay.（运用了过去分词短语作后置定语）

[高分句型2]Notonlydidtheseactivitiesarousedpeople'sgreatinterestinWorldWaterDay,butalsoraisedtheirawareness

ofwaterresourcesprotection.（运用了倒装句型）

12.（2023•浙江温州•统考三模）你校英文报正面向高三学生征稿，以呈现三年校园生活中促进个人成长的难忘时刻。

请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.难忘经历；

2.难忘原因。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。

AMemorableMoment

【答案】AMemorableMoment

Therearcsomanymemorablemomentsinmythreeyearsofcampuslife,whichpromotemypersonalgrowth.I'dlike

toshareonewithyou.

1stillrememberthemomentwhenIsteppedintothenewschoolasafreshman.Facedwitheverythingunfamiliar,Ifelt

anxiousandlonely.Icouldn'tadapttothenewschool.Seeingmyanxiety,myEnglishteacherencouragedmetoface

everythingcourageously.Andmyclassmatesvolunteeredtotalkwithme.Theirkindnessmademerelaxedandwarmsothat

Iquicklyfitinthenewenvironment.Also,itpromotesmygrowth.NeverwillIforgetthemoment.

【导语】本文是开放作文。你校英文报正面向高三学生征稿，以呈现三年校园生活中促进个人成长的难忘时刻。请

你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括；难忘经历；难忘原因。

【详解】1.词汇积累

面对：（be）facedwith—>facc

迈进：stepinto—>setfootin

和某人谈话：talkwithsb.—haveatalkwithsb.

勇敢地：courageously—>bravcly

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Facedwitheverythingunfamiliar,Ifeltanxiousandlonely.

拓展句：WhenIwasfacedwitheverythingunfamiliar,Ifeltanxiousandlonely.

【点睛】［高分句型1JTherearcsomanymemorablemomentsinmythreeyearsofcampuslife,whichpromotemypersonal

growth.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

［高分句型2］IstillrememberthemomentwhenIsteppedintothenewschoolasafreshman.（运用了when引导的限制性

定语从句）

［高分句型3］TheirkindnessmademerelaxedandwarmsothatIquicklyfitinthenewenvironment.［运用fsothat弓|导的

结果状语从句）

13.（2023♦福建厦门•统考模拟预测）你校英文报正在开展以“传承中华优秀文化”为主题的诗歌评论征集活动。请你

写一则诗评投稿，内容包括：

1.诗歌简介；

2.诗歌赏析；

3.个人感受。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右;

2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

［答案］Onepossibleversion:

"'ThoughtsonaTranquilNight"isamasterpiecewrittenbyLiBai,oneofthemostcelebratedpoetsinChinesehistory.

Thepoemvividlydescribesthepoet'smelancholymoodashegazesatthebrightmoononatranquilnight.

Atthebeginning,theimagerycreatesasereneandpeacefulatmosphere,makingthereaderfeelasiftheyaretherewith

thepoet,experiencingthebeautyofthenight.Asthepoemprogresses,thepoetrevealshisinnerturmoil,expressinghis

longingforhishomelandandhissadnessatbeingfaraway.Thispoemshowsthepoet'sdeepsenseofnostalgiaand

homesickness,whichisacommonthemeinChinesepoetry.

Inmyopinion,thispoemissobeautifulandpoignantthatitisatimelessclassic.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。题目要求考生选择一首中国古诗写一则诗评，需包括诗歌简介、诗歌赏析

和个人的感受。

【详解】1.词汇积累

著名的：celebrated—>eminent,prestigious,distinguished

描述：describe—♦narrate,recount,relate

首先：atthebeginning—>tobeginwith,atfirst

似乎：asif—>asthough

经历：experience—♦undergo,encounter,meet

展示：reveal—>show,disclose,uncover,display

在我看来：inmyopinion—>frommyperspective,asfarasIamconcerned

令人沉痛的：poignant—>touching,moving,miserable

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：“ThoughtsonaTranquilNighl”isamasterpiecewrittenbyLiBai,oneofthemostc