读后续写14遗忘与原谅课件-高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

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（遗忘与原谅）ForgottenandForgivenAsIsatagainstthesecond-floorwindowofourbrickschoolhousethatafternoon,myheartbegantosinkfurtherwitheachpassingcar.ThiswasadaythatI’dlookedforwardtoforweeks;MissPace’sfourth-grade,end-of-the-yearparty.IhadhappilyvolunteeredmymotherwhenMissPacerequestedcookievolunteers.Mum’sasurgeonandherchocolatechipsweresupremeonourblock,andIknewthey’dbeahitwithmyclassmates.Buttwoo’clockpassed,andtherewasnosignofher.Mostoftheothermothershadalreadycomeandgone,droppingofftheirofferingsofpunchandcrackers,chips,cupcakesandbrownies.Mymotherwasmissinginaction.“Don’tworry,Robbie,she’llbealongsoon,”MissPacesaidasIgazeddownatthestreet,holdingouthopethatthefamiliarfamilycarwouldroundthecorner,carryingmyrightfullyembarrassedmotherwithatinofherfamouscookies.Thethreeo’clockbellsoonjoltedmefrommythoughtsandIdisappointedlygrabbedmybookbagfrommydeskandshuffled(拖着脚步)outthedoorforhome.Onthefour-blockwalktoourhouse,Iplottedmyrevenge.Iwouldslamthefrontdooruponentering,refusetoreturnherhugwhensherushedovertome,andvownevertospeaktoheragain.ThehousewasemptywhenIarrivedandIlookedforanoteontherefrigeratorthatmightexplainmymother’sabsence,butfoundnone.Mychinquiveredwithamixtureofheartbreakandrage.Forthefirsttimeinmylife,mymotherhadletmedown.Iwaslyingface-downonmybedupstairswhenIheardhercomethroughthefrontdoor.“Robbie,”shecalledoutabiturgently.“Whereareyou?”Icouldthenhearherdartingfranticallyfromroomtoroom,wonderingwhereIcouldbe.Whensheenteredmyroomandsatbesidemeonmybed,Ididn’tmovebutinsteadstaredblanklyintomypillowrefusingtoacknowledgeherpresence.“I’msosorry,honey,”sheapologizedandbegantoexplain.

“It’sokay,Mum,”IgentlyheldherhandsasItriedtocomforther.妈妈解释原因（语言，动作，神态描写；呼应--surgeon；chocolatechips）

妈妈其实之前已经准备好材料，但没时间做

（表示愧疚）我的反应（理解并原谅妈妈，看到妈妈的愧疚，进行安抚）

“It’sokay,Mum,”IgentlyheldherhandsasItriedtocomforther.语言上进行安抚（语言，动作描写；呼应之前的party）妈妈的反应（动作描写）

升华

（亲人之间的理解与原谅）

“I’msosorry,honey,”sheapologizedandbegantoexplain.“Ihadjustfinishedanemergencysurgerywhichlastedforseveralhours.BythetimeitwasoverandIhadachancetocheckmymessages,IrealizedthatIhadmissedtheparty,”sheexplained,withatiredface.Infact,shehadalreadypreparedtheingredientsforthecookiesthenightbefore.Butshehadnotimetobakethem.Hearingthis,IrealizedthatshewasjustasdisappointedasIwas.“It’sokay,Mum,”IgentlyheldherhandsasItriedtocomforther.“Wecanalwayshaveanotherparty,andI’msureyourcookieswouldhavebeenahit.Butmoreimportantly,I’mjustgladyou’rehomesafeandyou’restilllovingme.”Shesmiledandgavemeawarmhug.Atthatmoment,Irealizedthatfamilyismuchmorethanjustapartyorcookies.Itisallaboutunderstandingandforgivingeachother,nomatterwhatlifethrowsatus.Thethreeo’clockbellsoonjoltedmefrommythoughtsandIdisappointedlygrabbedmybookbagfrommydeskandshuffled(拖着脚步)outthedoorforhome.三点钟的铃声骤然将我从思绪中惊醒，我沮丧地从课桌抓起书包，拖着步子走出校门往家去。Iwouldslamthefrontdooruponentering,refusetoreturnherhugwhensherushedovertome,andvownevertospeaktoheragain.一进家门我就把前门摔得震天响，当她急匆匆迎上来时我拒不接受她的拥抱，还发誓再也不跟她说话了。语言学习--动作描写1.AsIsatagainstthesecond-floorwindowofourbrickschoolhousethatafternoon,myheartbegantosinkfurtherwitheachpassingcar.那天下午，我坐在砖砌校舍二楼的窗边，望着窗外一辆又一辆汽车驶过，心情愈发低落。2.IhadhappilyvolunteeredmymotherwhenMissPacerequestedcookievolunteers.当佩斯老师征求志愿者家长烤饼干时，我兴高采烈地替母亲报了名。3.“Don’tworry,Robbie,she’llbealongsoon,”MissPacesaidasIgazeddownatthestreet,holdingouthopethatthefamiliarfamilycarwouldroundthecorner,carryingmyrightfullyembarrassedmotherwithatinofherfamouscookies."别担心罗比，她很快就到。"佩斯老师安慰道。我始终凝视着街道，期盼着家里那辆熟悉的汽车会拐过街角，载着我那理应感到歉疚的母亲，以及她最拿手的饼干铁盒。4.ThehousewasemptywhenIarrivedandIlookedforanoteontherefrigeratorthatmightexplainmymother’sabsence,butfoundnone.到家时屋内空无一人，我翻遍冰箱想找张字条解释母亲的去向，却什么也没发现。5.Iwaslyingface-downonmybedupstairswhenIheardhercomethroughthefrontdoor.当我面朝下趴在楼上卧室的床铺时，突然听见前门开启的声音。6.Whensheenteredmyroomandsatbesidemeonmybed,Ididn’tmovebutinsteadstaredblanklyintomypillowrefusingtoacknowledgeherpresence.她走进房间坐到我床边，我仍然一动不动，只茫然地盯着枕头，拒绝承认她的存在。语言学习--时间状语从句when意为“当……的时候”while意为“在……期间”as意为“当……的时候”、“一边……一边……”、“随着”when和as引导的从句中，谓语动词可以是持续性动词，也可以是非延续性动词；而while引导的从句中，谓语动作必须是延续性的。before（Itis/was/willbe...before...多久(之后)干某事）Turnoffthelightsbeforeyougotobed.睡觉前要关灯。Itwasnotlongbeforeherealizedthathisdiseasewasaggravated.不久他就意识到他的病情恶化了。Itwillbefourdaysbeforetheinvestigationbecomesclear.调查要过四天之后才会明朗。（注意时态：主将从现）after意为“在……之后”since一般情况下，since引导的时间状语从句中，从句谓语动词用一般过去时，主句的谓语动词用现在完成时。但在Itishasbeen+时间+since从句的句型中，主句多用一般现在时。IhaveworkedinthiscompanysinceIgraduated.自从我毕业，就一直在这家公司上班。Itis/hasbeentwoyearssincehecamebackfromabroad.他回国已经两年了。until/till意为“在...之前”；not...until

翻译为“直到...才”。主从句谓语动词性质：主句谓语动词通常只能是延续性动词，不能是终止性动词；但在否定句中，主句谓语动词可以是终止性动词，此时构成not…until/till...句式。Hewaiteduntil/tillshewasabouttoleave.在她离开之前他一直在等。Ididn’tgobackhomeuntilmymothercalledme.妈妈打电话叫我，我才回家。assoonas表示"一…就"，"刚刚…就"assoonas也可以替换成其他时间连词，比如：once,immediately,instantly,directly,themoment,theinstant,theminute,thesecond等，都表示“一……就”。AssoonasIarriveinBeijing,Iwillringyouup.我一到北京就给你打电话。nosooner...than&hardly...when表示"一…就"，"刚刚…就"ItbegantorainassoonasIarrivedhome.=NosoonerhadIarrivedhomethanitbegantorain.=HardlyhadIarrivedathomewhenitbegantorain.名词短语引导状语从句anytime,eachtime,everytime,thefirsttime,thelasttime,thenexttime，themoment，theminute等。分别表示“任何时候”、“每次”、“第一次”、“最后一次”、“下次”等。ThemomentIsawhimIknewtherewasnohope.我一见到他就知道没希望了。仿写：那天下午，我坐在洒满阳光的客厅窗边，望着窗外热闹的街道上每一幕欢快的景象，心情变得越来越明亮。

AsIsatagainstthesecond-floorwindowofourbrickschoolhousethatafternoon,myheartbegantosinkfurtherwitheachpassingcar.那天下午，我坐在砖砌校舍二楼的窗边，望着窗外一辆又一辆汽车驶过，心情愈发低落。Whensheenteredmyroomandsatbesidemeonmybed,Ididn’tmovebutinsteadstaredblanklyintomypillowrefusingtoacknowledgeherpresence.她走进房间坐到我床边，我仍然一动不动，只茫然地盯着枕头，拒绝承认她的存在。仿写：当她走进客厅坐到我旁边的沙发上时，我假装没注意到，但随即快速转过身，试图隐藏内心的喜悦仿写：那天下午，我坐在洒满阳光的客厅窗边，望着窗外热闹的街道上每一幕欢快的景象，心情变得越来越明亮。

AsIsatagainstthesecond-floorwindowofourbrickschoolhousethatafternoon,myheartbegantosinkfurtherwitheachpassingcar.那天下午，我坐在砖砌校舍二楼的窗边，望着窗外一辆又一辆汽车驶过，