高考英语读后续写首尾呼应点题收尾公式学案

首尾呼应公式首尾呼应，形成闭环。文章的开头和结尾在内容上要有密切的关系，对同一情况做出解释、说明，使文章浑然一体，更有突显文章主旨大意的作用。描写公式公式①衔接语，主人公＋(gradually/eventually／suddenly)realized/felt/learned/couldn'thelpbutthinkthat＋衔接原文首段伏笔…[······，主人公（渐渐／终于／突然）意识到／感觉到／明白／不禁想…］例：感悟母爱：Followingthat,Igraduallylearnedthatmother'sloveispriceless,whichnothingcanmatch.在那之后，我逐渐明白了母爱是无价的，没有什么能与之相比。公式②衔接语，itstruck/hit/occurredto/dawnedon＋主人公＋that＋呼应原文首段...[······，主人公突然想到／开始明白…］例：团队合作：Whenthepetitionwasover，ithitMarkthatthekeytotheirsuccesswasteamwork,asemphasizedintheirinitialtrainingsession.比赛结束后，Mark突然意识到，他们成功的关键是团队合作，正如在最初的训练阶段所强调的那样。★常用衔接语有：followingthat,of...ually,atthesightof...,despite＋名词，doing...doing...,with复合结构，when／as引导的时间状语从句。续写微练：根据文章开头内容，参考公式①和公式②，补全以下片段。注意首尾呼应，形成闭环。语段一Ihadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymotherloving,sweet,yetabsentmindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.1．在那之后，我终于明白了心不在焉又健忘的母亲使我的童年充满了爱、惊喜和娱乐活动。［公式①］______________,Ieventuallylearnedthat_________filledmychildhoodwith___________________.2．尽管母亲心不在焉又健忘，但我逐渐明白了：她一直用爱、惊喜和娱乐活动来编织我的童年。［公式②］________________________________,itgraduallydawnedonmethatshealwayswovemychildhoodwith______________________.语段二Mymotherbelievedinusingthingsup.Lastyear,ourcornfieldhadabadharvestbecausebirdsfeastedonthecrops.ItwasprobablythenthatMom'sfrugality（节俭）becameevenmoreextraordinary.Shebegankeepingeverythingthatseemeduselessintheattic（阁楼）——wornoutclothes,oldsheets,brokenumbrellas,andsomeotherolditems.Mom'sfavoritesayingwas"wastenot,wantnot”.MybrotherJoshandIweren'tsurewhatthatmeantuntilthe“AffairoftheScarecrow（稻草人）”，which,asitlaterbecameknown,leftalastingimpressiononus.3．通过制作稻草人，我终于明白了妈妈最爱的“俭以防匮”这句谚语大有学问。［公式①］_______________________,Ieventuallyrealizedthat_________________________________________.4．随后，我突然想到节俭就是把那些旧东西留着它们并非无用。［公式②］_____________________,itstruckmethat________________________________.参考答案：1.Followingthat;myabsentmindedandforgetfulmother;love,surprisesandamusements2.DespiteMom'sbeingabsentmindedandforgetful;love,surprisesandamusements3.Bycraftingascarecrow;Mom'sfavoritesaying“wastenot,wantnot”—isfullofknowledge4.Followingthat;frugalityesfromkeepingolditems—theyarenotuseless点题收尾公式结尾点题使文章更加有力度和层次感，是提升文章质量的重要手法之一。这种方式可以增强文章的整体效果，使文章在收尾时更加有力和圆满，给读者留下深刻的印象。描写公式公式①(Whenever/When)Lookingbackon/Thinkingof+theexperience/journey/...，主人公＋always/still...［（无论何时／当）回首／想到那段经历／旅程／…，主人公总是／仍然…······］★时间状语从句（省略形式）／非谓语动词承接前文所述故事，主干部分用来点明主题。这种结尾使主旨表达清晰而凝练。例：Andnow,whenlookingbackonthatexperience,Edurnestillfeelsthatitwasthatexperiencethattransformedherintoanaturelovingbeing.现在，当回顾那段经历时，Edurne仍然觉得正是那段经历把她变成了一个热爱自然的人。公式②衔接语，（形容词＋）无灵主语＋sounded／echoed/rang/lingered(+inone'sears/head/mind/...).［…,······…(在耳边／脑中／…)回响。］例：Sincethen,myfather'splainbutencouragingwordshavealwaysechoedinmymind,guidingthewayofmylife.从那时起，父亲那些平淡却鼓励的话一直在我的脑海中回响，指引着我的人生道路。公式③衔接语，（形容词＋）无灵主语＋有灵动词（tell,remind等）＋主人公＋that...[·····…,····…告诉／提醒主人公······…］例：Thespecialexperienceremindedmethatpanyisthemostimportantfortheelderly.这次特殊的经历提醒我，陪伴对老年人来说是最重要的。续写微练：根据以下情节，续写结尾，注意在收尾时点题。语段一So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethinginwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou'rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis."Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.Afewweekslater,therecamethenews.Iwonfirstplace!1．当回顾那场写作比赛，我仍然觉得正是老师的鼓励让我坚持写作。［公式①］______________________________________________________2．许多年过去了，但老师的鼓励仍然萦绕在我的脑海里。［公式②_______________________________________________________3．这次写作比赛让我懂得，老师的鼓励对我的写作至关重要。［公式③］_______________________________________________________语段二EmilyandZoehadbeenbestfriendssincesecondgrade.Theybelievednothingcouldebetweenthem.ButwhenthenewgirlDaisyarrived,Zoestartedspendingtimewithher,leavingEmilyconfusedandhurt.Weekspassed.EmilyandZoewereassignedtothesamegrouponaclasscampingtrip.Theirconversationsweren'tlikebefore.Onarainyday,Emilydiscoveredthathertentwasleaking.WithZoe'shelp,Emilyfinallyfixedit.4．回顾下雨的那天，Emily觉得真正的友谊如同她们共同修补的帐篷，能经受人生的风雨。［公式①］_________________________________________________________5．自那以后，雨点敲打在她们共同修补的帐篷上的声音，一直在她脑海中回荡。［公式②］_________________________________________________________6.那次经历让Emily明白，朋友间需要敞开心扉的沟通，关系方能更紧密。［公式③］__________________________________________________________参考答案：1.Whenlookingbackonthatwritingcontest,Istillfeelthatitwastheteacher'sencouragementthathelpedmekeewriting.2.Thoughmanyyearshavewornon,theteacher'sencouragementstilllingersinmymind.3.Thewritingcontesttaughtmethattheteacher'sencouragementwascrucialtomywriting.4.Lookingbackonthatrainyday,Emilyrealizedthattruefriendship,liketh