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SeanRoystoq,andhislong-timefriend,[TolinAnnishadatraditiontoheadout

foranexpeditioneveryotheryear交代曾景德息，为后丈址下长名，.In2016,theydecidedtokayaki划皮

theRocksNationalLakeshore,achallenRiswrouteonLakeSuperior，同位谱朴克僮a.

OnSeptember13,theyloadeduponfoodandcampingdevices,climbedinto

theirkayaks,andpushedofffromabeachnearthenalionalpaik'sheadquarters“动*串描耳，

Theyplannedtoreturninaweek.Theymovedthroughsmallwavesandheaded

northeast.Soonthelakeshore'strademarkcliffs（悬崖）begantoriseontheirright.Away

fromtheshore,theheadwindgrewtotheforecast10knots-andkeptrisingx埼柑耳，.

Still,theyneverconsideredturningaround.

Theyhadbeenrowingmaybe90minuteswhen,quitesuddenly,thewavesgrew

totwometresandsteepened.Thewindrosetoanintense20knots,puttingthemin

dangerofflippingover，皿分回候件勇呦作[“Itwentbadfast!"shoutedTolin,whowasin

theleadabout20metresaheadofSean.Meanwhile,thewindpushedthemcloserto

thecliffwherethewavesbecameevensteeperandrolledthemintothe

water.

Seanmanagedtogetbacktokayak,holdinguntoitforstability通在分傅奴口做仆陈幼侪,

andthenpaddledusinehisfreehand，分网短用做件山动作,例£动作事）.Buthecouldn'tmakeany

progressagainstthestrongwind."Myarmsaregivingoul."Seanthoughtlohimself,

“Igottacallnow,"UsingaVHFradid亮只分将做...作clippedtohislifeiacke。过去分明后卫支

fc4

语、Seancalled:Mayday,twokayakersstuck,*'Butthetallcliffsblockedthesignal

fromreachinganyone才走和・Whenheraisedhishead,hisfriendhaddisappearedfrom

sight.,高邮Themanyelledtohisfriendatthetopofhislungs,butthere*snoreply.

Scanstruggleduntilthewavesfinallypushedhimawayfromtheshorelineand

farlheroulin（helake.Exhausled^*分力做a<u扑用、hefloatedonhisbackandconsideredhis

options.Seandecidedtoturndownwind,towardsthebeachwheretheyhad

launchedthatmorning.Itwas5kilometersaway.'Tmaswimmer,“Seantalked

himselfupandstartedkicking.人物的性格।

注意:1.续写词数应为150左右2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

ParagraphI:Luckily,afteraboutthreehours,Seansawthebeachwithinreach.

Paragraph2:TherescueteamheadedoutimmediatelyforTolin.

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SeanRoyston,andhislong-timefriend,TolinAnnishadatraditiontoheadout

foranexpeditioneveryotheryear.In2016,theydecidedtokayak(划皮艇)theRocks

NationalLakeshore,achallengingrouteonLakeSuperior.

OnSeptember13,theyloadeduponfoodandcampingdevices,climbedinto

theirkayaks,andpushedofffromabeachnearthenationalparksheadquarters.They

plannedtoreturninaweek.Theymovedthroughsmallwavesandheadednortheast.

Soonthelakeshore'strademarkcliffs(悬崖)begantoriseontheirright.Awayfromthe

shore,theheadwindgrewtotheforecast1()knots-andkeptrising.Still,theynever

consideredturningaround.

Theyhadbeenrowingmaybe90minuteswhen,quitesuddenly,thewavesgrew

totwometresandsteepened,Thewindrosetoanintense20knots,puttingthemin

dangerofflippingover.4tItwentbadfast!"shoutedTolin,whowasintheleadabout

20metresaheadofSean.Meanwhile,thewindpushedthemclosertothecliff,where

thewavesbecameevensteeperandrolledthemintothewater.

Seanmanagedtogetbacktokayak,holdingontoitforstability,andthenpaddled

usinghisfreehand.Buthecouldn'tmakeanyprogressagainstthestrongwind.4tMy

annsaregivingout."Seanthoughttohimself,UIgottacallnow,"UsingaVHFradio

clippedtohislifejacket,Seancalled:<4Mayday,twokayakersstuck,"Butthetall

cliffsblockedthesignalfromreachinganyone.Whenheraisedhishead,hisfriend

haddisappearedfromsight,Themanyelledtohisfriendatthetopofhislungs,but

there'snoreply.

Seanstruggleduntilthewavesfinallypushedhimawayfromtheshorelineand

fartheroutinthelake.Exhausted,hefloatedonhisbackandconsideredhisoptions.

Seandecidedtoturndownwind,towardsthebeachwheretheyhadlaunchedthat

morning.Itwas5kilometersaway.'Tmaswimmer,“Seantalkedhimselfupand

startedkicking.

注意:1.续写词数应为15()左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

ParagraphI:Luckily,afteraboutthreehours,Seansawthebeachwilhinreach.

Paragraph2:TherescueteamheadedoutimmediatelyforTolin.

1.文章分类及续写思路分析

文章类型：遇险救险类读后续写（涉及自然灾害、团队合作、自救与救援）。

续写构思思路：

主题：突出“坚持与希望”“友谊与救援'’的核心主题。情感基调：紧张T希望T感

动/欣慰。

布局：第一段（Sean脱险）：描写Sean如何挣扎到达海滩，强调体力耗尽但意

志坚定，最终成功。第二段（救援Tolin）:通过Sean的报告引出救援行动，可

加入Tolin的困境（如被冲到某处）和团队的协作。

框架提炼：

自救部分：Sean的体力、心理斗争、环境变化（如风浪减弱）。

救援部分：信号传递、团队反应、Tolin的获救（可暗示伏笔，如他抓住岩石等

待）。

续写注意事项：

事项说明

需衔接Sean的游泳决定、海滩距离（5公里）、无通信信号、Tolin

承接原文

失踪。

动作连贯性保持“kicking”“fk）ating”等动作的延续性。

心理描写需体现Scan的疲惫与坚持，Tolin的绝望或希望。

环境转换从湖中到海滩的视角变化，救援时的天气/时间细节。

伏笔呼应如“cliffsblockedsignal”需解决（救援队可能从其他方向搜寻）。

巧妙设计：加入象征性细节（如海鸥象征希望、夕阳暗示时间紧迫）o救援队通过

Sean的描述定位Tolin（如“nearcliffs”呼应前文）。

2.故事山模式与原文分析

故事山模式:

阶段原文内容

开端二人出发划艇，计划一周返回。

发展风浪突变，陷入危险。

高潮Scan呼救失败，Tolin失踪，Sean独自挣扎。

回落Sean决定游泳自救（续写起点）。

结局Sean脱险，Tolin获救（续写任务）。

衔接点分析:

分析角度内容原文反应句

“Igottacallnow""Myannsarc

人物刻画Sean冷静坚韧，Tolin果断

givingout.”

情感层次从自信T紧张一绝望一希望。“Itwentbadfast!,,unoreply”

“wavesgrewtotwo

关键情节点风浪突变、呼救失败、游泳决定。

metres,H4blockedthesignal”

语言特色短句突出紧张感，动作描写多。“paddledusinghisfreehand''

"I'maswimmer,Scantalked

心理描写内心独自体现挣扎。

himselfup”

分析角度内容原文反应句

“floatedonhisback,Htstarted

动作描写划艇、漂浮、踢水等。

kicking”

环境描写悬崖、风浪、信号遮挡。“tallcliffsblockedthesignal”

“neverconsideredturning

隐含主题人与自然对抗，友谊与生存意志。

around,,

情感转折从团队协作到孤独求生。“hisfriendhaddisappeared”

“noreply,Htpushedclosertothe

伏笔冲突悬崖阻碍信号，Tolin失踪。

clifr

Scan的游泳能力（'Tma

隐含线索

swimmer"）。

3.动作、心理、环境描写

动作描写

1.Hestruggledagainsttheragingwaves,hisarmsburningwithexhaustion.

（他在汹涌的波浪中挣扎，双臂因疲惫而灼痛。）

2.Withonefinalpush,hedraggedhimselfontotheshore,gaspingforair.

（他最后一次用力，把自己施上岸，大口喘气。）

3.Ihekayakflippedover,sendinghimplungingintotheicywater.

（皮划艇翻了，他猛地扎进冰冷的水中。）

4.Hepaddleddesperately,hisstrokesgrowingweakerwitheachpassing

minute.

（他拼命划桨，每一次划动都越来越无力。）

5.Clutchingthekayakforsupport,hekickedfiercelytostayafloat.

（他紧紧抓住皮划艇支撑自己，猛烈踢水以保持漂浮。）

6.Thewindhowled,whippingthewavesintotoweringwallsofwater.

（狂风呼啸，掀:起滔天巨浪。）

7.Hefoughttokeephisheadabovewater,swallowingmouthfulsofsalty

spray.

（他奋力把头露出水面，咽下几口咸涩的海水。）

8.Exhausted,hefloatedonhisback,lettingthecurrentcarryhim.

（筋疲力尽的他仰面漂浮，任由水流带着他移动。）

9.Withtremblinghands,hereachedfortheradio,hopingforamiracle.

（他用颤抖的手抓起无线电，期盼奇迹发生。）

10.Therescueboatslicedthroughthewaves,itssearchlightscanningthe

darkness.

（救援船破浪前行，探照灯扫视着黑暗。）

心理描写

1.Feargrippedhisheartasherealizedhewasutterlyalone.

（当他意识到自己完全孤立无援时，恐惧攫住了他的心。）

2.Asurgeofdeterminationpushedhimforwarddespitethepain.

（尽管疼痛难忍，一股决心推动着他继续前进。）

3.Hismindraced,calculatingtheslimchancesofsurvival.

（他的大脑飞速运转，盘算着渺茫的生存机会。）

4.Doubtcreptin—hadTolinmadeit?Washestilloutthere?

（怀疑悄然浮现——托林成功了吗？他还在那儿吗？）

5.Aflickerofhopeignitedwhenhespottedthedistantbeach.

（当他看到远处的海滩时，一丝希望被点燃。）

6.Despairthreatenedtooverwhelmhim,butherefusedtogiveup.

（绝望几乎要将他击垮，但他拒绝放弃。）

7.Histhoughtsturnedtohisfamily,fuelinghiswilltosurvive.

（他想到了家人，这增强了他求生的意志。）

8.Thesilencewasdeafening,amplifyinghisgrowingpanic.

（寂静震耳欲聋，加剧了他不断增长的恐慌。）

9.Hecursedhimselfforunderestimatingthelake'sfury.

（他咒骂自己低估了湖水的狂暴。）

10.Reliefwashedoverhimashefinallytouchedsolidground.

（当他终于踏上坚实的地面时，如释重负。）

环境描写（EnvironmentalDescriptions）

Thecliffsloomedominously,theirjaggededgescuttingintothesky.

（悬崖阴森地耸立着，锯齿状的边缘刺向天空。）

Thelakechurnedviolently,itssurfaceachaosofwhitefoam.

（湖水剧烈翻腾，表面一片白沫的混乱。）

Acoldmisthungintheair,reducingvisibilitytomeremeters.

（寒冷的雾气弥漫，能见度只有几米。）

Thewindshriekedlikeabanshee,tearingattheirclothes.

（风像女妖一样尖啸，撕扯着他们的衣服。）

Darkcloudsrolledin,blottingoutthelasttracesofsunlight.

（乌云滚滚而来，遮蔽了最后一丝阳光。）

Thewavescrashedagainsttherockswiththunderousforce.

（海浪以雷霆之势撞击着岩石。）

Theshorelineseemedimpossiblyfar,ameresmudgeonthehorizon.

（海岸线似乎遥不可及，只是地平线上的一人模糊点。）

Thecoldseepedintohisbones,sappinghisstrength.

（寒冷渗入骨髓，消耗着他的体力。）

Thestormshowednosignofrelenting,itsfuryunending.

（暴风雨毫无减弱的迹象，它的愤怒永无止境。）

Dawnbroke,castingapalelightoverthebatteredlandscape.

（黎明破晓，苍白的阳光洒在饱受摧残的景色上。）

4.常见单词的高级替换词（场景分类）

Say”一更生动的表达

•Shout（大喊）

•Yell（吼叫）

•Whisper（低语）

•Mutter（咕哝）

•Exclaim（惊呼）

例句：

•"Mayday!”heshoutedintotheradio.

•"We'resinking!"sheexclaimedinpanic.

2.“Walk”一不同方式的行走

•Stagger（蹒跚）

•Trudge（艰难跋涉）

•Stumble（绊倒）

•Crawl（爬行）

•Limp（跛行）

例句:

Hestaggeredtohisfeetafterthefall.

Exhausted,theytrudgedthroughthedeepsnow.

3."Look11-＞更具体的视觉描写

•Peer（眯眼看）

•Gaze（凝视）

•Glance（瞥一眼）

•Stare（盯着看）

•Scan（扫视）

•例句：

Hepeeredthroughthefog,searchingforland.

Shescannedthehorizonforanysignofrescue.

4.“Run”一不同速度的跑动

•Sprint（冲刺）

•Dash（猛冲）

•Bolt（突然逃跑）

•Race（竞速）

•Flee（逃离）

例句：

Hesprintedtowardtheboatbeforeitdriftedaway.

Thedeerboltedintotheforestatthesoundofgunfire.

5.“Strong”一不同强度的描述

•Fierce（猛烈的）

•Intense（强烈的）

•Powerful（强大的）

•Overwhelming（压倒性的）

•Unrelenting（无情的）

例句：

Thefiercewindmadeitimpossibletostand.

Thepainwasoverwhelming,buthekeptmoving.

5.固定搭配、词法解析及可积累语料

常见固定搭配（Collocations）

o"Bravethestorm**（勇敢面对风暴）

oTheyhadtobravethestormtoreachsafety.

o"Fightagainstthecurrent11（逆流而上）

oHefoughtagainstthecurrent,butitwasloostrong.

o"Losesightofu（看不见）

oThefogwassothickthattheylostsightoftheshore.

o"Summonone'sstrength**（鼓起力气）

oWithadeepbreath,hesummonedhisstrengthandswamon.

o"Holdonfordearlife**（拼命抓住）

oHeheldontotheropefordearlifeasthewavescrashedaroundhim.

。可积累的生词短语

“Plungeinto"（v.猛冲进）Heplungedintotheicywaterwithouthesitation.

近义词：Diveinto反义词：Emergefrom

“Giveout”（v.耗尽）Hisstrengthgaveoutafterhoursofswimming.

近义词：Runout反义词：Recover

HBlockthesignal"（v.阻碍信号）

Themountainsblockedtheradiosignal,makingcommunicationimpossible.

近义词：Jam反义词：Transmit

MAtthetopofone,slungsM（adv.用鼓大声音）

Heshoutedatthetopofhislungs,butnooneheardhim.

近义词：Loudly反义词：Silently

“Floatoaone'sback”（v.仰面漂浮）Exhausted,hefloatedonhisbacktoconserve

energy.近义词：Drift反义词：Sink

总结

动作描写：多用动态动词（struggle,paddle,kick,clutch）o

心理描写：结合情绪变化（fear,determinalion,despair,relief）。

环境描写：增强氛围（howlingwind,churningwaves,loomingcliffs）o

高级替换词：避免重复，增加细节（如"stagger”代替“walk”）。

固定搭配：提升语言地道性（"bravethestorm","holdonfordearlife"）。

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Version1:

Paragraph1:Luckily,afteraboutthreehours,Seansawthebeachwithin

reach.Hislegsnumbandarmstrembling(般立士格刽4人,秋Seankeptkicking,hiseyes

fixedonthedistantshoreline公立士格制品人枷thatgrewclearerwitheachstroke.The

familiarsightofthepinetreesandparksignsgavehimaglimmerofhope.Ashe

staggeredoulofIhewater,collapsingontothesand，现在分词做体壮动作、hegaspedforair,his

lungsburning般立上格用.人价.Helookedaroundthedesertedshoreline,tryingt。spoi

anysignofhelp,同注分劭做件质动作、buttheareawaseerilyquiet.Summoningthelastofhis

strength।丸在分皙做停M动作),hestaggeredtowardanearbyinformationboothhehadpassed

earlierthatmorning.Amapdisplayedtheemergencycontactnumberforpark

services.Withshakingfingers.Seanusedthepublicphonebesidetheboothtocallfor

help,struggliiiwtoremaincoherent分到做椁障套件、“Kayak...accident...friendstillin

water...”hechokedout.Theoperator'scalmvoicereassuredhimthatarescueteam

wasalreadysent.Thoughexhaustedanddrenched,Seanwaitedbytheroadside,eyes

fixedonthelake心立立格用情人痴,silentlypleading(琥a分河做律)动作।thatTolinwouldholdon

alittlelonger.

ParaeraDh2;TherescueteamheadedoutimmediatelyforTolin.Wilhaboal

equir)r)edwithhigh-poweredlightsandsonar，过去分”做后里童语，“讪复合结构入theteamscannedthe

roughwaterswhereSeanandTolinhadlastbeenseen.Sean,nowwrappedindry

clothes，回*分外做后又走»andsippingwarmtea，9在分外找法做后又keptdescribingeverydetail

hecouldremember-thedistancebetweenthem,thedirectionef(hewind,even

Tolin'sbrightredkayak(名反并列＞.Therescuersnavigatedcautiously,eyesscanning

therestlesswaves出立士格'Atlast,afeintcryechoedacrossthewater.Theyturned

sharplyandfoundTolin,vlinxinxtoarock，曼在分力做体障妁作储exhaustedbutali、e加」做,保、

Pulledaboard,宝击分词做主播*珏、Tolinmutteredaweak"thanks"beforepassingout.

Hourslater,bothmenlayinhospitalbeds,bruisedbutgratefuLadj疑支痔扑Thatnight,

Seanwhispered,"We'llkayakagain-butnexttime,wechecktheweather."

,亮点分析:

•少也道搭西己：keepkicking;gaspforair;summonstrength;radiofor;

wrappedin;sippingtea

•同义彳司替木系：collapsed(felldown),expressionturnedgrave(looked

serious),navigate(sleer/guide)

•情绪第写：aglimmerofhope;lungsburning;expressionturnedgrave;

anxious;grateful

•动作描写：staggered;collapsed;crawled;wavedweakly;scanned;

clinging

表达积累与升级：

exhausted一drained/wornout

shouted一criedout/yelled/calledatthetopofone'slungs

help—►assistance/aid/rescue

例句：

•Hecollapsedontothesand,completelydrainedfromthefightagainstthewaves.

•Withtremblingfingers,hemanagedtodialtheradiofrequencyandcallforaid.

•Theranger'sfaceturnedgraveasherealizedtheseriousnessofthesituation.

•Clingingtohope,Scanwaitedfornewsofhisfriend.

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burnedwithexhaustionaju■得小,butthesightoftheshoreignitedafinalsurgeof

determination.Grittinghisteethagainstthepain<s分例做件,动作、heforcedhisnumb

limbstokeepmovingthroughtherelentlesswaves.Thecurrent,nowmercifully

weaker,seemedtoguidehimforward环境.其)asifMureitselfacknowledgedhis

struggle.Witheachlaboredstroke,theshorelinegrewclearer,无灵士港句,-anarrowstrip

ofgoldensandframedb、iaggedcliffs法立比木).Ashefinallydraggedhimselfonto

solidground,hisbodycollapsedlikeapuppetwithcutslrings,比七.|heVFIIradif,

miraculouslystillattachedtohislifejacket过去分科世心更定论),crackledweakly.

SiinimcninghisImtcimcecfstrength,.亦4“像伟八Seanpressedthetransmitbutton

andgasped,"Mayday...twokayakers...Tolinmissing...nearthecliffs..."before

darknessengulfedhim，坏电描3n.Inthedistance,thefaintwailofsirenspiercedthe

howlingwind.

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Therescueteamheadedoutimmediate^forTolin.ArmedwithSean'slast

knowncoordinates过4分㈣值才式与痔i.therescueteam,onboat,slicedthroughthe

swirlingwaterstowardthecliffs,anotherteamonhclicoptcn&a立格％Meanwhile,

Tolinclungdesperatelytoanarrowrockledge,hisbod、batteredb、wavesand

hisrightlexbleedingfromadeepgash牌止土格划品人物，.Thestormhadseparatedthem

violenllyi环境誉耳）,tossinghimagainst（heunfaraivingstoneface，现々分方做件*动作）."Hold

on,"hemutteredthroughchatteringteeth,rccallin?Sean'sstubbornoptiniismau分办做

傅植动作।duringtheirtraining.Justashisgripbegantofalter,amechanicalroarcut

throughthewind-ahelicopter!WavingframicaHywilhone现在分词做件.动作）while

clingingtotherockwiththeolheiiuuts、Tolinwatchedasarescueswimmer

descendedonaswayingcable冷景*%％Stronghandssecuredhiminaharness，借代，,and

astheyascended,tearsofreliefmixedwiththestinwieRrainonhisfacn.

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Luckily,afteraboutthreehours,Seemsawthebeachwithinreach.Everykick

sentsearingpainthroughhisexhaustedlegs，总灵士语班,butthedistantshoreline

fueledhisdetermination环境”夙料小.Thecurrent,nowworkingiehisfavor,carried

himcloser.Hisvisionblurredwithfatigueandsaltwater,buthefocusedonihe

rhythnicmotionofhisstrokes-left、right、breathe.Whenhisfingersfinallyscraped

thecoarsesand,herolledontohisback,acrackin?soundcchoingiH"土格）.TheVHF

radio!Wilhslifl,Iremblingfingers,hefumbledforthedevicestillclippedtohislife

vest“过击分HutgjL定“Mayday...kayakerdown...nearthecliffs../'hemuttered.

Somewherebeyondthefadingstormclouds,thedistantbutunmistakablevoice

ofhelicopterbladesansweredhiscall.

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TherescueteamheadedoutimmediatelyforTulin.UsingSean'sdescriptionas

theirguide,thesearch-and-rescueteamzeroedinonthetoweringcliffswherethe

currentsconverged.Tolin,nearlyworn-outbutconscious^dj傲主》扑hadmanagedto

wedgehimselfintoanarrowcrevice,theirkayakshatteredagainsttherocks

below.tti±»..Thestorm'sfuryhadsubsided,butthewavesstillcrashedagainst

rockviolently."Seanwouldnevergiveup,"hewhispered,forcinghimselft。stay

alert令5做停脸劫住,de*nitethehcne-deer）cold.Suddenly,a