读后续写十类情感描写素材积累与仿写（词-句-文） 解析版（知识清单）-2026年高考英语一轮复习

专题12读后续写十类情感描写素材积累与仿写(词一句-文)解析版

目录

01-情感细节描写——紧张和焦虑

02.•情感细节描写一喜悦和快乐

03••情感细节描写——惊吓和恐惧

04.•情感细节描写——吃惊和震惊

05-情感细节描写——激动和兴奋

06.•情感细节描写——感激和感动

07.•情感细节描写——焦虑和担忧

08-情感细节描写——生气和愤怒

09-情感细节描写——悲伤和难过

10-情感细节描写——羞愧和后悔

11・•情感细节描写一综合训练6篇

01--情感细节描写——紧张和焦虑

一、情感描写类经典词汇

1.形容词/副词：nervous,uneasy,tense,anxious,nervously

2.名词/动词：tension,anxiety,tremble,shake

3.固定短语：

①感觉手心出汗喉咙发紧feelone'spalmsweatingandthroattight

②感觉坐立不安feellikesittingonpinsandneedles

③心里发慌with/havebutterfliesinone'sstomach

④囚焦虑而直页抖tremblewithanxiety

二、情感描写类句式精炼

L姐的心剧烈跳动,腿打着颤。(beat)

2.我焦虑不安，坐立不安。(pin)

3我的心跳加速,头脑一片空白，(blank)

4.他的脸色苍白,站在那里说不出话。(tongue-tied)

5.期末考试前，我总是紧张不安，(stomach)

【参考答案】

LHerheartbeatwildlyandherlegstrembled.

2.Fullofanxiety,Ifeltlikesittingonpinsandneedles.

3.Myheartbegantoraceandmymindwentblank.

4.Hisfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.

5.Beforethefinalexam,Ialwayshavebutterfliesinmystomach.

三、情感描写类语篇运用

WhenIwasstandingbackstage,j.WhenmynamewascalledIcould

2.Mytremblinglegsbroughtmeonstage,andIcould3.

However,thehallcrowdedwithaudiencemademeevenmoreuneasy.Myheartwas4,

asifitwereabouttopop.Istoodtheresonervously（hatI5,wonderingwhattodonext.

我站在后台时，紧张感突然涌上心头。听到自己的名字被喊到，我顿时心怦怦直跳。我拖着发颤的双腿

走上台，只觉得手心在得汗，心跳也越来越快。然而，坐满观众的大厅让我更加不安。我的心怦怦狂跳,仿

佛下一秒就要跳出来。我紧张地站在那里，感觉喉咙发紧,完全不知道接下来该做什么。

【参考答案】

Lnervousnesscamefloodingoverme

2.feelbutterfliesinmystomach

3.feelmypalmssweatingandhcarlracing

4.pounding/thumpinehard

5.feltm、throattight

02--情感细节描写一喜悦和快乐

一、情感描写类经典词汇

1.形容词/副词/名词：joy,joyful,joyfully,pleased,pleasant,pleasure,glad,gladly,enjoy,enjoyable,happy,

happiness,happily,delight,delighted,cheerful,cheerfully,overjoyed,merry,merrily

2.动词/介词短语：toone'sdelight/joy/happiness/pleasure,beseizedbyjoy,beovercomewithhappiness,be

wildwithjoy

二、情感描写类句式精炼

1.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。（twinkle）

2.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。（light）

3.一阵激动声穿过他们。（ripple）

4.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。（shine）

5.他炫耀着自己的新自行车，咧着嘴笑个不停。（grin）

【参考答案】

1.Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.

2.Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.

3.Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.

4.Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.

5.Hegrinnedfromeartoearasheshowedoffhisnewbike.

三、情感描写类语篇运用

(2020新课标卷)Learningthechildren'sidea,MrsMeredithwasjthatshesmiledbrightly.

Then,childrengotdowntopreparingpopcornjoyfully.Withabasketofpopcorn,theyleftforBernard'shouse

2tosharewithBernardthegoodplan.Hearingwhattheysaid,Bernardwassodelightedthathe

almostjumpedup,3.At(hesightof(hebasketofpopcorn,hisparents

4too.Later,5,thepopcornwassotastythatitwassoon

soldout.

得知孩子们的想法后，梅雷迪思太太欣喜若狂,笑容灿烂。随后，孩子们兴高采烈地开始准备爆米花。

他们提着一篮爆米花，开开心心地动身去侑纳德家,想和他分享这个好计划。听完他们的话，fl纳德高兴得

差点跳起来，眼里满是泪水。看到那篮爆米花，他的父母也满心欢喜。后来，让他格外高兴的是,这爆米花

味道极佳，很快就卖光了。

【参考答案】

1.sooverjoyed/delighted/pieased

2.cheerfully/happily/joyfully

3.withtearsfillinghiseyes

4.wereseizedwithhappiness

5.muchtohisdelight

03-情感细节描写——惊吓和恐惧

一、情感描写类经典词汇

1.形容词：afraid,alarmed,scared,scary,frightened,frightening,fearful,panicky,terrified,terrifying

2.名词/动词：fear,scare,fright,frighten,terror

3.短语:

①吓得发抖shake/tremblewithfear/terror

②把……吓死scare/frighten...todeath

③吓得魂不附体bescaredoutofone'swits

④吓呆/吓傻freeze/befrozenwithfear

⑤吓得呆若木鸡standrootedtothespotwithfear

⑥惊慌失措beseizedwithpanic

⑦吓得要死bedeadwithfright

二、情感描写类句式精炼

1.她吓得双手颤抖。(shake)

2.我害怕极了。(overwhelm)

3.她吓得浑身发抖。(flood)

4.我浑身发抖，手心都出汗了.Uremhle)

3.我一打开盒子，就惊奇地睁大眼睛。（wide）

4.听到这个意外的消息，Mary呆住了，动弹不得。（root）

5.我们靠近，发现车主是一个六岁男孩，都惊呆了。(freeze)

【参考答案】

1.Alookofsurprisespreadoverherface.

2.MyjawdroppedinastonishmentwhenIsawthesizeoftheaudience.

3.ThemomentIopenedthebox,myeyesgrewwideingreatsurprise.

4.Hearingtheunexpectednews,Marywasnumbwithshock,asifrootedtotheground.

5.Frozenwithshock,weapproachedandfoundthedriverofthecarwasasix-year-oldboy.

三、情感描写类语篇运用

j,a(ornadooccurredinasmalltownnearby.At(hebadnews,Mary2.

Then,Marysharedthenewswithlierchildren,andaskediftheywouldliketosharewhattheyhadwiththeless

fortunatepeople.Shewasastonishedthatallthechildrenwerewillingtodonatesomething.WhenAnneplacedher

favoritetoyinthebox,3herbrother'sface.He4.

Withoutaword,hewentbacktohisroomandranbackwithhisfavoritetoytotheliving-room.5.

Maryrealizedthathehadalsorecognisedwhatheractionmeant.

令人震惊的是,附近的一个小镇遭遇了龙卷风。听到这个坏消息，玛丽震惊得僵在原地，像被钉在地上

一样。随后，玛丽把这个消息告诉了孩子们，并问他们是否愿意把自己的东西分享给那些不幸的人。让她惊

讶的是，所有孩子都愿意捐出•些物品。当安妮把自己最喜欢的玩具放进箱子时，弟弟脸上撩过一丝惊讶。

他睁大眼睛盯着安妮,没说一句话，转身跑回自己的房间，乂抱着自己最喜欢的玩具跑回了客厅。玛丽感到

惊讶,她意识到弟弟也明白了姐姐这个举动的意义。

【参考答案】

1.Topeople'sshock

2.frozewithshock,asifrootedtotheground

3.asparkofsurpriseflashedacross

4.staredatherwithwideeyes

5.Astonished

05-情感细节描写——激动和兴奋

一、情感描写类经典词汇

1.形容词/副词/名词：excited,thrilled,exciting,thrilling,excitedly,excitement,thrill

2.高级短语词块：

①令某人激动的是toone'sexcitenicnt/thrill

②激动得满脸通红flushwithexcitement

③抑制内心的激动containone*sexcitement

④激动地with/inexcitement

二、情感描写类句式精炼

L他的脸由于激动而放出光彩。［lightup)

2.这对双胞胎互相拥抱，留下来激动和高兴的眼泪。(shed)

3.当她接过献花时，激动的泪水充满了她的眼睛“(wellup)

4.老师的鼓励温暖着他的心，他感到一阵兴奋。（surge）

5.当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋得不能自己。（flood）

【参考答案】

1.Hisfacewaslitupwithexcitement.

2.Thetwinshuggedeachotherandshedtearsofexcitementandjoy.

3.Tearsofexcitementwelledupinhereyesassheacceptedtheflowers.

4.Theteacher'sencouragementwarmedhisheartandhefeltasurgeofexcitement.

5.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awildexcitementfloodedoverher.

三、情感描写类语篇运用

Onihcjourneyiothelake,\.Mominsistedihatwegocampinginthenextvillage,

2.Themomentwearrivedatthecampingplace,Momcouldn'twailtostormoutand

excitedlyurgedustoputupthetent.Then,Momwalkedtowardsthelake,andthencame

3.Enjoyingthebeautifulview.Mom4.Certainly,as

itwasthefirsttimethatwehadhelpedFathercookfoodoutdoors,mybrotherandIalsofeltthrilled.Breathingthe

freshairandsmellingthedeliciousfood,we5.

在去湖边的路上，一股兴奋湖涌上妈妈心头。妈妈坚持要我们去下一个村子露营，眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的

光芒。我们一到露营地，妈妈就迫不及待地冲了出去，兴奋地催促我们搭帐篷。接着，妈妈朝湖边走去，随

后传来一^<05^叫。欣赏着美丽的景色，妈妈几乎抑制不住自己的兴奋。当然，因为这是我们第一次帮

爸爸在户外做饭，我和弟弟也感到特别兴奋。呼吸着新鲜空气，闻着美食的香味，我们兴奋得蹦蹦跳跳。

【参考答案】

1.awaveofexcitementsweptoverMom

2.hereyesglittering/twinklingwithexcitement

3.anexcitedscream/ascreamofexcitement

4.couldhardlycontainherexcitement

5.jumpedupanddownwithexcitement

06-情感细节描写——感激和感动

一、情感描写类经典词汇

1.名词/动词：gratitude,appreciation,thank,move,touch,appreciate

2.形容词/副词：thankful,grateful,moved,touched,thankfully,gratefully

3.固定短语：

①流下感激的泪水shedtearsofgratitude

②感动得落泪bemovedtotears

③对……深怀感激haveadeepgratitudetowards

④心怀感激地withgralitude/appreciation

⑤非常感激某人owesbalot/agreatdeal

⑥被……深深感动bedeeplymoved/touchedby...

二、情感描写类句式精炼

1.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。(nii)

2.我们一句话也说不出来,泪水模糊了双限。(blur)

3.喜悦的泪水涌了出来,兄弟姐妹紧紧拥抱在一起时。(well)

4.他泪流满面，跑到妈妈温暖的拥抱前,对她说了声谢谢。(stream)

5.当她听到消息的那一刻，一股暖流涌过心头，消融了她的所有恐惧。(wave)

【参考答案】

1.Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.

2.Wefailedtoutterasingleword,tearsblurringoureyes.»

3.Tearsofjoywelleduptheireyesasthebrotherandsisterhuggedtightlytogether.

4.Withtearsstreamingdownherface,herantomum'swarmhug,andsaidthankstoher.

5.Themomentsheheardthenews,awaveofwarmthmovedthroughher,meltingawayallhisfears.

三、情感描写类语篇运用

Peterwasnearlyknockingintoapassingcarwhenapasser-bypushedhimtosafety.

1,hethankedthepasser-by2,“Thankyou

somuch!”Butthepasscr-byjustsmiledwarmly.3onthecoldday,andhe

begantobelievetherewaskindnessineverycorner.Itwasverytouchingtoseehowmuchstrangerscouldcarefor

eachother.4,thecrowdclappedtheirhandsloudly.Later,knowingwha(had

happened.Peter'smother5.

彼得差点撞上一辆路过的汽车，这时一位路人把他推到了安全的地方。感激的泪水在他眼眶里打转,他

喉咙哽咽着向路人道谢:“太谢谢您了！”但路人只是温暖地笑了笑。寒冷的天气里，一股暖意涌上彼得的

心头,他开始相信每个角落都有善意存在V看到陌生人之间能如此彼此关怀，场面I•分感人v众人深受触动,

纷纷大声鼓起掌来。后来，彼得的妈妈得知了事情的经过，流下了喜悦又感激的泪水。

【参考答案】

1.Withgratefultearswellingupinhiseyes

2.witha加mpinhisthroat

3.AfeelingofwarmthsweptoverPeter

4.Moveddeeply

5.shedtearsofjoyandgratitude

07-情感细节描写——焦虑和担忧

一、情感描写类经典词汇

1.形容词/副词：anxious,worried,worrying,helpless,hopeless,concerned,anxiously

2.名词：anxiety,worry,helplessness,hopelessness,concern

3.固定短语：

①withanxiety焦虑地

②beconcernedabout担忧

③beworriedabout担心

©fullofanxiety焦虑不安

⑤feelingsofanxietyandconcern焦虑和担忧的感觉

二、情感描写类句式精炼

L他紧张地在房间里踱来踱去。(pace)

2.他慢慢感到一丝焦虑。(anxiety)

3.陌生的房间使她感到紧张不安。(uneasy)

4.被一种强烈的焦虑感抓住，我开始感到恐慌。(seize)

5.父亲皱起眉头，困惑而焦虑地望着我。(worried)

【参考答案】

l.Hewaspacingnervouslyupanddowntheroom.

2.Aslightfeelingofanxietyslowlycreptuponhim.

3.Theunfamiliarroommadeherfeelnervousanduneasy.

4.Seizedbyastrongsenseofanxiety,Ibegantopanic.

5.Myfatherwrinkledhisforeheadandgazedatme,confusedandworried.

三、情感描写类语篇运用

Havingstrayedfromthehikingtrail,theywerestuckinthemountain-withnothingtodobutwaitanxiously

forrescue,].Aseveningworeonandthesunsetbehindpeaks,

2,fearsofanightinthewildfloodingtheirminds.Worsestill,thickfogcreptinto

theforest,soonswallowingeverythinginpitchdarknessand3.Tonystoodthere

helpless,4.Mary,meanwhile,wasclosetotears,herbody

5.

他们偏离徒步路线后，便困在了山里——除了焦急地等待救援，别无他法，焦虑正一点点涌上心头。

随膂夜幕渐深，太阳落到山峰后方，他们愈发担忧,在野外过夜的恐惧充斥着脑海。更糟糕的是，浓雾渐渐

渗入森林，很快便将一切吞噬在漆黑之中，让他们更觉无助。托尼无助地站在那里，凝视着雾气。与此同时，

玛丽几乎要哭出来，身体因焦虑与恐惧微微期投。

【参考答案】

1.anxietysweepingovertheirhearts

2.theygrewincreasinglyworried

3.leavingthemmorehelpless

4.feelinghelplessandgazingintothefog

5.tremblingslightlywithbothanxietyandfear

08-情感细节描写生气和愤怒

一、情感描写类经典词汇

1.形容词/副词：angry,annoyed,annoying,angrily

2.名词/动词：anger;annoyance,rage

3.短语：

①气得发抖tremblewithanger

②感到一股怒火aburstofanger

③气红了脸flushwithanger

④生某人的气getmad/crossatsb

⑤令某人生气的是toone*sannoyance

⑥内心愤怒地inanger

二、情感描写类句式精炼

1.他怒容满面。(cloud)

2.他气得浑身发抖。(tremble)

3.吉姆满腔愤怒，一句话也说不出来。(utter)

4.一抹愤怒的红晕掠过摩德斯通先生的面颊。(flush)

5.他双手抓着那个包，一股怒火在心中燃烧。(burn)

【参考答案】

l.Hisfacewascloudedwithanger.

2.Hetrembledwithangerfromheadtofoot.

3.Filledwithfury,Jimwasunabletoutterasingleword.

4.AflushofangerspreadacrossMr.Stone'scheeks.

5.Hegraspedthebaginbothhands,afireofrageburninginhisheart.

三、情感描写类语篇运用

Tom'srecentbehaviorwouldalwaysmakeMr.Smith\.Findinghishomework

wasunfinishedagain,Mr.Smith2,with3.Mr.

Smith,whosepatiencehadwornthin,calledhisfathertocomplainangrily.Learninghissonhadbeenso

badly-behaved,Tom'sfatherfellsoangrythathe4,“You'dbetterexplain

whafsgoingonl^However,Tomhunghisheadandsaidnothing.Hisfather'scolorcameup,and

5.Eventually,unabletocontainhisanger,hisfather6.

汤姆最近的表现总让史密斯先生怒火史烧。看到他的作业又没完成时，史密斯先生怒喝二更，眼里满是

不耐烦。此时耐心早已耗尽的史密斯先生，怒气冲冲地给汤姆的父亲打了电话告状。得知儿子表现这么差，

汤姆的父亲气得重重地捶了一下桌子:“你最好解释清楚到底怎么回事！”可汤姆只是套拉着脑袋，一言不

发。父亲的脸涨了起来，浓重的怒火像乌云一来笼罩在他脸上。最终，父亲再也按捺不住怒火，摔门而出，

身后的门被重重甩上。

【参考答案】

1.explodewithanger

2.letoutacryofanger

3.hiseyesshiningwithannoyance

4.slammedhisfistonthetable

5.aheavyragecameoverhisfacelikeadarkcloud

6.stormedoutoftheroom,slaniniingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim

09.•情感细节描写——悲伤和难过

一、情感描写类经典词汇

1.形容词/副词：sorrowful,sad,depressed,frustrated,lonely,upset,depressing,sadly

2.名词：sorrow,loneliness,sadness,depression

3短.语：

①一阵孤独/悲伤asense/waveofloneliness/sadness

②难过得麻木benumbwithsorrow/sadness

③心情沉重withasinkingheart

④悲伤不已beovercomewithsorrow

⑤流泪bereducedtotears

⑥悲伤如潮涌sadnesscomesinwaves

二、情感描写类句式精炼

1.一阵悲伤袭身而来。(grief)

2.查理悲痛欲绝。(overcome)

3.一阵悲伤涌上她的心头。(well)

4.他难过地摇摇头，潸然泪下。(shake)

5,姐悲伤得忍不住哭泣。(sob)

【参考答案】

l.Aflashofgriefsweptuponme.

2.Charleswasovercomewithgrief.

3.Awaveofsadnesswelledupinsideher.

4.Heshookhisheadsadly,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.

5.Shewasseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn'thelpsobbingbitterly.

三、情感描写类语篇运用

Iwasselectedtorepresentmyschoolintheapproachingcontestthisyear.ButIwassoproudthatIneglected

theimportanceofpracticingforthecontest.Onthedayofthecontest,Ibegantoloseconfidenceinmyselfand

sufferedfromstagefright.IntheendIwalkedoffthestage,myeyesfilledwithtears.Finally,resultswereannounced

after(hecontest.Ididnotwinanyprizes.IJ.12and

movedoutofthelecturehall.Ihungmyheadinsadness,3.Onentering

theclassroom,4andtearsstreameddownmychecks.Thenext

followingdays,Ifeltlike5,notwantingtodoanything.

今年，我被选中代表学校参加即将到来的比赛。可我太过骄傲，竟忽视了为比赛练习的重要性。比赛当

天，我开始对自己失去信心，还犯了怯场。最后，我退出了舞台，眼里满是泪水。比赛结束后，结果公布了。

我没有获得任何奖项。我咬着下唇，心里满是难过。我拖着沉重的双腿,心情沉重地走出报告厅,难过地低

着头，浓重的悲伤笼罩着双眼。一走进教室，失望与悲伤就阵阵袭来,眼泪顺着脸颊流下。在那之后的几天

里，我感觉自己像沉浸在悲伤的海洋里,什么都不想做。

【参考答案】

1.bitmybottomlipwithsadnessfillingherheart

2.draggedmyheavylegswithasinkingheart

3.greatsorrowcloudingmyeyes

4.disappointmentandsadnesscameinwaves

5.1wasfloatinginanoceanofsadness

10-情感细节描写——羞愧和后悔

一、情感描写类经典词汇

1.动词类：shame使感到羞耻embarrass使尴尬；使难堪regret易混后悔

2.名词类：embarrassment使人难堪的事awkwardness尴尬笨拙shame羞愧羞耻心guilt内疚regret后悔

3.形容词类：embarrassed感到尴尬的awkward令人尴尬的ashamed感到羞愧的shame害羞的

4.短语类:

①掩饰某人的尴尬hideone'sembarrassment

②因尴尬而满脸通红one'sfaceflushedwithshame

③感到脸阵阵发烫feelbloodrushingtoone'sface

④感觉如坐针毡feellikesittingonpinsandneedles

⑤如热锅上的蚂蚁actasaratonthehotbrick

⑥后悔做某事beashamedof...

⑦满心愧疚beconsumedwithguilt

⑧令某人深感遗憾的是muchtoone'sregret

二、情感描写类句式精炼

1.他脸上掠过一阵羞赧的神情。(cross)

2.我满怀内疚，冲出去向汤姆道歉:。(guilt)

3.她感到羞愧难当，脸上滚烫。（brun）

4.我被一阵内疚所压倒，言语无法表达我的遗憾。（overcome）

5.我觉得鼻子一酸，不争气地的眼泪掉了下来。（lump）

【参考答案】

l.Anexpressionofshamecrossedhisface.

2.Filledwithguilt,IrushedouttoapologizetoTom.

3.Shefeltsoashamedthatshecouldfeelherfaceburning.

4.1wasovercomebyawaveofguiltandwordsfailedtoexpressmyregret.

S.Alumpcameintomythroat,andtearsrolleddownmycheekswithoutstruggle.

三、情感描写类语篇运用

BynowwewerestandinginthelongholidaylinetopaythebillandIfiguredi（wasagoodchance.Ithrew

myselfontheground,screaming,wantthattelephone.,'overandoveragain.<lBecky,you'dbettergetupatonce”,

mymothersaidwithatremblingvoice,].Turningadeafeartoher,Iwasstillinfull

tantrum.Ashamed,mymotherstoodthere,2.Shesuddenlylaydownbesidemeon

（hefloor,likewisekickingandscreamingoutforasiringofsuchitemsasshewaseagertopossess.Seeingthat,I

becameincreasinglyembarrassedandcould3,with

4.5andIfeltasifthewholeworldwas

watchingus."Mama,stop.Mama,getup."Itearfullypleaded.Shegavemealookandroseup,brushingthedust

fromherclothes.

到这时，我们正排在节假日的长队里等着结账，我觉得这是个好机会。我往地上一躺，大喊着“我就要

那个电话（玩具）”，一遍又一遍。“贝基，你赶紧起来！"妈妈声音发颤，满脸通红，难掩尴尬。我根本没

理她，还在撒泼。妈妈很羞愧地站在那儿，感觉脸都发烫了。她突然也在我旁边躺下，学着我的样子又踢乂

喊，还嚷嚷着要一堆她自己“超想要”的东西。我一看这架势，尴尬得不行，心怦怦狂跳，脸也烧得厉害。

周围的空气好像都凝固了,我感觉全世界的人都在盯着我们看。“妈妈，别闹了！妈妈，起来啊！“我带着

哭腔哀求道。她看了我一眼，然后站起来，拍了拍衣服上的灰。

【参考答案】

1.embarrassmentwritteninherredface

2.feelingthebloodrushingtoherface

3.feelmyheartthumpingwildly

4.myfaceburningbadly

5.AHtheairseemedtodisappear

1L•情感细节描写一综合训练6篇

1.（25-26高三上•湖南•阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇

完整的短文。

Whenenteringseventhgrade,Iwasexcitedaboutmanynewthings,butonethingreallybotheredme—I

startedgettingacne（青春痘）.Initially,itwasjustalittle,butthen,itseemedlikeovernight,myfacewascovered

withit.Itriedtohideitwithinyhair,butitjustwouldn'twork.

Iwasconsumedwithworrythatmypeerswouldmakefunofme.Icouldn'tconcentrateinclass,asmymind

wasconstantlypreoccupiedwithmyappearance,causingmygradestoslipsharply.Istartedtofeelinferiortomy

classmatesandevenavoidinteractionwiththem.Itriedtogetridoftheacne.Iwashedmyfacemultipletimesaday,

usingallsortsofacnecreamsIfound.Ialsoavoidedsnacksthatmightcauseit.Butallendedupinvain.

Oneday,ourschoolannouncedasportsdayandtheteacheraskedustoformourownteams.Asasports

enthusiast,Ihadbeeneagerlyexpectingit,butIwasscaredthatnoonewouldjoinmebecauseofhowIlooked.

Standinginfrontofthemirror,IkeptimagininghowmyclassmateswouldreactwhenIaskedthemtoteamupwith

me.Thefearofrejectionheldmebackfromapproachingthem.

Butthen,Kimcametome,“Doyouwanttojoinusfbrtherelayrace（接力赛）？I'veseenyourunbeforeand

you'vegotthespeed.Ifyoujoinus,we'llhaveagoodchancetowin.''Indisbelief,Imanagedtoutter"Yes”,still

feelingself-consciousbutalsoincrediblygrateful.

Alongwiththreeotherclassmates,Isignedupfortherelayrace.Wctrainedanddiscussedstrategicstogether,

withnoonepayinganyattentiontomyacne.Thankstomyspeedadvantage,Iwasevenassigned（orunthefinalleg

—themostcriticalroleintherace.

注意：

（1）续写词数应为150个左右；

（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thencamethelong-awaitedsportsday.

Thevictorywasaturningpointinmyjuniorlife.

【答案】

Thencamethelong-awaitedsportsday.Nlypalmsweresweat、asIstoodatthefinalpositionofthetrack.

Whenthethirdrunnerapproached,Igrabbedthebatonfirmlyandsprintedlikethewind.CheerseruptedasIovertook

twoopponents.Crossingthefinishlinefirst,Isawmyteammatesrushinptowardsmewithjoyfulscreams.Tomy

surprise,classmatespattedmyshoulderexcitedly,theireyesshiningwithadmirationinsteadofiudement.Kim

huggedme,"You'reoursuperhero!”Noonementionedmyacnc—theyonlyrememberedmyflyingfigureonthe

track.

Thevictorywasaturningpointinmyjuniorlife.GraduallyIrealizedpeoplevaluedmyabilitiesmorethanmy

appearance.Istartedraisingmyhandinclassagainandjoinedtheschoolbasketballteam.Thoughacnestill

occasionallytroubledme,Isloppedhidingbehindmyhair.Whenanewstudentonceaskedaboutmyskin,Kim

immediatelydefended,"That'sjusthiswarriorpaintfromsavingourrelayrace!”Wealllaughed,andIfinally

understoodtruefriendshipseesbeyendsurfaces.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了作者进入七年级后因长青春痘而自卑，担心同学嘲笑，成绩

下滑，在运动会接力赛报名时，Kim邀请作者加入，作者最终和队友们一起训练并在比赛中获胜的故事。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“终于到了期待己久的运动会了”可知，第一段可描写作者在运动会接力赛上的表

现，以及获胜后同学们的反应，突出大家对作者能力的认可，而非关注其青春痘。

②由第二段首句内容“这次胜利是我初中生活的一个转折点”可知，第二段可描写这次胜利这作者的影

响，作者开始积极融入集体，不再因青春痘而自卑，明白了真正的友谊是超越外表的。

2.续写线索：运动会开始一努力比赛——同学欣赏一作者感悟——明白友谊真谛

3.词汇激活

行为类

①抓住：grab/seize

②拥抱：hug/embrace

③举手：raiseone'shand/putupone'shand

情绪类

①激动地：excitedly/withexcitement

②欣赏：admiration/appreciation

［点睛］［高分句型2］MypalmsweresweatyasIstoodatthefinalpositionofthetrack.（运用了as弓I导时

间状语从句）

【高分句型2］GraduallyIrealizedpeoplevaluedmyabilitiesmorethanmyappearance.（运用了省略引导

词that的宾语从句）

2.（25-26高三上•河南•阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇

完整的短文。

Hanksatgluedto（heTVasmeteorologists（气象学家）trackedHurricaneHelene.Thestorm,packing140

mphwinds,wassettohitFloridabeforemovingtowardstheCarolinas.ForHank,65,thetargethitclosertohome:

BoilingSprings,SouthCarolina,whereheandhissecondwife,Debbie,hadjustmovedtocareforher84-ycar-old

mother.

ButHankhadmoreurgentmattersthanthestorm.OnSaturday,hisoldestdaughter,Judith,33、wouldmarry

inJohnsonCity,Tennessee.Hank,who'doncejokedabouthispoorsenseoftime,hadbeenorderedtoarriveontime.

SoheandDebbieplannedatwo-hourdrivetoJohnsonCityonFriday,stayingovernightintheiroldhome,wherehe

couldchangedintothesuithehadpreparedforthewedding,thenwalkingJudithdowntheaisle（过道］inthechurch

at10a.m.sharp.

ByFridaymorning,Helene'swindsrockedtheirnewhouse.By6p.m.,powerandcellservicewerestillout.

Debbie,though,refusedtoleavehermother."I'llstay,“shesaidsadly."Ican'tmissthis,“Hankreplied,huggingher

goodbye.HepackedhisSUVandheadedforJohnsonCity.

Thehighwayquicklyturnedchaotic.Crewsclearedfallentreesascarsinchedalong.By1():30p.m.,Hank

haddrivenlessthan40miles.Ataroadblock,stalepolicemendeliveredbadnews:"Bridgeswashedout.Nobody's

gettingthrough.''Hankleanedin."Mydaughter'sgettingmarriedtomorrow.Tmwalkingherdowntheaisle.''The

policemanshookhishead."Backroadsarcfloodedtoo.Waituntilmorning.”

ButHankcouldn'twait.Heplottedadetoui•(绕路).Afteraseven-hourdrive,hisSUVhadanemptygastank.

Itwas2:15a.m.HanklockedhisSUV,pulabackpackoverhisshoulder."Notbattle-ready,5,hethought,"butit'll

do.”Hegrabbedatreebranchforprotectionandsetoffwithhiscellphoneflashlight.

Thedarkhiddangers.A7-footwallofmudandtreesblockedhispath.Hecrawledthroughanarrowgap,

losingashoeinthemud.By4a.in..HankreachedtheJacksonBridgeovertheNolichuckyRiver.Herushedacross,

onlytobestoppedbyflashinglights.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答；

"Areyoutheonetryingtogettoyourdaughter'swedding?”apolicemanasked,smiling.

Shininginwhile,Judithstoodbeforehim.

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

“Areyoutheonetryingtogettoyourdaughter'swedding?”Apolicemanasked,smiling."We'realltalking

aboutyou.Wantaride?”TeariofgratitudefilledHank's、vearveves.ThepolicemandrovehimtohisoldJohnson

Cityhome.Themomenttheyarrived,itwas6a.n】.Aftershowingappreciationtothepolicemanagainandagain.

Hankhurriedintohisoldhouse.Inside,everythingwasashe'dleftit:acomfortablebed,cleanclothesandawedding

suithe'dprepared.Hehadn'tsleptin24hours,butherefusedtoco.lapse.Heshoweredinice-coldwater,shaved,

andpulledonthesuit.HegottothechurchandsawJudith.

Shininginwhite,Judithstoodbeforehim.Hankbrokedownandsodidhisdaughter.44Dad,Ithoughtyou

wouldn'tmakeit/5sheshedtearsofsurpriseandexcitement,wrappinghiminahug.Themusicswelled.Hank

tookJudith'sarm,smilingthroughtears.SixteenhoursafterleavingBoilingSprings—throughmud,storms,and

strongwill一hedidwhathe'dpromised.Astheywalked,Judithleanedinandasked."What'sinyourcar.Dad?”

Hanktouchedit:asmudgeofmud.Akeepsakefromthejourney.Hegrinnedather,“Nothingwouldeverkeepme

fromyou,sweetie.”

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了65岁的汉克在飓风来袭时，不顾恶劣天气和交通中断，执意前

往田纳西州约翰逊市参加大女儿朱迪思婚礼的故事。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“您是那个要去参加女儿婚礼的人吗？”一位警察微笑着问道。可知，第一段可描写警

察与汉克之间的交流以及警察对汉克提供的帮助。

②由第二段首句内容“朱迪思身着白色衣裙，站在他面前。”可知，第二段可描写父女见面后的对话以及心

理活动。

2.续写线索：飓风来袭——女儿婚礼一执意前往——警察帮助一准时到