感动类情绪表达 背默与仿写（读后续写）解析版

感动类情绪表达背默与仿写（读后续写）

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0晨读背诵：背而迁移举一反三

一、晨读素材.必背单词

1.感动类名词:

初级emotion情感；touch触动

高级gratitude感激；appreciation感动

2.感动类动词:

初级move感动；touch触动；affect影响

高级stir激发；impress打动；overwhelm使深受感动

3.感动类形容词:

初级moving感人的；touching动人的；warm温暖的

高级emotional情感的；heartfelt衷心的；profound深切的

4.感动类副词:

初级emotionally情感上地；deeply深深地;warmly温暖地

高级profoundly深切地；sincerely真诚地；tenderly温柔地

二、晨读素材•高频短语

1.bemovedto(ears感动到流泪

2.touchone'sheart打动某人的心

3.betouched/moveddeeply深受感动

4.feelasurgeofemotion感到情感涌动

5.afeelingofwarmthwellsupinone'sheart―1股暖流涌上心头

6.pullatone'sheartstrings触动某人的心弦

三、晨读素材•佳句赏析

1.Iwasmovedtotearsbytheheartfeltspeech.那段真挚的演讲让我感动到流泪。

2.Shewastoucheddeeplybythekindnessofstrangers.陌生人的善良使她深受感动。

3.Thesadmoviereallypulledatmyheartstrings.那部悲伤的电影真的触动了我的心弦。

4.Hisstorytouchedmyheartandinspiredme.他的故事打动了我的心,并激励了我。

5.AfeelingofwarmthwelledupinmyheartwhenIsawmyfamily.当我看到家人时，一股暖流

涌上心头。

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测试反馈：分级测试步步为嬴

一、晚练•必背单词汉译英

二、晚练•高频短语汉译英

1.感动到流泪___________________

2.打动某人的心_________________

3.深受感动___________________

4.感到情感涌动_________________

5.一股暖流涌上心头

6.触动某人的心弦_________________

【参考答案】

1.bemovedtotears

2.touchone'sheart

3.betouched/moveddeeply

4.feelasurgeofemotion

5.afeelingofwarmthwellsupinone'sheart

6.pullatone'sheartstrings

三、晚练•佳句赏析汉译英

1.那段真挚的演讲让我感动到流泪。

2.陌生人的善良使她深受感动。

3.那部悲伤的电影真的触动了我的心弦。

4.他的故事打动了我的心，并激励了我。

5.当我看到家人时，一股暖流涌上心头。

【参考答案】

1.Iwasmovedtotearsbytheheartfeltspeech.

2.Shewastoucheddeeplybyihckindnessofstrangers.

3.Thesadmoviereallypulledatmyheartstrings.

4.Hisstorytouchedmyheartandinspiredme.

5.AfeelingofwarmthwelledupinmyheartwhenIsawmyfamily.

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B仿刃实战：模仿借鉴学以致用

一、读后续写情景运用一单句

阅读所给首句，在了解首句所设定的情境后，用一句话进行与感动之情相关的主题续写。

1.［母亲捐献骨髓后虚弱微笑］SeeingMom'spalefacethroughtheICUglassafterherbonemarrow

donation,_______________________________________________________________________________________

2.［退休教师收到学生援建小学的照片］Flippingthroughphotosoftheschoolbuiltbyherstudentsin

themountainvillage,______________________________________________________________________________

3.［消防员洪水中托举婴儿至安全地带］Watchingthefirefighterliftthebabyabovechurning

floodwaters,______________________________________________________________________________

4.［抗战老兵与救他的村民七十年后相认］Recognizingthefadedscarontheoldman'shand—thesame

thatpulledhimfromrubblein1943,____________________________________________________________

5.［非遗传承人收到少年手绣的师承帖］Unfoldingthesilkembroiderywhereateenagerreplicatedher

facingcraft,______________________________________________________________________________

【参考答案】

1.awaveofawemixedwithheartachecrashedoverme—herfrailsmilesculptingamonumentof

lovenopaincoulderode.

2.raindropssmudgedtheimageofchildrenreadingundernewroofs—eachbrickatestamentto

seedsshe'dsowndecadesago.

3.thecrowd'sbreathhitchedashismud-cakedarmsbecamealivingbridge—hopecrystallizingin

theinfant'sgiggleagainsttheroar.

4.timedissolvedintheirtremblingembrace,battlefieldsmokeandpersimmontreesfloodingback

withthesaltoftheirtears.

5.sunlightignitedthethreadslikeancestralpromises-hergnarledfingerstracingeachstitchasif

touchingthepulseoftime.

二、读后续写情景运用一段落

请运用以上必备单词或高频语块，把下面的语篇补充完整。

Asthelastnoteoftheschoolchoirfaded.Grandmaslowlystoodup,bouquetinhand.Seeinghersilver

hairunderthespotlight,I（感到情感涌动）.

ShehadtakenthreebusesinLherainjusttohearmesing.Themomentoureyesmet,hertrembling

smile（打动某人的心）.I（深受感动），memoriesofherhumminglullabiesfloodingback.

Whenshemouthed"I'mproudofyou,"（--股暖流涌上心头）;I（感动到流泪），

tearsblurringthestagelights.Hersimplepresence（触动某人的心弦）morethananytrophyever

could.

【参考答案】

Asthelastnoteoftheschoolchoirfaded,Grandmaslowlystoodup,bouquetinhand.Seeinghersilver

hairunderthespotlight,Ifeltasurgeofemotion.

Shehadtakenthreebusesintherainjusttohearmesing.Themomentoureyesmet,hertrembling

smiletouchedmyheart.Iwastoucheddeeply,memoriesofherhumminglullabiesfloodingback.

Whenshemouthed"I'mproudofyou/'afeelingofwarmthwelledupinmyheart;Iwasmovedto

tears,tearsblurringthestagelights.Hersimplepresencepulledatmyheartstringsmorethananytrophy

evercould.

三、读后续写情景运用一语篇

1.2025届河北省唐山市一模英语试题

EversinceIwasachild.Dadhadbeenworkinghard.He'dworkedasatelegraphoperatoronthe

railroadandaddedhisearningssellingoldpocketwatchesatthemarkets."Weneededthemoney.Fora

rainyday,"healwayssaid.

WhenIwas10yearsold,Iboughtanicccream,Daddy'sfavorite,withthefirstdollarIearnedbydoing

oddjobsintheneighborhood.Ithoughthe,dbepleased.Helookedupandindeedsmiled.Butashetooka

tasteofit,hewarned,^Don'tbesquandering（乱花）allyourhard-earnedmoneyonthisagain.Youshould

beputtingsomethingawayforrainydays.^^Itriedhardtofightbacktears.Iwasquitedisappointed.

WhenIwasalittleolder,Istudiedpiano.Iknewhowproudhe'dbeofthewayIplayedThe

LondonderryAir.Butalthelastminuteofmyfirstfbniiaiiuc,Daddyuouldifluumc.Hehadtowork

overtime.Wcneededthemoney.Forarainyday.Didn,thecareaboutmyhappiness?

Onedayheshowedmewhatmyhappinesswasworth.

AfterIstudiednursingandpursuedmycareer,Istartedtoraiseadog,Muffin,andshebecamemysoul

mate.1hadtodropheroffatmyfriend^whenIhadabusinesstrip.Onetime,Muffinjumpedthefencein

myfYiend'sbackyardandracedoff.Noonecouldfindher.

'Tmsosorry,Roberta,5,Momsaid,coveringablanketaroundmeonthesoia.**Yourfatherisworried

too.”

Ifeltmyheartbreakwhenastrangercalled,“Ihavefoundyourdog.HowcanIgettherewardof

$1,000mentionedintheadofthenewspaper?”

注意：

L续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。

Iwasstunnedaboutthereward.

Icried,holdingthenewspaper,butIquicklypulledmyselftogetheranddrovetomyparents'house.

【答案】

Iwasstunnedaboutthereward.Ihadneverplacedsuchanad.IknewDadwouldbefuriousaboutthis

falseclaim.Howcouldweafford$1,000?Itwasahugesumforourfamily.Wealwayssavedmoneyfora

rainyday.ButMuffinwaslikeafamilymembertome.Iwasdesperatetogetherback,yetatthesametime,

IwasextremelyworriedabouthowDadwouldreact.

Icried,holdingthenewspaper,butIquicklypulledmyselftogetheranddrovetomyparents5house.

WhenIgotthere,Dadwassittingatthetable.Helookedupatmeandsaid,U1placedthead,honey.Iknow

Muffinmeanstheworldtoyou.Yourhappinessismoreimportantthansavingforarainyday."Hearingthis,

tearswelledupinmyeyesagain.Ifinallyunderstoodthatbehindhisstrictmoneysavingwords,therewas

alwaysadeeploveforme.

【解析】

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了父亲一直教导作者要为不时之需存钱，作者曾因此觉得父亲

不关心自己的快乐。后来作者养的狗丢了，有人要求他支付登报的1000美元报酬。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“我对这笔报酬感到震惊。“可知，第一段可描写作者因没登广告而担心父亲的反

应，同时又急切想找回狗的矛盾心情。

②由第二段首句内容“我拿着报纸哭了，但我很快振作起来，开车去了父母家。”可知，第二段可描写

到父母家后父亲表明是自己登的广告，作者理解了父亲的爱。

2.续写线索：震惊报酬——担心父亲反应——开车去父母家——父亲表明登广告——理解父亲的爱

3.词汇激活：

行为类

①储蓄：save/putaside

②反应：react/respond

③到达：get/reach

情绪类

①暴怒的：furious/extremelyar.gry

②绝望的：desperate/hopeless

③担心的：worried/concerned

【点睛】[高分句型1]IknewDadwouldbefuriousaboutthisfalseclaim.（运用了省略连词that的宾语从

句）

[高分句型2]Hearingthis,tearswelledupinmyeyesagain.（运月了现在分词作时间状语）

[高分句型3]Ifinallyunderstoodthatbehindhisstrictmoneysavingwords,therewasalwaysadeeplove

forme.（运用了连词that引导的宾语从句）

2.2025届安徽省“皖南八校”高三第三次大联考英语试卷

ForaslongasIcouldreniember,myrelationshipwithmyparentsfeltstrained（紧张的）.Itwasn'tthat

theywerecruelorneglectful,buttherewasalwaysthisdistance,likeaninvisiblewallseparatingus.

Conversationswereshort,usuallyaboutchoresorschool.WheneverItriedtoopenupaboutmyfeelingsor

mystruggles,they'dbrushitoffwithaunconcerned"You'llbefine."or“Focusonyourstudies.^^Overtime,

Istoppedtrying.

Inmymind,theywerecold,unfeelingpeoplewhoonlycaredaboutrulesandresponsibilities.They

workedlonghours,andwhentheywerehome,theyseemedverytired.Ispentmostofmytimeeitherinmy

roomoroutwithfriends,seekingthewarmthandunderstanding1didn'tgetathome.

Then,oneday,everythingshifted.

ItwasaregularFridayafternoon,andIhadstayedlateatschooltoworkonagroupproject.Bythetime

Ileft,thesunwasalreadysetting.Idecidedtotakeashortcutthroughaquietalley（小巷）nearmy

neighborhoodtosavelime.AsIwalked,lostinthought,Iheardfootstepsbehindme.Atfirst,1ignoredthem,

buttheygotfasterandcloser.

BeforeIcouldreact,amangrabbedmybackpackandtriedtoyank(猛拽)itoffme.Myheartpounded

asIstruggledtopullaway,buthewasstronger.Ishoutedforhelp,butthestreetwasdeserted.JustasI

thoughtIwascompletelyhelpless,Iheardaloud,familiarvoice,uLethimgo!”

Itwasmydad.Outofnowhere,hetackledthemantotheground.Mymomwasrightbehindhim,

callingthepoliceimmediately.Themanran,butnotbeforemydadgavechaseforafewfeettomakesurehe

didn'tdoubleback.Whenmydadturnedaround,Isawtheangerinhiseyesgivewaytosomething

else—pure,rawconcern.

注意：

I.续写词数应为15()左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

“Areyouokay?^^heasked,tappingonmyshoulders.

Thatnight,sittingonthesofa,mymomheldmyhandlikeshehadn'tinyears.

【答案】

“Areyouokay?^^heasked,tappingonmyshoulders.Inodded,stilltooshockedtospeak.Mompulled

meintoahugsotightthatIcouldbarelybreathe.Whenthepolicearrived,myparentsexplainedeverything

whileIstoodsilently,mymindreeling.HowhadtheyevenknownwhereIwas?Itturnedoutthey'dgotten

worriedwhenIhadn'tcomehomeontimeandhaddecidedtolookforme.Theyhadcheckedmyusualroute

first,thentheshortcutwhentheydidn'tfindme.

Thatnight,sittingonthesofa,mymomheldmyhandlikeshehadn'tinyears."You'reourson,“she

saidsoftly.t4Wemaynotalwaysshowit,butyou'reeverythingtous."Forthefirsttime,Isawthemnotas

distantfigures,butaspeoplewholovedmeintheirownimperfectway.Theyweren'tcold—theywerejust

tryingtoholditalltogetherinawayIhadn'tunderstood.Sincethatnight,they'vebeenbetter.Italktothem

more,andtheymakeanefforttolisten.Myparentsshowedmethatloveisthere,asrealasanything.

【解析】

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者与父母之间关系的变化，特别是从感到疏远到经历一次

意外事件后重新理解父母的爱，展现了作者内心的成长和对家庭关系的深刻认识。

【详解】1•段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容““你没事吧？“他拍了拍我的肩膀问道C”以及第二段首句内容“那天晚上，我们

坐在沙发上，母亲紧紧握着我的手，这种亲密的举动已经多年未曾有过了。“可知，第一段可描写警

察到来后，父母也解释了情况。

②由第二段首句内容“那天晚上，我们坐在沙发上，母亲紧紧握着我的手、这种亲密的举动已经多年

未曾有过了。可知，第二段可描写母亲向作者表达了对作者的爱和关心。

2.续写线索：父亲询问一母亲则将作者紧紧抱住——警察及时赶到，父母解释了当时的情况一作

者也得知原来作者的父母因为作者没有回家所以才出来寻找一母亲向作者表达爱和关切一作者

明白了父母的关心——关系更为亲密

3.词汇激活

行为类

①决定：decide/makeadecision

②寻找：lookfor/searchfor

③尝试：makeaneffort/attempt

情绪类

①震惊的：shocked/stunned

②担忧的：worried/concerned

【点睛】

【高分句型1]MompulledmeintoahugsotightthatIcouldbarelybreathe.（运用Tso…thal…弓I导的状

语从句）

3.2025届福建省泉州市高中毕业班4月适应性练习卷英语试题

Thesweetsmelloflemoncleaningspraymixedwith（helightsmellofoilpaintsasLilaandhertwo

classmatespushedopentheheavydoorsofCedarHillNursingHome.Theirartteacher,Ms.Reed,had

arrangedthisvolunteerprogram—threeSaturdaysspenthelpingredecoratetheactivityroom.

“Carefulwiththatladder,Raj!”Lilawarnedashertech-lovingfriendnearlytrippedoverapotof

brushes.Maya,alwaysthequietobserver,stoppedtodrawthesunlightshiningthroughthedustycurtains.

Astheypushedanoldbookshelftopaintthewallbehindit,Mayasuddenlyfroze.uLookbehindthis

shelf!Thesearen'tordinarymarks...”

Thethreeteenspulledthewoodenshelfaside,dustdancinginthegoldenafternoonlight.Fadedacross

thewallwerebeautifulpencildrawings:ateapotgrowingcherryblossoms（樱花）,abicycleflyingabove

clouds,andawomandancingwith（wingirlsunderapinksky.

Rajtookphotoswithhisphone."Thelinesareshaky-likedrawninahurry.”

NurseClararushedover.4tOhdear,youfoundMrs.Talbot'ssecretdrawings.Wheneverwordsfailher,

shedrawsmemoriesatnight."Shesighed."We'veseenmarksbefore,butneverthismany.^^

Lila'spaintbrushfrozeabovethewhitepaintcan.Theirdeadlinewasnear,yetcoveringtheselinesfelt

likesilencingasingingbird.HerthroattightenedasMayagrabbedherarm."Wecan'tcoverthis!It's

like...likeerasingherdiary!”

Rajadjustedhisglasses."Whatifwcscan（扫描）them?My3Dprintercouldmakemodelsforthe

elcerstotouch!”

“Wemustsavethese!"Maya'svoicetrembledasshereachedtowardthewall.Herfingertipsbrushed

thecherryblossoms.t4Buthow?Whatifwekeepthem...inanewway?”

Ms.Reedjoinedthem,listeningintently."We'llneedpcrmission,^^shesaid,“butthiscouldbespecial?*

Lilawipedherhandsonherjeansandsuggested,lwrilgowithNurseClara-totalktothemanager.”

Rajproposedscanningthepictureswithphones,whileMayasuggestedadding-animated（动画的）

fallingflowersthatcouldplayvoices.Ms.Reedofferedtousecoloredlightsforprojection（投影）.

注意：

I.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Overthenextweek,theyworkedtirelessly.

OnthatgoldenSaturday,adigitalexhibitionlittheroomwithlivingmemories.

【答案】

Overihenexlweek,iheyworkedtirelessly.LilaandNurseClarasecuredtheeventapprovalsfromthe

nursinghomemanagerwhileothersinvestedtheirefforts.Rajscannedthedrawingsandevengenerated

some3D-printcdbutterflies.Meanwhile,Mayaworkedoncreatinganimatedfallingflowersandintegrating

voicesintotheapp.Thewholeweekwitnessedeveryone'sconcentrationtomakesuretheprojectwould

honorMrs.Talbot'smemoriesinameaningfulway.ByFridaysunset,theteenstestedtheirwork.AsMs.

Reedturnedontheprojector,thecolorfullightstransformedtheoncedullspaceintoavividshowcase

immediately.