2025秋九年级英语全册Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark写作能力提升练习题课件新版人教新目标版

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《青春校园》校报正在征稿，题目是“HowI’veChanged!”，请你根据下面的要点提示写一篇英语短文介绍你的变化。要点:1.从外貌、性格、爱好三个方面描述你的变化；2.介绍你的一个重要变化、变化过程及原因。［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。［遣词造句］1.我过去羞涩并且安静。Iusedto______________________.2.我爱交际并且喜欢交朋友。I’moutgoingand_______________________.3.我已经爱上了读书。Ihave______________________reading.就结构图中的要点完成句子。beshyandquietliketomakefriendsfalleninlovewith4.在我的人生中最重要的变化就是我对读书产生了兴趣。ThemostimportantchangeinmylifeisthatI________________________________________.5.读书给我很多知识并且让我很快乐。Readinggivesmealotofknowledgeand__________________________.becomeinterestedinreadingmakesmeveryhappyHowI’veChanged!Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Iusedtobeshort,butnowI’moneofthetalleststudentsinmyclass.Iusedtobeshyandquiet,butnowI’moutgoingandIliketomakefriends.Iusedtohatereading,butnowIhavefalleninlovewithit.ThemostimportantchangeinmylifeisthatIbecomeinterestedinreading.Lastsummermybestfriendgavemeaninterestingbooktoread.IenjoyeditsomuchthatIstartedtoreadotherbooks.Itisthemostimportantchangeformebecausereadinggivesmealotofknowledgeandmakesmeveryhappy.Asafamoussayinggoes,“Booksaretheladderofhumanprogress.”［连句成篇］1.思路清晰，本文采用了“总-分”结构。2.连接词运用恰当，尤其是but,because的运用为作文增彩。3.正确运用一些短语，比如：inthelastfewyears,usedto,makefriends,oneof...,fallinlovewith等使文章更为丰富精彩。4.最高级以及谚语等的运用成为文章的加分点。高分点评：上周你们班召开了一次“告别陋习，走向文明”的主题班会，会上老师让你们谈谈身边同学的变化。请根据表格中的内容，写一篇有关王明同学的短文。要求:词数80左右。过去的表现现在的表现经常和同学打架与同学相处融洽 花很多时间玩电脑游戏积极参加各项活动经常吃垃圾食品 健康的生活习惯 在课堂上吃东西、睡觉认真听讲，按时完成作业考试不及格各门学科学得很好________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WangMingismyclassmate.Hehasmadegreatprogressthisterm.Inthepast,思路分析：1.开篇点题引出同学的巨大进步。2.第二段具体介绍其过去。3.最后写其现在的变化。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WangMingismyclassmate.Hehasmadegreatprogressthisterm.Inthepast,heoftenfoughtwithothers.Heusedtospendalotoftimeplayingcomputergames.Andheoftenatejunkfood.Inclass,heeitherateorslept,sohecouldneverpassanyexams.Butnow,hehaschangedalot.Hecangetonwellwiththeotherstudents.Henotonlytakesanactivepartinallkindsofactivities,butalso