建议信（复习） （解析版）

建议信考点要求考察形式2025年2024年2023年建议信选择题非选择题2025年北京卷：联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动2025年1月浙江卷：在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象,提出建议2024年北京卷：给外国好友Jim提建议：介绍中国的发展成就2023年新高考1卷和2卷：课后练习口语分组的建议2023年6月北京卷：“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动的建议考情分析一、往年真题特点1.话题紧扣生活与社会：常围绕校园生活改进（优化食堂饮食、改善图书馆环境）、社会问题解决（减少交通拥堵、推广垃圾分类）、个人发展困惑（学习方法提升、职业规划选择）等话题展开,要求考生结合实际提出可行建议。2.任务要求明确：题目通常设定写信人身份（如学生、市民）和具体问题场景,明确要求考生分析问题并提出合理建议,部分题目还会限定建议数量或方向,确保写作内容不偏离主题。二、命题思路通过模拟现实中需要提出解决方案的场景,考查学生运用英语分析问题、表达观点和提出建议的能力。重点检验考生能否结合生活经验,用恰当的语言清晰阐述问题,并从不同角度提出切实可行的建议,体现英语在实际问题解决中的应用价值。三、命题重点1.内容的逻辑性与可行性：正文需包含问题描述、原因分析和具体建议,各部分逻辑紧密；建议要结合实际,具有可操作性,如针对“改善校园卫生”,可提出“增加垃圾桶数量”“开展卫生评比活动”等具体措施；合理使用连接词（如Tobeginwith、Furthermore、Inconclusion）增强文章连贯性。2.语气的恰当性与针对性：根据收信人与写信人的关系及身份差异,调整语言风格和语气。给平辈提建议可较直接、亲切；给上级或机构提建议则需更礼貌、委婉,体现尊重与专业性。复习目标与备考策略一、复习目标1.提升语言能力：积累多样化的词汇和句式,能够根据不同话题灵活运用,实现准确、丰富的语言表达。2.强化逻辑思维：学会构建清晰的文章结构,合理组织内容,增强文章逻辑性与连贯性。3.提高任务完成能力：保证在考试中精准把握题目要点,完整、高效地完成写作任务。二、备考策略1.积累专项素材：针对常考话题（如环保、文化、校园生活）整理常用表达、名言警句和优秀范文,建立个人素材库；背诵经典开头、结尾及过渡句,提升写作效率。2.真题模拟演练：分析近五年真题,总结命题规律与高频考点；按照考试时间要求进行限时训练,提升写作速度与应变能力；对照范文和评分标准,找出自身不足,针对性改进。3.拓展视野与思维训练：关注时事热点和生活中的各类问题,思考不同解决方案；阅读英语新闻评论、建议类文章,学习他人分析问题和提出建议的思路与表达方式,拓宽写作视角。考点一写作技巧知识点1命题规律建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议,以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。这类信件通常结构清晰,开篇会简要介绍写信的背景或目的,明确指出要讨论的问题。主体部分则详细阐述建议的内容,包括问题的分析、具体的改进措施或解决方案,以及这些建议的可行性和预期效果。知识点2写作技能提升建议信要给出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由,而且提出的理由要合情合理,语气一定要得当,既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力。一般来说,建议信可分为三个部分：（1)开头；开门见山,简要陈述事由,简单介绍自己并陈述自己的观点,注意语气。（2)主体；说明建议的内容,对所提出的建议进行分析、说明原因。这一部分注意要简明扼要,目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。（3)结尾；对自己提出的建议简单地做一小结并表达愿望。考点二经典必背知识点1常用词汇1.give/offersb.someadvice(on) 给某人提建议2.asksb.foradvice 向某人征求意见3.asfollows 如下4.inmyopinion/inmyview/frommypointofview 在我看来5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用6.takepartin/participatein... 参加7.follow/take/adoptone'sadvice 采纳某人的建议8.takesth.intoaccount/consideration 把……考虑在内9.withregardto 关于；就10.putforward 提出11.inthisregard/inthisrespect 在这点上/在这方面12.sharesth.withsb. 与某人分享某事13.withtimegoingon 随着时间的推移14.Befacedwith 面临15.takesth.seriously 重视；认真对待知识点2必背开头段IamwritingtoofferyousomeadviceonhowtoimproveyourspokenEnglish.我写信是想就如何提高英语口语水平给你一些建议。Youaskedmeforadviceintheletterabout...andherearemysuggestions.Ithinkitwouldbeagoodideaifyoucould...你在信中问了我一些建议,关于……以下是我的建议。如果你能做到的话,我想这将是个好主意Withregardtotheproblemyoumentionedinyourlastletter,mysuggestionsareasfollows.关于你上一封信中提到的问题,我的建议如下。I'mmorethandelightedtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...I'llmakesomesuggestionshere.我非常高兴收到你的来信,询问我关于……的建议。我在这里提一些建议。Ihavelearnedthatyouhavesometroublein...and1wouldliketogive/offeryouthefollowingsuggestions.我得知你在……方面有些困难,我想给你提如下一些建议。知识点3必背主题句Asahighschoolstudent,Inoticedthatmanystudentshadaseriesofhealthproblemsbecauseofirregulardiet.作为一名高中生,我注意到很多学生都因为饮食不规律而出现了一系列健康问题。Myfavouritesportsisropeskipping,becausenotonlycanIdoitathomeconvenientlybutalsoitcanhelptorefreshmeafterIgettiredfromdoinghomework.我最喜欢的运动是跳绳,因为跳绳不仅可以方便地在家里做,而且可以帮助我在做完作业累了之后提神。Additionally,ItakedelightinvariousactivitiesinthereadingclubeveryFriday,whereIgetimmersedintheseaofliterature,greatlyimprovingmyliterarycompetence.此外,我喜欢每周五在阅读俱乐部的各种活动,在那里我沉浸在文学的海洋里,大大提高了我的文学能力。Onlyifwetakeactiontoexercisecanwebehealthierandhealthierinthefuture.只有当我们采取行动去锻炼时,我们才能在未来变得更健康。Foronething,notonlydoestheoceanoffersusvariousofseafoodtoeat,butalsoitishometomanykindsofanimals.首先,海洋不仅为我们提供了各种各样的海鲜可以吃,而且它也是多种动物的家园。Notonlydoesplayingbasketballbuildupmybodyandrelievestressfromstudy,butitalsopromotesfriendshipwithothers.打篮球不仅增强了我的体质,减轻了学习的压力,而且增进了与他人的友谊。Facedwiththechallengeofbeingdestroyed,missingorevenbeingstolen,traditionalChineserelicsareurgenttobeprotected.面对被销毁、失踪甚至被盗的挑战,中国传统文物迫切需要得到保护。知识点4必背结尾句Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions/proposalshelpful.我希望你现在会发现这些建议/建议会有所帮助。HereIaminthehopethatmyadvicewilladdabrillianttouchtotheimprovedversionofourschoolEnglishPost.在此,我希望我的建议能够为我们学校的《英语报》的改进版增添精彩的一笔。Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyouanyway.Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。Whateveryoudecidetodo,goodluckwithyourstudies/work!无论你决定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运!知识点5满分模板必背（模版1）Inrecentdays,wehavetofacetheproblem____________A,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.First,____________(说明A的现状).Second,____________(举例进一步说明现状).ConfrontedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,____________(解决方法一).Foranother____________(解决方法二).Finally,____________(解决方法三).Personally,Ibelievethat____________(我的解决方法).（模版2）Dear______(称谓)Itiscommontoseethat______(陈述现象).Notonly______,butalso______(现象的影响).I’mwritingtocallonusstudentsto______(呼吁).Firstly,wearesupposedto______(建议一).What’smore,itissuggestedthat______(建议二).Eventually,whateverpossibleit’sgoodto______(建议三).Suchmeasurescandefinitelymakeamarkedimprovementin______(在什么方面提高),wewouldlikeallofyoutoattachimportanceto______(主题)!Yoursincerely,LiHua考点三体悟真题与新考向知识点1真题演练1.2025年北京卷假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim打算参加,为此发来邮件,就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括：

1.提出的建议;2.建议的理由。

提示词：倡议proposal

注意：1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。【参考范文】DearJim,I'mgladtoreceiveyouremail.I'mmorethanwillingtoofferyousomesuggestionsontheproposal.Isuggestyoufocusonenvironmentalprotection.Youcanproposeacampaigntoencourageteenagersaroundtheworldtoreduceplasticwaste.Thereasonisthatplasticpollutionhasbecomeaseriousglobalproblem.Itnotonlyharmstheenvironmentbutalsoaffectsthehealthofanimalsandhumans.Bylaunchingthiscampaign,wecanmakeadifferenceandraisepeople'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfultoyou.I'mlookingforwardtoyourexcellentproposal.Yourssincerely,LiHua【导语】本篇是回复朋友Jim关于提案建议的书信,两篇范文分别围绕“环保活动”和“文化交流项目”展开,符合应用文写作规范,内容充实且逻辑清晰。【详解】1.词汇积累乐意做：bewillingto→beeagerto提议：propose→putforward增强：enhance→strengthen打破刻板印象：breakdownstereotypes→dispelprejudices2.句式拓展原句：Youcanproposeacampaigntoencourageteenagersaroundtheworldtoreduceplasticwaste.拓展句：Itwouldbeadvisabletoproposeacampaignthatencouragesteenagersworldwidetoreduceplasticwaste,asthisissuehasreachedurgentproportions.【点睛】[高分句型1]Thereasonisthatplasticpollutionhasbecomeaseriousglobalproblem.（使用“thereasonisthat...”表语从句,清晰阐释建议的核心依据）[高分句型2]Bylaunchingthiscampaign,wecanmakeadifferenceandraisepeople'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.（用“by+动名词”结构说明行动方式,“makeadifference”短语增强说服力）2.2025年1月浙江卷你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿,内容包括：(1)陈述看法;(2)提出建议。注意：(1)写作词数应为80左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。MyViewsonFilmingShortVideosonCampus._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________MyviewsonfilmingshortvideosoncampusGoodmorning,everyone!Today,I’dliketosharemythoughtsonfilmingshortvideosoncampus.Justaseverycoinhastwosides,filmingoncampushasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Ontheonehand,it’sagreatwaytorecordbeautifulmomentsandexpresscreativity.Ontheotherhand,itmayaffectlearningandevendisturbothers.Therefore,Isuggestweshouldfilmatsuitabletimesandplacesandavoiddistractingclassmates.Let’smakeourcampusaharmoniousandinspiringenvironment.Thankyou!【导语】本篇是英语课“一分钟演讲”活动的演讲稿,围绕部分同学在校园内拍摄短视频的现象,阐述看法并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累表达：express→convey影响：affect→impact干扰：disturb→interfere和谐的：harmonious→peaceful2.句式拓展原句：Ontheonehand,it’sagreatwaytorecordbeautifulmomentsandexpresscreativity.拓展句：Ontheonehand,it’sagreatwaythatcanbeusedtorecordbeautifulmomentsandconveycreativity.【点睛】[高分句型1]Justaseverycoinhastwosides,filmingoncampushasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.（as引导方式状语从句,生动形象地引出对校园拍摄短视频现象的辩证看法）[高分句型2]Therefore,Isuggestweshouldfilmatsuitabletimesandplacesandavoiddistractingclassmates.（使用虚拟语气“suggestsb.shoulddo”,明确提出合理建议,增强说服力）3.2024年6月北京卷假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的AsiaToday栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括：(1)建议投稿内容；(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearJim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearJim,It’sgreattohearyou’replanningtowriteaboutChina’sachievementsontheoccasionofthe75thanniversaryofthefoundingofthiscountry.Hereareafewsuggestionsforyourarticle.Tobeginwith,talkaboutChina’seconomicgrowthandtechnologicaladvancements,whicharethehighlightsinthepastfewdecades.Then,projectsliketheBeltandRoadInitiativemakeagoodtopictodiscussbecauseitshowcasesChina’sdeterminationtobuildasharedfuturewiththeworld.Inaddition,youcanalsomentionChina’sroleinhelpingsolvingglobalissuessuchastheglobalwarming,offeringamorecomprehensiveview.Lookingforwardtoreadingyourarticle!Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的AsiaToday栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,要求考生给他回复邮件,就此给予他建议。【详解】1.词汇积累很好的：great→wonderful成就：achievement→accomplishment建议：suggestion→advice此外：Inaddition→what’smore2.句式拓展原句：It’sgreattohearyou’replanningtowriteaboutChina’sachievementsontheoccasionofthe75thanniversaryofthefoundingofthiscountry.拓展句：It’sgreattohearwhatyou’replanningtowriteaboutisChina’sachievementsontheoccasionofthe75thanniversaryofthefoundingofthiscountry.【点睛】【高分句型1】Tobeginwith,talkaboutChina’seconomicgrowthandtechnologicaladvancements,whicharethehighlightsinthepastfewdecades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）【高分句型2】Then,projectsliketheBeltandRoadInitiativemakeagoodtopictodiscussbecauseitshowcasesChina’sdeterminationtobuildasharedfuturewiththeworld.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）4.2023年6月新高考1&2卷假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括；1.说明问题；2.提出建议。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearRyanI’mLiHuafromClass3.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【参考范文】DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit’snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇是应用文写作,要求考生给外教写一封邮件,告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。【详解】1.词汇积累首先：tobeginwith→firstofall提高：improve→progress建议：suggestion→advice选择：choose→select2.句式拓展原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.【点睛】[高分句型1]Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.（运用了现在分词作状语）[高分句型2]Besides,Studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）5.2023年6月北京卷假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括：(1)活动形式；(2)活动内容。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearJim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearJim,Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscanparticipateandhaveabetterunderstandingof“GreenBeijing”throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesbythemselves.Youcanshowcasegarbageclassificationonsite,planttreesandpublicizesharingeconomy,whichwillallfitintothethemeof“GreenBeijing”.Hopefully,youwillgetsomeinspirationfrommysuggestions.Wishyousuccess.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestion→tip提供：offer→provide开展：carryout→conduct主题：theme→topic2.句式拓展原句：Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmydhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.拓展句：Sinceyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.【点睛】[高分句型1]Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.(运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscanparticipateandhaveabetterunderstandingof“GreenBeijing”throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesbythemselves.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)6.2022年全国乙卷学校英文报正在开展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括：1.学习活动状况描述；2.简单评论；3.你的建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomNowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.However,thosechoosingreadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.AsfarasI’mconcerned,itisadisturbingtrend.Forstudents,whatbenefitsmosttotheirstudyisreadingEnglishbooks.Becauseoftheirlackofself-discipline,they’remoreeasilyaddictedtochattingonlineorplayinggames.It’surgentforstudentsthemselvestoimprovetheirself-discipline,andit’salsourgentforparentsandteacherstostrengthentheguidance.【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文,要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,对学生的英语学习活动状况进行描述并作简单的评论,提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累缺乏：lack→shortage加强：strengthen→enhance各种各样的：various→allkindsof就我而言：asfarasI’mconcerned→frommyperspective2.句式拓展原句：However,thosechoosingreadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.拓展句：However,thosewhochoosereadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.【点睛】【高分句型1】ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.(运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)【高分句型2】Forstudents,whatbenefitsmosttotheirstudyisreadingEnglishbooks.(运用了what引导的主语从句)7.2022年6月北京卷假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括：1.建议交流的具体内容及其原因；2.交流时间和其他相关事项。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearJim,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearJim.How'severything?I'mwritingtoinviteyoutogiveusanonlinetalkonEnglishwriting.Ourclassmatesseemtobeweakinorganisation.Wouldyoupleasegiveussomesuggestionsonhowtoconnectsentenceslogically,howtodevelopaparagraph,andhowtostructureanessay?Thetalkwillbeaboutanhour,andyoucandecideonadateatyourconvenience.Pleaseletmeknowwhichplatformyou'llbeusingItwouldbegreatifwecouldhavea10-minutequestionandanswersessionattheendofyourtalk.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇是红星中学高三学生李华邀请英国好友Jim开展线上英语写作经验交流的电子邮件,内容涵盖建议交流内容及原因、交流时间和相关事项,符合100词左右的应用文写作要求。【详解】1.词汇积累薄弱的：beweakin→bepoorat建议：suggestions→tips逻辑地：logically→coherently决定：decideon→confirm2.句式拓展原句：Ourclassmatesseemtobeweakinorganisation.拓展句：Sinceourclassmatesoftenstrugglewithessaystructure,theyseemtobeweakinorganisationalskills.【点睛】[高分句型1]Wouldyoupleasegiveussomesuggestionsonhowtoconnectsentenceslogically,howtodevelopaparagraph,andhowtostructureanessay?（使用“疑问词+不定式”结构作宾语,并列三个写作痛点,清晰呈现交流需求）[高分句型2]Thetalkwillbeaboutanhour,andyoucandecideonadateatyourconvenience.（用and连接两个分句,前半部分说明时长,后半部分体现对对方时间的尊重,语气得体）[高分句型3]Itwouldbegreatifwecouldhavea10-minutequestionandanswersessionattheendofyourtalk.（使用it作形式主语,if引导条件状语从句,委婉提出互动请求,符合邀请信的礼貌原则）8.2021年6月全国乙卷你校将举办英语演讲比赛,请你以Besmartonlinelearner写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括：分析优势及不足；提出学习建议。注意：1.词数100词左右；2.题目和首句以为你写好。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】BesmartonlinelearnersJustliketheoldsayinggoes,"eachcoinhastwosides."Ontheonehand,providinganeasyaccesstoplentyofexcellentlearningsources,onlinelearningisreallyahelpinghand.Ontheotherhand,whatwelearnonlineisn'tnecessarilywhatweneed,nottomentionitsconstantdamagetooureyes.Forme,onlinelearningis,afterall,justatool.It'snotthenewmethoditselfbutthepersonwhouseitthatreallymatters.Tobecomeasmartonlinelearner,notonlyshouldwecarefullychoosefromcountlessalternativeswemayface,butextraattentionneedstobeattachedwhenwetakelessonsonline.What'smore,onconditionthatwecouldapplywhatwelearnonlinetoourdailylife,onlinelearningwouldbemoremeaningful.Thanks,everyone.Hopeweallcouldbesmartonlinelearners.【导语】这篇发言稿属于应用文,以“Besmartonlinelearners”为主题,通过阐述线上学习的优势与不足,提出学习建议,旨在引导听众成为优秀的在线学习者,结构清晰,观点明确。【详解】1.词汇积累工具：tool→instrument选择：choose→select2.句式拓展原句：Ontheonehand,providinganeasyaccesstoplentyofexcellentlearningsources,onlinelearningisreallyahelpinghand.拓展句：Ontheonehand,sinceonlinelearningprovidesaneasyaccesstoamultitudeofexcellentlearningsources,itservesasavaluablehelpinghandforlearners.原句：What'smore,onconditionthatwecouldapplywhatwelearnonlinetoourdailylife,onlinelearningwouldbemoremeaningful.拓展句：Furthermore,ifwecaneffectivelyutilizetheknowledgeweacquireonlineinourdailylifesituations,onlinelearningwillundoubtedlybecomemoremeaningfulandpractical.【点睛】[高分句型1]Justliketheoldsayinggoes,"eachcoinhastwosides."（引用谚语开篇,增强文章文化底蕴,自然引出主题,为下文论述做铺垫）[高分句型2]Ontheonehand,providinganeasyaccesstoplentyofexcellentlearningsources,onlinelearningisreallyahelpinghand.（现在分词短语“providinganeasyaccessto...”作伴随状语,说明线上学习的优势,使句子结构紧凑,表达流畅）[高分句型3]It'snotthenewmethoditselfbutthepersonwhouseitthatreallymatters.（强调句结构,突出人的主观能动性在在线学习中的关键作用,增强说服力）[高分句型4]Notonlyshouldwecarefullychoosefromcountlessalternativeswemayface,butextraattentionneedstobeattachedwhenwetakelessonsonline.（notonly位于句首引起部分倒装,强调成为聪明在线学习者应采取的措施,使句式富有变化,吸引听众）9.（2019北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游,发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。注意:1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。DearJim,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearJim,I’mpleasedthatyou’recomingtotourinChina.IsuggestthatyoubeginfromBeijing,andI’llshowyouaround.Tianjinwillbeyournextstop.Afterthat,youcangotoShanghai,whereyoucanstayforaweek.Youcantakehigh-speedtrainstobothcities.Summerinthesecitiesishotandrainy,sotakesummerwearplusanumbrellawithyou.Lookingforwardtoyourarrival.Yours,LiHua【导语】本文是一篇应用文,要求给朋友写回信。【详解】红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游,发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件,内容包括:1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时,用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎Jim来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式,为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词,使文章自然、流畅。词汇积累showyouaround带你参观；takehigh-speedtrainstobothcities坐高铁到这两个城市；takesummerwearplusanumbrellawithyou带上夏季服装和雨伞；Lookingforwardtoyourarrival期待你的到来。【点睛】本文内容完整,语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型。thatyou’recomingtotourinChina.和thatyoubeginfromBeijing,andI’llshowyouaround.是宾语从句。whereyoucanstayforaweek.是非限制性定语从句。10.【2019·天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间,英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；（3）希望从中有何收获。注意：（1）词数不少于100：（2）可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。DearChris,I'mLiJim,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforyourtime.Yours,LiJin【参考范文】DearChris,I'mLiJin,astudentatChenguangHighschool.Hearingthatyouwillbesenttoourschooltoparticipateinaone-weekcommunicationactivityonbehalfofourpartner-school,Ifeelexcitedtogivesomeadviceonthespeechaboutwesternart,whichwillbegivenbyyou.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.Frommyperspective,amongallthethemesonwesternculturelikemusic,drawinganddancing,Iwouldliketohaveabetterunderstandingofmusic,foragreatnumberofmyclassmatesarefondofmusic.Toenhanceourknowledge,Iwouldappreciateitifyouaddsomeinformationaboutthehistoryanddevelopmentofwesternmusic.Inaddition,someexcellentworksofmusicandtheintroductionofseveraldistinguishedmusicianswouldbeagoodwaytobroadenourhorizon.Anyway,Ican'twaittomeetyoufromthebottomofmyheart!Thankyouforyourtime!Yours,LiJin【导语】此篇邮件属于应用文,是李津就英方教师Chris将开展的西方艺术讲座,向其表达自己期望的讲座话题、原因、感兴趣内容及收获期待,符合信息沟通类邮件的写作需求。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：participatein→takepartin建议：advice→suggestions观点：perspective→viewpoint杰出的：distinguished→eminent2.句式拓展原句：Hearingthatyouwillbesenttoourschooltoparticipateinaone-weekcommunicationactivityonbehalfofourpartner-school,Ifeelexcitedtogivesomeadviceonthespeechaboutwesternart,whichwillbegivenbyyou.拓展句：WhenIheardthatyouwillbesenttoourschooltotakepartinaone-weekcommunicationactivityonbehalfofourpartner-school,Iwasfilledwithexcitementandeagertogivesomeadviceonthespeechaboutwesternartthatyouw