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一块道歉饼干的和解魔法Studentscanworkoutanoutlinebasedontheanalysisofthesampletextandcompletethewriting.Studentscanrealisethesignificanceofthestory--“understandingandforgiveness”.Studentscan

accumulate(积累)

usefulexpressionandapplythemproperly.Teachingobjectives213LeadinDoyouhavesiblings(兄弟；姐妹)?Howdoyousettleaconflictwithyoursiblings?Pre-writing：readtheoriginalstory2025年新高考I卷

MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnackswhilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.

Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn’tcountedon:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.

Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.

Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn’thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.

Afewdayspassed,andIhadn’theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he’llgetoverit,Ireasoned.

Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother’sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.

Pre-writing：analyzethestory2025年新高考I卷

MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnackswhilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.

Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn’tcountedon:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.

Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.

Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn’thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.

Afewdayspassed,andIhadn’theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he’llgetoverit,Ireasoned.

Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother’sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.

1.圈出主要角色Pre-writing：analyzethetext

MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnackswhilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.

Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn’tcountedon:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.

Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.

Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn’thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.

Afewdayspassed,andIhadn’theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he’llgetoverit,Ireasoned.

Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother’sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.

1.圈出主要角色2.了解故事开端Pre-writing：analyzethetext

MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnackswhilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.

Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn’tcountedon:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.

Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.

Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn’thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.

Afewdayspassed,andIhadn’theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he’llgetoverit,Ireasoned.

Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother’sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.

2.了解故事开端3.梳理文章主线3.梳理文章主线(conflict-solution)Conflict1(Para2)MybrotherchosetobringhisdogTobyhecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.Solution1

IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.Conflict2(Para4)Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse.Solution2

Mybrotherdecidedtoleave.Conflict3(Para5)Solution3

Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycame—“Notachance.”Conflict4

(Para6)Solution4

MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,Iresisted.情节线+情感线

【双线并行】3.梳理文章主线(conflict-solution)Conflict1

MybrotherchosetobringhisdogTobyhecouldeasilyknockovermyniece’ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.Solution1

IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.Conflict2

Ididn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse.Solution2

Mybrotherdecidedtoleave.Conflict3

Solution3

Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycame—“Notachance.”Conflict4

Solution4

MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,Iresisted.Happy;expectantAwkwardConcerned;worriedStubborn情节线+情感线

【双线并行】未解决的矛盾，也是最大的矛盾Conflict5(para6)Myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Solution5Guilty;understanding情节线+情感线

【双线并行】续写套路——十句五定法(续写词数150词左右，我们可以两个段落共续写10句，每段续写5句，每句15词左右，这其中有5句可以按照套路基本确定写作内容)Para1Para2句1句6句2句7句3句8句4句9句5句10（衔接到Para1首句）（衔接Para2句首句）（过渡到Para2首句）（故事结局、正能量）主旨升华细节描写细节描写Thinktoplanyourplot.Para1:I

realized

itwasmewhowasatfault.Para2:Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother’sdoor.Whatwasmyfault?WhatdidIdecidedtodoafterIrealizedmyfault?Whatdidmywifesuggest?WhatpreparationdidmywifeandImake?Tip:Infertheplotbymakingquestions(what...how...why...)Whatwasmyfeeling?Whatwasmybrother’sreaction?WhatdidIdoandsay?Whatwastheending?WhatlessondidIlearn?MyhomeI;

MywifeMybrother’shomeI;MybrotherTobbyWhile-writing：writethestoryPara1:Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.1.我是如此的自私以至于我只关注了孩子们的安全，完全忽略了哥哥的感受。

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2.内疚又羞愧，我独自坐在后院的长椅上，双手掩面哭泣。

.3.尽管我很后悔，我却不知道做什么来弥补我的错误。.4.意识到我的困惑和难过，我的妻子主动做了一些饼干作为礼物给我哥哥。.5.

受到妻子鼓励，我增强了道歉的决心，前往哥哥家。

.While-writing：writethestoryPara2:Withthebiscuits

mywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybtother’sdoor.6.我深呼一口气，鼓起勇气敲门，心在胸口紧张地怦怦跳。

.

7.过了一会，门开了，哥哥出现，Toby激动地跳向前，摇着尾巴。(wagtail)

.8.我抓住机会递上饼干，表达我真诚的道歉和深深的遗憾，声音略微颤抖。.

9.令我惊讶的是，哥哥走近我并且温柔地拍拍我的肩膀，与我紧紧相拥。.10.这次宝贵的经历深深根植在我的心里，这会经常提醒我理解和爱的力量。

.While-writing：writethestoryPara1:Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.1.我是如此的自私以至于我只关注了孩子们的安全，完全忽略了哥哥的感受。

.

2.内疚又羞愧，我独自坐在后院的长椅上，双手掩面哭泣。

.3.尽管我很后悔，我却不知道做什么来弥补我的错误。.4.意识到我的困惑和难过，我的妻子主动做了一些饼干作为礼物给我哥哥。.5.

受到妻子鼓励，我增强了道歉的决心，前往哥哥家。

.SoselfishwasIthatIonlyfocusedonthechildren’ssafety,completelyignoringmybrother’sfeeling.

Guiltyandashamed,Isataloneonthebenchinthebackyard,sobbingwithmyfaceinmyhands.RegretfulasIwas,Iwastotallyatalosswhattodotomakeupformymistake.Sensingmyconfusionandgrief,mywifeofferedtocooksomebiscuitsasagiftformybrother.

Encouragedbymywife,Istrengthenedmydeterminationtoapologizeandheadedformybrother’shouse.While-writing：writethestoryPara2:Withthebiscuits

mywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybtother’sdoor.6.我深呼一口气，鼓起勇气敲门，心在胸口紧张地怦怦跳。

.

7.过了一会，门开了，哥哥出现，Toby激动地跳向前，摇着尾巴。(wagtail)

.8.我抓住机会递上饼干，表达我真诚的道歉和深深的遗憾，声音略微颤抖。.

9.令我惊讶的是，哥哥走近我并且温柔地拍拍我的肩膀，与我紧紧相拥。.10.这次