短文改错（原卷版）

短文改错题型1词法类错误考点一谓语动词错误(2022全国乙卷)Ialsowatertheflowersintheyardandtidyingupmyownbedroomwhatevernecessary.（2021·全国甲卷）Theiranswersalsoshowthattheydislikingtalktoothers.Theykeptverymuchtothemselves.1.（2023·四川成都·统考模拟预测）Forexample,youcansignupforfloodinsurance,checktheroof,puttingawaytheoutdooritemsandsoon.2.（2023·陕西西安·西安市大明宫中学校考一模）IwasaskedtheladywhethershewasOKandshesaidshefeltafewsick.考点二非谓语动词错误1.(2022全国甲卷)Iwasunwillingtalkwithhimandoftendisobeyedhisruleofnotstayoutwithmyfriendstoolate.2.(2022全国甲卷)Theiranswersalsoshowthattheydisliketalktoothers.1.（2023·陕西西安·西安市大明宫中学校考一模）AfterhearingwhatIhaddone,myparentsfeltproud,sayweshouldgiveahandtothoseinneeds.2.（2023·甘肃·统考三模）Ialwaysenjoymyselffollowingthestoriesandcommunicatewiththecharacters.考点三名词单复数错误1(2022年全国乙卷)Ourcitywillbebetterplacesifwereplacecarswithbicycle.2(2021年全国乙卷)Ialwaysassistmyparentsindoingthedishaftermeals.1.（2023·陕西宝鸡·统考二模）AssoonasIarrivedsomewhere,Iwouldhavemorethanoneplacestostay.2.（2023·甘肃·统考三模）Namely,thosegoodqualityinthecharacterswillshapeoneintoagoodpersonthannow.考点四代词错误1.(2022全国乙卷)Whenyourideabicycle,youdon’tusepetrol.Sotheyarenotproducingcarbondioxideandnotcausingairpollution.2.（2021全国甲卷）Somewillturntotheirparentsorteachersforhelp.Onlyafewchoosetodealwiththeproblemsonourown.1.（2023·甘肃·统考三模）IamusedtoreadingEnglishclassicsinoursparetime.考点五冠词错误例1(2020年，全国卷I）ThenIputthetomatoesandthebeateneggsintopantogether.例2(2020课标全国Ⅲ卷)Forexample,everymorning,mydadhastohavethebowlofeggsoupwhileIhavetoeatanapple.（2023·四川·棠湖中学校考模拟预测）Uptonow,hehasbecomememberofourfamilyandeveryonehaveenjoyedhiscompany.考点六介词和数词错误1(2022全国乙卷)Maybeitisbecausethecombinationoffreshair,smoothmovementsandexercise.例2(2021全国乙卷)Inmyopinion,studentscanbenefitalotdoingsomehousework.（2023·陕西宝鸡·统考二模）Insteadof,Iwentbackpacking.考点七形容词和副词错误1(2022年全国乙卷)Weallknowthatcyclingisagreatlyexercise.2（2021·全国甲卷）Inmyopinion,whenintrouble,weshouldseekhelpfromthosewetrustmostly.（2023·甘肃·统考三模）Additionally,wewilldefiniteimproveourselvesbyreadingEnglishclassics.题型2句法类错误考点一时态和主谓一致性错误1(2022全国乙卷)Theyoftenrunathighspeeds,whichmayputourlivesindanger.Andthereweretrafficjams.例2（2021·全国甲卷）Oneofthequestionsare：Whowillyougotointimesoftrouble?（2023·四川成都·统考模拟预测）Itusuallymeanthedifferencebetweenmajordestructionorminorwinddamage.考点二定语从句错误例1（2022·全国卷乙卷）Theyoftenrunathighspeeds,whatmayputourlivesindanger.例2(2020课标全国II卷)Thankyoufortheletter,whatreallymademehappy.1.（2023·甘肃·统考三模）Also,itbroadensourhorizonsasitliketravelingthroughtimeandspace,whereisagoodwaytolearnmoreabouttheworld.2.（2023·四川·模拟预测）Igaveoutallmyresttimeincludingsummerandwintervacationwithallweekends,thatwashighlyoddandextremeinother’seyes.考点三、状语从句和名词性从句错误例1(2022全国乙卷)Whetheryourideabicycle,youdon’tusepetrol.例2(2021全国甲卷)Inmyopinion,whereintrouble,weshouldseekhelpfromthosewetrustmost.1.（2023·陕西西安·西安市大明宫中学校考一模）Itturnedoutwhichthisladyfellill.2.（2023·陕西宝鸡·统考二模）ButIdidn’tplancarefullywhenIwouldstaythenight.题型3逻辑类错误考点一逻辑类错误1.(2022全国甲卷)Oneday,hetalkedwithmeorhopedtomendourrelations.2(2020课标全国I卷)FirstIcutthetomatoesintopiecesbutputthemaside.1.（2023·西藏日喀则·统考一模）Theyteachmenotonlyknowledge,andalsohowtoadaptthemselvestothesociety.2.（2023·四川·校考模拟预测）Atthetimes,housesdon’thavewaterandelectricity.过关检测（2024·四川成都·树德中学校考模拟预测）It’snotallthathardtobuildtheadvancedandlargevocabulary.Likemanythingsinlife,it’sanongoingprocess.Thebestpartofitisthatthere’senoughroomforimprovement,whichmeansyouwouldkeepgettinggood.Butyouhavetoworkatit.Asweknow,alittlemonthsofexerciseinyourteenswon’tbeenoughforyourlifelonghealth.That’salsotruetobuildingyourvocabulary.Oneofthemosteffectivewayistoreadgoodbooks.Youneedtoreadatleastonegoodbookaweek,preferableaclassic.Itisnothardandfarbetterthananyothermethodbecausethatyouimproveyourvocabularywhilereadingapieceofliterature.Besides,youlearnbothnewwordsandtheirusesunconsciously,meaningyouwilltendusethewordslearningthiswayalmostautomatically.2．（2023·河南开封·统考三模）Today,theonce-in-500-yearstotalsolareclipse(日食)tookplace.Unfortunate,Iwasillandcouldn’tobserveitmyself,soIhadtowatchitontelevision.IclearlywatchedtheDiamondRing,Bailey’sBeads(贝利珠)orsolareclipsesinotherareas.ThesunonTVwasoriginallyround,whatlaterbecameaboat,likeadogtakingoffabigbiteofabiscuit.Gradually,thesunbecamethinthananeyebrow.Suddenly,Bailey’sBeadsandtheDiamondRingjumpoutnaughtily.Then,alargeblackdiskobviouslyhunginthesky,theskybecameasblackasnight.Afterthewhile,thesunslowlyrecovered.Ahha,thedogcouldn’tswallowthebiscuitandspatout.3．（2023·甘肃酒泉·统考三模）ItwasFather’sDay.Havingbeenfinishedmyhomework,Itogetherwithmysisterwenttobuysomevegetablesaswellasagiftasplanned.Weweresupposedtogivingourfatherabigsurprise.Onourwayhome,wemetwithGrandpaLi,anoldneighbourwithoutchildren.Suddenly,Icameupanidea.Thenwewenttohishomewithwhatwehadbought.Withhishelp,wecookedadeliciousmeal.AfterthatwemadeaphonecalltoourparentsbuttoldthemthatwewillhavelunchatGrandpaLi’s.Hearingwhatwehaddone,wewereverypleased,sayingwewerereallycaring.WehelpedGrandpaLidoathoroughcleanafterlunch.Tiredlyaswewere,wefeltwehadspentameaningday.Ibelieveitisadaywhenwillberememberedbymeforeverinmyfuturelife.4．（2023·甘肃陇南·统考二模）IenjoylearningEnglishbutcanrememberindividualwordseasy.However,whenitcomestoreadingcomprehension,it’sreallythechallenge.Lastweekend,ItriedtoreadastorybookwriteinEnglishtoimprovemyreading.Atfirst,IrefertothedictionaryeverytimeIcameacrossanewword,whichIfounditnotveryhelpful.IoftenfeltpuzzlingaboutwhatIhadread.ThenItriedtofinishachaptercompletelywithlookingupthenewwords.WhatsurprisedmewasIcouldunderstandthestorymerelyfromthecontext.IhopeIwillmakegreatprogressesinEnglishinthisway.5．（2023·河南安阳·统考三模）Anxieties,whichareeasilyseenduringanexam,maybegoodforusinsomedegree.However,toomuchtensioncanledtofailure.Luckily,herearesometipstohelpyouremainpositively.First,keepinmindsthatgoodpreparationisthekeytoensureyoureffortsdonotgofruitless.Youshouldoptimistictodealwiththeexam.Intheaddition,relaxyourselfproperlybutdon’talwaysbenervous.Ifthefirstpaperendsupextremelytoughforme,rememberthatthenextonewillbeeasierandthatyouwilldobetter.Lastbutnotleast,planningatripforyourselfafteranexamaregoodenough.6．（2023·四川成都·模拟预测）Thismorning,IgotupveryearlybecauseIwasworriedaboutmybeanswhatIputinthebasintheotherdays.WhenIremovethetowelonthebasin,myfacelitupwithlaughterimmediately.Theoriginalsoybeansbecamebigwithlesswater,likelittlebabieswithfullstomachs,lyingcomfortable.Thedelicategerms(萌芽)coveredwithtransparentclothes.Aftersupper,Icouldn’twaittoopenthetowelagain.Someofthebeansbrokeouttheirclothes.Asmallbudgrewononesideofthebean.Itlookedlikealittledollstretchedoutonearm,wavingtome.Ah!Iwasexcitingthen.Thesproutseventuallycameout,butItastedthejoyofsuccess.7．（2023·河南·统考二模）Inthepastfewyears,ithasnoticedthatanumberofpeoplewatchingshortvideosissignificantlyincreasing.Themainreasonbehindthepopularityofshortvideosisbecausepeopledon’thaveenoughtimetowatchlongonesbecausethey’reburyingintheirworkandstudy.Besides,shortvideoscontaininformationwhichareeasytounderstand.Therefore,theaccuracyoftheinformationcan’tbeguaranteed,forthatpeoplewillwastemuchtimeiftheyareabsorbedinthousandsofshortvideos.Inmyopinions,watchingshortvideoscanbeefficiently.Weshouldsetatimelimit.Moreover,wemustbecautiousaboutthecontentbecauseofitsinaccuracydoesexist.8．（2023·贵州·校联考模拟预测）Jack,mybestfriend,ismyclassmate.Ourfriendshipislikeastreamofflowedwater.Weoftenhelpeachanotherinourstudies.IwasonceweaknessinEnglish.OnlyhealwaysexplainedvariousEnglishproblemstomepatient,Withhishelp,myEnglishgotbetter,aswhichIwasgratefultohim.Asforhim,hefounditdifficultlearnmathatthattime.SoIsparenoefforttohelphimwithmathproblems.Atlast,hemadeagreatprogressinmath.Now,wearelearningpainting.Nomatterwhatdifficultthehighschoolcoursesare,we’llworkhardtobeadmittingtothebestartuniversity.9．（2023·四川巴中·统考一模）Lastweek,oneofmyfavoritedayarrived—theLibrary’sBookSaleDay.WhenmymomandIwaitedinline,theworkerschattedinthefrontofus.Theysaiditwastenbutthelastbooksale,becausethepeoplewhoranthemwouldretire.Heartheirwords,wewereverysad.Then,anideaoccurredmethatwecouldvolunteertorunthebooksalebutmymomagreed.Final,wemadeanapplicationtothelibraryofficer.Toourdelight,wegetthechance.It’sexcitingforustobeabletorunthebooksaleinperson.10．（2023·四川攀枝花·统考二模）I’moneofyourstudentsinClassSix.NowImetmanydifficultieswhilestudyingEnglish.First,it’sdifficultofmetomemorizealargenumberofnewwords.Secondly,grammaristoocomplexthatIfinditishardtounderstandingit.Andmyperformanceonreadingandwritingarenotsatisfying.Wouldyourecommendmesomeeffectivelymethods?Finally,IbelievethatIwillhavegoodcommandofwhatyouteach,ifyouslowdownourteachingspeed.I’mconfidentthatIwillachievegreatprogressesinthenearfutureandmyEnglishwillbecomemorebetterwithyourhelp.11．（2023·四川·校联考模拟预测）NowadaystherearemanystudentswhoarefondofAmericanpopmusiclikeme.AndwitheasyaccesstheInternet,nowwecanenjoyallthemusicofthesingerswelovethemlikeTaylorSwiftandSamSmith.IlistentoAmericanpopmusicwiththepurposeofimprovemyEnglishatfirst.Andastimegoeson,Ihavefoundthenewworldinit.EverytimeIlistentoAmericanpopmusic,Ifeelexciting.ThemoresongIlistento,themoreIlearnaboutthecultureandpeople’slifeofAmerica.Irealbenefitalotfromit.IcantalkaboutAmericanpopmusicalldaybecauseitbringmemorethanIexpected.Ifyouarealoverofittoo,makingitalifelonghabit.12．（2023·四川·校联考模拟预测）Aimedatenrichingourafter-schoollifeanddevelopourawarenessofprotectingourtraditionalculture,aChinesefolkmusicclubisscheduledtobefoundsoon.Soclubmembersarerequirednow.WhoeverhadagoodcommandoftraditionalChinesefolkmusiciswarmlywelcometojoinintheclub.Theclubwillundoubtedlyholdavarietyofappealingactivities,whichareofgreatlybenefittoyou.Itisaclubthatyouareboundtoenjoyyourselfwhilegainingknowledgesandjoy.Therefore,itissoagoldenopportunitythatyou’dbetternotmissit.Tosignupfortheclub,youaresupposedtohandinyourpersoninformationtotheStudentUnionbye-mailbeforetheeveningofMay3rd.Hopeallthestudentswilltakeactivepartinit.13．（2023·四川成都·成都七中校考模拟预测）LastFriday,weheldourfivediscussionaboutwhattopresentinourannualschoolartfestival.Andwedecidetoinviteanelderlymanfondofplayingtheerhunearourschooljoinus.Hismusicwasverybeautybutcouldn’tgetanyattentionfromtherush-hourpasser-by.Thebigdayfinallyarrivedwhereourfestivaltookplace.Asaspecialguestplayed,allofuswerelostinhismusic.Afterhisperformance,werosetoapplaudhardly.Fromthisexperience,Ilearnedaboutthat,topeoplelikethem,whatreallymattersisnotsympathybutmoreattentionandappreciation,whichwillbrightentheirlife.14．（2023·四川绵阳·四川省绵阳南山中学校考模拟预测）ThefirsttimeIheardtheexpression“Knowyourself”bySocrates,Ididn’trealizeitsmeaninguntilIgotouniversity.Istartedmyuniversitylifeunwillingly,becauseofIdidn’twanttoleavemyparentsandauniversityofengineeringwasnotmydreamschool,too.However,Ichangedmymindcompletelyaftersemester.Myschoolmatearefromdifferentplaces,someofwhicharereallybrilliant.Thismakesmerealizedthereisalwayssomeonemuchmoreoutstandingly.Sincethen,toknowmyselfhavebecomeanimportantpartofmylife.OnlybyknowingwhoIamandwhereIamcanyoufollowtherightpath.15．（2023·江西·濂溪一中校联考模拟预测）Lastmonth,IfinishreadingRomanceoftheThreeKingdomswritingbyLuoGuanzhong.ItisaChinesehistoricalnovelbasedupontheeventswhathappenedbetweenthelateEasternHanDynastyortheThreeKingdoms.hispraisedasoneoftheFourGreatClassicalNovelsofChineseliterature.I’velearnedalotoffromthenovel.Ireallylikereading,whichcanbroadenyourhorizonandmakemelearnknowledges.Agoodbookislikeawiseman,ateacher,afriendandapartner.Idoadvisechoseagoodbooktoread.lfeveryonedoesitregular,thehistorycultureandmanyotheraspectswillhandeddownfromgenerationtogeneration.16．（2023·河南·校联考模拟预测）Lastmonth,IfinishreadingRomanceoftheThreeKingdomswritingbyLuoGuanzhong.ItisaChinesehistoricalnovelbasedupontheeventswhathappenedbetweenthelateEasternHanDynastyortheThreeKingdoms.ItispraisedasoneoftheFourGreatClas-sicalNovelsofChineseliterature.I’velearnedalotoffromthenovel.Ireallylikereading,whichcanbroadenyourhorizonandmakemelearnknowledges.Agoodbookislikeawiseman,ateacher,afriendandapartner.Idoadvisechoseagoodbooktoread.Ifeveryonedoesitregular,thehistory,cultureandmanyotheraspectswillhandeddownfromgenerationtogeneration.17．（2023·河南开封·统考模拟预测）LastTuesdayamentalhealthactivityheldinourschooltohelpstudentsrelievetheirstudypressure.Theactivitywasorganizedbythepsychologyclub,wherestudentswithpsychologicalproblemscouldturntoforhelp.Firstofall,Mr.Chen,thepsychologyprofessor,gavealectureonwhattosettlethestudypressure.Heanalyzesthemostcommonpsychologicalproblemsthatstudentsmayencounterbutputforwardsomevaluablesuggestions.Allthestudentslistenedtoattentivelyandbenefitedalot.Then,ashortplaywasperformedbythememberofthepsychologyclub.Thestudentsgotrelaxingbothmentallyandphysically.Thisactivitywasthoughthighofbythewholeschool.18．（2023·河南·校联考模拟预测）Therearemanyeventsthatonecannotforgetthemforever.Myfirstexamatprimaryschoolisoneofthemostmemorableevent.IstillrememberhowIspentasleeplessnight.Therefore,onthefollowingday,IfeltextremelytiringandforgoteverythingIhadreviewed.Duringanexam,mymindwentblank,sothatIwantedtodowascheat.Thus,whentheteacherwasturningaround,Idecidetoopenmycopybook.Iwastoofrightenedthatmyfingersweretrembling.Suddenly,myteachercamenexttome,putherhandgentlyonmyshoulderandsayingsoftly,“Youforgotputawayyourcopybook!”Iwasrealashamedthatday.19．（2023·河南郑州·洛宁县第一高级中学校联考模拟预测）Ourannualsportsday,heldearlierthismonth,wasfullfunandexcitement.Theentirelyschool,includingtheplayground,wasdecoratedwithflagsandflowers.Manyboysandgirlstookpartintheevent.Thegameshaveincludedfootballandbasketballmatches,races,jumpsandothertrackevent.Itookpartinthe50mand100mracesorreceivedasilvercupintheformer.The100mrace,whichwasveryexcited,waswonbymyfriendMansoor.MyfriendRajatgetsthefirstplaceinthelongjump.ButmyclassmateLucyfellandinjuredhimselfduringthehighjump.Theeventcametotheclosewiththedistributionofprizes,whichwasgivenawaybyourheadmaster.20．（2023·广西梧州·苍梧中学校考模拟预测）Itwas7:15inthemorningofJanuary8th,2023.IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhileapasser-byofaveragebuildcameoutoftheparkontheothersideoftheroad.Justatthatmoment,IseeayellowcardrivinguptheThirdStreetandmadearightturnintoParkRoad.Unlucky,thecarhitthemanwhenshewascrossingtheroad.Andheknockeddownwithapainfulcry.However,insteadofstopping,thecardroveoffevenfaster.Seeingthis,abouttwominutelater,Istoppedapassingcarandrushedthemantothemostnearesthospital.Whenhisfamilycame,theyweremovingtotears.21．（2023·宁夏银川·银川一中校联考二模）Dearallpresent,Withtheonlinepaper-cuttingcoursecomestoanend,I’mheretoconveymycongratulationstoallofyouthattakeactivepartinthecourse.Istillrememberthatyouwatchedattentivelyandfollowtheinstructionscloselyineveryclass.Underthehelpofartteachers,allofyouhavemadegreatprogressesinpapercutting.Thatimpressesmemostistheworksyoucreatedonmyown.Butforyourconstantefforts,soyouwouldn’thaveenjoyedthecharmoftheoldformofChineseart.Congratulationsagaintoallofyouinvolvinginthecourse.Youareenthusiasticinvitedtopayavisittoourschoolatyourearliestconvenience.Wishyouallthebest!22．（2023·河南新乡·统考二模）Hello,SeniorOnestudents!MayIhaveyourattention,please?Hereisagoodnews.AtriptoHappyFarminWesternHillVillageorganizedforyouthisSaturday.Youwillmeetintheschoolgateat8:00am.Theschoolbuswouldtakeyouthereinlessthananhour.Andtherearedifferentactivities,includingtakepartinthefarmwork,fromthatyoucanexperiencethefarmlife.Bytheway,doremembertowearingahatandsunscreentoprotectyourskin.Tomakeyourtripsmoreconvenientandcomfortable,wehadbetterwearsportswear.I’msureyouwillhaveawelltime.形容词good作定语。故将well改为good。23．（2023·河南·校联考三模）Ahobbyisnothingbutagentleandpleasantoccupationbeingdesignedtofreethetiredbrainfortheburdenofthemaintask.Ihadafavoritehobby,whichisridingabicycle.ItismyfavoritesporttodowhereverIhavefreetime.Itisagoodexerciseimproverelationshipsbetweenfamilymembersandfriends.MostofthetimeIcyclewithmybestfriend.Ithinkthebenefitsofitarenumerousnotjustforthepersoncycledbutfortheenvironment.It’sahobbywhatpromotesthebrainactivityandreduceCO2release.It’salsoanfunoutdooractivitythatcanstimulatethesensesdulledbystayingindoor.24．（2023·广西·统考二模）Today,ithasbeenalmost30yearswhenIfirststartedvolunteeringatthelocallibraryfor“Children’sStoryHour”.Everyweek,Igotheretoreadtokids.Also,Ianswerquestionthattheyarecuriousaboutthem.Thisjob,whatIhavekeptdoingforsolong,helpmeescapefromthedailystress.Iamreallyhappytobewiththem.Yesterdayourlocalnewschannelcompletedaprogramnaming“LocalHeroes”.127adultsvotedme,sayingsomethinglike,“Cheryl’sStoryHourisoneofthewarmmemoriesfrommychildhood.”Andinterestingenough,alltheothersnamesonthetopofthelistwerefirefighters,policemen,andpoliticians.25．（2023·河南·校联考模拟预测）QingmingFestivalisoneofmostimportanttraditionalfestivalsinChina.ItfallsonApril4thor5th,wheremostChinesepeopleenjoyapublicholiday.QingmingFestivalwasalsocalledTombSweepingDay.ItisthetimeforChinesepeopletoshowingrespectfortheirancestorsbycleaningtheirancestors’tombsandplaceofferings.Inadditionto,QingminginChinesemeans“clearness”or“brightness”.Itisthefifthofthe24solartermofthetraditionalChinesesolarcalendar.Beside,italsomarksthestartofthewarmweatherofspringandthebeginningofbusilyfarmingseason.26．（2023·河南·校联考模拟预测）WhenIwasaboy,Iwasafootballfan.Ialwaysplayedthefootballwithsomeotherboyinthebackyard.Oneday,Icameintotheyardwithafootballandplayedithappy.Butsuddenly,theballfliesthroughthewindowornearlyhitmydad.Dadtookmyfootballandcutitinhalf.Ididn’tcrybecauseIknewwhatterriblemymistakewas.Ididn’texpecttogettingafootballagain.Buttominesurprise,Dadboughtmeanewonethenextweek.Hesaid,“Youhavepunishedforyourmistakealready.Now,youhaveanotherchance.Pleasebemorecareful.”Iwasreallygratefultomyfather’sforgiveness.27．（2023·江西·江西师大附中校考三模）Ifinditinterestedthatmanygreatorsuccesspeoplecomefromapoorfamily.Thisprovesthatbeingpoornotalwaysabadthing.Insomeway,itmaybeveryprecioustoyou,becauseofdifficultsituationswillmakeyouapersonofstrongcharacter,uponwhatyoucandependforsuccess.Sodon’tfeelsorryifyouwereastudentfromapoorfamily.Workhardandtheywillhaveagreatfuturealthoughotherhaverichparents.Inaword,itisn’tmatterwhereyoucomefromifyouhaveapositiveattitudetolife.So,whenlifegivesyou100reasonstocry,showinglifethatyouhave1,000reasonstosmile.28．（2023·河南郑州·统考模拟预测）Asmymum’sbirthdayapproached,Iwasconsideringgiveherauniquegift.Finally,Idecidedtomakeshortvideotocelebrateherfiftybirthday.Todothissuccessful,Ididshortinterviewswithmyotherfamilymembersorherfriends,inwhichtheyallwishedherahappybirthday.Iincludetheirbirthdaywishesinthevideo.Then,Iaddedsomephotoandmusictoitanddidsomeeditingwork.Allthiswasdonewithoutmyknowledge.OnthedaywhenIplayedthevideoforher,shewastootouchedthatshegavemeawarmhug.HowhappyIwastobringaboutjoytomymum!29．（2023·陕西西安·陕西师大附中校考二模）Arestudents’gradesmatterofpersonalprivacy?Shouldtestscorebemadepublic?Opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.Ithinkit’sgoodtorecognizeforthetopscorers—theywillbeinspiredandkeeptrytomaintaintheirhighgrades.Therearesomedisadvantages,therefore,forthelowperformers.Somesaytheyaregreatlydiscouragedandfeeldepressed.Butcompetitionisalife’sskillthatneededtobelearnedtobesuccessfulintherealworld.Theearlier,thebetter.Regardlessofthetypeofcompetition,itwillkeepthemmotivating.Itisnotjustaboutwinningorlosing;itisalsoaboutwhentheygetinvolved,enjoytheprocessandimprovethem.30．（2023·陕西·西北工业大学附属中学校考模拟预测）Attheageof10,Ibegintochatwithforeigners.Atfirst,Iwasveryshy,andgraduallywithforeigners’help,Ibecamemoreandmoreconfidence.Thefollowingyear,IwenttoLintongwithtwoforeignersasourguide.WevisitedtheTerra-CottaWarriorsMuseumwherewetooklotsofphotos,enjoyingthebeautifulscenery.Afterthat,theywenttobuysouvenir.Thesellerscouldn’tspeakEnglish.Thoughitwaslittlehardforme,Itriedmybesttotranslatetheirwordsonbothsides.Finally,thetwoforeignersaccompanyingbymeboughtsatisfactorygoods.Thisunforgettableexperiencemademetounderstandwhere“Practicemakesperfect.”means.真题演练2023年短文改错Text1【2023年全国乙卷】LastFridaymymomdecidedtocolorhishair.Shestudiedwithallthehairproductsatthedrugstore.Thecolorshechoosecameinaboxwhichhadapictureofawomanthathaircolorlookedjustperfect.Momwassuresamecolorwouldlookgreatonher.Sheputthenewcoloronherhairorsatstillfor30minutes,justasthedirectionssaying.However,insteadofthebrownishredhairshehadhopedfor,shefinalgotpurplehair.Shewentrightintotheshowertowashingit,butitwasnouse.Atleastonethingprovedtruth:thecolorwouldn’twashout.Test2【2023年全国甲卷】Iusedtoafraidofinsects,butlastFriday’sbiologyclassmakeabigchangeinme.Inthatclass,MissZhao,ourbiologyteacher,showedweinsectsonstamps.Thebees,butterflyandmanyotherinsectslookedlovelyandbeautifullyonthestamps.MissZhaotoldusthenamesoftheinsectsordescribedtheirlivinghabits.Sheevenplayedsomerecordingsoftheirsinging,whatwasfun.Now,I’vecometolovethoseofsmalllivingthings.Intheevening,whenItakethewalkintheschoolgarden,thesingingofinsectsbecomemoremeaningfultome.2022年短文改错Test1【2022年全国乙卷】Weallknowthatcyclingisagreatlyexercise.Adoctortellsmepeoplewholivesthelongestaredancersandcyclists.Maybeitisbecausethecombinationoffreshair,smoothmovementandexercise.Whetheryourideabicycle,youdon’tusepetrol.Sotheyarenotproducingcarbondioxideandnotcauseairpollution.Justseehowcarshavebeentakenoverourcities.Theyoftenrunathighspeeds,whatmayputourlivesindanger.Andthereweretrafficjams,too.Ourcitieswillbebetterplacesifwereplacecarswithbicycle.Test2【2022年全国甲卷】MyfatheroftentookmetohishospitalwhenIwasoffmyschool.Heshowedmehowhismedicalinstrumentswasused.Ifeltsocloselytohim.However,afterIwenttohighschool,somehowIbecomedistantfromhim.Iwasunwillingtalkwithhimandoftendisobeyedhisruleofnotstayoutwithmyfriendstoolate.ThedisagreementwastoosharpthatneitherhenorIknewwhattosettleit.Oneday,hetalkedwithmeorhopedtomendourrelations.Withtheeffortsmadebyallsides,webegantounderstandeachotherbetter.2021年短文改错Test1【2021年全国甲卷】Lastweekourteacheraskedustofillinaquestionnaire.Oneofthequestionsare：Whowillyougointimesoftrouble?Herearetheresults.Manystudentssaytheywilltalktotheirfriendorclassmatesbecausethey'reofthesameageandcanunderstandeachother.Somewillturnouttotheirparentsorteachersforhelp.Onlyalittlechoosetodealwiththeproblemsonourown.Theiranswersalsoshowthattheydisliketalktoothers.Theykeptverymuchtothemselves.Inmyopinion,whereintrouble,weshouldseekhelpfromthosewetrustmostly.Test2【2021年全国乙卷】Ilovedoinghousework.Ialwaysassistmyparentsindoingthedishaftermeals.Ialsowatertheflowersintheyardandtidyingupmyownbedroomwhatevernecessary.Inmyopinion,studentscanbenefitalotdoingsomehousework.Firstly,doinghouseworkwashelpfulforustobearesponsibleperson.Also,itgivesourparentsmoretimetodowhattheyarelikeanditimprovesthefamilyrelationship.What’smost,doinghouseworkcanbeaformofmentallyrelaxationfromstudy.That’sourviewonhousework.Andhopesthiscaninspiremorethinkingonthetopic!2