2025年中考考前冲刺必背英语作文学案(九)（含写作详解）

试卷第=page11页，共=sectionpages33页试卷第=page11页，共=sectionpages33页2025年中考考前冲刺必背英语作文（九）简介：《2025年中考考前冲刺必背英语作文》系列文档：中考英语写作备考的专业之选。精准贴合考纲：深度剖析中考英语写作考纲要求，涵盖记叙文、议论文、应用文等全题型，精准匹配考试场景，助力考生有的放矢地备考。专业范文引领：由资深英语教育专家精心编撰范文，语言地道、结构严谨，词汇与句式丰富多样，为考生提供高质量的写作范例，引领写作方向。深度写作指导：深入解析写作思路，精准点拨要点，标注亮点词汇与高分句型，助力考生领悟写作精髓，提升语言运用与表达能力。高效背诵积累：考前冲刺必备，篇幅精炼，便于考生快速背诵，积累实用词汇与句式，灵活运用到考试写作中，提高答题效率与质量。专业打造，助力考生在中考英语写作中脱颖而出，轻松斩获高分。一、书面表达1．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter受邀到一位中国朋友家做客吃饭。他不知道去中国家庭做客的一些礼仪，向你发邮件求助。请你用英文给他回复。告诉Peter一些基本的礼仪以及你的具体建议。提示词语：shakehands,servetea,usechopsticks,waittoeat提示问题：·WhataresomemannersaboutvisitingaChinesefamily?·What’syouradvicetohelpPeter?DearPeter,Howisitgoing?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopethisishelpful.Emailmeifyouhaveanyotherquestions.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearPeter,Howisitgoing?I’mgladtointroducesomemannerswhenvisitingaChinesefamily.Weusuallyshakehandswithpeopleandsmilewhenwemeetthemforthefirsttime.Wealwaysservefruitandteatoshowourpolitenesswhenvisitorscometoourhome.I’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.First,asyouknow,weChineseusechopsticksinsteadofknivesandforks.It’sagoodideatogetsomepracticebeforehand.Second,whenthefoodisserved,youshouldwaituntilyou’reinvitedtoeat.Third,you’dbetterjointheconversationaboutthebigmealandsayhowmuchyoulikeit.Ihopethisishelpful.Emailmeifyouhaveanyotherquestions.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍来中国家庭做客的一些礼仪”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。[写作步骤]第一步，表示乐意提供建议；第二步，根据题干中的要点，详细介绍一些做客需要注意的事项；第三步，给出建议，表示欢迎提问并收尾。[亮点词汇]①forthefirsttimes第一次②insteadof而不是[高分句型]①Weusuallyshakehandswithpeopleandsmilewhenwemeetthemforthefirsttime.（when引导时间状语从句）②It’sagoodideatogetsomepracticebeforehand.（itis+名词+todosth句型）2．艺术总是伴随着人的成长，无论是当我们沉浸在幸福中，还是面临困难挫折，它总能给人带来温暖、勇气和力量。在你成长过程中，是不是也有这么一本书、一首歌或者一部电影，对你有特别的影响和意义呢？请你以Myfavorite_________为题，介绍一本书、一首歌或者一部电影。注意事项：1）字数：100词左右；2）短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyfavoritemovieMynameisLiHua.Ilikemoviesverymuch.Ithinkagoodmoviecanteachusaboutlife,orexplainwhatthemeaningoflifeis,whatrealfriendshipisandsoon.Zootopiaisoneofmyfavoritemovies.Itisacartoonmovie.Thestoryisaboutarabbitthatjoinsthepoliceforceandsolvesadifficultcasewithafox.Ilikethemoviebecauseitteachesmetosticktomydreamandthentoachieveit.“Ifyoudon’ttryanythingnew,you’llneversucceed.”Thesewordsfromthemovieinfluencedmealot.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作题目已给出，考生应注意完善题目，文章适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，补全题干；第二步，整体对作品介绍；第三步，介绍你喜爱的理由。[亮点词汇]①stickto坚持②achieve实现[高分句型]①Ithinkagoodmoviecanteachusaboutlife,orexplainwhatthemeaningoflifeis,whatrealfriendshipisandsoon.（what引导宾语从句）②Ilikethemoviebecauseitteachesmetosticktomydreamandthentoachieveit.（because引导原因状语从句）3．每个人都会从不同的经历中获得不同的感受。哪一种感受经常伴随着你呢？请根据下面的图示写一篇短文。内容包括：1.Howdoyouoftenfeel?2.Whatmakesyouso…?Why?3.Doyouwanttomakeanychanges?How?要求：1.内容完整，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。3.词数100左右。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Ioftenfeelangry.I’mangrywithmyself.Ihopetodevelopsomehealthyhabitslikegettingupearlyortakingmoreexercise,butIstillspendmostofmytimestayingupplayingcomputergames.I’malsoangrywithmybestfriendBill.HearguedwithmeseveraldaysagoandIdon’twanttotalktohimanymore.ButIreallywanttomakeachange.MaybeIshouldbestrictwithmyselfandmaybeIshouldsaysorrytoBillfirst.Afterall,Idon’twanttolosemybestfriend.

Ihopemylifecanbefilledwithpeaceandhappiness.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：一般现在时、一般过去时；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我经常感到愤怒”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“生活习惯、与朋友相处等”几个方面重点介绍自己愤怒的对象及其原因；第三步，书写结语。表达“生活充满和平与幸福”的愿望。[亮点词汇]①beangrywith对……生气②developsomehealthyhabits养成一些健康的习惯③stayingup熬夜④not...anymore不再……⑤makeachange做出改变⑥bestrictwith对……严格⑦saysorryto对……道歉⑧befilledwith充满[高分句型]①Ihopetodevelopsomehealthyhabitslikegettingupearlyortakingmoreexercise,butIstillspendmostofmytimestayingupplayingcomputergames.（but连接并列句，spendsometimedoingsth.句式）②Ihopemylifecanbefilledwithpeaceandhappiness.（宾语从句）4．假如你是李辉，你的一位英国笔友Kate发来电子邮件，说她下星期来中国，她向你询问中国的餐桌礼仪。请你根据下面提示给她回一封电子邮件，告诉她有关情况。词数80~100。参考词汇：toast(vt.为……举杯敬酒)提示：1.等大家都到齐了再开吃；2.让长辈或客人先动筷；3.不能用筷子敲碗；4.不要将手伸到饭桌对面夹菜；5.为主人的健康、成功干杯……DearKate,I’mgladtoreceiveyouremail.NowIwanttotellyousomethingabouttheChinesetablemanners._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHui【答案】例文：DearKate,I’mgladtoreceiveyouremail.NowIwanttotellyousomethingabouttheChinesetablemanners.InChina,wemustwaituntileveryoneisatthetable.Andwhenthedinnerstarts,thehostdoesn’teateverydishfirst.Hewaitsfortheguestsandelderstodigin.Wedon’ttapbowlswiththechopsticks,whichisconsideredimpolite.Weshouldn’treachacrossthetabletogetsomethingtoeat,becauseinthatcase,wemaybreakorknocksomethingover.Besides,weusuallytoastgoodhealthorsuccessofthehostandthankhimforhistreat.HopetoseeyouinChinaandeverythinggoeswell.Yours,LiHui【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；②时态：为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作的要点提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，可适当添加细节，使邮件内容意思完整。[写作步骤]第一步，承接已给出的开头，并按照内容提示，一一介绍中国的餐桌礼仪；第二步，书写结语，表示期待见到Kate，并给予祝福。[亮点词汇]①inthatcase在那种情况下②atthetable在餐桌上③everythinggoeswell一切顺利[高分句型]①Andwhenthedinnerstarts,thehostdoesn’teateverydishfirst.(when引导时间状语从句)②Wedon’ttapbowlswiththechopsticks,whichisconsideredimpolite.(which引导非限制性定语从句)5．三年的初中生活即将结束，你与老师和同学之间一定有很多美好的回忆。请写一篇短文来叙述一件难忘的事。词数80左右。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Howtimeflies!Mycolorfuljuniorhighschoollifeiscomingtotheend.Ican’tforgetthehappytimethatI’vespenthere.Iusedtobeaproblemstudent.Oneday,theteacheraskedwhobrokethewindow.Iwasafraid.IfIadmitted,Iwouldbeintrouble,Ithought.Ididn’twanttoraisemyhand,butsomethingmuchstrongerthanmepulleditup.Insteadofpunishingme,hegavemeabookandsaidheknewhowIlikedbooks.Anditwasonlyformyhonesty.Icouldn’tbelieveit!Iwasn’tpunishedandIgotmyfavoritebookHarryPotter.Tillnow,Ioftenlookbackatwhattheteachersaid,andI’llbeanhonestmanforever.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；③提示：注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步：表明写作意图。内容是写一篇短文来叙述一件难忘的事，记叙你与老师和同学之间的美好回忆；第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先点明主题；其次具体叙述一件难忘的事情；第三步：书写结语。表示“自己将永远作一个诚实的人。”[亮点词汇]①Howtimeflies!光阴似箭！

②beintrouble陷入困境③pullup使突然中断④lookback追忆；回顾[高分句型]①Ican’tforgetthehappytimethatI’vespenthere.（that引导的定语从句）②Tillnow,Ioftenlookbackatwhattheteachersaid,andI’llbeanhonestmanforever.（what引导的宾语从句）6．世界上有很多发明，他们正在逐渐改变我们的生活方式。请以“Theinventionthatinfluencesmylifemost”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。1.要点：1)这项影响你生活的发明是什么；2)它带来哪些影响；3)它让你有什么感受。2.要求：1)文中不要出现所在的学校的校名和师生姓名；2)词数100左右。Theinventionthatinfluencesmylifemost________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheinventionthatinfluencesmylifemostManyinventionschangeourlife.AsfarasI’mconcerned,theInternetisausefulinventionanditinfluencesmylifemost.EverydayIsurftheInternetandgetinformationfromit.Icankeepintouchwithmyfriendsandfamily.Besides,Icanbuygoodsfromallovertheworld.Moreimportantly,IcanknowmorethroughtheInternet,anditopensupmyeyes.Itcannotonlyhelpmewithmystudy,butalsohelpusrelax.Allinall,thankstotheInternet,mylifebecomesmoreconvenientthanever.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息介绍最影响自己生活的发明，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍最影响自己生活的发明是网络；第二步，详细介绍网络带来哪些影响；第三步，书写结语，表达网络给自己带来的感受。[亮点词汇]①AsfarasI’mconcerned就我而言②keepintouchwith和……保持联系③allovertheworld全世界[高分句型]Itcannotonlyhelpmewithmystudy,butalsohelpusrelax.(notonly…butalso连接谓语动词)7．随着“德、智、体、美、劳”五育并举政策的出台，各个学校广泛开展校园体艺活动，帮助每位学生学会1至2项艺术技能。假如你是小强，你想参加学校的某个（些）兴趣俱乐部（1-3项），请你结合自己的体艺长处和个人发展需求，申请参加哪个（些）兴趣俱乐部，给学校写一封申请信。要求：1.80-120词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：1.艺术长处（篮球、绘画、烹饪）；2.申请参加哪些兴趣俱乐部及理由（发展特长、培养自律、充实生活、身心健康）；3.……参考词汇：自律self-discipline，（与兴趣班的同学们）一起向未来togetherforasharedfutureDearsir,I’maninegrader,I’minterestedin___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,XiaoQiang【答案】例文Dearsir,I’maninegrader,I’minterestedinnatureandlikereadingbooksaboutwildlife.IwouldliketobecomeamemberofFriendofNaturebecauseIenjoythebeautyofnatureandlikewildlifealot.Iquiteunderstandtheimportanceofprotectingwildlife.SoIwanttodosomethingtohelpwildlifeandprotectthenature.Ifwedon’ttakeaction,wildlifewillbeindanger.Ifwebuildmorenaturereserves,wildlifewillhavemorelivingspaceandfood.I’dliketoencouragemorepeopletodosomethingtohelp.Icancometoclubactivitiesfrom9a.mto10a.m.everySunday. IwillbeveryhappyifIcanbecomeamemberofyourclub. Youcancallmeare-mailmeatXiaoQiang@.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,XiaoQiang【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为申请信；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步：表明写作意图，就自己想申请的俱乐部，给学校写一封申请信；第二步：具体阐述自己的兴趣、爱好、加入俱乐部的目的等；第三步：书写结语。[亮点词汇]①beinterestedin对……感兴趣

②theimportanceof……的重要性③beindanger处于危险之中④wouldliketodosth.想做某事⑤becomeamemberof成为其成员[高分句型]①IwouldliketobecomeamemberofFriendofNaturebecauseIenjoythebeautyofnatureandlikewildlifealot.（because引导的原因状语从句）②Ifwebuildmorenaturereserves,wildlifewillhavemorelivingspaceandfood.（if引导的条件状语从句）8．某英文网站开展关于“美丽校园，健康生活”的征稿活动。请你根据以下内容积极投稿，倡导同学们爱护校园环境，健康快乐生活。keeptheschoolclean;

dosports;lookafteryourself;others要求：(1)参考提示内容，可适当发挥；(2)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；(3)文中不得出现你的任何真实信息；（姓名、校名和地名等）(4)不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）Studentsneedtohaveahealthyschoollife.Whatcanwedotomakeit?HereI’vegotsomeideastosharewithyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________