全国I卷应用文和读后续写范文与拓展训练课件-高三英语一轮复习专项

应用文和读后续写范文与拓展2025年新高考I卷第一节

应用文写作(满分15分)

假定你是李华，你班英语报要增设一个栏目，外教Jenny提出Funat

myschool和GuesswhoIam两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封信，内容如下:1.你的选择；2.说明理由DearJenny,IreallyliketheideaofaddinganewcolumntoourEnglishnewspaper.________________________________________________第一节

应用文写作(满分15分)

假定你是李华，你班英语报要增设一个栏目，外教Jenny提出Funat

myschool和GuesswhoIam两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封信，内容如下:1.你的选择；2.说明理由必须二选一，不能模棱两可或两个都选。选择哪个栏目更合理？

通常选择理由更充分、更容易展开的那个。选择理由需具体、有说服力：避免只说“很有趣”或“很好”，要结合栏目的特点和你认为的价值（如对写作能力的帮助、对班级氛围的促进、内容的可操作性等）来阐述。学会选择的李华一、推荐“GuesswhoIam”DearJenny,IreallyliketheideaofaddinganewcolumntoourEnglishnewspaper.Asforthethemeofthecolumn,

Iprefer“GuesswhoIam”

.

Herearemyreasons.

Firstly,thisthemeisfamiliartoeveryone,ensuringthemtoparticipateandcontribute.Moreover,itprovidesachanceforusteenagerstoexploreouruniquepersonalities,thusbuildingourself-recognition.Lastly,itfostersastrongsenseofconnectionwithinourclassaswelearnmoreaboutoneanother.I’mconfidentthiscolumnwillbeahugesuccess.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!

Yours

LiHuaDearJenny,IreallyliketheideaofaddinganewcolumntoourEnglishnewspaper.Afterthinkingcarefullyaboutbothideas,Iwouldliketochoose"Funatmyschool"asthenewcolumn.

ThereasonwhyIprefer"Funatmyschool"isthatitallowsstudentstoshareinterestingstoriesoreventshappeningoncampus.Thesecouldincludefunnymomentsinclass,excitingactivitiesduringbreaks,andevenuniquetraditionsofourschool.Suchacolumnwillnotonlymakethenewspapermorelivelyandengaging,butalsogivestudentsachancetoexpresstheircreativityandshowwhatmakesourschoolspecial.

IbelievethiscolumnwillbringmorejoyandlaughtertoournewspaperwhilehelpingstudentspracticetheirEnglishwritingskills.Iamreallylookingforwardtoseeingitcome

tolife!

Yours

LiHua推荐“Funatmyschool”兄弟和解在一次家庭聚会中与兄弟产生嫌隙，之后通过一番思想斗争决定主动登门道歉的故事，诠释了承担责任与宽容的可贵品质。MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.

Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn'tcountedon:mybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece'ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.

Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn'twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn'thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.

Afewdayspassed,andIhadn'theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he'llgetoverit,Ireasoned.

Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconsciencekeptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother'sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissues,andhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.注意:(1)续写词数应为150左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题纸相应位置作答。Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.____________________________________________________________________________________________Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.____________________________________________________________________________________________

Mywife

and

Iwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.

Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn'tcountedon预料；指望:mybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire精力旺盛的人/动物；活力四射的小家伙.Though

friendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece'ssmallboysandmysix-month-oldgranddaughter.So,whenmybrother

showedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.Myplanwasworkingout进展顺利；成功justfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn'twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn'thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue强行解决问题；强求.背景：“我”和妻子初夏举办新家聚会，妻子准备零食，“我”打理后院，为孩子预留玩耍空间。突发状况：弟弟带50磅的狗托比赴约，“我”因担心狗撞倒小孩，要求托比待在户外；晚饭后下雨，众人进屋，弟弟不愿带湿狗驾车回家，最终尴尬离场。

Afewdayspassed,andIhadn'theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted分开；分手；告别.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he'llgetoverit,Ireasoned推理/推论.

Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience良心；良知keptbothering困扰；烦扰me.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother'sshoes换位思考；设身处地为他人着想.Hewasfacinghealthissues,andhiswifeofthirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstant（持续的；经常的；形影不离的）companion,theonewhokepthimgoing.Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.___________________________________________________________________________________Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.___________________________________________________________________________________后续发展：“我”发短信邀请弟弟未果，两个月后在良心谴责下，意识到弟弟的处境（健康问题+丧妻之痛，托比是唯一陪伴），决定主动弥补。4.主题亲情至上：家庭关系比规则、面子更珍贵。换位思考：理解他人处境是化解矛盾的关键。道歉的力量：主动认错能修复破碎的情感纽带。陪伴的意义：困境中，陪伴（无论是人与人还是人与动物）是重要的精神支撑。5.冲突表层冲突：“我”为聚会秩序禁止托比进屋，与弟弟希望托比得到妥善安置的需求产生矛盾。深层冲突：“我”的固执与自我中心，与弟弟丧妻后对情感陪伴的迫切需求之间的冲突。6.情绪“我”的情绪：初期（坚定、自信）→弟弟离场后（不以为意）→两个月后（良心不安、愧疚、焦虑）→主动和解时（紧张、期待）→和解后（释然、感激）。弟弟的情绪：赴约时（期待）→被要求托比待户外（无奈）→下雨后（不满）→尴尬离场（委屈、失望）→重逢时（惊讶、犹豫）→和解后（感动、释然）。P1:Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.我意识到是我错了。

句1（衔接句-愧疚觉醒）：AwaveofguiltwashedovermewhenIthoughtaboutmybrother’slonelinessafterhiswifepassedaway.IfeltverysorrybecauseIhadrefusedtoletTobycomeindoorsatthegathering.当我想到弟弟在妻子去世后的孤独时，一股愧疚感涌上心头。我为自己在聚会时拒绝让托比进屋而感到非常抱歉。句2（情绪反应）：Ibitmylip,asignofmygrowingunease,andIpacedupanddownrestlessly.Ifeltguiltyandworried,realizinghowthoughtlessIhadbeenabouthisfeelingsandToby’sroleashisonlycompanion.我咬着嘴唇，这是我越来越不安的迹象，我不安地来回踱步。我感到愧疚又担忧，意识到自己对他的感受以及托比作为他唯一陪伴者的重要性是多么轻率。句3（心理活动）：MyheartracedwithpanicasIthoughtabouthishealthproblemsandhowlonelyhemustbewithouthiswife.IwonderedifIshouldcallhimfirsttosaysorryorwaitforhimtocontactme.当我想到他的健康问题，以及没有妻子陪伴的他是多么孤独时，我的心因恐慌而狂跳。我想知道我是否应该先打电话向他道歉，还是等他主动联系我。句4（情绪转换）：Itookadeepbreathtocalmmyselfdown,tryingtopushawaythebadthoughts.Finally,Idecidedtotakeaction,knowingthatfamilyrelationshipsweretooprecioustoletmystubbornnessstandintheway.我深吸一口气让自己平静下来，试图驱散不好的想法。最后，我决定采取行动，因为我知道家庭关系太宝贵了，不能让我的固执阻碍我。句5（呼应句-准备行动）：Atthesametime,mywifemadesomebiscuitsandIdedcidedtovisitmybrother.同时，我的妻子做好了一些饼干，我决定去看望我的弟弟。P2：Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.带着妻子做的饼干，我来到了弟弟的家门口。句6（衔接句-见面反应）：MyheartpoundednervouslyasIknockedonthewoodendoor,notsurewhathisreactionwouldbe.Whenheopenedthedoor,hisfaceshowedsurprise.Icouldseetheunhappinessinhiseyesmixedwithalittlehope.Ismilednervouslyathimandheldouttheplateofbiscuits.我紧张地敲响木门，心里怦怦直跳，不确定他会有什么反应。当他打开门时，他的脸上露出惊讶的神情。我能看到他眼中的不快中夹杂着一丝希望。我紧张地对他笑了笑，递出了那盘饼干。句7（道歉场景）：Iapologizedsincerely,tellinghimhowsorryIwasfornotlettingTobycomeinsideandmakinghimleavethegatheringunhappy.Hestoodtherequietlyandlistenedtomecarefully.我真诚地道歉，告诉他我很抱歉不让托比进屋，还让他不高兴地离开了聚会。他静静地站在那里，认真地听着我的话。句8（情感回应）：Tobyranoverhappilyandwaggedhistailaroundus,asifwelcomingmeandhopingforourreconciliation.Theuncomfortablefeelingbetweenusstartedtofadeaway.托比高兴地跑过来，在我们身边摇着尾巴，仿佛在欢迎我，也盼着我们和好。我们之间的不适感开始渐渐消散。句9（解决冲突句-和解达成）：Mybrothernoddedslowlyandforgaveme,tearscomingtohiseyes.Wehuggedeachothertightly,alltheunhappinessgone.Thecloserelationshipbetweenuswasbackagain.弟弟缓缓点头，原谅了我，眼里泛起了泪水。我们紧紧拥抱在一起，所有的不快都烟消云散了。我们之间亲密的关系又回来了。句10（主题升华句-价值感悟）：AswesattogethereatingbiscuitsandwatchingTobyplay,Irealizedthatfamilyloveisstrongerthananymisunderstanding,andbeingconsiderateofotherscanfixeventhebrokenbonds.当我们坐在一起吃饼干，看着托比玩耍时，我意识到家庭的爱比任何误会都更强大，体谅他人甚至能修复破碎的情感纽带。P1:Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.我意识到是我错了。AwaveofguiltwashedovermewhenIthoughtaboutmybrother’slonelinessafterhiswifepassedaway.IfeltverysorrybecauseIhadrefusedtoletTobycomeindoorsatthegathering.Ibitmylip,asignofmygrowingunease,andIpacedupanddownrestlessly.Ifeltguiltyandworried,realizinghowthoughtlessIhadbeenabouthisfeelingsandToby’sroleashisonlycompanion.MyheartracedwithpanicasIthoughtabouthishealthproblemsandhowlonelyhemustbewithouthiswife.IwonderedifIshouldcallhimfirsttosaysorryorwaitforhimtocontactme.Itookadeepbreathtocalmmyselfdown,tryingtopushawaythebadthoughts.Finally,Idecidedtotakeaction,knowingthatfamilyrelationshipsweretooprecioustoletmystubbornnessstandintheway.Atthesametime,mywifemadesomebiscuitsandIdedcidedtovisitmybrother.P2：Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.MyheartpoundednervouslyasIknockedonthewoodendoor,notsurewhathisreactionwouldbe.Whenheopenedthedoor,hisfaceshowedsurprise.Icouldseetheunhappinessinhiseyesmixedwithalittlehope.Ismilednervouslyathimandheldouttheplateofbiscuits.Iapologizedsincerely,tellinghimhowsorryIwasfornotlettingTobycomeinsideandmakinghimleavethegatheringunhappy.Hestoodtherequietlyandlistenedtomecarefully.Tobyranoverhappilyandwaggedhistailaroundus,asifwelcomingmeandhopingforourreconciliation.Theuncomfortablefeelingbetweenusstartedtofadeaway.Mybrothernoddedslowlyandforgaveme,tearscomingtohiseyes.Wehuggedeachothertightly,alltheunhappinessgone.Thecloserelationshipbetweenuswasbackagain.AswesattogethereatingbiscuitsandwatchingTobyplay,Irealizedthatfamilyloveisstrongerthananymisunderstanding,andbeingconsiderateofotherscanfixeventhebrokenbonds.简单版Paragraph1:Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.句1（衔接句-愧疚觉醒）AwaveofguiltwashedovermewhenIthoughtaboutmybrother'sloneliness.

Ibitmylipandpacedupanddownrestlessly.MyheartracedwithpanicasIrealizedhowthoughtlessIhadbeen.Tobywashisonlycompanionafterlosinghiswife.Itookadeepbreathtocalmmyselfdown.Iknewfamilyrelationshipsweretooprecioustolose.句5（呼应句-准备行动）Finally,Idecidedtovisithim.Mywifesmiledandpackedabasketofbiscuitsshehadbaked.当我想到哥哥的孤独时，一股愧疚感涌上心头。我咬着嘴唇，不安地来回踱步。当我意识到自己是多么轻率时，我的心因恐慌而狂跳。Toby是他失去妻子后唯一的陪伴。我深吸一口气让自己平静下来。我知道家庭关系太珍贵了，不能失去。最后，我决定去看他。我妻子微笑着打包了一篮她烤的饼干。Paragraph2:Withthecookiesmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.句6-7（衔接句-见面反应）MyheartpoundednervouslyasIknocked.Whenheopenedthedoor,hisfaceshowedsurprise.Icouldseeunhappinessmixedwithhopeinhiseyes.Iheldoutthecookiesandapologizedsincerely."句7（道歉场景）I'msorryfornotlettingTobyinside,"Isaid.Helistenedquietly.句8（情绪反应）ThenTobyranover,wagginghistailhappilyaroundus.Theuncomfortablefeelingbetweenusstartedtofade.句9（解决冲突句-和解达成）Mybrothernoddedslowlyandforgaveme,tearsinhiseyes.Wehuggedtightly.句10（主题升华句-价值感悟）AswesateatingcookiesandwatchingTobyplay,Irealizedthatfamilyloveisstrongerthananymisunderstanding.我紧张地敲门时，心在怔怔直跳。当他打开门时，他的脸上露出惊讶。我能看到他眼中的不快中夹杂着希望。我递出饼干，真诚地道歉。“我很抱歉没让Toby进屋，”我说。他静静地听着。然后Toby跑了过来，在我们身边开心地摇着尾巴。我们之间的不适感开始消退。哥哥慢慢点头原谅了我，眼中含着泪水。我们紧紧拥抱。当我们坐着吃饼干、看Toby玩耶时，我意识到家庭的爱比任何误会都更强大。拓展与延伸句型结构：Awaveof+情感名词+washedover+人称代词+when+时间状语从句情感词：guilt（愧疚）/sadness（悲伤）/anxiety（焦虑）/fear（恐惧）/regret（后悔）仿写：当我意识到自己的错误时，一股羞愧感涌上心头。Awaveof__________washedovermewhenIrealizedmymistake.当我看到她失望的眼神时，一股悲伤涌上心头。Awaveof__________washedovermewhenIsawherdisappointedeyes.当我听到坏消息时，一股恐惧感涌上心头。Awaveof__________washedovermewhenIheardthebadnews.sadnesssadnessfear句型结构：Myheart+raced/pounded+with+情感名词+as+原因状语从句动词：raced（狂跳）/pounded（怦怦跳）/sank（下沉）情感词：panic（恐慌）/excitement（兴奋）/nervousness（紧张）/fear（恐惧）仿写：当我走上舞台时，我的心因紧张而狂跳。Myheart__________with__________asIwalkedontothestage.当我看到考试成绩时，我的心因兴奋而狂跳。Myheart__________with__________asIsawmyexamresults.当我听到奇怪的声音时，我的心因恐惧而狂跳。Myheart__________with__________asIheardthestrangenoise.racednervousnesspoundedexcitementpoundedfear类型二：焦虑动作描写句型结构：Ibitmylipand+动作短语+副词动作：pacedupanddown（来回踱步）/wrungmyhands（绞手）/tappedmyfoot（跺脚）副词：restlessly（不安地）/nervously（紧张地）/anxiously（焦虑地）模仿练习：我咬着嘴唇，紧张地绞着双手。Ibitmylipand__________myhands__________.我咬着嘴唇，焦虑地敲打着桌子。Ibitmylipand__________thetable__________.我咬着嘴唇，不安地看着时钟。Ibitmylipand__________attheclock__________.wrungnervouslyanxiouslyrestlesslywatchedtappedPart2:情绪转换句型句型结构：Itookadeepbreath+to+目的calmmyselfdown（让自己平静）/gathermycourage（鼓起勇气）/clearmymind（理清思绪）/composemyself（镇定下来）模仿练习：我深吸一口气来鼓起勇气。Itookadeepbreathto__________my__________.我深吸一口气来理清思绪。Itookadeepbreathto__________my__________.我深吸一口气来控制情绪。Itookadeepbreathto__________my__________.完成句子（填空）1.当我看到她失望的表情时，一股愧疚感涌上心头。•__________ofguilt__________overmewhenIsawherdisappointedface.2.当我意识到自己的错误时，我的心因恐慌而狂跳。•Myheart__________withpanicasI__________mymistake.3.我咬着嘴唇，紧张地来回踱步。•I__________mylipand__________upanddownnervously.4.我深吸一口气让自己平静下来。•I__________adeepbreathto__________myselfdown.5.我知道友谊太珍贵了，不能失去。•Iknew__________wastoo__________tolose.6.我紧张地敲门时，心在怦怦直跳。•Myheart__________nervouslyasI__________.7.我能看到他眼中的愤怒中夹杂着失望。•Icouldseeanger__________with___________________inhiseyes.Awavewashedraced/poundedrealizedbitpacedtookcalmfriendshippreciouspounded/knockedpoundedknockedmixeddisappointment8.我递出礼物，真诚地道歉。•I__________outthegiftand__________sincerely.9."请原谅我，"我低声说。•"Please__________me,"I__________.10.我们之间的紧张感开始消失。•The__________feelingbetweenusstartedto__________.11.她温柔地微笑并接受了我的道歉，脸上带着宽慰。•Shesmiled__________and__________myapology,reliefonherface.12.当我们拥抱时，我意识到宽恕比愤怒更有力量。•Aswe__________,Irealizedthat__________isstrongerthananger.handedapologizedpardonwhisperedtensionfadedgentlyacceptedhuggedforgiving情景微训练情境1：与朋友和解你不小心在聚会上说出了朋友的秘密，导致你们产生了矛盾。现在你决定去道歉。要求：•使用"Awaveofguiltwashedoverme"开头•包含至少一个动作描写句型/包含至少一个对话/以主题升华句结尾AwaveofguiltwashedovermewhenIthoughtaboutrevealingSarah'ssecret.Ibitmylipandpacedupanddownrestlessly.Finally,Itookadeepbreathtocalmmyselfdownandknockedonherdoor.Myheartpoundednervouslyassheopenedit.Icouldseehurtmixedwithhopeinhereyes."I'msosorryforwhatIdid,"Iwhispered,holdingoutherfavoriteflowers.Shelistenedquietly,thennoddedslowly.Aswehugged,Irealizedthattruefriendshipcansurvivemistakesifwe'rebraveenoughtoapologize.当我想到泄露了Sarah的秘密时，一股愧疚感涌上心头。我咬着嘴唇，不安地来回踱步。最后，我深吸一口气让自己平静下来，敲响了她的门。当她开门时，我的心紧张地怦怦直跳。我能看到她眼