话题09 情感与情绪 2025年中考英语话题作文写作大全（含解析）

年中考英语话题作文写作大全话题09情感与情绪话题解读本话题通常来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的经历及感受，常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。这是一个记叙和议论相结合的话题，此类话题写作常常会给出特定的提示信息。写作时，观点要明确，要充分利用这些提示信息。话题词汇cheer欢呼excited激动的laugh笑smile微笑positive/optimistic乐观的mad生气的shame羞耻;羞愧disappointed失望的pity遗憾话题句式1.I'msothankfultoyouforyourkindhelpthatI'llworkharderandtryto…我非常感谢你的帮助,我会更加努力地工作,并努力⋯⋯。(提分点:so⋯that⋯如此⋯⋯以至于⋯⋯)2.Althoughyouwereverystrictwithme,Iunderstoodwhatyou...虽然你对我很严格,但我最终还是懂了你……。(提分点：although引导的让步状语从句)经典范例假如你是李华，初中生活即将结束，你思绪万千。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一封信表达你对父母的由衷感激及今后的点滴回报。要求：1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；2.词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearMom/Dad,Myjuniorschoollifeiscomingtoanend.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourslove,LiHua写作方法指导开头：要点1：表达自己对父母的感激之情。Now,I'dliketoshowmythankstoyoufor_______________________________________________主体：要点2：举例说明父母为我的付出，如照顾我、陪伴我、鼓励我等。SinceIwasborn,youhavebeen_______________________________________________________Everyday,youwerethefirsttogetupand_______________________________________________Onmywaytoandfromschool,you____________________________________________________WhenIfailedanexamandfeltstressed,you_____________________________________________WhenIdidn'tgetalongwithmyfriends,you___________________________________________结尾：要点3：举例说明我对父母的回报，如陪伴、沟通、理解。Now,Ihavegrownup.I'll_________________________________________________________范文：DearMom/Dad,Myjuniorschoollifeiscomingtoanend.Now,I'dliketoshowmythankstoyouforyourdevotiontometheseyears.SinceIwasborn,youhavebeentakinggoodcareofme.Everyday,youwerethefirsttogetupandpreparebreakfastforme.Onmywaytoandfromschool,youwerealwayswithme.WhenIfailedanexamandfeltstressed,youweretheonetoencourageme.WhenIdidn'tgetalongwithmyfriends,youtoldmetolearntobecaring.Now,Ihavegrownup.I'llspendmoretimestayingandcommunicatingwithyou.AndI'lltrymybesttounderstandyouanddowhatIcanforyou.Yourslove,LiHua实战演练（1）（2023·四川凉山·中考真题）在成长的过程中，你一定遇到过让你感到温暖的人。比如对你嘘寒问暖的亲人，带你遨游知识海洋的老师，伴你嬉戏畅玩的伙伴……为了表达对他（她）的感谢，请你以“Thanks,________”为标题，根据下面思维导图提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，向校园广播站投稿。要求：1.语言表达准确，文章连贯、通顺；2.文章应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；4.词数：80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。Thanks,________Everyonemustmeetaspecialpersonwhomakesyoufeelwarminlife,yourparent,yourteacherormaybeyourfriend_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2）（2022·内蒙古·中考真题）正能量偶像宛如指路明灯，可以引导我们成为更好的人。近期，你们学校的英语报刊以“Myguidingstar”为题正在征稿，请你积极投稿。要点：1.Whoisyourguidingstar?2.Whatdidhe/shedo?3.Whathaveyoulearnedfromhim/her?4.Whatareyougoingtodointhefuture?要求：1.文章应包括所有要点并围绕要点适当发挥；2.文章应句式多样、语句流畅、意思连贯；3.词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。注意：1.文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息；2.不许抄袭、套改。MyguidingstarThepeopleweadmirearelikeguidingstarsthatguideustobebetter.Myguidingstaris____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（3）（2024·贵州黔东南·二模）我们都收到过礼物，每个礼物的背后或多或少都有一些故事。那么，你最喜爱的礼物是什么呢？对你来说，它有什么特殊的意义？请以“A/An________Gift”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。要求：1.请将标题补充完整，合理即可；2.文中必须含有所有要点，并适当拓展；3.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（4）（2024·贵州黔东南·二模）近年来，我们的生活里涌现了许多可歌可泣的英雄。你心中的英雄是谁呢？是耀眼的明星，是见义勇为的市民，是恪守职责的公民，还是身边默默无闻的普通人？你校将开展以“TheHeroinMyHeart—________”为题的征文活动，请你写一篇不少于80词的征文投稿。写作要求：1.补全标题；2.征文须包含思维导图中所有信息；3.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（5）（2024·吉林长春·二模）无论我们人在哪里，无论我们去向何方，家乡从来是一个令人魂牵梦绕的地方。某英文网站正在进行关于“Myhometown”的征文活动，请你准备一篇英语短文参加此活动。要点：1.描述与家乡有关的经历或故事；2.谈谈你对于家乡的理解与感悟。要求：1.不少于80词；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（6）（2024·河南鹤壁·一模）若成长是一本著作，那么烦恼便是藏在段落深处的错字；如果成长是一张白纸，那么烦恼便是附在背面的一个瑕疵。请以“HowIworkoutproblems”为题，根据写作要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你是如何解决生活中遇到的烦恼的。1.写作要点：1）你是如何看待生活中遇到的烦恼的？2）你又是用什么方法解决的？3）你的感想是什么？2.写作要求：1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2）词数80左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：（1）Thanks,MomEveryonemustmeetaspecialpersonwhomakesyoufeelwarminlife,yourparent,yourteacherormaybeyourfriend.ThepersonthatIwanttothankmostismymother.Sheis40yearsold.Sheworksinahospital,andsheworksveryhard.Sheistallandthin.Sheisfriendly,butstrictwithme.Shealwaysgivesmethewarmestloveandtakescareofmeallthetime.Sheiswillingtodoeverythingforme.Toexpressmylove,Icanbuypresentsforher,studyhardandhelpherdosomethinguseful.Iwillrememberherloveandbethankfultoher.Iwishthatshecanstayhealthyandfeelhappy.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：要求以“Thanks,________”为标题，结合思维导图进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明想感谢的是谁；第二步，感谢的人的个人信息，想感谢他/她的原因；第三步，介绍如何感谢以及美好的愿望。[亮点词汇]①worksveryhard工作很努力②takescareof照顾③allthetime一直④bethankfulto对……表示感激[高分句型]①ThepersonthatIwanttothankmostismymother.（that引导的定语从句）②Iwishthatshecanstayhealthyandfeelhappy.（that引导的宾语从句）（2）MyguidingstarThepeopleweadmirearelikeguidingstarsthatguideustobebetter.MyguidingstarisDoctorZhongNanshan.HeisoneofthegreatestdoctorsthatIrespect.Hedevotedallofhisenergyandtimetothemedicalresearch.Forexample,duringtheCOVID-19outbreak,hewassobravethatherushedtothefrontlineandcameupwithvaluableadviceoffightingagainstthevirus.

Ihavelearnedhisspirit,hisbraveryandhispatience.Besides,IhavelearnedthatIshouldvaluemytimeandreadmorebookstogetmoreknowledge.Fromnowon,I’mgoingtostudyharderandgotomydreamuniversitytomakemydreamcometrue.OnlyinthiswaycanImakecontributionstoourgreatcountry.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我的引路之星”为题写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时和一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍相关事迹；最后一段描述自己从中学到了什么，以及打算将来如何做。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无标点和语法错误。（3）AValuableGiftI’vereceivedlotsofpresents,butthemostvaluablegiftI’vereceivedisthebookTheOldManandtheSeafrommymother.Itwasmy13thbirthday.Ifailedtopasstheexamsomedaysagoandfeltreallyupsetthosedays.Mymotherwantedtocheermeupandencouragemetobestrong,soshegavethebooktome.Iwassosurprisedandhappytogetit.AfterIfinishedreadingthebook,Ihavelearnedthatwhenwemeetwithdifficulties,weshouldnevergiveup.Fromthenon,Ikeeptryingmybesttostudyhard.IthinkI’llgrowupwithitbecauseitisnotonlyabookbutalsomymother’slove.SoIconsideritthemostvaluablegift.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作；②时态：时态主要为一般过去时；③提示：写作时注意先补全标题，然后根据图示内容展开写作，可适当发挥使行文连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，说明礼物是什么，引出主题；第二步，讲述礼物背后的故事；第三步，表达礼物的意义和自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①cheersb.up让某人振作起来②giveup放弃③tryone’sbest尽某人最大的努力④notonly…butalso…不仅……而且……[高分句型]①AfterIfinishedreadingthebook,Ihavelearnedthatwhenwemeetwithdifficulties,weshouldnevergiveup.（时间状语从句+宾语从句）②IthinkI’llgrowupwithitbecauseitisnotonlyabookbutalsomymother’slove.（宾语从句+原因状语从句）（4）TheHeroinMyHeart—MyMotherRecently,manyheroeslikeZhangGuimeihaveappearedaroundus.Whoistheheroinmyheart?Mymother.Sheisanicedoctorwithlonghair,aprettyfaceandasoftvoice.Nowshehasbecomemyherobecauseshehelpsmealotandsetsagoodexampletome.Asmymother,shealwayslistenstomepatiently,encouragesmeandgivesmehelpfulsuggestionswhenIamintrouble.Asadoctor,sheworkshard,triesherbesttohelppatientsandwinstheirhighpraise.IhopeIwillbeapersonlikeher.Ialsohopeshewillcareforherownhealth.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。[写作步骤]第一步，点名自己心目中的英雄；第二步，具体阐述他/她的职业、外貌以及为什么他/她会成为你心目中的英雄，你在他/她身上学到了什么精神；第三步，最后表达向他/她学习，成为像他/她那样的人[亮点词汇]①inone’sheart在某人心目中②introuble处于麻烦之中③tryone’sbestto尽最大努力做某事[高分句型]①Nowshehasbecomemyherobecauseshehelpsmealotandsetsagoodexampletome.（原因状语从句）②Ialsohopeshewillcareforherownhealth.（宾语从句）（5）

Hometownistheplacewhereapersonbelongs.Chinesepeoplehavespecialfeelingsabouttheirhometown.Nomatterwheretheygo,theywillnotabandonitandalwaysmakesometimetovisit.MyhometownbringsmesomanyhappymemoriesandIwishitsoriginalfaceforever.Twoyearsago,Ilivedinmyhometown.Itisasmallvillage,sopeopletheregotfamiliarwitheachother.Whenwewalkedonthecountryroad,everyonesmiledwhenwesaweachother.Therewasnodistanceforus.Inthedaytime,Ilikedtogoboatinginthesmallriverwithmyfriends,orsometimesIcouldhearthebirdssingingallthetime.Itwasaparadiseforme.

Ithinkweshouldrememberthepast,liveinthepresentanddreamaboutthefuture.Ihopeourhometownwillbecomebetterandbetter.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：本文时态是一般现在时和一般过去时；③提示：注意要描述一段与家乡有关的经历或故事。[写作步骤]第一步，谈谈对家乡的理解与感悟；第二步，描述与家乡有关的经历；第三步，结束语，希望家乡越来越好。[亮点词汇]①Nomatter不管②getfamiliarwith熟悉③allthetime总是[高分句型]①Hometownistheplacewhereapersonbelongs.（定语从句）②Ithinkweshouldrememberthepast,liveinthepresentanddreamaboutthefuture.（宾语从句）（6）HowIworkoutproblemsProblemsandworries