Unit2HealthyLifestyleReadingforWriting课件-高中英语人教版选择性-1

WritingUnit2Writing写作一应用文写作(关于生活方式的书信)

假如你是李华，你因玩手机上瘾影响了学习和生活，但是在参加完HealthyLife夏令营后，你努力摆脱了digitaladdiction，请你给杂志编辑写一封邮件，内容包括：1.过去你的生活方式以及问题所在；

2.你做出改变的方法；3.最后的结果。注意：写作词数应为80个左右。审题谋篇

巧妙对接单元词汇1．____________v.

支配；控制2．____________

立即；马上3.___________________

下定决心4．____________adj. 精力充沛的5．____________

焦虑不安；心力交瘁6．____________

筋疲力尽的；疲惫的7．____________vt. 使恢复精力遣词造句dominatestraight

awaymake

up

one's

minddynamicstressed

outworn

outrefresh巧用单元句式、语法[第一段]表明写信目的并陈述问题1．在此，我想与您分享关于我的生活方式的故事。HereIwouldliketo________________________________________.2．我的学习压力逐渐增大。Mystudystress__________________．share

the

story

about

my

lifestyle

with

yougradually

grew3．有一段时间我经常感到焦虑和疲惫，晚上睡不好觉。(定语从句)Therewasatime_______________________________________________________________.4．我开始玩电脑游戏，并且变得如此着迷以至于它们甚至操控我。(so...that...)Istartedplayingcomputergamesand_______________________________________.when

I

often

felt

stressed

out

and

worn

out

and

couldn't

became

so

mad

that

they

even

sleep

well

at

nightdominated

me[第二段]叙述做出的改变5．我突然意识到，如果我的坏习惯失控，它们就会让我失败。Isuddenlybecameawarethatmybadhabitswouldmakemefail___________________________.6．我下定决心要马上改变自己。I_____________________________________________.if

they

became

out

of

controlmade

up

my

mind

to

change

myself

straight

away7．每当我想玩电脑游戏时，我就选择打篮球。(whenever引导时间状语从句)______________________________________,Ichosetoplaybasketballinstead.8．我早睡早起，每天坚持锻炼一小时来让自己精神焕发。Igotupandwenttobedearlyand________________________________________________________．Whenever

I

wanted

to

play

computer

gamesstuck

to

exercising

for

one

hour

every

day

to

refresh

myself[第三段]描述最后的结果9．毫无疑问，我可以保持活力，专注于我的学习。Thereisnodoubtthat_______________________________________．I

can

keep

dynamic

and

concentrate

on

my

study

靓化表达促提升10．用as引导时间状语从句合并句2和句3________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________As

my

study

stress

gradually

grew,

there

was

a

time

when

I

often

felt

stressed

out

and

worn

out

and

couldn't

sleep

well

at

night.Onepossibleversion：DearEditor，HereIwouldliketosharethestoryaboutmylifestylewithyou.Asmystudystressgraduallygrew,therewasatimewhenIoftenfeltstressedoutandwornoutandcouldn'tsleepwellatnight.Worstofall,Istartedplayingcomputergamesandbecamesomadthattheyevendominatedme.Oneday,Isuddenlybecameawarethatmybadhabitswouldmakemefailiftheybecameoutofcontrol.Therefore,Imadeupmymindtochangemyselfstraightaway.WheneverIwantedtoplaycomputergames,Ichosetoplaybasketballinstead.Besides,Igotupandwenttobedearlyandstucktoexercisingforonehoureverydaytorefreshmyself.Now,thereisnodoubtthatIcankeepdynamicandconcentrateonmystudy.Yourssincerely，LiHua假定你是李华，请你给某报社编辑写一封信，介绍你改变某种不良生活习惯的过程及带来的影响。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearEditor，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，LiHuaDearEditor，Iamwritingtotellyouthechangesofmylifestyle.Inthepast,Ilikedjunkfood,andthereforeIwasoverweight.Mygreatpassionforawell-shapedbodydrovemetochangemylifestyle.Myplanistochangemyimproperdietandexerciseregularly.Workingoutinthegymismyroutinewhileitisamustformetokeepabalanceddiet.Ihaveonlybeencarryingoutmyplanforseveralmonths,butI'mnowstartingtofeelbetter.IfeelconfidentthatIwillreachmygoal.Yourssincerely，LiHua第一段表明写信的目的并陈述问题1.I'dliketowritetotellyousomethingabouthowtokeephealthy.我想写信告诉你关于如何保持健康的一些事情。2.I'mwritingtotellyouhowtoliveahealthylife.我写信想告诉你如何过健康的生活。3.Worsestill,theaddictiontoonlinegamesbroughtmeanegativeeffectphysicallyandmentally.更糟糕的是，沉迷于网络游戏给我的身心带来了负面影响。第二段叙述做出的改变1.Suddenlyawarethatifleftuncontrolled,mybadhabitswouldmakemeaccomplishnothing,Imadeupmymindtochangemyselfstraightaway.突然意识到如果不加以控制，我的坏习惯将使我一事无成，我下定决心马上改变自己。2.Ichosetoworkoutregularly,whichenhancedmyqualityoflife.我选择定期锻炼，这提高了我的生活质量。3.Runningisthebestworkoutforweightlossandit'scheap.跑步是减肥最好的锻炼方式，并且很便宜。第三段描述最后结果或对自己的期望1.ThereisnodoubtthatIammoredynamic,withmymotivationstimulated.毫无疑问，随着我的积极性被激发，我更有活力了。2.Throughthesechanges,notonlyhaveIgainedanawarenessoflivingahealthylife,butIhaveenhancedthequalityofmystudyaswellaslife.通过这些改变，我不仅获得了过健康生活的意识，还提高了我的学习和生活质量。第三段描述最后结果或对自己的期望3.Itisnevertoolatetostartadoptingthesehealthyhabits.IbelieveIwillhaveahealthylife.无论何时开始养成这些健康的习惯都为时不晚。我相信我会过上健康的生活。写作二场景微续写词汇积累[心理描写]

negative,pessimistic,makeupone'smind[人物描写]

surgeon,beard,specialist,consultant,dizzy,dentist,dynamic,stressedout,wornout[动作描写]

abuse,dominate,relyon,facilitate,examine,delete,decideon,shaveoff,disturb，skip,stimulate,enhance,refresh,absorb佳句积累[情感描写]

1.Ifwearenotsuccessfulstraightaway,weoftenbecomepessimisticandgiveup.2.Ioftenfeltsleepyanddizzy,andlackedpassion.3.Afterstartinghighschool,Ifeltstressedoutandalwaysrelaxedbyplayingcomputergames.[动作描写]

OthertimesIjumpedonmyskateboardandrodearoundmyneighbourhood,orjusttookalongwalk.[主旨升华]

1.AstheChinesephilosopherLaoziwrote，“Ajourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithasinglestep.”2.AsGandhisaid,“Bethechangeyouwanttoseeintheworld.”[场景呈现]汤姆对戒烟持消极态度。他依赖香烟多年，放弃吸烟的想法似乎不可能。有一天，他下定决心要戒烟。这个决定并不容易，每当想抽烟时，他都会感到焦虑不安。他制定了一个计划，开始锻炼以刺激他的身体。他还让自己沉浸在阅读和绘画等爱好中。渐渐地，汤姆意识到他可以依靠自己克服这个挑战。最后，他的决心得到了回报，他成功地戒了烟。微写作Tomhadanegativeattitudetowardsquittingsmoking.Hehadreliedo