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广西示范性高中2026届高三上学期9月联合调研测试英语试卷

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段、使之构成一篇完整的短文。

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riserapidly(现在分词然*做结杲扶*i.Thefloodwateqspreadquicklv.^x),sweepingthroughthe

wholevillage,现〃分列演结果权训.Debrispiledupinfrontofeveryhome,andthewater

washedovertheroads,sDreadingmudandsand,£«4*做结.认许,.Thepathsthatwere

oncepassablewerenowcompletelyblocked,andeventheroadtothehospitalwas

completelysubmerged.(爻代背呆1Thelivesofthevillagersweredisrupted,andtherewere

nosaferoadstotravel伏花,为后丈刻4人*世.芸〉.Mostofthevillagersstayedindoors,waiting

fortheraintost。。电在分切组语效仲故动作、hoping*在分例短语供仲故动作,theyvaterwouldgodown.

However,foronefalher,thiscouldnotstophimfromtakingaction.His

six-month-olddaughter,RubJ,hadahighfeverthatwouldn'tgodown,andshehad

beencryingallnight,Rrowin,weakerandweaker,”分*娘语做船乐枕沏.Ihefamilydidn't

haveenoughmedicinetorelieveherpairiit一步口Thefatherwatchedheranxiously,

fiHedwithfearanduncertainty应》分词低主安扑•・HeknewhehadtogetRubytothe

hospitalasquicklyaspossibletogetpropertreatment,buttheroadtothehospital

wascompletelyblockedbytheflood,andtherewerenootherchoicesavailable.交,

“Ruby,Daddy'sgoingtotakeyoutothehospital.Holdon,“hesaidsoftly,

knowing,现今分词赃语做伴K动作)shecouldn7understandhimyet.Herlinyfaceturnedred

fromthefever,andsheweaklyrestedinhisarms.Thefather'sheartachedwith

worry,〈幼后人物心理)feelinghelpless%注分词缴“曾4金人物、Therewasnotimetowaste;Ruby'slife

wasmoreimportantthananythingelse.Thefatherdecidedtowalkthroughthewater

togettothehospital.Thewateroutsidehadrisentohiscalves,andthefloodhad

coveredthestreets,completelysubmerwinethenearbypaths网在分例杲状语,堂造国爱,.

Hecouldonlymoveslowlythroughthewater.Thewalerflowedfast,andthe

mudwasdangerous,witheverystepfuelinglikeafightagainstthewater'sthree,but

thefather'sdeterminationdidn'tweaken.

注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:CarryingRubyonhisback,thefathercarefullymadehiswaythrough

thefloodedstreets.

Paragraph2:Finally,afteralonganddifficultjourney,thefatherreachedthehospital.

广西示范性高中2026届高三上学期9月联合调研测试英语试卷

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段.使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Theheavyraincontinuedforseveraldays,causingtherivernearthevillageto

riserapidly.Thefloodwatersspreadquickly,sweepingthroughthewholevillage.

Debrispiledup(瓦砾堆积)infioulofeveryhome,andllicwalerwaslicduverthe

roads,spreadingmud(泥)andsand.Thepathsthatwereoncepassablewerenow

completelyblocked,andeventheroadtothehospitalwascompletelysubmerged(淹

没).Thelivesofthevillagersweredisrupted(打乱),andtherewerenosaferoadsto

travel.Mostofthevillagersstayedindoors,waitingfortheraintostop,hopingthe

waterwouldgodown.

However,foronefather,thiscouldnotstophimfromtakingaction.His

six-month-olddaughter,Ruby,hadahighfeverthatwouldn'tgodown,andshehad

beencryingallnight,growingweakerandweaker.Thefamilydidn'thaveenough

medicinetorelieveherpain.Thefatherwatchedher

anxiously,filledwithfearanduncertainty.HeknewhehadtogetRubytothehospital

asquicklyaspossibletogetpropertreatment,buttheroadtothehospitalwas

completelyblockedbytheflood,andtherewerenootherchoicesavailable.

“Ruby,Daddy'sgoingtotakeyoutothehospital.Holdon,"hesaidsoftly,

knowingshecouldn'tunderstandhimyet.Hertinyfaceturnedredfromthefever,and

sheweaklyrestedinhisanus.Thefather\heartachedwithworry,feelinghelpless.

Therewasnotimetowaste;Ruby'sliftwasmoreimportantthananythingelse.Tlie

fatherdecidedtowalkthroughthewatertogettothehospital.Thewateroutsidehad

riseniohiscalves(小腿肚),andihefloodhadcoveredihestreets,compleiely

submergingthenearbypaths.

Hecouldonlymoveslowlythroughthewater.ThewaterBowedfast,andthe

mudwasdangerous,witheverystepfeelinglikeafightagainstthewater'sforce,but

thefather'sdeterminationdidn'tweaken.

注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:CarryingRubyonhisback,thefathercarefullymadehiswaythrough

thefloodedstreets.

Paragraph2:Finally,afteralonganddifficultjourney,thefatherreachedthehospital.

1.读后续写类型分析与构思框架

类型分类:遇险救险+家庭亲情救援类・属于“人与自然抗争+亲情奉献”的复合

型读后续写。

构思思路与布局

构思要素具体内容

整体布局第一段:路途艰辛与父爱坚持一第二段:到达医院与救援成功

情感走向焦虑担忧一艰难挣扎一希望出现一成功救援

冲突设置人与自然冲突(洪水)+时间冲突(病情紧急)

主题升华父爱的伟大、生命的价值、人性的光辉

续写框架设计

第一段框架:

环境描写:洪水险境加剧

动作描写:父亲艰难前行

心理描写:对女儿的担忧与自我鼓励

转折设置:遇到新的困难或帮助

第二段框架:

到达描写:医院的场景

救援过程:医生的救治

情感释放:父亲的欣慰

主题升华:爱的力量

承接原文注意事项

必须承接的内容:

父亲背着的姿势("CarryingRubyonhisback")

洪水的危险环境("floodedstreets")

女儿的病情("highfever","growingweaker'1)

父亲的决定("walkthroughthewater")

整体注意事项:

保持时态一致(一般过去时)

延续原文语言风格(简洁有力)

合理控制情节发展节奏

确保人物性格一致性

巧妙设计技巧

细节呼应:使用原文出现的"calf-deepwater"、"mud"等元素

象征手法:用洪水象征困境,用父亲象征希望

对比手法:外在环境恶劣VS内在意志坚定

悬念设置:在危急时刻制造转机

2.故事山模式与文本分析

开端:洪水围村,女儿病重

发展:父亲决定冒险涉水

高潮:路途艰难,危机四伏

下降:看到希望,接近目标

结局:到达医院,得到救治

伏笔与冲突分析

伏笔处:"roadtothehospitalwascompletelysubmerged"

"waterflowedfast,andthemudwasdangerous"

"nootherchoicesavailable"

冲突点:主要冲突:父亲vs洪水自然灾害次要冲突:时间vs女儿病情恶化

内在冲突:恐惧vs责任

隐含线索:父亲的身份背景(可能是普通村民)

村庄的孤立无援状态

药品资源的匮乏

解决方案:

通过父亲的个人勇气和毅力,克服自然障碍,完成救援任务。

3.文本分析表格

分析角度内容要点原文反应句

父亲:坚毅、焦虑、勇敢;

“Hissix-month-olddaughter,Ruby,hadahigh

人物刻画Ruby:脆弱、病重,象征希

fever..."/“Thefather^heartachedwithworry.”

望与牵挂。

父亲:焦忠一决心一艰

"1hefatherwatchedheranxiously,tilledwithfear

情感层次

难一坚持一希望。andunccrtainty.^^

Ruby发烧急需救治;道路被

“Theroadtothehospitalwascompletelyblocked

关键情节点洪水阻隔;父亲决定涉水;

bytheflood...

医院成为希望的方向。

大量环境描写+动作描写+心

“Thewaterflowedfast,andthemudwas

语言特色理渲染,突出紧张氛围与父

dangerous...

爱无私。

flood,blocked,hospital,

“Therewasnotimetowaste;Ruby'slifewasmore

关键词分析determination,fear,weak,

importantthananythingelse.”

holdon

父亲的担忧、不安、害怕

心理描写Ruby失去生命;同时有强烈“Hisheartachedwithworry,feelinghelpless.”

的信念与坚持。

分析角度内容要点原文反应句

背女儿、涉水、挣扎、与急

动作描写“Hecouldonlymoveslowlythroughthewater.”

流对抗、一步步前进。

洪水、泥沙、道路淹没、湍

“Thefloodhadcoveredthestreets,completely

环境描写

急水流,构成外部阻力。submergingthenearbypaths.”

父爱无私、生命至上、人类

隐含主题暗线:Ruby的病象征父亲必须坚持下去的理由。

在灾难中的坚持与勇气。

从无助与担忧一到行动的

“Therewasnotimetowaste...Thefatherdecided

情感转折坚定一到抵达医院的释

towalkthroughthewater.”

然。

从家中一洪水街道一医

“Thewateroutsidehadrisentohiscalves...”—*

空间转换

院。“Finally...thehospital.

从连日大雨一当下的冒险

“Theheavyraincontinuedforseveraldays…”/

时间过渡

一终于抵达一获救。“Finally,afteralonganddifficultjourney..

4.续写衔接点总结

父亲背着Ruby的姿势

洪水淹没街道的环境

女儿持续高烧的状态

父亲坚定不移的决心

通往医院的道路被淹

建议拓展方向:

增加路途中的具体困难细节

描写父亲的心理变化过程

设置小的转机增强故事层次

突出到达医院时的情感释放

3.动作、环境、心理描写

动作描写

Hewadedthroughthechest-deepwater,eachstepabattleagainstthecurrent.

(他在齐胸深的水中艰难前行,每一步都是与急流的抗争。)

WithonearmsecuringRuby,heusedtheothertograbontoaprotrudingfence

forsupport.

(他用一只手臂牢牢护住鲁比,另一只手抓住一根突出的栅栏来支撑身体。)

Asuddensurgeofwateralmostknockedhimoffhisfeet,buthemanagedto

steadyhimself.

(一股突然涌来的水流几乎将他冲倒,但他设法稳住了身形。)

Hetrudgedthroughthethickmud,hislegsfeelinglikelead.

(他在厚厚的泥泞中艰难跋涉,双腿沉重如铅。)

Grittinghisteeth,hepressedon,ignoringthenumbnessinhislimbs.

(他咬紧牙关,无视四肢的麻木,继续前进。)

HeshieldedRuby'sfacefromtherelentlessrainwithhisownbody.

(他用自己的身体为鲁比挡住无情的雨水。)

Hisfeetstumbledoverhiddendebrisbeneaththemurkywater.

(他的脚在浑浊的水下被隐藏的碎片绊了一下。)

Withafinalburstofstrength,hehauledhimselfontothedrystepsofthe

hospital.

(凭着最后一股力气,他把自己拖上了医院干燥的台阶。)

Heburstthroughthehospitaldoors,hisvoicehoarseashecalledforhelp.

(他冲开医院的门,用嘶哑的声音呼救。)

Adoctorgentlytookthelimpchildfromhistremblingarms.

(医生轻轻地从他颤抖的双臂中接过了虚弱无力的孩子。)

心理描写

Awaveofpanicthreatenedtooverwhelmhim,butthethoughtofRubyfueled

hisresolve.

(一阵恐慌几乎要将他淹没,但对鲁比的牵挂点燃了他的决心。)

Hefoughtbackthedespair,whisperingassurancestobothhimselfandthebaby.

(他击退了绝望,低声向孩子也向自己保证一切都会好起来。)

Everysecondfeltlikeaneternity,stretchingbeforehiminanagonizingwait.

(每一秒都像一个永恒,在他面前延长成痛苦的等待。)

Asliverofhopesparkedinhischestashespottedthedistantglowofthehospital.

(当他看到远处医院发出的灯光时,一丝希望在他心中燃起。)

Thefearoflosingherwasacoldknottighteninginhisstomach.

(害怕失去她的恐惧像一个冰冷的结,在他的胃里收紧。)

Hepushedthenaggingvoiceofdoubtaside,focusingsolelyonthepathahead.

(他将那个令人不安的怀疑之声推到一边,只专注于前方的路。)

Aprofoundsenseofhelplessnesswashedoverhimashelookedattheendless

water.

(当他望着无边无际的洪水时,一种深深的无力感席卷了他。)

Hisloveforhisdaughterbecameatangibleforce,pushinghimforward.

(他对女儿的爱化成了一种实实在在的力量,推动他前行。)

Hismindraced,calculatingrisksandsearchingforthesafestroute.

(他的大脑飞速运转,评估着风险,寻找最安全的路线。)

Anoverwhelmingreliefrenderedhimspeechlesswhenheheardthedoctorsay,

“SheTlbefine."

(当听到医生说“她会好起来的”时,一种如释重负的感觉让他说不出话来。)

环境描写

Themurkywater,chokedwithmudandbranches,swirledominouslyaround

him.

(浑浊的水,夹杂着泥浆和树枝,不祥地在他周围打着旋。)

Therelentlessrainstunghisfacelikeathousandicyneedles.

(无情的雨水像无数冰冷的针,刺痛他的脸。)

Theonce-familiarstreethadtransformedintoatreacherousriver.

(曾经熟悉的街道已经变成了一条危险的河流。)

Darknesswasbeginningtofall,addinganotherlayerofperiltotheirjourney.

(夜幕开始降临,给他们的旅程又增添了一层危险。)

Thehowlingwinddrownedoutallothersounds,creatinganeerieisolation.

(呼啸的风淹没了所有其他声音,制造出一种可咱的孤立感。)

Alonestreetlampflickeredweaklyinthedistance,abeaconofhope.

(一盏孤独的路灯在远处微弱地闪烁,像一个希望的灯塔。)

Theairwasthickwiththesmellofdampearthanddecay.

(空气中弥漫着潮湿的泥土和腐烂物的气味。)

Floatingdebrisclatteredagainsteachother,creatingadiscordantsymphonyof

destruction.

(漂浮的碎片相互碰撞,奏响了一曲不和谐的毁灭交响乐。)

Thecoldseepedthroughhisclothes,chillinghimtothebone.

(寒气渗透他的衣服,冷彻骨髓。)

Thesilent,submergedhousesstoodasghostlysentinelsontheirpath.

(沉默的、被淹没的房屋像幽灵哨兵一样立在他们的路途两旁。)

常见单词高级替换与场景总结

场景基础词汇高级替换词(及细微差别)

trudge(沉重疲惫地走:);wade(特指涉水而

walk

艰难行走

difficultly行);plod(缓慢费力地走)

determinati

决定/决心resolve(更坚定的决心);forlilude(在痛苦前的坚毅)

on

apprehension(对未来的忧虑);trepidation(激动的颤

害怕/担心worry/fear

抖的恐惧)

exhausted(精疲力尽);fatigued(身体或精神极度疲

非常累verytired

劳)

rapidly(速度快);promptly(立即、及时地,含”不拖

快quickly

延”之意)

4.语言点深度解析

sweepingthrough:

解析:sweepthrough是一个动词短语,形象地描绘了洪水如扫帚般”席卷”整个村

庄的动作,势不可挡。这种搭配比flooding更具动态感和破坏力。

相关搭配:sweepaway(冲走),sweepover(掠过,席卷)。

piledup:

解析:pileup表示"(东西)堆积起来”,生动地写出了瓦砾等杂物在洪水作用下不

断累积的状态。

相关搭配:workpileup(工作堆积),debtspileup(债务堆积)。

weredisrupted:

解析:disrupt比break或stop更正式、有力,强调正常秩序被"打断、扰乱”,常

用于描述生活、交通、计划等。

相关搭配:disruplIhepeace(破坏和平),disruptameeting(打断会议)。

filledwithfearanduncertainty:

解析:befilledwith是一个经典的表语结构,后接抽象名词,比feel更书面化,

描绘了一种充满内心的、强烈的情绪状态。

相关搭配:befilledwithjoy/confidence(充满喜悦:信心)。

feelinglikeafightagainstthewater'sforce:

解析:feellike+名词是一种非常地道的表达方式,将主观感受比喻成具体的物

或事。这里把“每一步“比作“一场战斗”,极具表现力。

可积累语料与生词短语

1.debris

词意:n.碎片,残骸

词性:名词(不可数)

近义词:rubble,wreckage,fragments,remains

反义词:whole,entirety

例句:

Aftertheearthquake,thestreetswerelitteredwithdebris.(地震后,街道上散落着瓦

砾。)

Heclearedthedebrisfromthedraintoallowthewalertoflow.(他清除了排水沟里

的杂物让水流通。)

2.submerge词意:v.淹没,浸没

词性:动词

近义词:flood,immerse,inundate,engulf

反义词:surface,emerge,uncover

例句:

Therisingtidesubmergedthesmallisland.(涨潮淹没了小岛。)

Shesubmergedherselfinherworktoforgethertroubles.(她沉浸在工作中以忘记

烦恼。)

3.disrupt

词意:v.打断,扰乱,中断

词性:动词

近义词:disturb,interrupt,upset,interferewith

反义词:organize,arrange,maintain,continue

例句:

Theloudnoisedisruptedourconversation.(巨大的噪音打断了我们的谈话。)

Thestrikeseverelydisruptedthecity'stransportationsystem.(罢工严重扰乱了城市

的交通系统。)

4.relieve

词意:v.缓解,减轻;解除

词性:动词

近义词:alleviate,ease,soothe,mitigate

反义词:aggravate,intensify,worsen

例句:

Thismedicinecanhelprelievethepain.(这种药有助于缓解疼痛。)

Hewasrelievedofhisdutyaftertheincident.(那次事件后,他被解除了职务。)

5.determination

词意:n.决心,果断

词性:名词

近义词:resolution,resolve,perseverance,willpower

反义词:indecision,hesitation,weakness

例句:

Herdeterminationtosucceedinspiredeveryonearoundher.(她成功的决心激励了

她身边的每一个人。)

Withgreatdetermination,hefinishedthemarathondespitehisinjury.(凭着巨大的

决心,他带着伤跑完了马拉松。)

5.PossibleVersions(4)

Version1

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floodedstreets.Eachstepsankdeepintothemud民灵士语句),puHingathislegs叱分例短次件陆

动的asiflodraghimdown.Thecoldwaterbitintohisskin1又走立切,yethisarms

tightenedaroundhisdaughter'sfragilebody,whisuerinqpromises,理&分词败语世体施切作>

thatshewouldbesafe.Altimesthecurrentalmostknockedhimoffbalance,andhe

staggeredforward,heartracinxwithfear,nrM,.Ruhvgaveafaintcry,which

piercedthroughthestorm,remindinghimthat现在分为短语值件施动的女upwasnotan

option.Hefixedhiseyesonthedistantlights,pravine,瑰&分”做伴、动作,theybelongedto

thehospital.Withhisstrengthfadingandhopeflickeringlikeacandleinthewin(k“h

复合结构,,hepressedonthroughthedarkness,determinedsottofallbeforeeeachinq

help,it*分M做adj做主“林泽

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Finally,afteralonganddifficultjourney.,thefatherreachedthehospital.

Exhausted、社去分外做的」i■用补注),hecollapsedontothesteps,gaspinsforbreath(收分耿语做松动

awhileholdingRubytightly.Nursesrushedforward,qiiidinbhiminside,八&分词做体闻动作,.

andthewarmthofthebuildingfeltliketheembraceofsafety.Anthedoctorstook

Rubyfromhistremblingaims,tearswelledinhiseyes-tearsofbothfearandrelief.

Hewhisperedasilentprayer,thankingfateforgrantinghimthecouragetofight

theflood理&分词败*做件应动作1.WhenthedoclorassuredhimihalKubvwouldrecoverwith

treatment,thefather'sshouldersshookwithuncontrollablesobs.Atthatmoment,he

realizedthateventhefierceststormcouldnotbreakthebondbetweenafatherand

hischild.

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CanyihHRubyonhisback,thefathercarefull、madehiswaythroughthe

floodedstreets.Thewindhowledinhisears.,*珑sulashingwaterint。hiseyes廿分询

短”件8t动作、buthedarednotslowdown.Thememoryofherweakbreathand

burningforeheaddrovehimforwardlikeaninvisibleforce.Theroadwasfilled

withbrokenbranchesandfloatingdebris,andseveraltimeshealmostslipped.His

armsached,yetheadjustedRubygently,murmuringwordsofcomforb/A分词炫汨取随动作,

althoughshecouldbarelyhear.Everyheartbeatechoedwithurgency,andevery

minutefeltlikealifetime.Justasdespairthreatenediolakeover无灵主环句,,afaintlight

flickeredfarahead—itwasthehopehehadbeenclingingto.

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Finally,afteralonganddifficultthefatherreached〃zehosDital.His

legstrembleduncontrollably,butherefusedtofalluntilRubywassafe.Thesightof

doctorsrushingtowardthemmeltedthewalloffearhehadcarriedalongtheway.

PlacingRubyint。theirhandswasthehardestandyetthemostrelievingmomentof

hislife.Asshewastakeninlotheemergencyroom,thefatherleanedagainstthewall,

drenchedandshakinge谓语动讦做金语朴语?rcpla、in。theperilouswalkinhismindm-分词败语

仅椁战动作,.Momentslater,hearin四见在分仞0沿双椁随动位thatRuby'sfeverwasundercontrol,his

eyesclosedingratitude.Heknewthatthisbattleagainstthefloodhadcarveda

memorythatneithertimenorwatercouldeverwashaway.

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Carry加RRubyonhisback、thefathercarefull、madehiswaythroughthe

floodedstreets.Darknesswrappedthevillage,andtherushingwaterroaredlikea

wildbeast光灵士语句,环地制得,.Hetightenedhisgrip,refusingtosurrendertothefee〕座分回如

w伴!a劫的thatclawedathisheart.Eachstepforwardwasapainfulstruggle,hisbreath

shortandshallow,岫立立称利.人物弓hisbodntremblingundertheweightofexhaustion.慢

立士格,Rubystirredslightly,herburnin口cheekbrushingagainsthiseeckq立士格ua人枷,

ienitineaflameofdeterminationwithinhim丸在分84tA做结聚软沿>.Thoughthestnimraged

on,hepicturedhersmilewhenshewasheallhyagain,andthatvisionbecamehis

anchor.Atlast,throughthecurtainofrain,abuildingslowlytookshape一theirfinal

chanceofsurvival.

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Finally,aftera/o〃jganddifficultioumey,thefatherreachedthehosuitaLThe

dooropened土动衣较幼,鼾.秋加,floodinghimwithliehtandhonem分网短取件随肺m・He

stumbledinside,snarl、collapsin停电在分回假椁陂"小asreliefwashedoverhim.Rubywas

swiftlycarriedtothetreatmentroom、leavinghimstandinibreathlessca分制做结果状注,,

waterdriDDin?011tothefl。。[依立上格).Forthefirsttimethatnight,heallowedhimself

tocry—notfromweaknessbutfromtheoverwhelmingreleaseoftension.Whenthe

doctorinformedhimihatRubvwouldrecoversoon,gratitudesurgedthroughhim

likeatide“无灵士语句>LoekiiiRetthestormoutside现或分的做"K动作、heknewtheworldcould

collapsearoundhim,yetaslongasRubywassafe,hehadalreadywonthefiercest

battleofhislife.

1.地道搭配

holdontight紧紧抓住

presson/pushforward坚持前行

clingtohope紧抓希望

whisperpromises轻声安慰

coll叩sewithrelief因释然而瘫倒

2.情绪描写亮点词汇

heartracing心跳加速

tearswelledinhiseyes热泪盈眶

shouldersshookwithsobs肩膀因抽泣颤抖

breathshortandshallow呼吸急促

fearclawedathisheart恐惧抓挠着心脏

3.动作描写亮点短语

staggerforward踉跄前行

tightenhisgrip紧握

adjustRubygently轻轻调整Ruby

leanagainstthewall靠着墙

nearlycollapse几乎倒下

4.同义替换/升级词汇

坚持:persistin/persevere/carryon/endure

恐惧:panic/dread/terror/anxiety

虚弱:feeble/fragile/faint/powerless

挣扎:struggle/wrestle/battle/fightagainst

希望:aspiration/light/faith/dream

5.例句积累

Hepressedondespitethestorm,clingingtothefaintlightahead.

Fearclawedathisheart,yetdeterminationburnedbrighter.

Shelayfragileandfeeble

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