读后续写：友情回忆个人成长类-情怀杀！雪地足球兄弟帮（讲义）-2026届高三英语二轮复习专项

2026届重庆市巴蜀中学高三1月一模考试（月考卷六）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

,aneighborhoodofmiddleclass

peoplebornandraisedbythetracks，it去分网网“做后去更》做苴主格、peoplewhoneverdreamed

ofleavings.Muchhaschangedsincetheriit或旬％Luxuryapartmentshavereplacedthe

rustedtrains.It*sbarelysnowedthreeinchesthismonth.

Outsidemywindow,anothercoldrainslapsSpoffordAvenueut灵主语句>・Thepark

acrossthestreetisempty,amessofdead-browngrassanddryleaves用仕播林小写“In

mydreams,though,Iseedriftsofsnowthataredeepandblueenoughtoburythe

nioo〃（有嬴小秋）.Thesearedreamsofboyhood,ofthegangofneighborhoodboyswho

definedit.Backthen,acouplefeetofsnowmeantnoschool,andweplayedfootball

everyday.

SnowBowlf],asIrememberthem,werewild,violent）events,acrossbetween

sportandwarfare.Withouthelmetsorpads,weoccasionallyknockedeachother

unconscious.Wcbrokewristsandbitankles.

Onsnowdays,wegatheredonthebigfieldbehindourhighschool,wherewe'd

pickteams,fourorfiveaside.Thecaptainswerealwaysthesame.MattMoorewasa

Captainbecausehewasfasterandstrongerthanthrrestofusandactuallyhad

experienceplayingorganizedfootball.JimmyWhitewastheotherbecausehebrought

thefoolball,andhebelievedsupplyingtheequipmentsomehowgavehimtheright.

Thegameswereuntimedandtherewerehardlyanyrules.Weplayeduntilthe

snowmeltedunderourfeet,oruntilsomeoneseriouslyhurt.ThebestSnow

Bowlsoccurrcqwhensnowwasstillfalling,coveringourtracksandsilencingthe

worldaroundusm々分认效话做定H>.Intheevenings,we'dplayunderthefieldlights,

feelinglikeprosm分询短小件收动饰.

jadeskncioiwtft.sI'mtheonlyformerSnowBowlerwhostillresidesin

Spokane.Theoneswhomovedayvayliketoaskmeforupdatesonhome,asifour

cilyisanelderlyrelativedyingfromcancer,观々分认》语侬停院动作）,andI'mthelonecaregiver.

Ialwayssteer（弓।导）ourconversationsbacktotheweather,especiallythestartling

lackofsnowthiswinter

注意：1.续写词数应为15（）左右2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:Lastweekend,someonefloatedtheideaofa20-yearhighschool

reunion.

Paragraph2:Wehurriedoutside,andsureenough,snowwascomingdowninthick

sheets.

2026届重庆市巴蜀中学高三1月一模考试（月考卷六）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

ThiswasWestCentralintheearly2000s,aneighborhoodofmiddle-classpeople

bornandraisedbythetracks,peoplewhoneverdreamedofleaving.Muchhas

changedsincethen.Luxuryapartmentshavereplacedtherustedtrains.It'sbarely

snowedthreeinchesthismonlh.Outsidemywindow,anothercoldrainslapsSpofford

Avenue.Theparkacrossthestreetisempty,amessofdead-browngrassanddry

leaves.Inmydreams,though,Iseedriftsofsnowthataredeepandblueenoughto

burythemoon.Thesearedreamsofboyhood,ofthegangofneighborhoodboyswho

definedit.Backthen,acouplefeelofsnowmeantnoschool,andweplayedfootball

everyday.SnowBowls,asIrememberthem,werewild,violentevents,across

betweensportandwarfare.Withouthelmetsorpads,weoccasionallyknockedeach

otherunconscious.Webrokewristsandbitankles.

Onsnowdays,wegatheredonthebigfieldbehindourhighschool,wherewe'd

pickteams,fourorfiveaside.Thecaptainswerealwaysthesame.MattMoorewasa

Captainbecausehewasfasterandstrongerthantherestofusandactuallyhad

experienceplayingorganizedfootball.JimmyWhitewastheotherbecausehebrought

thefootball,andhebelievedsupplyingtheequipmentsomehowgavehimtheright.

Thegameswereuntimedandtherewerehardlyanyrules.Weplayeduntilthe

snowmeltedunderourfeet,oruntilsomeonegotseriouslyhurt.ThebestSnow

Bowlsoccurredwhensnowwasstillfalling,coveringourtracksandsilencingthe

worldaroundus.Intheevenings,we'dplayunderthefieldlights,feelinglikepros.

Twodecadeslater,I'mtheonlyformerSnowBowlerwhostillresidesinSpokane.

Theoneswhomovedawayliketoaskmeforupdatesonhome,asifourcityisan

elderlyrelativedyingfromcancer,andI'mthelonecaregiver.Ialwayssteer（引导）

ourconversationsbacktotheweather,especiallythestartlinglackofsnowthis

winter.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:Lastweekend,someonefloatedtheideaofa20-yearhighschool

reunion.

Paragraph2:Wehurriedoutside,andsureenough,snowwascomingdowninthick

sheets.

一、读后续写分类与分析

1续写类型判定

分类维度判定结果说明

以第一人称回忆童年与当下对

题材类型友情回忆/个人成长;团队合作类

比

冲突类型情感冲突（怀旧VS现实变化）外在冲突弱，内在情感为主

情节走向情感回环式（首尾照应）"雪'’作为核心意象前后呼应

续写重点情绪升华+象征落点不追求大事件，而是情感收束

2续写构思总思路

步骤操作要点

第一步：锁定核心意象Snow（雪）=童年/纯真/连接过去的纽带

第二步：明确情感主线怀旧一失落一短暂重逢一温暖与释然

第三步：判断事件大小小事件，大情感（切忌设计复杂剧情）

第四步：段落分工P1：重聚提议一回忆一情绪波动；P2:下雪一象征完成

3续写布局建议

段落功能定位内容建议

Paragraph1情感铺垫段重聚提议一联系旧友一＞怀旧+现实对比

Paragraph2情感高潮+落点突然下雪一集体反应-象征性收束

4续写承接原文的关键点

注意点具体要求

人称必须第一人称I

注意点具体要求

时态回忆：过去时；现实：一般现在/过去

不得新增核心人物（只用SnowBowlboys及原文中的MattMoore,

人物

JimmyWhite）

风格抒情+写实，避免煽情

雪的功能象征而非天气描写本身

二、故事山

故事阶段原文/续写对应内容

Exposition开端Spokane变化,现实的冷雨

RisingAction发展回忆SnowBowls的狂野童年

Climax高潮续写P2:突然下雪（情感高潮）

FallingAction回落对雪的反应与沉默

Resolution结局接纳变化，但珍藏记忆

典型“低情节、高情感”故事山

三、原文分析

1.原文中可直接承接的“伏笔句”

原文句子伏笔功能

“Muchhaschangedsincethen.^^现实与过去对比

barelysnowedthreeinchesthismonth.”为续写“下雪”埋钩

“Inmydreams,though,Iseedriftsofsnow...w梦想一＞现实实现

“Ialwayssteerourconversationsbacktotheweather/5天气二情感出口

2核心冲突与解决方式

项目内容

项目内容

表层冲突城市变化/朋友离散

深层冲突时间流逝VS童年记忆

隐含线索对“雪”的执念

解决方案真实的雪降临，完成象征闭环

四、细节内容分析

分析角度内容原文反应句

人物刻画怀旧、内省、敏感的“我”“Inmydreams,though,Isee...”

情感层次怀念一失落—>期待“Thesearedreamsofboyhood...”

SnowBowls—>城市变化

关键情节点“Twodecadeslater...M

一下雪

“deepandblueenoughtoburythe

语言特色长句、比喻、意象化描写

moon”

snow/drcams/boys/

关键词分析全文反复出现

weather

心理描写对过去的执念与眷恋“Ialwayssteerourconversations...

动作描写打雪仗、聚集、比赛“weplayedfootballeveryday”

环境描写冷雨、空公园、灯光球场“anothercoldrainslaps...”

隐含主题成长、时间、失去与保留整体回忆结构

情感转折从现实冷清转向记忆温暖梦境与现实对照

空间转换窗外T球场―城市场景不断切换

童年一二十年后一当

时间过渡“Twodecadeslater...

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五、续写内容设计“模板式建议”

Paragraph1可写要点

reunion的提出—»勾起旧回忆

联系旧友（不具体描写新人物）

怀疑：“即使重聚，SnowBowls还能回来吗？”

Paragraph2可写要点

雪突然降临（呼应全文）

集体反应：惊讶、沉默、笑

象征升华：童年虽远，但从未消失

教师总结金句

Thisisnotastoryaboutsnow.

Itisastoryabouttime,memory,andthethingsthatbrieflyreturn

toreminduswhoweoncewere.

六、动作/心理/环境描写

动作描写

Hepausedforamoment,fingershoveringoverthephonescreen.

他停顿了一下，手指悬在手机屏幕上方。

Ileanedbackinmychair,staringoutoftherain-streakedwindow.

我靠在椅子上，望着被雨水打湿的窗外。

Aslowsmilespreadacrossmyfaceasthememoriesreturned.

当记忆涌上心头时，我的脸上慢慢浮现出笑容。

Iscrolledthrougholdnames,somefamiliar,somealmostforgotten.

我滑动着那些熟悉又几乎被遗忘的名字。

Westoodtheresilently,watchingthefirstflakestouchtheground.

我们静静她站着，看着第一片雪花落地。

Someonelaughedsoftly,breakingthelongsilence.

有人轻声笑了出来，打破了长久的沉默。

Ipulledmycoattighterasthecoldairbrushedpastme.

冷风掠过，我把外套裹得更紧。

Headstiltedupward,asifwewereboysagain.

我们仰起头，仿佛又回到了少年时代。

Isteppedoutsidewithoutthinking,drawnbysomethingfamiliar.

我几乎没多想就走了出去，被一种熟悉的感觉吸引着。

Weexchangedglances,sayingmorewithoutwordsthanwiththem.

我们彼此对视，无声却胜过千言万语。

心理描写

Theideastirredsomethingdeepinsideme.

这个想法在我内心深处激起了波澜。

Awaveofnostalgiawashedoverme.

一阵怀旧的情绪涌上心头。

Partofmelongedtogoback,whileanotherparthesitated.

我的一部分渴望回到过去，另一部分却犹豫不前。

Iwonderedwhethertimehadchangedusmorethanthecityitself.

我不禁怀疑，时间是否比这座城市改变了我们更多。

Thepastsuddenlyfeltcloserthanithadinyears.

过去突然变得比这些年任何时候都更近。

Foramoment,theyearsbetweenthenandnowseemedtodisappear.

有那么一瞬间，过去与现在之间的岁月仿佛消失了。

Ifeltbothwarmthandsadnessalthesametime.

温暖与伤感同时涌上心头。

Thesilencecarriedmoremeaningthanwordsevercould.

那种沉默比任何语言都更有力量。

Irealizedsomememoriesnevertrulyfade.

我意识到，有些记忆从未真正消失。

Itwasn'taboutthereunionitself,butwhatitrepresented.

重要的不是重聚本身，而是它所象征的意义。

环境描写

Thecoldrainhadfinallygivenwaytofallingsnow.

冷雨终于让位给了飘落的雪花。

Thestreetlightsglowedsoftlythroughthethickeningsnow.

路灯在渐密的雪幕中散发出柔和的光。

Thecityseemedquieter,asifholdingitsbreath.

城市仿佛屏住了呼吸，变得格外安静。

Snowflakesdrifteddown,erasingthelinesofthepast.

雪花缓缓落下，抹去了过去的痕迹。

Theemptyparkslowlyturnedwhitebeforeoureyes.

空荡的公园在我们眼前渐渐变白。

Thefamiliarstreetslookeddifferentunderablanketofsnow.

熟悉的街道在雪的覆盖下变得陌生。

Theairfeltsharp,clean,andstrangelycomforting.

空气清冽而干净，带着一种奇异的安慰感。

Footstepssoftenedasthesnowcoveredtheground.

积雪让脚步声变得轻柔。

Theworldseemedsmaller,closer,andmorepersonal.

世界仿佛变小了，也更亲近了。

Forthefirsttimeinyears,winterfeltrealagain.

多年来第一次，冬天重新变得真实起来。

词汇的高级替换

①“想/记起”

remember—recall/recollect/bringback

thinkof—*reflecton

memory—►reminiscence

②“改变”

change一transform/alter/reshape

different—>unrecognizable/unfamiliar

③“情感”

sad—>bittersweet/heavy-hearted

happy一content/quietlyjoyful

surprised一takenaback

④“看/感觉”

see—»catchsightof/notice

feel一sense/experience

地道搭配

awaveof+情绪名词

awaveofnostalgia/relief/sadness

抽象情绪具象化，高分标志

givewayto+新状态

raingavewaytosnow

常用于环境或情节转折

foramoment/forthefirsttimeinyears

时间压缩，制造情绪张力

asif+过去状态

asifwewereboysagain

怀旧类续写必杀结构

not...but...

notaboutthereunion,butwhatitrepresented

主题升华句型

生词与短语

1nostalgia

词性：n.

词义：怀旧，思乡

近义词:longing,sentimentality

反义词：indifference

例句：Asenseofnostalgiafilledtheroom.

Thephotostirreddeepnostalgiainhim.

2linger

词性：V.

词义：逗留；挥之不去

近义词：remain,stay

反义词：fade,vanish

例句:Thememorylingeredlongafterthecallended.

Asmilelingeredonherface.

3drift

词性：v.

词义：缓缓移动/飘落

近义词:float,glide

反义词:rush

例句:Snowflakesdriftedthroughtheair.

Histhoughtsdriftedbacktochildhood.

4reunite

词性：v.

词义：重聚

近义词：gatheragain

反义词：separate

例句:Oldfriendsreunitedaftermanyyears.

Theideawastoreunitethegroup.

5s•vJmbolize

词性：V.

词义：象征

近义词：represent,standfor

反义词：conceal

例句:Thesnowsymbolizedareturntothepast.

Theeventsymbolizedchange.

七、PossibleVersions(4)

Version1

Paragraph1

Lastweekend,someonefloatedtheideaofahiMischoolreunion.

Thesuggestionspreadquickly,Dullingusoutofourseparatelivesandbackinto

asharedpast以在分诃贱语*件帐用函.Messagespiledup,halfjokesandhalfdisbelief,until

Diansbegan〔olakeshape.Whenwefinallygathered.timeseemedtosoftenitsgrip(jt

炎生语Familiarfaceslookedolder,yetstrangelyunchanged.Mattstillcarried

himselfwiththequietconfidenceofacaptain),andJimm。,truetoform,talkedmore

thananyoneelse.Welaughedaboutjobs,families,andachesthathadreplaced

bruises.Someonementionedtheweather,and1repeatedmyusualcomplaintabout

Spokanewinterslosingtheiredge.Outside,theskyhunglowandgray(无又主语切,asif

listening.Weweremid-conversationwhentheroomsuddenlywentquiet.

Someonepointedtowardthewindow,voicerisingwithsurpriseH立士段-snowwas

fallingatlast.

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I场hi“riedoutside,andsureenough、wascomi伙inthicksheets.

Withoutaword,weheadedtowardtheoldfieldbehindourhighschool,moving©

分例做件陂动作slowerthanweoncehadbutsmilingallthesame.Jimmybroughtouta

football|wstilldidn'tknowfromwhere,andMattnaturallytookcharge,keeping

thingssimpleiiw分许版诏被外改动作以Notackling,norushing-justpassing,laughing,and

catchingourbreath.Forashortwhile,theyearsloosenedtheirhold无灵士语句，.

Eventually,thecoldcreptin,remindingusofourlimits“电在分切口沙做件、此的Wedustedoff

thesnowandwentourseparateways.Laterthatnight,backhome,Istoodbymy

windowwatchingthesnowfallsettle.Somewhereoutthere,Iimaginednewboys

choosingteams.Thesnowwouldmelt,butthememorystayed,warmandquietly

complete.

Version2

Paragraph1

Lastweekend,someonefloatedtheideaofahi父hschoolreunion.

Theideafeltunrealatfirst,likeamessagemeantforsomeoneelse，过5分劭做后工更2。Yet

repliescamequickly倒架filledwithexcitementandhesitationinequalmeasuren

去分词做走工农珞i.Whenwemet,theyearsbetweenusshrankinunexpectedways.We

noticedthechanges-slowersteps,softerlaughter-butalsothefamiliarrhythms

beneaththem.Mattstilllistenedmorethanhespoke.Jimmystillclaimed

responsibilityforanythinginvolvingafootball.Storiescircledtheroom无灵主语和,

touchingbrieflyonthe分H筑语做石工定询beforedriftingbacktothepresent.I

jokedabouthowwintersusedtobecolder,louder,better.Theskyoutsidedarkened,

therainthinnin任intoscmethinHquietera*Jii"rqsemenneteasedmefor

alwayslalkingaboul,ashoutcutthroughtheroomi又主语句）.Weturnedtogether.

Snowwasfalling.

Paragraph2

1%hi"edoutside、andsureenough、wascomingthicksheets.

Itfeltnaturaltowalktowardthefieldweallremembered,evenifwenolongerran.

TheSnowBowlgameweplayednowwascarefulandslow-shortpasses,easy

catches,plentyofpauses.Nooneneededrulesexplained,过去分”贱语做后工定语）.Wewere

theretofeelit,nottoproveanything.Afterawhile,thecoldsettledintoourbones,

andwelaughedalhowquicklyitchasedusayvay.Idrovehomealone,snow

brushingthewindshield8立i■松.Parkin】outsidemyhouse观在分可败誓做件电动作、Isatfora

moment,lettingthequietsiekin,u分叫短诩仅件随动作i.Thesnowdidn'tjustbringback

ouryouth,mymemoryofboyhood;itremindedmeofourfriendship,feeling

youngagain,evenifonlyforamoment.

Version3

Paragraph1

Lastweekend,someonefloatedtheideaofa20・yearhiMischoolreunion.At

first,itsoundedunreallikeajokethathadarrivedtwentyyearstoolate.Still,the

groupchatgrewactive,filledwithfamiliarnamesandunexpectedenthusiasm及*分

句如工文语，.Whenwefinallymet,theyearsbetweenusseemedtoshrinkwithevery

sharedstory.Wetalkedaboutworkandfamilies,abouthowthecityhad

changed,andabouthowstrangeitfelttobeback.Someonementionedhow

wintersusedtofeellonger,colder,moreexciting.Ilaughedandsaid|Spokanehardly

sawrealsnowanymore.Thewordshadbarelyleftmymouth,无足土语如whenavoice

cutthrouehtheroom,surprisedandalmostchildlike；回做朴讼"announcin四犯在分诩t汨K件

故劫的thatsnowhadbeguntofalloutside.

Paragraph2

Wehurriedoutside,andsureenough,snowwascomingdowninthicksheets.

Thesightalonefeltlikeagift.Beforeanyonecouldthinkbellerofit,weheaded

towardthefamiliarfieldfollowingourCaptainMat],wherecountlessafternoons

hadoncedisappeared.WctossedthefootballJimmyhadbroughtbackandforth,

movingcarefully,awareofstiffjointsandtired怙啰刈做主注林安