专题15 遇险之被动物攻击（读后续写话题之人与自然 ）（试卷）

专题15遭遇动物攻击（人与自然）【考情分析】年份卷别主题话题2024九省联考适应性试题人与自然之人与动物海豚玛雅的秘密2023浙江1月卷人与自然之人与动物我与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅2017浙江卷人与自然之人与动物野外遇狼【写作指导】读后续写中涉及常见话题“野外遇险”中大多是遭遇如狗熊、狼等猛兽。（如2017年浙江卷“野外遇到狼的袭击”）相关词块及句式如下：词汇积累______________n.&v.咆哮______________n.&v.喘息，喘气______________n.&v.哀鸣______________v.（尤指动物)轻跳着奔跑______________n.短促的尖叫声；v.尖叫；______________猛扑______________n.&v.嚎叫______________撕开______________n.&v.呜咽______________撕裂______________n.&v.摇摆______________逼近______________n.爪子；v.撕扯，抓______________大踏步______________v嗅；n.吸气，一股气味______________追赶上______________北极熊______________棕熊______________灰熊______________黑熊【素材宝库】金句积累Withnothinginthehand,theydidn'tdaretofightagainstthewolf.他们手里什么也没有，不敢与狼搏斗。Macthenjumpedoffthebicycleandwasreadytofightagainstthewolf.然后，麦克跳下了自行车，准备与狼搏斗。Inthemeanwhile,thewolfmightfeelthepeople'sthreatsaround,soitbegantostepbackslowly.与此同时，狼可能会感觉到周围人们的威胁，所以它开始慢慢地后退。ThenitlungedatthebackofMac’sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.然后它冲向麦克的自行车后面，撕开了他的帐篷袋.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthebearsprayatthewolf.他单手紧握自行车把手，朝狼喷防熊喷雾剂。Thewolfwasbearingdown,justadozenyardsawaynow.狼正向前下来，现在就在十几码之外.Abitlatertheyspottedawolflopingwithimmensestridesalongsideamanonabike.不久之后，他们发现一匹狼在骑车人的旁边大步疾跑。BeckylookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimalranoff.Becky从后窗望去，看见那匹狼站在Mac的自行车旁边观察，好像这是它的猎物似的。不久，这野兽跑掉了。Thenightwasdark,thesnowblewcontinually,andthedarkfir-treesroaredallaroundus.夜很黑，雪不停地刮，黑暗的冷杉树在我们周围呼啸。Hejustgrowledandwentbacktotryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws.它只是咆哮着，又试图用它那巨大的爪子撕掉栅栏。Heclawed,bit,andshovedthewiremesh.Hestoodonhishindlegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.他抓，咬，推铁丝网。他用后腿站起来，推着木栅栏的柱子。Atthethesightofahugetimberwolf,Ifrozeinmytracks.一看到一只巨大的木狼，我就僵住了脚步。Jim’smusclestwitched.Allhewantedwastogetawayfromhere.吉姆的肌肉抽搐。他只想离开这里。Therewasadeadsilenceexceptforthesoundofherheavybreathingandsniffing.除了她沉重的呼吸声和嗅探声之外，一片一片寂静。Myheartinmymouth,Isatdowneightfeetfromher.我的心提到了嗓子眼里，我坐在离她八英尺远的地方。Hecouldhearnothingbutthesoundofhisheartsthrobbingviolentlyinhischest.他什么也听不见，只有他的心在他的胸口剧烈地跳动着的声音。Terrified,shelookeddownattheholeswhichwereasdeepasgraves.她吓坏了，低头看着那些像坟墓一样深的洞。Hisheartbeatsoviolentlythathefeltnearlysuffocated.他的心跳如此剧烈，几乎窒息了。Sofrightenedwashethathewasfrozenonthespot.他非常害怕，当场就呆住了。Ashiveroffrightranthroughhimwhenthewolfstaredathiminsilence.当狼默默地盯着他时，他吓了一阵寒颤。万能写作模板Step1通读语篇，精准理解1．语篇类型：记叙文2．关键信息:根据记叙文六要素who,when,where,what,why,how,把握故事梗概.Step2把握全局，梳理故事情节Step3推动情节，寻找线索，展开续写1．发现问题2．情节发展设置矛盾与冲突合理的解决办法3．主旨升华Step4激活表达，精品输出语言润色运用丰富高级的词汇多变句式结构9r2．结构衔接3．高分范文赏读【高考真题】1.（2017年浙江卷读后续写）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(骑行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that'sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn’tadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac’sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofhearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac'srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac'sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase（追赶）。Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoshowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthat

oncehehitthehill,he’dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf’steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.Atthismoment,PaulandBeekyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn’tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【名校模拟题提升练】1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AsTheJungleBooksongBearNecessitiesgoes,“forgetaboutyourworriesandyourconflict”canbealittlebitdifficultwhenyoufindyourselffacetofacewitharealbear.BearsarecommonintheNorthernHemisphere.Ashumanhabitatsstretchtowardthewilderness,moreandmoreanimalscrosstheirpathswiththoseofhumans.Thiscanleadtodangerousencountersespeciallywhenprecautionsarenotinplace.Inthesesituations,keepingyourdistanceisstillthebestadvice.AccordingtotheNationalParkService,oneshouldalsoremaincalmasbears,moreoftenthannot,arenotreallywillingtoattackyou.Onceinastandoff(对峙),avoidmakingsuddenmovesorloudnoisesasthesecantriggeraggression.7-year-oldHuxleydidexactlywhathewastoldwhenheencounteredamassivebear.ItwasaSunnymorning.Huxleywaswanderingonhiswayhomewhenabighulking(笨重的)figureemergesfrombehindhim.Ahurriedglancebackward,heknewitwasablackbear.Thebearapproachedcautiouslyatfirst,probablysizingupthefigureinfrontofhim.Asecondlater,perhapsjudgingthatHuxleywasnomatchforit,thebearburstintoafullsprint(冲刺)andranitswaytowardtheboy.Atfirst,Huxleywasreallyfrightened.However,heknewitwasimpossibletorunorfightwiththebigbeast.Inthemomentofcrisis,herememberedhismotherremindshimregularlyaboutthesepossibleencounters.ShetellshimthatifHuxleyfindshimselffacetofacewithabearandtherearenoadultsaround,heshouldremaincalm.Huxleycalmeddownatthinkingofthis.Hestaredatthebeardownwithoutanymovement.Thismighthavebeenthereasonwhytheyoungbearstoppeddeadinitstracks.Theyfacedeachothermotionless,andtherewasonlyafootdistancebetweenthem.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Fromaroundthecorner,aneighborhurriedlywalkedtothescene.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theneighborcontinuedtopressurethebearwhiletheanimaltrieditsbesttofindanescaperoute.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenEvanwas13,hewantedtohaveadog.HismomOctaviarefusedsinceraisingadogwouldneedlotsofattentionandcare.TheboyoncejoinedtheForestExplorationclubofhisschoolwhereOctaviataught.Andthemotherwasinchargeoftheclub.Onemorning,guidedbyOctavia,Evanandhisschoolmateswenthikinginaforest.Duringthehike,somepurpleflowerscaughtEvan’seye.Evanthoughtthosebeautifulflowerscouldsurelyimpresshismother.Sohewalkedtotheriversidesecretlytopickthoseflowers.Unfortunately,Evangotseparatedfromthegroupandgotlost.Heanxiouslykeptwalking,hopinghecouldcatchupwiththegroup.Suddenly,adogappeared.Atfirst,Evanthoughtitmightbeawolf,sohetensedandstoodtherestill.Whenthedoggotcloser,hesawitstailwagging(摇摆)gently.“Oh,buddy.Youscaredme,”hesaid,pettingthedog.“Youmustbeastray(走失的)dog,huh?”Thedoglookedathimwiththemostsincereexpression.Evanwantedtofindhiswayhome,notonlyforhimselfbutalsofortheanimal.Therefore,hewalkedagain.ThemomentOctaviarealizedEvanwasgone,sheandothersbeganlookingforEvandesperately,butinvain.Itwasgettingdarkerandcolder.Evandiscoveredacave.Hewentinsideandmadeafiretokeepwarm.Heknewhismomandotherschoolmatesmusthavebeensearchingtheforestforhim.“Buddy,let’swaithereandseeifwecanhearmygroupcalling,”Evantoldthedog.Andtheysatneareachother.Beforelong,Evanfellasleep.Atsomepoint,heheardthesoundofanimalgrowling(低声吼叫)andnoticedthedogattheentranceoftheirshelter.ThedogwasgrowlingatsomethingthatEvancouldn’tseewell.Buttherewasanotheranimalgrowlingback.Evanwipedhiseyesandtriedtoseewhatmadethedogsoalertandangry.Hethensawabigfox,andsaidtohimself,“Thankgoodness!I’mnotalone!”Buthewasstillfrightened.Thefoxmovedforward,wantingtoattackEvan.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Withoutsteppingback,thebravedogcontinuedbarking,readytoattackthefox.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“It’smymom!Let’sgo!”EvanexcitedlytoldthedogandrantoOctavia.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasakidinPennsylvania,myfamilyrehabilitated(康复治疗)wildanimals.Igrewupwithraccoons(浣熊)andafoxrunningaroundthehouse.WewouldgotravellingtoBermudaandIwouldwatchthewhalesofftheshore.Ifellinlovewiththemandwantedtoknowmoreaboutwhattheygotuptounderwater.NowI’vebeenstudyingwhalesformorethan30yearsandamthepresidentoftheCenterforCetaceanResearchandConservation.In2017,IwasonaboataroundRarotongaintheCookIslands,workingonafilmaboutwhaleconservation.Thecrewwantedtogetmorefootage(镜头)ofmeinthewaterwiththehumpbackwhales—Ioftenslipinquietlytorecordtheirbehaviourforresearch.Seeingacoupleofhumpbacksinthedistance,IslidofftheboatwearingasnorkelmaskandaGoPro,andswamtowardsthem.AsIwasapproaching,oneofthemalehumpbackscamerightuptome,nuzzling(用鼻爱抚)mewithhisheadandpushingmethroughthewater.Ifeltarushofpleasuremixedwithfear.Itriedtokeepcalm,nevertakingmyeyesoffhim.Thenthewhaleswamunderneathmeandliftedmeoutofthewateronhisflipper(鳍).Isignalledtotheboat,then—swoosh—Iwaspushedbackunder.Aftersevenandahalfminutesofbeingpushedaroundbythehumpback,IsawwhatIthoughtwasasecond,smallerwhale.ButthenInoticedthetail—whalesmovetheirsupanddown,andthisonewasmovingsidetoside.Irealizedwithhorrorthatitbelongedtoahuge,18fttigershark!Tigersharksareknowntoattackpeople,sometimesfatally(致命的).注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thesharkhadarcheditsbodyinattackmode.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ItoldthewhalethatIlovedhimandthankedhimashewastoswimoff.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Gradyandhisfamilygocampingeverysummer.Asitwasbecominghotter,herecamethecampingtime.Havingplannedthecamplong,thefamilyfinallydecidedthedestination—theGreatNationalForest.Withfood,necessityandcookersloadedontothecar,thefamilysqueezed(挤进)intothecar.Thecardoorclosed,heatwasshutoutside.Inthecar,Jared,Grady’syoungerbrotherwasplayingwithatoy,makinggreatnoise.Grady’smothertalkedexcitedlywithhisfather.Assoonashesatinthecar,Gradyputontheearphonesandturnedonthemusic.Heneitherwantedtojoinhisbrothernorjoinedanytalk.Afterwhatseemedtobehours,thecarstoppedwheretheyheaded.Gradythrewdownhisbackpackandslammed(砰地关上)thecardoor.“Thiswillbealengthyweek,”hesaidunhappilytonooneinparticular.Helookedaroundthecampground.Hundredsoftallandgreenfirtreescoveredthemountainsidelikeagreencarpet.Thesunwouldbesettingsoon.Gradythoughtmaybetheheatwouldn’tbeunbearable.Butactuallynowinthemountain,thehotJulylefthimextremelyuncomfortable.Gradyhatedcamping,butitwassomethinghisfamilyinsistedoneverysummer.Hisfatherlikedcookingoveranopenair,tellingstoriesabouthowtosurvivethingslikebearattacksandbitesofbees.HismotherandJaredlikedtohikeandtakepicturesofanimals.Jaredhadacollectionofinsectpicturesthathehadputonthewallsinhishalfoftheirroom.GradythoughttheywerejustscaryandthatJaredwasastrangekid.Theysetupcamp—twotents,oneforhisparentsandoneforhimselfandJared.Whileeveryoneelsestartedpreparingdinner,Grady,lookingforsomeplacetocooldown,setoffforthenearbyriver,whichwasdeepenoughtoswimin.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。AsGradygotclosetotheriver,hesawacutebearcub(幼崽).___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Turningaround,hesawanangrybearmovingfasttowardshim.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AFortunateEscape“TruthorDare,Ben?”Maxquestioned.Max,BenandIwerewalkinghometogetherwhileItooksmallbitesofthebeefburgerIhadgrabbedfromashopnearby.“TruthorDare”wasagameweusuallyplayedtoamuseourselvesonthelengthy,boringjourneyhome.Benwantedadare.“Well,Ben,Idareyoutocarrymybagallthewayhome!”MaxcommandedaswelaughedatpoorBen’strouble.AsBenpulledtheheavybaguphisshoulderandadjustedthebagstraps,henoticedthatMax’sbagwaspartiallyopen.Whenhehurriedlyputitonhisback,anobjectflewoutofthebag,andoverthefenceofourneighbour’shouse.“Oh,no,”Maxcried,“IthinkthatwasmyEnglishassignment.”Stretchinghishandoutandtryingtocrawl(爬)underthefencetosavethepaper,Benfoundthatitwasjustoutofreach.“Well,IguessI’lljusthavetoclimboverthefencetogetit,”Bensaid.Hewasbarelyabletoclimbup,usingthesmallgapsinthewoodenfenceashandholdsasthefencewasnearlyastallashim(whichwasnotverytall),andlowenoughforsomethingtobethrownoverit.Slidingdownthefence,Bengrabbedthevaluedpieceofpaper,complainingaboutinjureddignity.Justthen,aloudandfrighteningbarkcuthiswordsshort.“Woof,Woof!”Ourneighbour,MrMason,ownedaGermanshepherd(kindofdog),well-knownforitsfierceness,whichguardedthehouse.Itwassomethingwehadoverlooked,toofocusedonbringingbackMax’sassignment.Ben’slegstrembledlikejellyandhisfaceturnedadeathlywhiteastheGermanshepherdadvancedslowlyonhimlikeawolfmovingtowardsitsta