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Unit5
Nature’sTemperWhatcanwedotopreparefortheworst?单元话题写作讲练Listenandguess:Whatistheweatherlike?windcloudstormthunderlightningrainHowdoesitmakeyoufeel?Haveyoueverexperiencedbadweather?Wasitasscaryasatsunami?(No!)Whathappenedtoyou?Lateforschool?wetallover?gotstuckintraffic?Maybe...Sometimesbadweatherjustmakesourdayterrible–notdangerous,butunlucky.Badweathercanmakethingsoutofcontrol.Nowwe’llreadaboutMaLi’sstoryonaspecialday.I’mMaLi.Ididn’texperienceatsunamilikeTilly,butIhadaterribledaybecauseofbadweather.Lookatthepictures.Whatdoyouthinkhappenedtome?Whatluckonmyunluckyday!Let’sseewhathappenedonthatday!ScanningMaLiDidMaLihaveagooddayorabadday?ReadthetextagainandcompletetheMind-map.MaLiwokeuplate.Sherantothebusstop.Shestartedreviewinghernotes.Itstartedtorainandshebecamecoldandwet.Thebusdriversaidtheywouldbelate.Theteacherdecidednottohaveatest.Scanning.LastFridaystartedterribly.First,myalarmclockdidn’tgooff,soIwokeuplateandhadtorushtothebusstop..Ihadatestthatmorning,soIwasreviewingmynoteswhileIwaswaitingformybus.Allofasudden,thunderrolledacrossthesky.Thenitstartedtopour.Thewindwastoostrongformetousemyumbrella!.Bythetimethebuscame,Iwascoldandwet.Iwasstillworryingaboutthetestwhenthebusdriversaidthatwewouldbelate.Therewasalandslidealongourusualroad.c.WhenIfinallyreachedmyclassroom,outofbreath,myteacherwasalreadywaitingatthedoor.Manyotherswerealsolatebecauseoftherainstorm.Asaresult,shesaidweweren’thavingatestafterall!Whatluckonmyunluckyday!3aReadaboutMaLi’sdayandordertheevents.Shestartedreviewinghernotes.Itstartedtorainandshebecamecoldandwet.Thebusdriversaidtheywouldbelate.MaLiwokeuplate.Theteacherdecidednottohaveatest.Sherantothebusstop.Howmanypartscanthispassagebedivided?BeginningDevelopingEndingStoryStructurethree-partstructureSkimreadingBythetimethebuscame,Iwascoldandwet.Iwasstillworryingaboutthetestwhenthebusdriversaidthatwewouldbelate.Therewasalandslidealongourusualroad.Underlinethewordsandphrasesthatindicatethetimesoftheeventsorconnectthemtogether.LastFridaystartedterribly.First,myalarmclockdidn’tgooff,soIwokeuplateandhadtorushtothebusstop.Ihadatestthatmorning,soIwasreviewingmynoteswhileIwaswaitingformybus.Allofasudden,thunderrolledacrossthesky.Thenitstartedtopour.Thewindwastoostrongformetousemyumbrella!WhenIfinallyreachedmyclassroom,outofbreath,myteacherwasalreadywaitingatthedoor.Manyotherswerealsolatebecauseoftherainstorm.Asaresult,shesaidweweren’thavingatestafterall!Whatluckonmyunluckyday!While-reading时态(TenseUsage)Tips:按时间顺序描述事件,一定要注意背景与动作的时态区分过去进行时(背景)was/were+doing一般过去时(突发)didWhile-readingCircletheVerbsoftheevents.Readandfindoutwheretheactshappened.homebusstopbusclassroom1.LastFridaystartedterribly.First,myalarmclockdidn’tgooff,soIwokeuplateandhadtorushtothebusstop.2.Ihadatestthatmorning,soIwasreviewingmynoteswhileIwaswaitingformybus.Allofasudden,thunderrolledacrossthesky.Thenitstartedtopour.Thewindwastoostrongformetousemyumbrella!3.Bythetimethebuscame,Iwascoldandwet.Iwasstillworryingaboutthetestwhenthebusdriversaidthatwewouldbelate.Therewasalandslidealongourusualroad.4.WhenIfinallyreachedmyclassroom,outofbreath,myteacherwasalreadywaitingatthedoor.Manyotherswerealsolatebecauseoftherainstorm.Asaresult,shesaidweweren’thavingatestafterall!Whatluckonmyunluckyday!Whydideacheventhappen?Findthecauseandeffectinthestory.Causeandeffect:Thingshappenforclearreasons.Howdoesthewriterpresentherstory?3cThinkaboutadaywhenyouexperiencedbadweather.Discusstheeventsofyourdaywithapartner.1.Whatkindofbadweatherwasit?2.Whatwereyoudoingwhenthebadweatherstarted?rain,wind,thunderstorm,snow...Sentencestarters:Itwasa________.Therewasa________.Theweatherwas________.Example:Itwasathunderstorm.Thunderrolledacrossthesky.Usewhileorwhen
tosetthescene.Sentencestarters:Iwas________whentheweatherstarted.Iwas________whileIwas________.Example:Iwaswalkingtoschoolwhentherainstarted.Let’sanalyzeHowtomakeastoryvivid?Writingtip:Tip2:UsefivesensesrulesWhatsheheard:thunderrolledacross...Whatshesaw:Itstartedtopour.Howshefelt:Thewindwastoostrongformetouse...Iwascoldandwet.WhataretheFiveSenses?Let’slearnUsetheFiveSensesinwritingcanmakereadersinscenesandstories,whichcanimproveyourwritingtoahigherlevel.视觉:sight-whatyouseewithyoureyes,detailsofsurroundingsandpeoplethatyoucanseewithyoureyes.听觉:sound-whatyouhearwithyourears,soundsintheenvironmentthatyouarein.触觉:touch-1.Howyoufeel,theemotionsyouexperienceinasituation.2.theobjectsyoutouch.嗅觉:smell-whatyousmellwithyournose.味觉:taste-whatyoutastewithyourtongue/whatyouexperiencewithyourlips.4.Whathappenedorwentwrongbecauseofthebadweather?gotwet/cold;
umbrellabroke/blewaway;missedthebus/train;trafficjam;arrivedlate;
eventwascanceledSentencestarters:Becauseoftherain,I________.Thewindwassostrongthat________.Asaresult,________.Then,________.Example:Becauseoftherain,Imissedthebus.Asaresult,Iwaslateforschool.StepWhattoSay1Last________,Iexperienceda________.2Iwas________whenitstarted.3Iheard________andsaw________.Ifelt________.4Becauseoftheweather,________.Then________.Finally,________.DiscussionFrameworkExample:LastTuesday,Iexperiencedaheavyrainstorm.Iwaswalkinghomefromschoolwhenitstarted.Iheardthunderandsawdarkclouds.Ifeltcoldandscared.Becauseoftherain,Igotcompletelywet.ThenIhadtowaitforanhouratabusstop.Finally,Iarrivedhomelateandmisseddinner.3dWriteastoryaboutyourday.Use3aasanexample.LastFriday,Ihadareallybadday.WhileIwashavingbreakfastwithmyyoungersister,theskywasgrowingdarkeranddarker.Iheardthunderandsawlightning.WhenIleftthehouse,..Opening:setsthemoodScene:tellswhatthewriterwasdoing.WeatherchangeTransition:过度Pre-writing
本单元教材写作情境为“你因为恶劣天气度过了糟糕的一天,写一篇关于这一天的故事”,属于“人与自然”主题范畴中“灾害防范”这一主题群,涉及子主题“自然灾害与防范措施,人身安全与自我保护”。常见的写作任务是描述自然灾害发生前的准备、发生时的经历以及如何应对自然灾害,体裁多为记叙文或说明文。
(Unit
5
Section
B
3d
P49)审题指导1.文体:记叙文2.人称:第一人称3.时态:过去进行时和一般过去时思路点拨教材写作品读
Last
Friday,I
had
a
really
bad
day.
While
I
was
having
breakfast
with
my
younger
sister,the
sky
was
getting
darker
and
darker.
I
heard
thunder
and
saw
lightning.教材原句
When
I
left
the
house,it
started
to
rain
heavily.
The
rain
was
①too
heavy
for
me
to
see
the
road
clearly.
Later,while
I
was
waiting
at
the
bus
stop,②all
of
a
sudden,the
cold
wind
blew
harder,making
me
feel
terribly
cold.
My
old
umbrella
even
③went
wrong
because
of
the
strong
wind.①【Section
B
3a】The
wind
was
too
strong
for
me
to
use
my
umbrella!(too…to…太……而不能……)②【Section
B
3a】All
of
a
sudden,thunder
rolled
across
the
sky.(all
of
a
sudden
突然)③【Section
B
3c】What
happened
or
went
wrong
because
of
the
bad
weather?(go
wrong
出现故障)续表
At
last,the
bus
came.
But
because
of
the
rainstorm,there
was
a
lot
of
traffic.
So
the
bus
was
moving
very
slowly.④As
soon
as
it
stopped
at
my
school,I
jumped
off
and
rushed
towards
the
classroom.⑤By
the
time
I
got
to
the
classroom,④【Section
B
1d】Tilly’s
father
believed
her
as
soon
as
she…(as
soon
as
一……就……)⑤【Section
B
3a】By
the
time
the
bus
came,I
was
cold
and
wet.(by
the
time
到……的时候)续表I
was
wet
through
and
⑥out
of
breath.
⑦As
a
result,I
was
not
only
late
but
also
felt
really
bad.
It
was
really
a
day
I
never
wanted
to
have
again!⑥【Section
B
3a】When
I
finally
reached
my
classroom,out
of
breath,my
teacher
was…(out
of
breath
上气不接下气)⑦【Section
B
3a】As
a
result,she
said
we
weren’t
having
a
test
after
all!(as
a
result
因此)续表开头句1.上周日,在我们城镇发生了一起山体滑坡。翻译:____________________________________________Last
Sunday,a
landslide
happened
in
our
town.2.We
were
driving
home
from
our
relatives’
house
when
the
strong
winds
started.【教材Section
A
3a】仿写:当地震发生时,我们正在睡觉。_____________________________________________We
were
sleeping
when
the
earthquake
happened.中间句1.Suddenly,I
heard
a
loud
noise
outside.(用all
of
a
sudden升格)___________________________________________All
of
a
sudden,I
heard
a
loud
noise
outside.2.All
of
us
were
shocked
and
stood
still.(用so…that…升格)__________________________________________All
of
us
were
so
shocked
that
we
stood
still.3.He
jumped
into
action
right
away
and
rushed
to
get
people
off
the
beach.【教材Section
B
1b】仿写:然后我们立刻行动起来,冲了出去。__________________________________________________Then
we
jumped
into
action
right
away
and
rushed
out.4.When
we
arrived
at
the
high
ground,we
saw
the
landslide
hit
our
house.(用as
soon
as和out
of
breath升格)_______________________________________________________________________________________As
soon
as
we
arrived
at
the
high
ground,out
of
breath,we
saw
the
landslide
hit
our
house.结尾句1.…but
thankfully,her
family
made
it
to
safety
just
as
the
water
hit
the
hotel.【教材Section
B
1b】仿写:我们很伤心,但幸运的是,就在滑坡冲到我家前,我们成功抵达了安全地带。_______________________________________________________________________________________We
felt
very
sad,but
luckily,we
made
it
to
safety
just
before
the
landslide
hit
our
house.2.Thanks
to
her
knowledge
and
quick
thinking,one
schoolgirl
was
able
to
save
over
100
lives.【教材Section
B
1b】仿写:多亏了老师教给我的知识,我才能在一场自然灾害中救下我的家人。_____________________________________________________________________________________Thanks
to
the
knowledge
from
my
teacher,I
was
able
to
save
my
family
in
a
natural
disaster.【名言积累】1.It
never
rains
but
it
pours.祸不单行。2.The
darkest
hour
is
that
before
the
dawn.黎明前的时分是最黑暗的。
自然灾害可能突然降临,我们无法阻止自然灾害,但我们可以用知识武装自己。请你根据下面提示,以“A
Landslide”为题,写一篇短文。
提示问题:
●When
did
the
landslide
happen?
●What
were
your
family
doing
when
the
disaster
happened?
●What
did
you
hear,see,do
or
feel
during
the
disaster?审题指导1.文体:________2.人称:__________3.时态:____________和____________记叙文第一人称过去进行时一般过去时思路点拨(温馨提示:请先完成下面的写作提纲)总述灾害发生的背景Last
Sunday,a
landslide…详述灾害场景,避险措施和结果I
was
doing…my
parents
were
doing…All
of
a
sudden,I
heard…I
remembered
that
our
teacher
once…Then
we…and
rushed
out.…we
arrived…we
saw…We
felt…but
luckily…点明主题Thanks
to
the
knowledge…,I
was
able
to…小试身手【基础版】A
Landslide______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Last
Sunday,a
landslide
happened
in
our
town.My
family
experienced
a
terrible
day.
It
was
ten
in
the
morning.
I
was
doing
my
homework
at
home.
My
parents
were
doing
chores.Suddenly,I
heard
a
loud
noise
outside.
All
of
us
were
shocked
and
stood
still.Then
we
heard
someone
shouting“Landslide!
It’s
a
landslide.”
Just
then,I
remembered
that
our
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________#1.1.1teacher
once
told
us
we
should
quickly
escape
to
the
high
ground
when
a
landslide
happens.
I
told
my
family
about
it
and
we
started
to
rush
out.
When
we
arrived
at
the
high
ground,we
saw
the
landslide
hit
our
house.
We
felt
very
sad,but
luckily,we
were
safe.
Thanks
to
the
knowledge
from
my
teacher,I
was
able
to
save
my
family
in
a
natural
disaster.【提升版】A
Landslide_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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