人教 九上 英语 Unit 7《单元写作》课件

单元写作写“音乐欣赏”相关文章Unit7FeeltheRhythm写作维度本单元的写作项目是“音乐欣赏”,一般涉及以下几个方面：(1)根据图表介绍音乐相关的知识、人或事（2）音乐与生活（3）自己最喜欢的音乐，及音乐给自己的感想与感受。写作支架/模板写“音乐欣赏”相关文章开头音乐类型接触时间主体喜欢的原因相关人物（音乐家等）个人相关经历（场景、难忘的时刻等）结尾音乐的重要性、抒发感想等黄金语料(从教材内外积累好句)开头段①Myfavoritemusicisfolkmusic,anditalwaysremindsmeofmyhometown.②There’sakindofmusiccalledjazz,andIfellinlovewithitthefirsttimeIheardit.③Ilikesoftmusicbest—itmakesmefeelalittlemorerelaxedonbusydays.主体段①Thistypeofmusichassweetlyricsthattellstoriesaboutdailylife.②WhenIfeelsad,listeningtothismusichelpsmecheerupquickly.③ItsslowrhythmisperfectformetolistentowhileI’mdoingmyhomework.④Myfavoritesingerofthismusichasaclearvoicethatsoundslikeastream.⑤Ioncelistenedtothissongataschoolconcert,andthemomentisstillinmymind.⑥Unlikeloudmusic,thisonemakesmefeelpeacefulwhenI’mtired.结尾段①Musiclikethisismorethanjustsounds—it’sawarmpartofmylife.②Iwillkeeplisteningtothismusic,andIhopeIcanlearntosingitoneday.③Thismusichasgivenmemanyhappymoments,andI’llalwaysloveit.经典例题(从经典例题中学会审题)假设你叫李明，你校英文校刊主编发起主题为“音乐对我的影响”的征文。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿。审人称：第一人称审体裁：议论文审时态：一般现在时审要点：音乐的意义、一次经历、感受等注意：（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。（2）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。TheInfluenceofMusiconMeMusicislikeacolorfulrainbowinmylife.________________________________________________________________________精彩范文展示TheInfluenceofMusiconMeMusicislikeacolorfulrainbowinmylife.Itmeansmorethanjustpleasure.Lastyear,Iwasundergreatpressurebeforeanimportantexam.Suddenly,IrememberedmyfavouritesongandplayeditoverandoveruntilIfeltrelaxed.①ThenIwenttomyroomandpractiseduntilmyfingershurt.（教材P69）Itssmoothmelodyandinspiringlyricscalmedmedown.Intheend,Ididwellintheexam.Fromthisexperience,Irealizedmusicisawonderfulgiftthatbringslighttodarktimes.Let’scherishmusicandletitbrightenourlives!Now,Ibelievemusicwillencouragemeandhelpmekeepgoingthroughanychallenge.②Chopin’smusicencouragedhispeopleandhelpedthemkeepgoingthroughyearsofdifficulty.（教材P66）【亮点词块】overandover反复calmsbdown使某人冷静下来intheend最后【高分句子】Fromthisexperience,Irealizedmusicisawonderfulgiftthatbringslighttodarktimes.(that引导的定语从句)从这次经历中，我意识到音乐是一份美好的礼物，它能为黑暗时期带来光明。Now,Ibelievemusicwillencouragemeandhelpmekeepgoingthroughanychallenge.(省略that的宾语从句)现在，我相信音乐将会鼓励我并帮助我继续战胜任何挑战。实战演练生活中，你一定有一段难忘的故事与音乐相关。请以“WhatMusicBroughttoMe”为题，写一篇英语短文，不少于80词。要求：1.讲述一个自己与音乐有关的经历。2.你的收获及感悟。3.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名。范文参考WhatMusicBroughttoMeMusichasalwaysbeenawarmcompanioninmylife.WhenIfirstjoinedtheschoolchoirlastterm,Iwassonervousthatmyvoiceshookduringpractice.Ourmusicteacher,whooftensharedfolksongswithus,patientlyguidedmetolistentoothers’tonesandtoadjustmypitch.Slowly,Ilearnedtoblendmyvoicewiththegroupandevensangasmallpartinafolksongperformance.Musicdidn’tjustimprovemysinging—itbroughtmeconfidence.Ialsomadeclosefriendsw