Unit14写作指导（课件）人教PEP版（2012）英语六年级下册

Unit1Howtallareyou？Unit1素养主题写作本单元学习了如何使用比较级来介绍人物、动物、物品的特征。[参考词汇]外貌younger，older，taller，shorter，longer，thinner，heavier，bigger，smaller，stronger特征smarter度量单位metres，kilograms，size，years

old2.

I

have

...中间句1.

...

is/am/are

...

than

...2.

...

the

...in

...3.

...is/are

...years

old/metres/kilograms.4.

Size

...结尾句1.

I

love

them

very

much.2.

They’re

...开头句1.

Look！This

is

...

[参考句型]

[时态]一般现在时[人称]以第三人称为主[段落布局]开头交代人物的身份中间介绍外貌特征，并与他人（物）进行同类比较。结尾评价人物并抒发对人物的情感。

请你根据表格提示，写一段话介绍Mike和John，要求对他们的年龄、身高、体重进行比较。可适当发挥，不少于5句话。NameAgeHeight（M）Weight（KG）Mike111.5852John121.6350

Look！They

are

John

and

Mike.

They

are

good

friends.

John

is

twelve

years

old.

He

is

1.63

meters

and

50

kilograms.

Mike

is

one

year

younger

than

John.

He

is

shorter

but

heavier

than

John.[佳作赏析]

请以“My

parents”为题，写一篇小短文，介绍父母的年龄、身高、体重。并对父母的年龄、身高、体重分别作比较。要求：1.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺。2.不少于5句话。My

parentsHello！I’m

Peter.

My

father

is

37

years

old.

He’s

two

years

older

than

my

mother.

My

father

is

65

kilograms

and

my

mother

is

50

kilograms.

So

my

mother

is

thinner

than

my

father.

My

father

is

1.82

metres.

He’s

taller

than

my

mother.

I

love

them

very

much. Hello！I’m

Peter.

My

father

is

37

years

old.

He’s

two

years

older

than

my

mother.

My

father

is

65

kilograms

and

my

mother

is

50

kilograms.

So

my

mother

is

thinner

than

my

father.

My

father

is

1.82

metres.

He’s

taller

than

my

mother.

I

love

them

very

much. Unit2LastweekendUnit2素养主题写作本单元学习了如何使用过去时来介绍过去发生的事情。[参考词汇]日常活动cleaned

my

room，stayed

at

home，washed

my

clothes，watched

TV，slept，read

a

book，saw

a

film时间表达yesterday，last

weekend，the

day

before

yesterday，last

night开头句1.

Hi，I’m

...I

had

a

busy/great

weekend.

2.

My

weekend

was

...

3.

Yesterday

was

...

4.

It

was

...

5.

Last

...，I

...

6.

How

was

your

last

weekend？It

was

busy/interesting/great

...中间句1.

I

...in

the

morning.

I

...in

the

afternoon.

2.

Then，I

...

3.

On

Saturday

morning，I

...

4.

On

Sunday，I

...结尾句1.

I

had

a

good/bad/busy

weekend.

2.

What

a

good/bad

day！3.

We

were

so

happy.

4.

What

about

your

last

weekend？5.

I

really

enjoyed

my

last

weekend.[参考句型]

[时态]一般过去时[人称]以第一人称为主[段落布局]开头总体描述上个周末过得如何。中间按照时间顺序介绍周六和周日做的事情。结尾表达感受或询问对方周末的情况。

请你写一写你上周末的活动。不少于5句话。[佳作赏析]

I

had

a

busy

but

happy

weekend.

On

Saturday

morning，I

cleaned

my

room.

Then

I

washed

my

clothes.

In

the

afternoon，I

played

football

with

my

friends.

On

Sunday，I

saw

a

film.

It

was

very

interesting.

I

really

enjoyed

my

weekend.

假如你是Amy，请根据下面的个人信息，向大家介绍一下自己。要求：1.需要包含提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥；2.不少于五句话，注意书写规范和表达流畅。Name：AmyAge：13Height：1.52mActivities（last

weekend）did

homeworkread

a

comic

booksaw

a

filmHi，I’m

Amy.

I’m

13

years

old.

I’m

1.52

metres

tall.

Last

weekend，I

did

many

things.

I

did

my

homework

on

Saturday

morning.

In

the

afternoon，I

read

a

comic

book.

On

Sunday，I

went

to

the

cinema

with

my

parents.

We

saw

a

film.

My

weekend

was

great. Hi，I’m

Amy.

I’m

13

years

old.

I’m

1.52

metres

tall.

Last

weekend，I

did

many

things.

I

did

my

homework

on

Saturday

morning.

In

the

afternoon，I

read

a

comic

book.

On

Sunday，I

went

to

the

cinema

with

my

parents.

We

saw

a

film.

My

weekend

was

great. Unit3Wheredidyougo？Unit3素养主题写作本单元学习了如何介绍某人的旅游经历。写作形式可以是日记或小短文。[参考词汇]日常活动went

camping，went

fishing，rode

a

horse，rode

a

bike，ate

delicious

food，took

pictures，bought

gifts，hurt

my

foot中间句1.

We

went

there

by

...

2.

We

took/ate/went/saw

...

3.

It

was

...

4.

They

were

...结尾句1.

We/I

had

a

good

time

in

...

2.

I

really

liked

my

...

3.

I

will

go

there

again.开头句1.

I

went

to

...last

...

2.

Last

...I

went

to

...

with

my

...

3.

Hi，I’m

...

I’d

like

to

share

my

holiday

with

you.[参考句型]

[时态]一般过去时为主[人称]以第一人称为主[段落布局]开头引出话题。中间详细描述去了哪里，怎么去的，做了什么以及感受如何。结尾表达对旅行的喜爱或期待下次旅行等。

请以“My

last

holiday”为题写一篇小短文，介绍你上一个假期去了哪里，怎么去的，做了什么以及你的感受。不少于5句话。[佳作赏析]My

last

holiday

Last

holiday，I

went

to

Sanya

with

my

parents.

We

went

there

by

plane.

The

weather

was

so

nice.

We

went

swimming

in

the

sea.

The

water

was

very

clean

and

blue.

We

also

ate

a

lot

of

delicious

seafood.

I

felt

very

happy

and

excited

during

the

holiday.

It

was

really

a

wonderful

trip.

请根据下面的思维导图，写一写你最难忘的一次旅行。要求：条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺。不少于5句话。Last

summer

vacation，I

went

to

the

Great

Wall

with

my

parents.

We

went

there

by

bus.

We

climbed

the

Great

Wall.

We

also

took

lots

of

photos.

This

trip

was

tiring

but

exciting.

I

also

bought

some

gifts

for

my

friends.

We

had

a

good

time. Last

summer

vacation，I

went

to

the

Great

Wall

with

my

parents.

We

went

there

by

bus.

We

climbed

the

Great

Wall.

We

also

took

lots

of

photos.

This

trip

was

tiring

but

exciting.

I

also

bought

some

gifts

for

my

friends.

We

had

a

good

time. My

tripUnit4ThenandnowUnit4素养主题写作本单元主要介绍了过去和现在的对比，可以通过人物、事件和环境等来对比。[参考词汇]名词dining

hall，grass，gym日常活动play

badminton，ice-skate，go

cycling时间表达two

years

ago，three

months

ago，now，then，before中间句1.

Many

years

ago，there

was/were

...But

now，there

is/are

...

2.

Before，there

was/were

...

Now，there

is/are

...

3.

Before

I

was

...

Now

I

am

...

4.

Before

I

couldn’t

...

Now

I

can

...

5.

Before

I

liked

...

Now

I

like

...

6.

Before

I

didn’t

...

Now

I

...结尾句1.

These

changes

are

really

...

2.

It’s

really

amazing

to

see

these

changes.

3.

I

changed

a

lot.[参考句型]开头句I’m

...Let

me

tell

you

something

about

me.

[时态]一般现在时与一般过去时[人称]以第一人称为主[段落布局]开头引出要讨论的主题。中间详细描述过去和现在各个方面的不同状态。结尾抒发对这些变化的感受。Five

years

agoNowshorttallshyactivecouldn’t

ride

a

bikecan

ride

my

bikedidn’t

wear

glasseswear

glassesdidn’t

like

Englishlike

English

very

much

[佳作赏析]假如你是Mike，请根据下面的信息介绍你的今昔变化。可适当发挥，不少于60词。

I’m

Mike.

I’m

12.

Five

years

ago，I

was

short.

I

couldn’t

ride

a

bike.

Now，I’m

tall

and

strong.

I

can

ride

my

bike

very

well.

I

was

shy

before.

I

was

quiet

in

class.

Now

I’m

very

active

in

class.

And

I

have

many

good

friends

now.

Before

I

didn’t

wear

glasses.

Now

I

wear

them.

I

like

English

very

much

now.

But

before，I

didn’t

like

it.

I

changed

a

lot.

I

like

my

changes.

即将毕业的你肯定有不少变化。请以“My

changes”为题，从外貌、性格、能力、喜好等方面描写自己的变化。要求：逻辑通顺，书写规范，不少于50词。My

changesHi，I’m

Peter.

I’m

13

years

old.

I’m

tall

and

strong.

I

like

playing

basketball.

I

like

blue.

I

like

spri