2027届新高考英语热点复习应用文写作

2027届新高考英语热点复习应用文写作LearningAims0102Polishthecompositionusingadvancedexpressionsandproperlinkingwords0305masterkeyexpressionsaboutnationalsecurityraiseawarenessofnationalsecurityLeadinWhatchallengesdidyoumeetwhenwritingthecompositioninthelastexam?存在问题：1.内容描述过于笼统，缺乏细节支撑2.国家安全相关表达积累不足3.主题升华不足，结尾只说收获很多，没有具体说明4.逻辑衔接生硬5.语法词汇错误Self-exploration01Analysethewritingtask假设你是李华，你班上周召开了“维护国家安全，人人有责”主题班会。请给你的澳大利亚好友Richard写封邮件，内容包括：1.介绍班会情况2.分享你的感受注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。审题五要素体裁：邮件——活动报道时态：一般过去时主题：“国家安全”班会要点：班会情况&感受人称：第一人称Structure（三段式结构）BeginningBodyEndingPara1：writingpurpose

Para2：detailedprocessoftheclassmeeting

Para3：personalreflectionsandappeal

ExpressionsAccumulation02话题写作语料safeguardnationalsecurity维护国家安全socialstability

社会稳定

nationalinterest

国家利益informationsecurity

信息安全ecologicalsecurity生态安全cybersecurity

网络安全raiseawarenessofnationalsecurity

提升安全意识shouldertheresponsibility

承担责任keepnationalsecurityinmind牢记国家安全fulfillone’sduty履行某人的义务takeeffectivemeasures采取有效措施fundamentalguarantee根本保障

socialharmony社会和谐well-beingofindividuals人民幸福nationalprosperity

国家繁荣常用表达写作目的Iamwritingtosharewithyou活动held+时间,themed+主题.Iamwritingtotellyousomeinformationabout活动launched+时间，whichwascenteredaroundthetopicXXX.活动描述deliveraspeechelaborateon(详述)theimportanceofsth.watcheducationalvideosfeaturingreal-lifecaseshaveaheateddiscussionbrainstormpracticalwaystodosth.becenteredaround...围绕...展开逻辑衔接词Atfirst/Inthebeginning/InitiallyWhat’smore/Besides/Subsequently[ˈsʌbsɪkwəntli]Lastbutnotleast/AtlastTheclassmeetingbeganwith/kickedoffwith内容1.Thiswasfollowedby内容2.Thencame内容3.句式升级个人感悟Whatleftaprofoundimpressiononmewas…(what引导主语从句）Itdawnedonmethat…（It做形式主语）Ihavegaineddeeperinsightinto...Notonly...（半倒装）butalso....提出倡议Weshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestodosth.Itishightimethatwetookactiontodosth.（高频提建议句式Itishightimethat...后接过去式，记牢用法）Onlywheneveryonetakesresponsibilitycanwedosth.（only开头半倒装）PolishandPresentation03Rewriteyourcompositionaccordingtothefollowingkeypoints.1.结构完整：开头问候和写信目的；中间班会情况；结尾个人感悟和提出倡议2.要点全面：班会情况无遗漏，贴合国家安全写作主题；注意细节描写，内容不空泛3.衔接连贯：合理使用过渡词，行文流畅4.语言表达：词汇丰富，有亮点句式，活用主题短语5.语法书写：时态语态正确，无拼写错误、标点错误，字迹干净清晰PresentationPeer-evaluation1.结构是否合理2.内容要点是否全面3.

是否合理使用衔接词4.语法拼写是否有误5.是否有高级词汇和句式PossibleversionDearRichard,How’severythinggoing?I’mwritingtosharewithyousomeinformationaboutaclassmeetingheldlastweek,whichwascenteredaroundthetopic“Everyoneisresponsibleforsafeguardingnationalsecurity”.

Inthebeginning,ourteacherdeliveredaspeech,explainingthesignificanceofnationalsecurityandintroducingrelevantlaws.Subsequently,wewereshownaseriesofthought-provokingvideosfeaturingreal-lifecases.Followingthatwasaheateddiscussion,

duringwhichweactivelybrainstormedwaystocontributetonationalsecurityinourdailylife.Thismeetingleftaprofoundimpressiononme.I’verealizedthatnationalsecurityservesasthecornerstoneofacountry’sstabilityandprosperity.Asindividuals,weshouldalltakeconcreteactiontosafeguardit.Yours,LiHuaSummary04AgoodcompositionStructure结构Content内容Language语言Beauty卷面（美观）

开头切题快+中间要点全+结尾扣题准字体清晰干净>花体炫酷；内容通顺清晰>表达华丽堆砌；修改用斜线轻轻划掉Homework1.Reci